Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
A_Conduit
Poem Published
12th Jun 2023 10:27am
12th Jun 2023 10:27am
Bathe In Ashes
Where your world lay dead, covered in gore
Fear left behind at the dawn of our passing
Each who stood before the other
As if it were their own.
Love we let go blind
At the mere mention of hopes death
And our dreams become the hell we knew too well
Do you sleep often without stirring
A comfortable blanket to betray your knowing
A wooly hide for the hunted
Thoughts of money to drive you onwards
For what little time we are allotted
Before you must shut your doors
Or break down theirs again.
How many goodbyes will...
Fear left behind at the dawn of our passing
Each who stood before the other
As if it were their own.
Love we let go blind
At the mere mention of hopes death
And our dreams become the hell we knew too well
Do you sleep often without stirring
A comfortable blanket to betray your knowing
A wooly hide for the hunted
Thoughts of money to drive you onwards
For what little time we are allotted
Before you must shut your doors
Or break down theirs again.
How many goodbyes will...
#war
#HumanRights
#hypocrisy
#responsibility
#manipulation
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Jun 2023 3:51am
8th Jun 2023 3:51am
Guess What I Discovered In Vegas
Michael had spotted
his little sister Nancy
working Planet Hollywood.
his little sister Nancy
working Planet Hollywood.
#sister
#women
#city
#fiction
#responsibility
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buddhakitty
Poem Published
30th May 2023 2:58pm
30th May 2023 2:58pm
easier done than said
what happened in the
past happened
it will always have
happened
it will never not not
have happened
what are we to do
then?
live...
past happened
it will always have
happened
it will never not not
have happened
what are we to do
then?
live...
#abuse
#responsibility
263 reads
8 Comments
paroxysm
Poem Published
30th May 2023 2:08pm
30th May 2023 2:08pm
Ode to sleep
until my demise...
i'll write a story in vivid picture
as forgotten dreams turn to lies,
bury my face in cotton candy clouds,
...see that razzz Clap like thunder,
then I take off as doves do to flight
Always high...less enthused to her realness...(life)
Killed the child but she still won't throw it back for a nigga..."such is life"
why the fuck did I write this...
An Ode to sleep when my demons call,
Wrote a story, withered picture..
Until my demise... maybe rule his world?
i'll write a story in vivid picture
as forgotten dreams turn to lies,
bury my face in cotton candy clouds,
...see that razzz Clap like thunder,
then I take off as doves do to flight
Always high...less enthused to her realness...(life)
Killed the child but she still won't throw it back for a nigga..."such is life"
why the fuck did I write this...
An Ode to sleep when my demons call,
Wrote a story, withered picture..
Until my demise... maybe rule his world?
#shadows
#fate
#responsibility
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wiseowl
Poem Published
21st May 2023 3:52am
21st May 2023 3:52am
Hide or Thrive - 05/02/2019
I want to share a peice
From the puzzle I am slowly reshaping,
And fitting into place
May you seperate worry
Fear filled thoughts
With the never ending love
Of our Creator
May the darkness die
Somehow suddenly perishing
Before it can ever reach your vicinity
The light over flows and spreads-
The darkness must find weak spots-
You choose:
•Hide or Thrive•
From the puzzle I am slowly reshaping,
And fitting into place
May you seperate worry
Fear filled thoughts
With the never ending love
Of our Creator
May the darkness die
Somehow suddenly perishing
Before it can ever reach your vicinity
The light over flows and spreads-
The darkness must find weak spots-
You choose:
•Hide or Thrive•
#SelfReflection
#freedom
#responsibility
#choices
#SelfWorth
357 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
3rd May 2023 12:29pm
3rd May 2023 12:29pm
Trash
I'm amazed that there's still the sort of folks,
Like backward billies stuck up in the hills,
Who don't get that they are the butt of jokes
About the racial hate their pride instils.
It's pretty clear, at least it is to me,
That there's no such thing as a master race
And anyone who claims a supremacy
Winds up with boastful egg upon their face!
There's no advantage in being lily white
Or having trigger fingers with an itch
Willing to shoot their neighbors dead on sight
Because as racist humans...they're a bitch, ...
Like backward billies stuck up in the hills,
Who don't get that they are the butt of jokes
About the racial hate their pride instils.
It's pretty clear, at least it is to me,
That there's no such thing as a master race
And anyone who claims a supremacy
Winds up with boastful egg upon their face!
There's no advantage in being lily white
Or having trigger fingers with an itch
Willing to shoot their neighbors dead on sight
Because as racist humans...they're a bitch, ...
#hate
#ignorance
#hypocrisy #responsibility
#hypocrisy #responsibility
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
13th Apr 2023 11:49am
13th Apr 2023 11:49am
The Bushwhacker's Amendment
By the good graces of their lordships
And by the leave of the powerful and rich
Small arms are used against small hardships
Like a jock with an incurable itch
Who knows that oversimplification
Stokes the furnace within the gravy train
Of whole nations in an agitation
To rule the backward populist brain;
A brain which thinks the meek are at fault
When they mess with pharmaceutical pills
Instead of the rifles built to assault
All of the unarmed crowds which it kills!
We know the factor we need to control
And...
And by the leave of the powerful and rich
Small arms are used against small hardships
Like a jock with an incurable itch
Who knows that oversimplification
Stokes the furnace within the gravy train
Of whole nations in an agitation
To rule the backward populist brain;
A brain which thinks the meek are at fault
When they mess with pharmaceutical pills
Instead of the rifles built to assault
All of the unarmed crowds which it kills!
We know the factor we need to control
And...
#MentalHealth
#CallToAction
#responsibility #deception
#responsibility #deception
271 reads
1 Comment
sekatana
Poem Published
17th Mar 2023 1:04am
17th Mar 2023 1:04am
Temporary things
Do not be afraid
of the temporary things
They are a showcase
of what you are capable of
of the temporary things
They are a showcase
of what you are capable of
#responsibility
179 reads
1 Comment
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
6th Mar 2023 5:06pm
6th Mar 2023 5:06pm
2 The Letter (Character Personality Collaboration)
#sex
#school
#responsibility
175 reads
4 Comments
84tabby
Sky99
Sky99
Poem Published
24th Feb 2023 6:01am
24th Feb 2023 6:01am
Sometimes
Sometimes we all make that one mistake.
The one that we wish we could take back and do differently.
The one mistake that changed our lives in the worst kind of way.
The mistake that hurt someone we truly love,
The mistake that had us crying in a ball.
But it was a mistake, right?
Did we learn from it or would we do it again.
We try to make up for it but it doesn't seem like it's enough.
But I am sorry for the pain that I have caused.
For I am not that evil,
I don't want to hurt people.
The one that we wish we could take back and do differently.
The one mistake that changed our lives in the worst kind of way.
The mistake that hurt someone we truly love,
The mistake that had us crying in a ball.
But it was a mistake, right?
Did we learn from it or would we do it again.
We try to make up for it but it doesn't seem like it's enough.
But I am sorry for the pain that I have caused.
For I am not that evil,
I don't want to hurt people.
#strength
#forgiveness
#motivational
#redemption
#responsibility
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EdibleWords
Poem Published
15th Feb 2023 1:38am
15th Feb 2023 1:38am
Black Love Matters
The proof is
in Jesus
If Jesus is Black
He put his love
for all colors
over his black life
Proving that
black love matters
whether it’s
the black saint
who loves a
white Jesus
Or a Black Jesus
Loving a white
child of God
And you can’t have
two masters
So choose love
It matters!
in Jesus
If Jesus is Black
He put his love
for all colors
over his black life
Proving that
black love matters
whether it’s
the black saint
who loves a
white Jesus
Or a Black Jesus
Loving a white
child of God
And you can’t have
two masters
So choose love
It matters!
#love
#LifeCycle
#responsibility
271 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Feb 2023 1:20pm
7th Feb 2023 1:20pm
I'll Miss the Darkness
6am dog walk
Onyx was pacing at the door
No dump last night
Pretty baby had to go
Hit the street running
Past the fruit stand
Quick good morning to Kamal
Say it again on the way back
Onyx takes her time
Needs the right spot
I run her across the avenue
Past the diner
Sniffs all the garbage bags
Part Greyhound, nose like Bloodhound
Likes to offload by the white SUV
Cold morning, warm bag in hand
Love the early morning darkness
Nameless dog walkers
Though you know their dog's name
A lot...
Onyx was pacing at the door
No dump last night
Pretty baby had to go
Hit the street running
Past the fruit stand
Quick good morning to Kamal
Say it again on the way back
Onyx takes her time
Needs the right spot
I run her across the avenue
Past the diner
Sniffs all the garbage bags
Part Greyhound, nose like Bloodhound
Likes to offload by the white SUV
Cold morning, warm bag in hand
Love the early morning darkness
Nameless dog walkers
Though you know their dog's name
A lot...
#dark
#dogs
#morning
#philosophical
#responsibility
362 reads
27 Comments
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