Poems About Respect Seeking Honest Critique
#respect
Poems about respect seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 6:50pm
11th Dec 2024 6:50pm
Grace
Expression Series, VIII
#admiration
#kindness
#peace #respect
#peace #respect
237 reads
7 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 4:41pm
11th Dec 2024 4:41pm
Wish I could follow the truth
I will let you go,
Though it feels like you're woven into my soul.
Right now,
you seem like everything I need,
But without you,
I must learn to breathe.
I will let you go,
Someday your shadow won’t linger so.
I’ll think of other things,
Though my heart still aches and sings.
I will let you go,
And in that,
I’ll find myself again—
Everything good you once saw in me.
Yet, a part of you will stay,
A quiet warmth that time
won’t take away.
Though it feels like you're woven into my soul.
Right now,
you seem like everything I need,
But without you,
I must learn to breathe.
I will let you go,
Someday your shadow won’t linger so.
I’ll think of other things,
Though my heart still aches and sings.
I will let you go,
And in that,
I’ll find myself again—
Everything good you once saw in me.
Yet, a part of you will stay,
A quiet warmth that time
won’t take away.
#admiration
#love
#respect #responsibility
#respect #responsibility
86 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 10:30am
10th Dec 2024 10:30am
Abandoned Liberty
Persistent
With her cold feet forced
Her bland eyes stare
You and I won’t comprehend
Her soul bound by custom
Despotism her pain
Demeanor, dull and dreary
Disown their desolate ways
Forsaken by their faith
Traditions and tyranny
Beliefs, brutality
Mutilation and misery
Suppressed by their sect
Heartbreak and hardships
Subject to suffer
Accused and abused
She’s dressed up but covered
With nowhere to go
Her eyes tell a story
You’ll never know
Her hurt caused by creed ...
With her cold feet forced
Her bland eyes stare
You and I won’t comprehend
Her soul bound by custom
Despotism her pain
Demeanor, dull and dreary
Disown their desolate ways
Forsaken by their faith
Traditions and tyranny
Beliefs, brutality
Mutilation and misery
Suppressed by their sect
Heartbreak and hardships
Subject to suffer
Accused and abused
She’s dressed up but covered
With nowhere to go
Her eyes tell a story
You’ll never know
Her hurt caused by creed ...
#freedom
#hurt
#lies
#LifeStruggles
#respect
90 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:43pm
9th Dec 2024 8:43pm
Do the righteous blessing
It's not that hard to do.❓😔 For what you want and need to do, is just do that is a righteous thing, to do with your commitment and a real CONSISTENCY. For example it's not that hard, to do to improve that what you use to do. 🤨 For sure there will ALWAYS come a time, when you have to learn to grow up and put away, the MIND 🎮 GAMES 🤔 FOR WE MUST 🤨 know by now that what, you want and need in a real relationship, base on your own personal goals in your life 😔 For sure don't you think that you can, change your life only if you change your...
#courage
#kindness
#love
#respect
#strength
68 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 7:44pm
9th Dec 2024 7:44pm
Casted _Runes
Expression series VII
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #WritingPoetry
#respect #WritingPoetry
285 reads
8 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 12:11pm
9th Dec 2024 12:11pm
Poetry, An Emotion
I like poetry, and i like its secrets
Creations and twists, that impress
And the manifest of the thoughts
Bared like the sun, easily expressed
I read the finest quills, the nobler
The thinker, and the mystical worder
And the true lover, who sheds his blood
With every word spilled, romanticized
I read the wordsmith and the weaker
And the mediocre and the "show-offs"
Like i eat every thing, in my plate
Like i don't spare; flesh and bone
Poetry, the music sieved into words
Lyrically voiced...
Creations and twists, that impress
And the manifest of the thoughts
Bared like the sun, easily expressed
I read the finest quills, the nobler
The thinker, and the mystical worder
And the true lover, who sheds his blood
With every word spilled, romanticized
I read the wordsmith and the weaker
And the mediocre and the "show-offs"
Like i eat every thing, in my plate
Like i don't spare; flesh and bone
Poetry, the music sieved into words
Lyrically voiced...
#admiration
#emotions
#kindness
#motivational
#respect
113 reads
14 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 2:02am
8th Dec 2024 2:02am
Communicating With The Queens
Women love words
All kinds of words
Words that can argue And words that describe
Words that show feelings that you have inside
For a moment Or a lifetime Be they shallow or deep
Words rile women up Or pit them right to sleep
Women love words that express
They love words that proclaim
Love words that sound different
Though your message is the same
Words tell of the good a man has in his heart
And some words aren't yet spoken
cuz of time spent apart
Words properly delivered,
can be...
All kinds of words
Words that can argue And words that describe
Words that show feelings that you have inside
For a moment Or a lifetime Be they shallow or deep
Words rile women up Or pit them right to sleep
Women love words that express
They love words that proclaim
Love words that sound different
Though your message is the same
Words tell of the good a man has in his heart
And some words aren't yet spoken
cuz of time spent apart
Words properly delivered,
can be...
#honesty
#respect
#wisdom
93 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 10:16pm
7th Dec 2024 10:16pm
Rew
Expression Series VI
#admiration
#LifeAsAWriter
#respect #WritingPoetry
#respect #WritingPoetry
279 reads
12 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 7:28pm
7th Dec 2024 7:28pm
Don't be afraid, to take a walk
JUST SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT 🤔 Don't be afraid to take a walk away, from the negativity and drama, and confusion and madness. 😭 Don't be afraid to go to SOME unfamiliar paths 🤔 For sure they can lead to some difficult pathways. 🤨 YET MAYBE to a place, that you would never imagine, 😇 that it does exist in a far away place. 🫂 For sure you will never know what is waiting, for you at the end of the road 🛣️. Something that you been searching and seeking, to be apart of each other's life ❤️ For sure we will never know, if...
#courage
#kindness
#respect
#strength
#TimeHeals
85 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 1:04pm
6th Dec 2024 1:04pm
Summultima
Expression Series V
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #spiritual
#respect #spiritual
281 reads
8 Comments
Maya404
Maya545
Maya545
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 7:02am
6th Dec 2024 7:02am
Six feet under
Not a good start
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
#courage
#forgiveness
#respect #strength
#respect #strength
38 reads
0 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 8:06pm
5th Dec 2024 8:06pm
PoetSpeak ( Cowboy )
Expression series IV
#admiration
#art
#gratitude
#LifeAsAWriter
#respect
258 reads
13 Comments
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