Poems About Respect Seeking Honest Critique
#respect
Poems about respect seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 7:33pm
22nd Apr 2024 7:33pm
CLEAN
INSIDE ROARE
CLEAN
Who was allowed to kiss the mist from your lips.
who was allowed to touch your hair
Who was allowed to say beautiful things to your face
warm your palm in mine.
Say who.
Who was allowed to caress your neck
telling you beautiful nonsense.
Who made up a fairy tale for you
about clean wells where only we can.
Say who.
Pure as water, sweet as sugar,
tender as a cloud, salty as the sea.
White as the morning and the rising sun.
That's how you are.
Who was allowed to touch your...
CLEAN
Who was allowed to kiss the mist from your lips.
who was allowed to touch your hair
Who was allowed to say beautiful things to your face
warm your palm in mine.
Say who.
Who was allowed to caress your neck
telling you beautiful nonsense.
Who made up a fairy tale for you
about clean wells where only we can.
Say who.
Pure as water, sweet as sugar,
tender as a cloud, salty as the sea.
White as the morning and the rising sun.
That's how you are.
Who was allowed to touch your...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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SPIRIT
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 10:30pm
21st Apr 2024 10:30pm
Never a mistress
#ForbiddenLove
#honesty
#respect
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monovox128
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 6:00pm
21st Apr 2024 6:00pm
BEING NAKED
Let me strip myself of all
pretense and inhibition,
unencumbered by the weight
of societal expectation.
I want to feel the sun as
it kisses upon my skin,
the wind caress my body,
without any shame of sin.
I crave the true freedom
of only being authentic,
unmasked, unguarded,
raw and unapologetic.
Over any type of protective
armour, choosing vulnerabilty,
any type of dishonesty or deceit
I will be choosing authenticity.
Shedding layers of conformity
and embracing my true essence ...
pretense and inhibition,
unencumbered by the weight
of societal expectation.
I want to feel the sun as
it kisses upon my skin,
the wind caress my body,
without any shame of sin.
I crave the true freedom
of only being authentic,
unmasked, unguarded,
raw and unapologetic.
Over any type of protective
armour, choosing vulnerabilty,
any type of dishonesty or deceit
I will be choosing authenticity.
Shedding layers of conformity
and embracing my true essence ...
#bittersweet
#gratitude
#love #respect
#love #respect
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monovox128
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 1:32am
21st Apr 2024 1:32am
YOU DON'T KNOW
You are my sweet
baby, for I would die,
I'd pick the stars for
you from the sky.
I want to hold you
within my arms,
To keep you safe from
all type of harms.
My love is pure
eternal and true,
Inside my heart is
a place for only you.
It's you I love and
have given my heart,
To live entire life
and not jast a part.
You are gorgeous,
sexy and so very fine,
You don't know what
I'd do to make you mine
baby, for I would die,
I'd pick the stars for
you from the sky.
I want to hold you
within my arms,
To keep you safe from
all type of harms.
My love is pure
eternal and true,
Inside my heart is
a place for only you.
It's you I love and
have given my heart,
To live entire life
and not jast a part.
You are gorgeous,
sexy and so very fine,
You don't know what
I'd do to make you mine
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#respect
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2 Comments
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 10:06pm
19th Apr 2024 10:06pm
FIRST
INSIDE ROARE
FIRST
Pa - is the first, like snowdrops in spring
v - is like the second, like an eternal search.
lazy - like lazy, not lazy when she brings me coffee in the morning.
Her smile the sun wakes up
The smell of her skin drives me crazy.
In - her eyes I look in vain for what I lost,
laziness - we wash the dust from our eyes, Paolina.
Your eyes and your beautiful mouth that is silent.
i would like to kiss Forever.
Paolinaaaaaaa, the name resonates to the core.
Paolinaaaaaaa, it's no use sobbing, she's not...
FIRST
Pa - is the first, like snowdrops in spring
v - is like the second, like an eternal search.
lazy - like lazy, not lazy when she brings me coffee in the morning.
Her smile the sun wakes up
The smell of her skin drives me crazy.
In - her eyes I look in vain for what I lost,
laziness - we wash the dust from our eyes, Paolina.
Your eyes and your beautiful mouth that is silent.
i would like to kiss Forever.
Paolinaaaaaaa, the name resonates to the core.
Paolinaaaaaaa, it's no use sobbing, she's not...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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Inside_Roare
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 10:27pm
17th Apr 2024 10:27pm
HARP
INSIDE ROARE
HARP
From the little toe to the ears to kiss the whole
I would like one day.
Your tender fingers in my mouth,
kissing your eyelids and saying how much I should
Your body vibrates like a harp with millions of strings.
I would like to play it and sing with the orchestra.
Who tuned your instrument, who tuned your body
to keep wanting, keep shaking.
Talk and keep offering me a new tone.
From the smell of the palms, a new part and from the lids of the eyes new notes sound,
from the inside of the bosom...
HARP
From the little toe to the ears to kiss the whole
I would like one day.
Your tender fingers in my mouth,
kissing your eyelids and saying how much I should
Your body vibrates like a harp with millions of strings.
I would like to play it and sing with the orchestra.
Who tuned your instrument, who tuned your body
to keep wanting, keep shaking.
Talk and keep offering me a new tone.
From the smell of the palms, a new part and from the lids of the eyes new notes sound,
from the inside of the bosom...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 10:01pm
17th Apr 2024 10:01pm
Stop feeding off the negative
Once a week I do a complete shave of my face
I look forward to the warm water, shaving cream and Gillette Razor taking every whisker completely off
As I looked at my face today, the only hair that was left was above my lip
I don’t call this a mustache because I’m not trying to grow one of those
As I stared at myself and looked at the hair above my lip
I said to myself,
what if I donned a toothbrush mustache?
For those of you that don’t know what a toothbrush mustache is,
look at the visual I attached to this story
Not a real attractive...
I look forward to the warm water, shaving cream and Gillette Razor taking every whisker completely off
As I looked at my face today, the only hair that was left was above my lip
I don’t call this a mustache because I’m not trying to grow one of those
As I stared at myself and looked at the hair above my lip
I said to myself,
what if I donned a toothbrush mustache?
For those of you that don’t know what a toothbrush mustache is,
look at the visual I attached to this story
Not a real attractive...
#hate
#kindness
#motivational
#respect
#tolerance
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monovox128
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 1:40am
17th Apr 2024 1:40am
IT'S JUST ME, BEING ME
Bare unadulterated essence, my naked body
Unveiled, unguarded, and quite unapologetic
A canvas of vulnerability, so raw and so true
No pretense, or facade, it's just me, being me.
Within every curve and freckle, a story unfolds
Whispers of a past and promises of a tomorrow
Embracing my flaws, celebrating my strength
The silence of my skin, I find what freedom holds.
I wear no cloak of shame, nor a shield of fear
Just a pure, unfiltered essence of being here
Naked and unbound, proudly I will...
Unveiled, unguarded, and quite unapologetic
A canvas of vulnerability, so raw and so true
No pretense, or facade, it's just me, being me.
Within every curve and freckle, a story unfolds
Whispers of a past and promises of a tomorrow
Embracing my flaws, celebrating my strength
The silence of my skin, I find what freedom holds.
I wear no cloak of shame, nor a shield of fear
Just a pure, unfiltered essence of being here
Naked and unbound, proudly I will...
#love
#admiration
#respect
#passion
#seductive
124 reads
8 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 11:40am
16th Apr 2024 11:40am
Redemption!
By Stanley Collymore
The ultimate realization that
what you were essentially
happily doing all along
and not giving a real damn about the
consequences which your distinctly
selfish actions were simply having
on others was literally wrong; had
to stop; rather genuine apologies
made; and, quite unquestionably
also, new actually crucially clear
irrefutably, behavioural patterns
which sensibly really undertake
necessary remedial courses of
action constructively and quite
permanently, then undertaken! ...
The ultimate realization that
what you were essentially
happily doing all along
and not giving a real damn about the
consequences which your distinctly
selfish actions were simply having
on others was literally wrong; had
to stop; rather genuine apologies
made; and, quite unquestionably
also, new actually crucially clear
irrefutably, behavioural patterns
which sensibly really undertake
necessary remedial courses of
action constructively and quite
permanently, then undertaken! ...
#happiness
#strength
#forgiveness
#motivational
#respect
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 11:40am
15th Apr 2024 11:40am
Death & Taxes
Is life just about taxes & death?
Were surviving, not living
disrespectful, unforgiving
Let's make a change, life is short
Give and respect, before we all abort
Were surviving, not living
disrespectful, unforgiving
Let's make a change, life is short
Give and respect, before we all abort
#LifeStruggles
#inspirational
#spiritual
#LifeGoals
#respect
66 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 4:16pm
14th Apr 2024 4:16pm
Be Happy, with respect
I see you get a rush
when you make your girlfriend cry
Is this the only way
that provides you you're high
Stop playing the field
She adored you from the start
You're her true love
Quit tearing out her heart
You'll regret
that day will soon come
She'll leave you once and for all
You'll feel broken, you'll become a chump
when you make your girlfriend cry
Is this the only way
that provides you you're high
Stop playing the field
She adored you from the start
You're her true love
Quit tearing out her heart
You'll regret
that day will soon come
She'll leave you once and for all
You'll feel broken, you'll become a chump
#happiness
#love
#girlfriend
#rhyming
#respect
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skymikan
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 4:09pm
14th Apr 2024 4:09pm
sensitive
there are no such thing
as being too sensitive,
if we are being offended
and disrespected,
we often guard ourselves
with deafening silence
if ever it was ruled
to be impermissible...
if they really earned the right
to define someone as that,
they should be required
to have not experienced
emotional turmoil ever
.
.
.
they never should have been
a human after all.
as being too sensitive,
if we are being offended
and disrespected,
we often guard ourselves
with deafening silence
if ever it was ruled
to be impermissible...
if they really earned the right
to define someone as that,
they should be required
to have not experienced
emotional turmoil ever
.
.
.
they never should have been
a human after all.
#respect
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