Poems About Respect Seeking Honest Critique
#respect
Poems about respect seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PRIDE COMMENTARY
My reluctance and refusal to transgress
After I have already progressed
Cannot be deemed an attitude, character, personality, nor trait
Of Pride - but one of humility and respect
Both - for the Creator and for self...
It's a complete surrender - not to senseless selfishness
But to meaningful selfless-ness...
Pride hides behind the dark, thick curtains of self-dependency
and self-reliance. Humility shines its light on one's plans
Knowing our plans are co-dependent on the Creator
Who determines the every step of a being's daily life's...
After I have already progressed
Cannot be deemed an attitude, character, personality, nor trait
Of Pride - but one of humility and respect
Both - for the Creator and for self...
It's a complete surrender - not to senseless selfishness
But to meaningful selfless-ness...
Pride hides behind the dark, thick curtains of self-dependency
and self-reliance. Humility shines its light on one's plans
Knowing our plans are co-dependent on the Creator
Who determines the every step of a being's daily life's...
#respect
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You Belong
You belong
On the silver screen
Bolly songs
My Hindi Queen
Kathak eyes
Sway and flow
You send me high
With your Indian glow
On the silver screen
Bolly songs
My Hindi Queen
Kathak eyes
Sway and flow
You send me high
With your Indian glow
#admiration
#love
#respect
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15 Comments
~”Skyfull of Golden Constellations..”
https://youtu.be/o2X3MNsq0Js?feature=shared
(from “Moondram Pirai”, 1982 Tamil film ‘வானெங்கும் தங்க விண்மீன்கள்..’ song ..Maestro ilayaraja score.. Sridevi in performance..)
her naïveté childish demeanour
in that film .. housed in an adult
body of a retrograde amnesiac
from an unfortunate met road
accident .. from a head injury..
all in that cult...
(from “Moondram Pirai”, 1982 Tamil film ‘வானெங்கும் தங்க விண்மீன்கள்..’ song ..Maestro ilayaraja score.. Sridevi in performance..)
her naïveté childish demeanour
in that film .. housed in an adult
body of a retrograde amnesiac
from an unfortunate met road
accident .. from a head injury..
all in that cult...
#admiration
#inspirational
#nonfiction #respect
#nonfiction #respect
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Alpha Male
Otherworldly lucid envisioned
insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
#emotions
#respect
#responsibility
#sacrifice
#strength
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Mine
I take you as mine
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
Master G
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
Master G
#inspirational
#love
#respect #strength
#respect #strength
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Embrace
We live, we die
Survive, fly high
We breathe, commence
Between, we sense
We fight, we win
Our rights within
We see the grace
Let's all embrace
Survive, fly high
We breathe, commence
Between, we sense
We fight, we win
Our rights within
We see the grace
Let's all embrace
#emotions
#inspirational
#love #respect
#love #respect
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14 Comments
Get back to what's important
Let's get back to love honor and respect that is what's important, to clean up the mess of the truth of the nonsense and negativity.
THAT almost destroyed us mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. For it's necessary to truly understand, that we have the ability and power to eliminate, the deepness of the hurt and pain. THAT has been inflicted upon our soul, and tapping into our own mind. THOUGHTS but yet you still have to believe in your faith which can't no one take that away from you. For sure what is more important to you than putting love back in your life and world...
THAT almost destroyed us mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. For it's necessary to truly understand, that we have the ability and power to eliminate, the deepness of the hurt and pain. THAT has been inflicted upon our soul, and tapping into our own mind. THOUGHTS but yet you still have to believe in your faith which can't no one take that away from you. For sure what is more important to you than putting love back in your life and world...
#courage
#kindness
#love
#respect
#strength
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6 Comments
~”Aren’t We Secular?…”
says this bit frail, shrilly pitched lady
with sorta misleading timidity in her voice..
only to be nailing in solid gritty as iron..
yes, this Henry Kissinger’s ‘Iron Lady’ -
truly befitting her life & time…
nothing political to draw .. just
a sfumato of her life as a portrait..
in an earthier organic merging
hues merging seamless
with nature..
in a beautiful Mona Lisa smile
she carried ever .. her determined
eyes in a lasering focus ever.. ...
with sorta misleading timidity in her voice..
only to be nailing in solid gritty as iron..
yes, this Henry Kissinger’s ‘Iron Lady’ -
truly befitting her life & time…
nothing political to draw .. just
a sfumato of her life as a portrait..
in an earthier organic merging
hues merging seamless
with nature..
in a beautiful Mona Lisa smile
she carried ever .. her determined
eyes in a lasering focus ever.. ...
#admiration
#peace
#respect #violence
#respect #violence
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4 Comments
Valentines Day
Here we are upon another day but what makes this so special is a blessing in disguise for so many people's lives 🙏 for it's a a day that we show your affection and love man to woman and woman to man. For sure it doesn't matter if you are alone, give thyself the same kind of love no matter how you wish to spend this day, treating yourself with kindness and love for you deserve it too have a blessed Valentine's Day. For sure for those that have someone to share this day with you, deserve to have a blessed and beautiful Valentine's Day, with love and honor and happiness and respect for...
#admiration
#kindness
#love
#respect
#ValentinesDay
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A Librarian Love Song
A way you read
Aye such a speed
I’d like to eat your brain
Your face, your guile
Your loving smile
Singsong without refrain
Even though
You know this po’
You’re secret I remain
Where lovers greet
Upon white sheet
We’ll meet and mete again
Aye such a speed
I’d like to eat your brain
Your face, your guile
Your loving smile
Singsong without refrain
Even though
You know this po’
You’re secret I remain
Where lovers greet
Upon white sheet
We’ll meet and mete again
#love
#respect
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The Painting
Magnificent, beautiful, creative
Thought provoking
Every time I close my eyes I see it
It speaks to me and I can't stop thinking about it
Emotions are invoked
A moment of nostalgia
When the world was at peace
When I was at peace
Its calm, serene and inspirational
I know you've seen it
Close your eyes and imagine
Remember those moments
Moments when life was valued
And we didn't take it for granted
The most amazing painting ever
A living breathing work of art
Now open...
Thought provoking
Every time I close my eyes I see it
It speaks to me and I can't stop thinking about it
Emotions are invoked
A moment of nostalgia
When the world was at peace
When I was at peace
Its calm, serene and inspirational
I know you've seen it
Close your eyes and imagine
Remember those moments
Moments when life was valued
And we didn't take it for granted
The most amazing painting ever
A living breathing work of art
Now open...
#admiration
#inspirational
#love #respect
#love #respect
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2 Comments
Limp Sound Display (Collaboration with Vision_of_insanity)
Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
#admiration
#art
#collaboration
#funny
#respect
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DU Poetry : Poems About Respect Seeking Honest Critique