Poems About Redemption Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about redemption seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
INSIDE looking OUTSIDE
We will have challenges that will happen, in a moment notice that will affect, the very deepness of the heart and spiritual soul. Yet now we will be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of our soul. 🙏 For sure as we exchange thoughts on this subject of being alone, in peace and tranquility, with the very closeness. God's creation as our view looking at the visions of the beauty that God has created. 🙏 But yet we begin to appreciate what he has done 👍 for sure sitting here alone watching the rays, of the golden season sun over the...
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#redemption
76 reads
2 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
The One You Won't Forget
You won’t forget me
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
#bittersweet
#loneliness
#redemption
#strength
#TimeHeals
88 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
What ever you need and want
For sure 🙏 I'm thinking about you in your time of need when you seek clarity of understanding, is why am HERE AND NOW. 🙏 FOR I come as a blessing in disguise, for the betterment of each of your lives, 🤔 to help you navigate your ups and downs that are involved in creating a different kind of life. 🙏 For sure that's why I am here with you now, as I sit here and reflect upon the things I've seen how much this world 🌍 has changed over time. 😭 Years after YEARS of what is happening in the world, as 🌍 it becomes filled with chaos and drama...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
86 reads
4 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 1:03am
26th Dec 2024 1:03am
Finite
Only here so long
Stand your ground
While we right our wrongs
Eternally
Feed the demon
No more
Only here
For a couple more
Until that wretched shore
So open your soul
Open your mind
What remains here
A thing called life
Only here
For a couple more
Let us live this moment
Before that wretched shore
Stand your ground
While we right our wrongs
Eternally
Feed the demon
No more
Only here
For a couple more
Until that wretched shore
So open your soul
Open your mind
What remains here
A thing called life
Only here
For a couple more
Let us live this moment
Before that wretched shore
#bittersweet
#dark
#emptiness
#inspirational
#redemption
92 reads
2 Comments
Soulesslywhole
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 1:09pm
23rd Dec 2024 1:09pm
Vibrations of the Infinite!!!!
Life is a neurosis, a substitute of divine suffering.
Accept your miseries for a chance of progression….
Stop thinking, what it may be.
Except what it is... Embrace as it is…
Harmonize with the nature around you.
That is innocent, untamed, and unbiased...
Let the mind's river, flow through your heart...
While witnessing the purity of the scheme, where…
The mind whispers, "We stand alone in this battle"!!
The heart counters, "No, we do not"!!
As we cross the thresholds of our perception,
We realize,...
Accept your miseries for a chance of progression….
Stop thinking, what it may be.
Except what it is... Embrace as it is…
Harmonize with the nature around you.
That is innocent, untamed, and unbiased...
Let the mind's river, flow through your heart...
While witnessing the purity of the scheme, where…
The mind whispers, "We stand alone in this battle"!!
The heart counters, "No, we do not"!!
As we cross the thresholds of our perception,
We realize,...
#admiration
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
#redemption
71 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 10:40pm
6th Dec 2024 10:40pm
From out of darkness
Some say that we all know what is darkness and when it's time. ⌚ As a spiritual entity of another place. 🙏 BUT yet there are those who believe in life after death. ☠️ But yet the elders say it doesn't have to be that way, because your thoughts and spirit, will continue to live on in the after realms, in a different kind of mentally stimulation in a world. 🌍 Far away in the light.🕯️For sure out of the darkness of night, it can be a place with it's own shadows. Roaming free like angles of heaven in a fight between the devil's in human skin....
#faith
#morality
#redemption
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
63 reads
0 Comments
Nachiyobe
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 9:09am
6th Dec 2024 9:09am
A Writers Vows
With this paper and pen, I vow..
To voice out the volumes of words left unsaid.
To spell out the silence of the secrets left unspoken.
I vow,
That my sonnets will speak the language our spirits haven't figured out yet,
That the lines of my limericks will lyric the songs our souls haven't sung yet,
That my haikus will hold and heal our haggard hearts,
That...
My words, wether in prose of verse, written, spoken, raw or rehearsed will silence the voices in our heads, listen..
I vow that the ink of my pen will be the flavor of sweat driven by my...
To voice out the volumes of words left unsaid.
To spell out the silence of the secrets left unspoken.
I vow,
That my sonnets will speak the language our spirits haven't figured out yet,
That the lines of my limericks will lyric the songs our souls haven't sung yet,
That my haikus will hold and heal our haggard hearts,
That...
My words, wether in prose of verse, written, spoken, raw or rehearsed will silence the voices in our heads, listen..
I vow that the ink of my pen will be the flavor of sweat driven by my...
#emotions
#inspirational
#redemption
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0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 1:59pm
3rd Dec 2024 1:59pm
Concordia Discors
Surely there's disorder within each mind
that graces the troublesome human race.
Why, necessarily, would it be kind
when chaos sparks thought all over the place?
The deviltry is in the details
which civilization will not master
when all it cares about are net sales
in the profit margin hereafter.
But chaos and creativity link
in the marbled columns of poetry
where order angels help the devils think
in divine terms of versatility....
prepared to host a devil's every thought
in the glory house of the...
that graces the troublesome human race.
Why, necessarily, would it be kind
when chaos sparks thought all over the place?
The deviltry is in the details
which civilization will not master
when all it cares about are net sales
in the profit margin hereafter.
But chaos and creativity link
in the marbled columns of poetry
where order angels help the devils think
in divine terms of versatility....
prepared to host a devil's every thought
in the glory house of the...
#LifeAsAWriter
#motivational
#passion
#PowerOfWords
#redemption
195 reads
9 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 4:03am
30th Nov 2024 4:03am
Drop of Grace
Drop of Grace
Need God to drop some grace on me
God please drop some grace on me
Soul without a compass
God please drop some grace on me
And fill the empty hole in my heart
God please drop some grace on me
Turn this black piece
Into a beating blood red heart
God please no really God please
Drop some grace on me
Lead me into your garden
And bathe my soul in goodness
So I come out reborn
With a compass for my soul
I need God to drop an anvil of love on me
And set...
Need God to drop some grace on me
God please drop some grace on me
Soul without a compass
God please drop some grace on me
And fill the empty hole in my heart
God please drop some grace on me
Turn this black piece
Into a beating blood red heart
God please no really God please
Drop some grace on me
Lead me into your garden
And bathe my soul in goodness
So I come out reborn
With a compass for my soul
I need God to drop an anvil of love on me
And set...
#faith
#God
#redemption #spiritual
#redemption #spiritual
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0 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 2:33am
26th Nov 2024 2:33am
The Zero
Sacajawea
You loved me
I felt nothing
All the same
Got a goddamn
Empty pile
of nothing
I respect the heroes
Who added up
To zeros
Yet they got
More to say
Than your
Worst enemy
In spite of me
You loved me
I felt nothing
All the same
But goddamn
I am
An empty pile
Of nothing
I feel respect
Yet frustration
For the heroes
Whom they called
Zeroes
My ultimate heroes
All the same
Nothing.
You loved me
I felt nothing
All the same
Got a goddamn
Empty pile
of nothing
I respect the heroes
Who added up
To zeros
Yet they got
More to say
Than your
Worst enemy
In spite of me
You loved me
I felt nothing
All the same
But goddamn
I am
An empty pile
Of nothing
I feel respect
Yet frustration
For the heroes
Whom they called
Zeroes
My ultimate heroes
All the same
Nothing.
#curse
#MyInspiration
#nostalgia
#passion
#redemption
73 reads
1 Comment
ChaosScripted
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 4:22pm
24th Nov 2024 4:22pm
“Rainy Seasons”
A breeze of strength,
The wind of hope.
Grace from the Almighty;
Brings comfort to cope.
Candid smoke sessions
Displayed to mock.
Specific to one
Stubborn as a rock.
Meant to change
The story is told.
Theater casted for fun;
Now stale as mold.
Cryptic Love conveyed;
Change with the seasons.
Struggles overcame,
Conquering the demons.
A slave no more
To poison and pain.
The dragon on my back
Has been slain.
The wind of hope.
Grace from the Almighty;
Brings comfort to cope.
Candid smoke sessions
Displayed to mock.
Specific to one
Stubborn as a rock.
Meant to change
The story is told.
Theater casted for fun;
Now stale as mold.
Cryptic Love conveyed;
Change with the seasons.
Struggles overcame,
Conquering the demons.
A slave no more
To poison and pain.
The dragon on my back
Has been slain.
#hope
#inspirational
#redemption #strength
#redemption #strength
63 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 8:29pm
22nd Nov 2024 8:29pm
From a different set of eyes
They say that knowone is sent to you by chance or accident. 😞 YET it happens sometimes in our own personal lives, putting us up against things that we will never, completely understand. 🤨 For sure that is what life is all about, the challenges that you must have to learn to face. 😞 But yet we must never look upon the things, that changes our life. For sure we can focus our thoughts on what, we must do to make a wrong RIGHT. Before we become drawn into a situation being blind to the truth. For sure sometimes we have, to learn to walk away from the negativity. 😔...
#faith
#fate
#karma
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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