Poems About Redemption Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about redemption seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Northern1
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:25pm
Yesterday 11:25pm
Mirror
All that you are
All that you see
All that you do
It is reflected in me
Everything you think
Everything you say
Everything you believe
It comes back your way
The sins you may commit
The lies you may tell
The hatred you may harbor
Designs your private hell
If empathy is practiced
If love can mend a heart
If forgiveness is earned
You have done your part
My fate is in your hands
My worth is told by you
My role is as your mirror
We can see it through
All that you see
All that you do
It is reflected in me
Everything you think
Everything you say
Everything you believe
It comes back your way
The sins you may commit
The lies you may tell
The hatred you may harbor
Designs your private hell
If empathy is practiced
If love can mend a heart
If forgiveness is earned
You have done your part
My fate is in your hands
My worth is told by you
My role is as your mirror
We can see it through
#healing
#LifeStruggles
#redemption
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Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:12pm
Yesterday 12:12pm
Hibernation
I have a windowless closet
in my apartment that I
sometimes lock myself in
and use it as a deprivation chamber.
I know that sounds weird but
it shuts me off from all stimuli.
Locks are on the inside.
I have my knife!
I use sound damping headphones
that shut off nearly all noise.
I bring a bottle of water that I sip and
my huge pillow and a thick blanket.
I think about one topic or try to
remember things forgotten.
I have alot of memory gaps.
I have no fear in that closet.
I come out when ...
in my apartment that I
sometimes lock myself in
and use it as a deprivation chamber.
I know that sounds weird but
it shuts me off from all stimuli.
Locks are on the inside.
I have my knife!
I use sound damping headphones
that shut off nearly all noise.
I bring a bottle of water that I sip and
my huge pillow and a thick blanket.
I think about one topic or try to
remember things forgotten.
I have alot of memory gaps.
I have no fear in that closet.
I come out when ...
#motivational
#redemption
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oldmanG
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 9:00pm
16th Jan 2025 9:00pm
100 Days
100 Days
It’s been 100 days
Feel I’m slipping out of the haze
Eyes no longer carry the red glaze
Like I’ve been born on Mars
It’s been 100 days
I’m starting to mend my ways
I no longer gaze
At the black part of my soul
It’s been 100 days
I’m feeling firmer in my veins
I’m no longer ashamed
To be living in my skin
It’s been 100 days
No longer feel out of place
Think I can break out of the chains
To walk among the living
But it’s only been 100 days
Takes a lot more to...
It’s been 100 days
Feel I’m slipping out of the haze
Eyes no longer carry the red glaze
Like I’ve been born on Mars
It’s been 100 days
I’m starting to mend my ways
I no longer gaze
At the black part of my soul
It’s been 100 days
I’m feeling firmer in my veins
I’m no longer ashamed
To be living in my skin
It’s been 100 days
No longer feel out of place
Think I can break out of the chains
To walk among the living
But it’s only been 100 days
Takes a lot more to...
#addiction
#alcohol
#LifeChangingMoment #redemption
#LifeChangingMoment #redemption
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oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 6:57am
12th Jan 2025 6:57am
It’s Okay
We all die and it’s okay
It’s okay it’s okay
To be afraid..to be afraid
But we all die and it’s okay
We can’t get away
From our own destiny
Maybe there’s some tall grass
In the garden of Eden
When we die
We’ll live for eternity
Not much of a Bible man
But I’m starting to believe
It can’t be for nothing
Why we’re still standing
Maybe there is some tall green grass
In the garden of Eden
Maybe there is some tall green grass
Leading us to heaven
When we die ...
It’s okay it’s okay
To be afraid..to be afraid
But we all die and it’s okay
We can’t get away
From our own destiny
Maybe there’s some tall grass
In the garden of Eden
When we die
We’ll live for eternity
Not much of a Bible man
But I’m starting to believe
It can’t be for nothing
Why we’re still standing
Maybe there is some tall green grass
In the garden of Eden
Maybe there is some tall green grass
Leading us to heaven
When we die ...
#death
#heaven
#rebirth
#redemption
#spiritual
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oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 2:42am
11th Jan 2025 2:42am
Believe
Gettin better
Every minute
Try to hold it together
But I lose it better
Bathing in Jesus sins
But he knows me
Better than myself
So I fall again
Feelin bible in my blood
Hoping it is enough
But when I hope it’s not enough
Cause I just have to believe
And I do like Jesus
Believe in every being
When belief is in your bloodstream
Absolves me of all my sins
Belief is something
You can’t grab onto
...
Every minute
Try to hold it together
But I lose it better
Bathing in Jesus sins
But he knows me
Better than myself
So I fall again
Feelin bible in my blood
Hoping it is enough
But when I hope it’s not enough
Cause I just have to believe
And I do like Jesus
Believe in every being
When belief is in your bloodstream
Absolves me of all my sins
Belief is something
You can’t grab onto
...
#myself
#redemption
#spiritual
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Dan_ONeill
Dan ONeill
Dan ONeill
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
Now
You have a memory to show you who you owe,
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
#redemption
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Listentoact
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
Unlike words
Unlike words actions tend to stand in stature like the presence you give Is the statue to live by and be a monument of your self to pose for the test of time,
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
#courage
#gratitude
#kindness #redemption
#kindness #redemption
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Revisionary
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 7:24am
2nd Jan 2025 7:24am
Rehab
I feed my heart and the warmth washes my skin
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
#apathy
#emptiness
#forgiveness
#redemption
#TimeHeals
57 reads
1 Comment
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 10:48am
1st Jan 2025 10:48am
Starfilled Shore
It was a serene night.
And stars were in sight.
You began to walk down the shore.
On the sand filled,ground floor.
You began to walk as you got out of the door.
The stars were twinkling in the sky.
Like nightlights far away.
Maybe you seek peace.
Or a place to collect your thoughts.
Maybe you wanted silence.
And to drown out the negative thoughts.
Out on the shore,sat a girl as pretty as can be.
She had bright,blue siren eyes.
She had red hair,love symbolize.
Her lips were a share of red.
...
And stars were in sight.
You began to walk down the shore.
On the sand filled,ground floor.
You began to walk as you got out of the door.
The stars were twinkling in the sky.
Like nightlights far away.
Maybe you seek peace.
Or a place to collect your thoughts.
Maybe you wanted silence.
And to drown out the negative thoughts.
Out on the shore,sat a girl as pretty as can be.
She had bright,blue siren eyes.
She had red hair,love symbolize.
Her lips were a share of red.
...
#dreams
#kindness
#love
#mermaids
#redemption
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
INSIDE looking OUTSIDE
We will have challenges that will happen, in a moment notice that will affect, the very deepness of the heart and spiritual soul. Yet now we will be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of our soul. 🙏 For sure as we exchange thoughts on this subject of being alone, in peace and tranquility, with the very closeness. God's creation as our view looking at the visions of the beauty that God has created. 🙏 But yet we begin to appreciate what he has done 👍 for sure sitting here alone watching the rays, of the golden season sun over the...
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#redemption
71 reads
2 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
The One You Won't Forget
You won’t forget me
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
#bittersweet
#loneliness
#redemption
#strength
#TimeHeals
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4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
What ever you need and want
For sure 🙏 I'm thinking about you in your time of need when you seek clarity of understanding, is why am HERE AND NOW. 🙏 FOR I come as a blessing in disguise, for the betterment of each of your lives, 🤔 to help you navigate your ups and downs that are involved in creating a different kind of life. 🙏 For sure that's why I am here with you now, as I sit here and reflect upon the things I've seen how much this world 🌍 has changed over time. 😭 Years after YEARS of what is happening in the world, as 🌍 it becomes filled with chaos and drama...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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