Poems About Redemption Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about redemption seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Duice
Poem Published
Today 7:56am
Today 7:56am
Redemption (Part 5)
Excruciating pain is obsession to a valiant soldier
that’ll arm wrestle the epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to get back
Black Panther speaking open heart
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be a sacrificial instance
glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered
A crashing snap flash to swap my...
that’ll arm wrestle the epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to get back
Black Panther speaking open heart
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be a sacrificial instance
glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered
A crashing snap flash to swap my...
#faith
#fate
#redemption
#sacrifice
#spiritual
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Pete_25
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 8:15am
29th Jan 2025 8:15am
Lost & Found
i. lost}
These dirty streets, skin and bone
Beneath my feet, grit and stone
Unfulfilled, the world spins around
Time stands still on solid ground
{ii. found}
Stars rain down, the night confides
In you I drown, right beside
Love declares, to you I'm bound
It was all a blur, lost and found
These dirty streets, skin and bone
Beneath my feet, grit and stone
Unfulfilled, the world spins around
Time stands still on solid ground
{ii. found}
Stars rain down, the night confides
In you I drown, right beside
Love declares, to you I'm bound
It was all a blur, lost and found
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#love
#redemption
81 reads
10 Comments
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 1:37pm
25th Jan 2025 1:37pm
This Ain't No Bull
I had a dream once, I was in this building full of rooms and people, then all of the sudden I hear folk screaming and running, and as I turn around, here is this red bull charging through everyone. I take off running for my life when I realized he had his sights set on me only. I ran into one of the rooms trying to hide behind crates and stuff the rooms were filled with, but the bull knew exactly where I was, as he horned the goods tossing them about until he was in range of me by two or three feet, and as we locked eyes, all the sudden he turned into a black bull, and I took the pause as an...
#courage
#forgiveness
#love
#redemption
#strength
61 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 12:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 12:49pm
When we are shifting energy
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ what do you believe within your own thoughts and insight and imagination. For do you wish to make your life better than it's ever been, for do you have the ability and power to eliminate the negativity, and replace it with positivity. For sure we all have the ability to manifest that which we pray for in our lives and dreams. For do you believe in your dreams with a want and need, to sustain your own wishes for do you have the perseverance, to meet the challenges that will elevate you to your true spiritual potential. For do you...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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Northern1
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 11:25pm
17th Jan 2025 11:25pm
Mirror
All that you are
All that you see
All that you do
It is reflected in me
Everything you think
Everything you say
Everything you believe
It comes back your way
The sins you may commit
The lies you may tell
The hatred you may harbor
Designs your private hell
If empathy is practiced
If love can mend a heart
If forgiveness is earned
You have done your part
My fate is in your hands
My worth is told by you
My role is as your mirror
We can see it through
All that you see
All that you do
It is reflected in me
Everything you think
Everything you say
Everything you believe
It comes back your way
The sins you may commit
The lies you may tell
The hatred you may harbor
Designs your private hell
If empathy is practiced
If love can mend a heart
If forgiveness is earned
You have done your part
My fate is in your hands
My worth is told by you
My role is as your mirror
We can see it through
#healing
#LifeStruggles
#redemption
75 reads
2 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 12:12pm
17th Jan 2025 12:12pm
Hibernation
I have a windowless closet
in my apartment that I
sometimes lock myself in
and use it as a deprivation chamber.
I know that sounds weird but
it shuts me off from all stimuli.
Locks are on the inside.
I have my knife!
I use sound damping headphones
that shut off nearly all noise.
I bring a bottle of water that I sip and
my huge pillow and a thick blanket.
I think about one topic or try to
remember things forgotten.
I have alot of memory gaps.
I have no fear in that closet.
I come out when ...
in my apartment that I
sometimes lock myself in
and use it as a deprivation chamber.
I know that sounds weird but
it shuts me off from all stimuli.
Locks are on the inside.
I have my knife!
I use sound damping headphones
that shut off nearly all noise.
I bring a bottle of water that I sip and
my huge pillow and a thick blanket.
I think about one topic or try to
remember things forgotten.
I have alot of memory gaps.
I have no fear in that closet.
I come out when ...
#motivational
#redemption
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oldmanG
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 9:00pm
16th Jan 2025 9:00pm
100 Days
100 Days
It’s been 100 days
Feel I’m slipping out of the haze
Eyes no longer carry the red glaze
Like I’ve been born on Mars
It’s been 100 days
I’m starting to mend my ways
I no longer gaze
At the black part of my soul
It’s been 100 days
I’m feeling firmer in my veins
I’m no longer ashamed
To be living in my skin
It’s been 100 days
No longer feel out of place
Think I can break out of the chains
To walk among the living
But it’s only been 100 days
Takes a lot more to...
It’s been 100 days
Feel I’m slipping out of the haze
Eyes no longer carry the red glaze
Like I’ve been born on Mars
It’s been 100 days
I’m starting to mend my ways
I no longer gaze
At the black part of my soul
It’s been 100 days
I’m feeling firmer in my veins
I’m no longer ashamed
To be living in my skin
It’s been 100 days
No longer feel out of place
Think I can break out of the chains
To walk among the living
But it’s only been 100 days
Takes a lot more to...
#addiction
#alcohol
#LifeChangingMoment #redemption
#LifeChangingMoment #redemption
65 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 6:57am
12th Jan 2025 6:57am
It’s Okay
We all die and it’s okay
It’s okay it’s okay
To be afraid..to be afraid
But we all die and it’s okay
We can’t get away
From our own destiny
Maybe there’s some tall grass
In the garden of Eden
When we die
We’ll live for eternity
Not much of a Bible man
But I’m starting to believe
It can’t be for nothing
Why we’re still standing
Maybe there is some tall green grass
In the garden of Eden
Maybe there is some tall green grass
Leading us to heaven
When we die ...
It’s okay it’s okay
To be afraid..to be afraid
But we all die and it’s okay
We can’t get away
From our own destiny
Maybe there’s some tall grass
In the garden of Eden
When we die
We’ll live for eternity
Not much of a Bible man
But I’m starting to believe
It can’t be for nothing
Why we’re still standing
Maybe there is some tall green grass
In the garden of Eden
Maybe there is some tall green grass
Leading us to heaven
When we die ...
#death
#heaven
#rebirth
#redemption
#spiritual
66 reads
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oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 2:42am
11th Jan 2025 2:42am
Believe
Gettin better
Every minute
Try to hold it together
But I lose it better
Bathing in Jesus sins
But he knows me
Better than myself
So I fall again
Feelin bible in my blood
Hoping it is enough
But when I hope it’s not enough
Cause I just have to believe
And I do like Jesus
Believe in every being
When belief is in your bloodstream
Absolves me of all my sins
Belief is something
You can’t grab onto
...
Every minute
Try to hold it together
But I lose it better
Bathing in Jesus sins
But he knows me
Better than myself
So I fall again
Feelin bible in my blood
Hoping it is enough
But when I hope it’s not enough
Cause I just have to believe
And I do like Jesus
Believe in every being
When belief is in your bloodstream
Absolves me of all my sins
Belief is something
You can’t grab onto
...
#myself
#redemption
#spiritual
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0 Comments
Dan_ONeill
Dan ONeill
Dan ONeill
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
Now
You have a memory to show you who you owe,
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
#redemption
42 reads
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Listentoact
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
Unlike words
Unlike words actions tend to stand in stature like the presence you give Is the statue to live by and be a monument of your self to pose for the test of time,
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
#courage
#gratitude
#kindness #redemption
#kindness #redemption
64 reads
1 Comment
Revisionary
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 7:24am
2nd Jan 2025 7:24am
Rehab
I feed my heart and the warmth washes my skin
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
#apathy
#emptiness
#forgiveness
#redemption
#TimeHeals
75 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Redemption Seeking Honest Critique
