Rap Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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rap seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Drieks
Poem Published
31st Jan 2021 2:54pm
31st Jan 2021 2:54pm
Gutted
Poor people in the streets all around me.
Begging for change, not asking for money.
Change on greater scales.
So they can educate themselves,
digest some food and pay for bills.
Uncomfortable truth.
People living like broken convertibles.
No roof.
No proof.
Most people look away from inhumane brutality on display.
Ain’t none of my business they say.
But they’re wrong.
These people need help.
These people need hope from humanity to regain themselves.
These people need...
Begging for change, not asking for money.
Change on greater scales.
So they can educate themselves,
digest some food and pay for bills.
Uncomfortable truth.
People living like broken convertibles.
No roof.
No proof.
Most people look away from inhumane brutality on display.
Ain’t none of my business they say.
But they’re wrong.
These people need help.
These people need hope from humanity to regain themselves.
These people need...
#homelessness
#MentalHealth
#rap
733 reads
2 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
14th Jan 2021 9:52am
14th Jan 2021 9:52am
Blasphemous
Bled out.
Life left me, time to head for check out.
Can’t shout.
Wife left me, no doubt she took the same route.
Nothing but strangers in this crowd...
Red pools reflecting clouds and planes.
Another bloody out-of-body experience.
Mudded by heavy rains.
Speeding through these crowded lanes thus ending up with empty veins.
No eyes on the dash cause we’re all out of brains.
Wait, read that again for me.
Yeah, out of brains most literally.
Help me after the fact. Help me please.
Put my...
Life left me, time to head for check out.
Can’t shout.
Wife left me, no doubt she took the same route.
Nothing but strangers in this crowd...
Red pools reflecting clouds and planes.
Another bloody out-of-body experience.
Mudded by heavy rains.
Speeding through these crowded lanes thus ending up with empty veins.
No eyes on the dash cause we’re all out of brains.
Wait, read that again for me.
Yeah, out of brains most literally.
Help me after the fact. Help me please.
Put my...
#lies
#betrayal
#religion
#rap
#dark
668 reads
2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
10th Jan 2021 5:07am
10th Jan 2021 5:07am
"Punch" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 28/12/2016
Ya Know ...
I've Found In This Life ...
That ... Girls And Guys ...
Who Behave Like CHUMPS ... !!!!!
Like To Play ... Mitch Green ...
And Beat Me To The PUNCH .... ?!!!?
When My Lyrical Flows ...
Cause DAMAGE To Bones ...
Like A Young ... Roy Jones ... !!!!!
Ya See They're CLEARLY BLIND ...
And ... OUT of Their Minds ... !?!
To THINK That They Punch ...
HARDER Than MY Lines .... !!!!
Lines ... REFINED ...
And Designed Through Rhyme ...
To ... Lyrically SHINE ... !!!
...
I've Found In This Life ...
That ... Girls And Guys ...
Who Behave Like CHUMPS ... !!!!!
Like To Play ... Mitch Green ...
And Beat Me To The PUNCH .... ?!!!?
When My Lyrical Flows ...
Cause DAMAGE To Bones ...
Like A Young ... Roy Jones ... !!!!!
Ya See They're CLEARLY BLIND ...
And ... OUT of Their Minds ... !?!
To THINK That They Punch ...
HARDER Than MY Lines .... !!!!
Lines ... REFINED ...
And Designed Through Rhyme ...
To ... Lyrically SHINE ... !!!
...
#nature
#rhyming
#sports
#art
#rap
571 reads
5 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
25th Dec 2020 4:41am
25th Dec 2020 4:41am
"Here It Is !" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 5/11/2016
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
#art
#rap
455 reads
0 Comments
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Pope Francis
Pope Francis
Poem Published
4th Dec 2020 3:07am
4th Dec 2020 3:07am
Ay Ay Ay
#rap
537 reads
1 Comment
BlackFlower
Poem Published
20th Nov 2020 1:53am
20th Nov 2020 1:53am
I live in Florida, we get a lot of rain
I got worms in my backseat
From neglect and from disease
I thought I sucked them dry
With A wetvac keep in mind
I hop in my car and who's my guest?
Them worms came back they built a nest
The floods the cause of my disgrace
But it's my fault I let them rest
They crawl up from underneath
A whole town underneath
Clawing up for sweet release
Disappointment soon to reach
Little critters white as sheet
Soon to dry immobilized
I got worms in my backseat
From neglect and from disease
I thought I sucked them dry
With A wetvac keep in mind
I hop in my car and who's my guest?
Them worms came back they built a nest
The floods the cause of my disgrace
But it's my fault I let them rest
They crawl up from underneath
A whole town underneath
Clawing up for sweet release
Disappointment soon to reach
Little critters white as sheet
Soon to dry immobilized
I got worms in my backseat
#rap
476 reads
4 Comments
MsRockyJackson
Poem Published
1st Nov 2020 10:44pm
1st Nov 2020 10:44pm
A Random Rhyme 15
Rocky’s back once again so everybody get the fuck back ‘cause a bitch like me knows how to make an entrance so fuck outta my way when I do my strut on the runway like I was Naomi Campbell as I move these hips side to side like I was Shakira while you lick your lips starin’ at me and make you go limp like Campbell soup as I get you feelin’ all mesmerized while you staring in my eyes and all the way down to my thighs like I was straight out of a centerfold lookin’ all waxed and smooth.
Boy, you like how I’m looking in the lingerie? get some Vaseline and tissue pretend my tongue is licking...
Boy, you like how I’m looking in the lingerie? get some Vaseline and tissue pretend my tongue is licking...
#rhyming
#rap
667 reads
6 Comments
Austin_Rura
Austin Rura
Austin Rura
Poem Published
19th Oct 2020 9:41pm
19th Oct 2020 9:41pm
ACAB Rap
So I took a very long hiatus from DUP, but I’m still making music and started recording. I hope y’all like what I’m doing. Peace. https://youtu.be/NwWazSR38wM
This is wisdom from a vagrant some some magic spell mage shit
Never be a victim take em to the cages up against the pavement beat they fucking face in
This is Caligula rap kidnapping the senators wife naked extorting the product matrix like the monster with 21 faces
The long con time to learn some patience take hip hop back and stand up to the fakers
Don’t hate people for their...
This is wisdom from a vagrant some some magic spell mage shit
Never be a victim take em to the cages up against the pavement beat they fucking face in
This is Caligula rap kidnapping the senators wife naked extorting the product matrix like the monster with 21 faces
The long con time to learn some patience take hip hop back and stand up to the fakers
Don’t hate people for their...
#corruption
#politics
#religion
#rap
#rebellion
740 reads
0 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
8th Oct 2020 12:41pm
8th Oct 2020 12:41pm
Humping Like a Baby Getting Sassy
Sex now done become a goddamn racket
If you got a little itch you gotta scratch it
Come on step inside let me take you for a ride
Put your pussy on my pole and let me sack it
You a little white girl like I knew once
She was still in school and had a sweet cunt
She spread her limber legs let me fertilize her eggs
Now I’m out and about I'm on a new hunt
You the kinda a girl I’ve always wanted
Pretty perky tits and they are pointed
I be making you so high gonna fuck you make you cry
When I come in you you know you’ve...
If you got a little itch you gotta scratch it
Come on step inside let me take you for a ride
Put your pussy on my pole and let me sack it
You a little white girl like I knew once
She was still in school and had a sweet cunt
She spread her limber legs let me fertilize her eggs
Now I’m out and about I'm on a new hunt
You the kinda a girl I’ve always wanted
Pretty perky tits and they are pointed
I be making you so high gonna fuck you make you cry
When I come in you you know you’ve...
#sex
#rap
576 reads
4 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
25th Sep 2020 2:48am
25th Sep 2020 2:48am
Cyberpunk
Let me in on this horizon funk.
Kicks so tight, i’m a cyberpunk.
Crazy for the neon, my ride’s a hunk.
Beats from the 80s feed my car’s blaupunkt.
Many will say i barely get to live another day.
Lifestyle’s wicked. Married? Nah, hah no way.
Married to the game maybe, who’ll say.
Anyway...
Got no time for maybes.
Acting like ya’ll got seeds to grow trees. Ya’ll babies.
Lack of steeze. Got no time to freeze.
Keep it movin’ like i’m pushing a broom on ‘em.
Push...
Kicks so tight, i’m a cyberpunk.
Crazy for the neon, my ride’s a hunk.
Beats from the 80s feed my car’s blaupunkt.
Many will say i barely get to live another day.
Lifestyle’s wicked. Married? Nah, hah no way.
Married to the game maybe, who’ll say.
Anyway...
Got no time for maybes.
Acting like ya’ll got seeds to grow trees. Ya’ll babies.
Lack of steeze. Got no time to freeze.
Keep it movin’ like i’m pushing a broom on ‘em.
Push...
#lyrics
#rap
#scifi
874 reads
0 Comments
Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2020 3:25am
2nd Sep 2020 3:25am
If I Die Tonight
If I die tonight
There ain’t gonna be no funeral
Put me in a box
That’s the only thing you should do
Got no love from my pops
Yeah but it was cool
I’m dead and gone
I wished that I knew you.
I’m from the gutta — where niggas don’t eat
We got each other and that’s all that we need
From different mothers, but run with the same team
It’s sad to say but I’m all that I need
I can’t run these streets, no, not today
I’m trying my best each and everyday
Gotta work long hours, gotta get paid
My goal is to move out...
There ain’t gonna be no funeral
Put me in a box
That’s the only thing you should do
Got no love from my pops
Yeah but it was cool
I’m dead and gone
I wished that I knew you.
I’m from the gutta — where niggas don’t eat
We got each other and that’s all that we need
From different mothers, but run with the same team
It’s sad to say but I’m all that I need
I can’t run these streets, no, not today
I’m trying my best each and everyday
Gotta work long hours, gotta get paid
My goal is to move out...
#childhood
#LGBT
#lyrics
#MyInspiration
#rap
946 reads
4 Comments
u53l355
Poem Published
25th Aug 2020 2:54pm
25th Aug 2020 2:54pm
Glad Your Dead
Right mother fucker man i’m glad your dead
Went out with a bang like a shot to the head
I guess it's fitting to your life's cause
Can't quick save start again or even try pause
You never read the terms and conditions properly did you ?
Signed up for this shit while time will now burn through !
No one ever gave a shit or tried to give damn
Expected you to fix everything someone hold my hand
Damn it , you didn't even plan it!
I bet you went out like the loser freak hermit !
That you are , fine wine and rich cigars
Wishing you could...
Went out with a bang like a shot to the head
I guess it's fitting to your life's cause
Can't quick save start again or even try pause
You never read the terms and conditions properly did you ?
Signed up for this shit while time will now burn through !
No one ever gave a shit or tried to give damn
Expected you to fix everything someone hold my hand
Damn it , you didn't even plan it!
I bet you went out like the loser freak hermit !
That you are , fine wine and rich cigars
Wishing you could...
#depression
#dark
#death #rap
#death #rap
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