Rap Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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rap seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
DeeTooCold
Poem Published
12th Jun 2023 2:53am
12th Jun 2023 2:53am
Ain’t A Gangsta (with Movie Malik)
Verse:
Y’all niggas ain’t gangsta, out here lying what you rap about
Claiming you’re a demon, but you still staying at ya Mama’s house
Won’t even help ya Mama out, but wanna take the shooter’s route
Never pulled a trigger, yet you screaming you gone air it out
Without your gang and your gun you look helpless huh?
Whole time you’re soft when they believed you were reckless huh?
You think you a stepper huh? Till you get stepped on
Fucked around and stepped wrong, now your name’s getting repped on
Do you wanna get stepped to?
What...
Y’all niggas ain’t gangsta, out here lying what you rap about
Claiming you’re a demon, but you still staying at ya Mama’s house
Won’t even help ya Mama out, but wanna take the shooter’s route
Never pulled a trigger, yet you screaming you gone air it out
Without your gang and your gun you look helpless huh?
Whole time you’re soft when they believed you were reckless huh?
You think you a stepper huh? Till you get stepped on
Fucked around and stepped wrong, now your name’s getting repped on
Do you wanna get stepped to?
What...
#music
#lyrics
#rap
833 reads
2 Comments
bmcmurtrie_94
Poem Published
14th Mar 2023 10:28am
14th Mar 2023 10:28am
Call me bizz (rap machine)
I'm a 90's Baby ,Crazy Smoke Got Me Feeling Hazy,
Because I Put in work while yall haters feeling lazy im my own Man
So These Little Things don't phase me, because I'm a Heart breaker that's why these girls chase me, So Bow down to the king better obey me, When I write I leave
earthquakes like Haiti,
Haters will get plucked like a daisy
Rap Machine, Stacking Green, No Reason To Be Mad At Me, because I Put in
Work And I Just Flip It Like A Magazine,because When I write I Leave The
Whole Scene In A Tragedy, And I Can write Like This For Days No ...
Because I Put in work while yall haters feeling lazy im my own Man
So These Little Things don't phase me, because I'm a Heart breaker that's why these girls chase me, So Bow down to the king better obey me, When I write I leave
earthquakes like Haiti,
Haters will get plucked like a daisy
Rap Machine, Stacking Green, No Reason To Be Mad At Me, because I Put in
Work And I Just Flip It Like A Magazine,because When I write I Leave The
Whole Scene In A Tragedy, And I Can write Like This For Days No ...
#rhyming
#lyrics
#funny #rap
#funny #rap
884 reads
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Luvmeh
Dimitris
Dimitris
Poem Published
26th Feb 2023 3:09am
26th Feb 2023 3:09am
Undecided
Living on the edge of time
Poking holes hoping for the light to shine
Theres forks and knives but spoons are all you care
People going in circles you reach out but no one is there
Starstruck fell in love with one stare
Fallen left alone she's always there
True love blinding everything's just
Eyes full of tears and stomach full of lust
Time is messed up all hours are the same
Relentless effort for a prize to claim
Days months years blend in fall like rain
Crawling through a dream denying the...
Poking holes hoping for the light to shine
Theres forks and knives but spoons are all you care
People going in circles you reach out but no one is there
Starstruck fell in love with one stare
Fallen left alone she's always there
True love blinding everything's just
Eyes full of tears and stomach full of lust
Time is messed up all hours are the same
Relentless effort for a prize to claim
Days months years blend in fall like rain
Crawling through a dream denying the...
#hate
#dark
#greed
#rap
#suffering
1017 reads
1 Comment
QuinnS
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2023 8:30pm
22nd Jan 2023 8:30pm
Gift From My Dad
Fly under the radar and cover your tracks,
something I didn’t really understand
when I wanted to flaunt like
Eminem, when he started a band.
That sounded like fitting in just like a cog,
no news means that I’m doing my job.
So instead I just opposed it,
I never wanted to go unnoticed.
I saw it in my friends, ‘fore I saw it in me.
People wanna talk, for example Henry:
Said he’s gunna be on the basketball team.
Turns out,
he got cut from the basketball team.
Pretty soon, I began to leave a wake myself,
Their eyes...
something I didn’t really understand
when I wanted to flaunt like
Eminem, when he started a band.
That sounded like fitting in just like a cog,
no news means that I’m doing my job.
So instead I just opposed it,
I never wanted to go unnoticed.
I saw it in my friends, ‘fore I saw it in me.
People wanna talk, for example Henry:
Said he’s gunna be on the basketball team.
Turns out,
he got cut from the basketball team.
Pretty soon, I began to leave a wake myself,
Their eyes...
#love
#secrets
#sports
#rap
#manipulation
567 reads
0 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
8th Jan 2023 4:47am
8th Jan 2023 4:47am
Disney Things
Just woke up, I was sleeping, like a real beauty
On my Aladdin flow, daddy come ride my magic carpet
Money ain't a issue, I just got that notification
Here comes another deposit
Serving little mermaid baby come and take a tour in my sea
Use the gills if you need to breath into me from down under
Please take a swim into my budding rose, like your name is Flounder
Diamonds sparkle so bright, like Cinderella's slipper
A true Belle of the ball knows how to tame a beast
Step out of line and he will make sure you will lay deceased ...
On my Aladdin flow, daddy come ride my magic carpet
Money ain't a issue, I just got that notification
Here comes another deposit
Serving little mermaid baby come and take a tour in my sea
Use the gills if you need to breath into me from down under
Please take a swim into my budding rose, like your name is Flounder
Diamonds sparkle so bright, like Cinderella's slipper
A true Belle of the ball knows how to tame a beast
Step out of line and he will make sure you will lay deceased ...
#rap
636 reads
4 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
7th Jan 2023 4:24am
7th Jan 2023 4:24am
I'm the shit
He want me to throw my ass like a Frisbee
Back the fuck up, before I get angry like a bear, grizzly
I measure my temperature in degrees Fahrenheit
They say Libra you after the bag huh, I know that's right
Match my pen game, like a weed head trying to match his blunt
I'm the shit and that's just me being a cunt
I'm on my badass shit call me Bowser
I'm so hard, like an erected dick trapped in some trousers
You cannot out run me in no relay or marathon
Catch up, not ketchup what type of shit you be on
They say diamonds are a...
Back the fuck up, before I get angry like a bear, grizzly
I measure my temperature in degrees Fahrenheit
They say Libra you after the bag huh, I know that's right
Match my pen game, like a weed head trying to match his blunt
I'm the shit and that's just me being a cunt
I'm on my badass shit call me Bowser
I'm so hard, like an erected dick trapped in some trousers
You cannot out run me in no relay or marathon
Catch up, not ketchup what type of shit you be on
They say diamonds are a...
#rap
#SelfWorth
902 reads
3 Comments
Killjoy_Lyricist
Poem Published
21st Nov 2022 6:48am
21st Nov 2022 6:48am
2022
Keep the music running
Yeah, I don’t wanna stop
Dancing to my own tune I keep my thoughts loose
Losing myself in the beat
Just like the backrooms
Yeah, this ain’t a song it’s a soul
Telling me how to write it just so I can play it
Living life like it’s 1992
You see me dancing side to side
Better call saul cause I got a bad case of footloose
Nothing better than a rickroll
Megalovonia more like astronomia
Because I’m boutta put you in a casket with these moves
Yeah, welcome to 2022
Breaking bad’s just the start of it ...
Yeah, I don’t wanna stop
Dancing to my own tune I keep my thoughts loose
Losing myself in the beat
Just like the backrooms
Yeah, this ain’t a song it’s a soul
Telling me how to write it just so I can play it
Living life like it’s 1992
You see me dancing side to side
Better call saul cause I got a bad case of footloose
Nothing better than a rickroll
Megalovonia more like astronomia
Because I’m boutta put you in a casket with these moves
Yeah, welcome to 2022
Breaking bad’s just the start of it ...
#love
#dreams
#rap #scifi
#rap #scifi
898 reads
1 Comment
Dancingwords
Poem Published
28th Oct 2022 9:57pm
28th Oct 2022 9:57pm
Chosen Ones
Yeah
It's time
Time's up
Heres what I'm made of
I'm show em a little love
Here I come
This is my, my
My passion wakes up
I ain't even done just let me sum it up
This is automatic when I'm kickin up dust
Got a tec to bust
I let it out and then I let it go for once
Like the chosen ones, Like the chosen ones
I'm a poet all at once
Chosen one ion even try to do it lest it can’t be done
Only what you can’t be is what my camp become, a lamp, be-cun(beacon) be one,
It can't be fun, but I'm imploring men,...
It's time
Time's up
Heres what I'm made of
I'm show em a little love
Here I come
This is my, my
My passion wakes up
I ain't even done just let me sum it up
This is automatic when I'm kickin up dust
Got a tec to bust
I let it out and then I let it go for once
Like the chosen ones, Like the chosen ones
I'm a poet all at once
Chosen one ion even try to do it lest it can’t be done
Only what you can’t be is what my camp become, a lamp, be-cun(beacon) be one,
It can't be fun, but I'm imploring men,...
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
#rap
901 reads
3 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
8th Oct 2022 1:39am
8th Oct 2022 1:39am
M.M.
Please stand up for Marshall Mathers.
Been three decades and his bars still matter.
Almost 50 fat cakes so hold the cheddar.
These wraps ain’t vegan, lemme hide the leather.
The shine is real, put on shades with weight.
No slim-rimmed rays. Block out all the hate.
No braids were meant to meet my fears,
but they seem so full of shit-ney Spears.
Sorry, I meant full like brassieres.
Like when I wear...
Been three decades and his bars still matter.
Almost 50 fat cakes so hold the cheddar.
These wraps ain’t vegan, lemme hide the leather.
The shine is real, put on shades with weight.
No slim-rimmed rays. Block out all the hate.
No braids were meant to meet my fears,
but they seem so full of shit-ney Spears.
Sorry, I meant full like brassieres.
Like when I wear...
#family
#lyrics
#rap
1001 reads
8 Comments
MrDunnePoetry
Poem Published
15th Jul 2022 7:52pm
15th Jul 2022 7:52pm
Marshall Mathers the Masonic Muppet
Marshall Mathers the Masonic Muppet"
This Master Mason, aka Marshall Mathers/
Is a Masonic Muppet, like most of these rappers
His handler's the Doctor, and does what he's told/
By misleading the youth, whilst selling his soul
From being a rebel in rap, to clearly controlled/
Like his level in rap, could stop him being exposed
All he is has been moulded, like the Cold Wind Blows/
So remember I foretold it, when his Curtains a Close
I believe Proof was the sacrifice, for Marshall's Revival/
And being Marshall's a Satanist, he does not like...
This Master Mason, aka Marshall Mathers/
Is a Masonic Muppet, like most of these rappers
His handler's the Doctor, and does what he's told/
By misleading the youth, whilst selling his soul
From being a rebel in rap, to clearly controlled/
Like his level in rap, could stop him being exposed
All he is has been moulded, like the Cold Wind Blows/
So remember I foretold it, when his Curtains a Close
I believe Proof was the sacrifice, for Marshall's Revival/
And being Marshall's a Satanist, he does not like...
#evil
#music
#LifeAsAWriter
#rap
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
688 reads
2 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
17th Jun 2022 4:29pm
17th Jun 2022 4:29pm
Winter Blanco III
She can never luv
She is so special to me
Ah womanly ah
Light in our eyes
And never dented to me
Sweet kind caring yes fresh
Winter luv me too
But will not tell me the her
I use to dream of
She is so special to me
Ah womanly ah
Light in our eyes
And never dented to me
Sweet kind caring yes fresh
Winter luv me too
But will not tell me the her
I use to dream of
#music
#lyrics
#TimeHeals
#rap
#ForbiddenLove
730 reads
0 Comments
MrDunnePoetry
Poem Published
9th Jun 2022 11:36pm
9th Jun 2022 11:36pm
The Lord's Linguistics
The Lord's Linguistics"
I can see the remnants amongst us, descendants of Columbus/
Heading West without compass, ancient text with the numbers
The seven angels amongst us, with trumpets and seals/
Like in the Book of Revelation, the second coming revealed
Within the realms of this world, I can feel that they fell/
And with earth being Hell, this realm is where they dwell
Within self there is knowledge, like with Foliage there is tree/
Yet with man being horrid, they destroy all that they see
Deep in the sea lies secrets, like the Titans in...
I can see the remnants amongst us, descendants of Columbus/
Heading West without compass, ancient text with the numbers
The seven angels amongst us, with trumpets and seals/
Like in the Book of Revelation, the second coming revealed
Within the realms of this world, I can feel that they fell/
And with earth being Hell, this realm is where they dwell
Within self there is knowledge, like with Foliage there is tree/
Yet with man being horrid, they destroy all that they see
Deep in the sea lies secrets, like the Titans in...
#dreams
#spiritual
#FreeVerse
#WritingPoetry
#rap
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