Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique
#rainbow
Poems about rainbows seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Prismaticism
Inspired by "Prismatic Tear"
by PAR
Always basking in the light
even deep into the night
I feel the colors split
so many hues of blue
Each one sadder than the last
as I reflect upon the past
becoming more mirror
than any focusing lens
Making me wonder why
even when I turn to the sky
I see the rainbow bend
always downward
by PAR
Always basking in the light
even deep into the night
I feel the colors split
so many hues of blue
Each one sadder than the last
as I reflect upon the past
becoming more mirror
than any focusing lens
Making me wonder why
even when I turn to the sky
I see the rainbow bend
always downward
#sadness
#rainbow
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
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Smoke Screen
Many colors in the spectrum
Not one of them supreme
Conjoining them together
Yields an unconquerable team
It was all just a big dream
Awoke to a burning house
Races on different teams
Fire will never be doused
Not one of them supreme
Conjoining them together
Yields an unconquerable team
It was all just a big dream
Awoke to a burning house
Races on different teams
Fire will never be doused
#dreams
#rainbow
#fire
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Colorado Blues

#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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rainbows in the night
climb through, the widow is open..
you bring a storm with you
it turns to gray: my room, these walls
seems it’s true, we don’t like it here
when clouds look over us
and my shadow runs from me
it doesn’t like your cursed company
.. yeah
we claw at skin
we break from within
and it shows
in black and blue
my mirror sees it
..and like a god
it just knows..
..my biggest tormentor, is what’s held inside.
yeah, it’s dark in here
but stay near
and let it settle.. ...
you bring a storm with you
it turns to gray: my room, these walls
seems it’s true, we don’t like it here
when clouds look over us
and my shadow runs from me
it doesn’t like your cursed company
.. yeah
we claw at skin
we break from within
and it shows
in black and blue
my mirror sees it
..and like a god
it just knows..
..my biggest tormentor, is what’s held inside.
yeah, it’s dark in here
but stay near
and let it settle.. ...
#depression
#loneliness
#SelfHarm
#bipolar
#rainbow
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Winter Rain
Too warm to snow
too cold to remain
I shelter again from this rain
that knows me all too well
Keeps me under its spell
with the weight of memory
lessons learned
bridges burned
Washed away by tears
dammed up for years
too cold to remain
I shelter again from this rain
that knows me all too well
Keeps me under its spell
with the weight of memory
lessons learned
bridges burned
Washed away by tears
dammed up for years
#winter
#rainbow
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
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Rainbow Strike
violent rainbows
that's how my mind goes
in beauty
there's fear
the great destroyer coming near
inside
safe and warm
longing
for the next storm
blue skies
are full of lies
there's nothing like
a good rainbow strike
that's how my mind goes
in beauty
there's fear
the great destroyer coming near
inside
safe and warm
longing
for the next storm
blue skies
are full of lies
there's nothing like
a good rainbow strike
#storm
#rainbow
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Evening shopping musings (NaPoWriMo 2022 #26)
The price of petrol
is rising,
but as I
don't have a car
I don't particularly
have a care,
I wonder how
far that'll last.
Hobby stores are vibrant bazaars
brimming with bits and bobs
the colour of rainbows
and even somethings in
black.
The transcending affirmation
of possibilities and creation,
because even humble buttons
can be more
if covered
in glitter
or stuck on
coloured
paper.
is rising,
but as I
don't have a car
I don't particularly
have a care,
I wonder how
far that'll last.
Hobby stores are vibrant bazaars
brimming with bits and bobs
the colour of rainbows
and even somethings in
black.
The transcending affirmation
of possibilities and creation,
because even humble buttons
can be more
if covered
in glitter
or stuck on
coloured
paper.
#rainbow
#cars
#art
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3 Comments
kaleidoscope
passionate life-blood; powerful aggression; loves healing, vigorous anger.
warning: visible neon zeal bursting forth fresh youthful optimism.
bright sun rays happily bathing golden cowards, lighting jaundiced joys;
nature's faithfulness leaves jealous monsters growing renewable energy; giving birth.
calm, truthful clarity dumps doldrums of despair; open skies cry,
darkening dusk spills midnight ink, prophesying
mysterious rare royal luxury, satisfying sensitive spirituality.
warning: visible neon zeal bursting forth fresh youthful optimism.
bright sun rays happily bathing golden cowards, lighting jaundiced joys;
nature's faithfulness leaves jealous monsters growing renewable energy; giving birth.
calm, truthful clarity dumps doldrums of despair; open skies cry,
darkening dusk spills midnight ink, prophesying
mysterious rare royal luxury, satisfying sensitive spirituality.
#rainbow
#art
#NaPoWriMo2022
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Cambodia
Junsin Runi Queen
The mountainous need I gleam
Would be such sparkling
Wife for me but listen
Queen Juni like titties
Still I aluv u bitch
The mountainous need I gleam
Would be such sparkling
Wife for me but listen
Queen Juni like titties
Still I aluv u bitch
#rainbow
#haiku
#ForbiddenLove #bisexual
#ForbiddenLove #bisexual
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arcus pluvius
(rainbow)
embracing arc,
where now thine ark
that canopied the souls
of one last sacred family
saved from earth’s damning rains?
stretch forth thine arm,
for no more harm,
ether and nether poles
shall flood to clear oblivion,
as long as freedom reigns.
your spectral suite
reflects a sweet
symphonic course of light
that sanctifies God’s Solemn Pledge:
earth’s founts shall I not raise.
arcus, so near,
yet we can ne’er
hold pluvius fist-tight,
who shelters no feign pot of gold
but...
embracing arc,
where now thine ark
that canopied the souls
of one last sacred family
saved from earth’s damning rains?
stretch forth thine arm,
for no more harm,
ether and nether poles
shall flood to clear oblivion,
as long as freedom reigns.
your spectral suite
reflects a sweet
symphonic course of light
that sanctifies God’s Solemn Pledge:
earth’s founts shall I not raise.
arcus, so near,
yet we can ne’er
hold pluvius fist-tight,
who shelters no feign pot of gold
but...
#universe
#rainbow
#water
#humankind
#art
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Rain
I habitually wait for the rain
When the ground gives off that smell,
I always rush home to prepare
For what I must purify.
Then it comes, pouring
I step out and let it soothe sorrow
Engulf my tears
While thunder swallows screams
Wash away what I could not
Quench the dryness of this heart
And bring back life to what has died
Remind me, as you drizzle away
That storms bring with them a rainbow.
When the ground gives off that smell,
I always rush home to prepare
For what I must purify.
Then it comes, pouring
I step out and let it soothe sorrow
Engulf my tears
While thunder swallows screams
Wash away what I could not
Quench the dryness of this heart
And bring back life to what has died
Remind me, as you drizzle away
That storms bring with them a rainbow.
#motivational
#inspirational
#rain
#storm
#rainbow
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Prism
This moment unveils crimson,
mirroring deep in my heart.
Shattered still; I am left stunned,
surviving here torn apart.
My mindset is now tangent,
clasping tangerine fire.
It keeps me while I lament,
assuring lungs respire.
How the golden aurora
glimmers with no victory.
Casting shade on my aura,
changing my trajectory.
I linger in the shamrocks
searching for four-leaf clovers.
Caught in the thick of shell shock,
reliving actions over.
Unaware that I got lost
in the oceanic depth ...
mirroring deep in my heart.
Shattered still; I am left stunned,
surviving here torn apart.
My mindset is now tangent,
clasping tangerine fire.
It keeps me while I lament,
assuring lungs respire.
How the golden aurora
glimmers with no victory.
Casting shade on my aura,
changing my trajectory.
I linger in the shamrocks
searching for four-leaf clovers.
Caught in the thick of shell shock,
reliving actions over.
Unaware that I got lost
in the oceanic depth ...
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
#rainbow
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DU Poetry : Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique