Poems About Pollution Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about pollution seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
blackdahlia__
belladonna
belladonna
Poem Published
27th Dec 2019 3:27pm
27th Dec 2019 3:27pm
Alien
it must be this toxic heat or
your delirious presence
that provokes my body to betray its humanity
and disclose its original form
more hastily than the usual
but what is done is done
like how we exasperate the earth
beyond forgiveness
and how you make me want to twist, bend and raise my limbs
towards you in ways incomprehensible and appalling to human eyes
I am brimming with alarming conspiracy...
your delirious presence
that provokes my body to betray its humanity
and disclose its original form
more hastily than the usual
but what is done is done
like how we exasperate the earth
beyond forgiveness
and how you make me want to twist, bend and raise my limbs
towards you in ways incomprehensible and appalling to human eyes
I am brimming with alarming conspiracy...
#universe
#environment
#pollution
#aliens
#scifi
561 reads
4 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
21st Dec 2019 9:57pm
21st Dec 2019 9:57pm
from: "Poums I Hate Writing" by dkzk
Double-duty judgement call.
(Just be sure ye gets yr OverTime)
and everytime the president laughs,
you can be sure he's laughing at You.
There's no excuse for amerika. Destroy
the planet for the sake of material excess.
Then we'll just go to other planets to
colonize with our witless wisdumb ,
godlike intellect, & that great nuclear power,
enough to lay waste to a dozen Earths.
The "money" piles & gets whisked away by
The Arms mongers. So many suffer for the
...
(Just be sure ye gets yr OverTime)
and everytime the president laughs,
you can be sure he's laughing at You.
There's no excuse for amerika. Destroy
the planet for the sake of material excess.
Then we'll just go to other planets to
colonize with our witless wisdumb ,
godlike intellect, & that great nuclear power,
enough to lay waste to a dozen Earths.
The "money" piles & gets whisked away by
The Arms mongers. So many suffer for the
...
#corruption
#war
#pollution
#greed
#poverty
412 reads
3 Comments
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
21st Dec 2019 6:47am
21st Dec 2019 6:47am
Return Us to the Light
Take me back to a simpler time,
To a time before the touch of man;
A time before cars and telephone lines,
When Mother Earth still held command.
Take me back to a simpler time,
Long before the wars began;
When bird held dominion over sky
As fish, in water, swam.
O' how the times have changed,
Since the rise of modern man;
We stole dominion from the birds
From the fish, and from the land.
We stole dominion from eachother,
With bombs and guns at hand,
And sacrificed our brothers
Just to conquer foreign...
To a time before the touch of man;
A time before cars and telephone lines,
When Mother Earth still held command.
Take me back to a simpler time,
Long before the wars began;
When bird held dominion over sky
As fish, in water, swam.
O' how the times have changed,
Since the rise of modern man;
We stole dominion from the birds
From the fish, and from the land.
We stole dominion from eachother,
With bombs and guns at hand,
And sacrificed our brothers
Just to conquer foreign...
#inspirational
#environment
#pollution
#nature
#consumerism
2094 reads
63 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
8th Dec 2019 3:10pm
8th Dec 2019 3:10pm
Library
So… you think Trump
will build...
a presidential library?
will build...
a presidential library?
#politics
#pollution
#satirical #reading
#satirical #reading
721 reads
3 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2019 1:28am
2nd Dec 2019 1:28am
Tous mes poèmes ne sont que des comédies d'erreur
Extra ! Error ! Extra ! Err.............
All
about it was read (and pon-
dered up-the-ass & back again)
Peppery pornographics from the pen of
The Prince,
have added a textured torment to each
possible page of the folly of
fausse histoire (and all
it's antecedents )
The burden of proof is handed down to whom-so-ever
will take it, regardless confidential
qualitifics, quantatives, comissions,
conditions,( or even if cordials ...
All
about it was read (and pon-
dered up-the-ass & back again)
Peppery pornographics from the pen of
The Prince,
have added a textured torment to each
possible page of the folly of
fausse histoire (and all
it's antecedents )
The burden of proof is handed down to whom-so-ever
will take it, regardless confidential
qualitifics, quantatives, comissions,
conditions,( or even if cordials ...
#love
#sex
#politics
#pollution
#TruthOfLife
487 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
20th Nov 2019 6:39pm
20th Nov 2019 6:39pm
Global Warming Warning
Global Warming Warning
#environment
#pollution
#CallToAction
1164 reads
9 Comments
poetryaccident
Poem Published
19th Nov 2019 1:09am
19th Nov 2019 1:09am
Reaping Dust
Consider futures none entreat
while nature dies beneath our feet
a slow death that’s decades long
in a world that most belong
except the monsters who plan to die
before the forecasts are applied
to the world they deign to mind
as elders focus on dollar signs
holding money as the greater good
against the family’s heritage
the wasteland will be the birthright
bequeathed by death’s knowing smile
ask not for the bell now tolls
it’s for the young left behind
reaping dust from coffered lies
all that’s left...
while nature dies beneath our feet
a slow death that’s decades long
in a world that most belong
except the monsters who plan to die
before the forecasts are applied
to the world they deign to mind
as elders focus on dollar signs
holding money as the greater good
against the family’s heritage
the wasteland will be the birthright
bequeathed by death’s knowing smile
ask not for the bell now tolls
it’s for the young left behind
reaping dust from coffered lies
all that’s left...
#pollution
360 reads
0 Comments
David_Macleod
14397816
14397816
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 7:47pm
13th Nov 2019 7:47pm
Tree Huggers - - A Scottish Sonnet
Ok! What now! were gonna save the planet
Chatting with trees and a fuckin gannet
Climate change is horse shit theory, junk science
(Poorr) cuts, put it (doon), that modern appliance
Save the whale, the panda and the tiger
Please (dinnae) let those climbers climb the Eiger
Fuckin hippies and their fucked floral scheme
As the cash rolls in, in their pants, they cream
What is the solution to pollution
Can't seek contribution absolution
It's fuckin clear, the trend should be well bucked
If we don't love each other (wur) (awwe)...
Chatting with trees and a fuckin gannet
Climate change is horse shit theory, junk science
(Poorr) cuts, put it (doon), that modern appliance
Save the whale, the panda and the tiger
Please (dinnae) let those climbers climb the Eiger
Fuckin hippies and their fucked floral scheme
As the cash rolls in, in their pants, they cream
What is the solution to pollution
Can't seek contribution absolution
It's fuckin clear, the trend should be well bucked
If we don't love each other (wur) (awwe)...
#science
#environment
#pollution
407 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Nov 2019 4:32am
7th Nov 2019 4:32am
What Have We Done?
I’m dying of thirst but I cannot drink,
The waters are poisoned,
What have we done?
I’m famished but can’t eat,
The fruit is all spoiled,
Burned under the sun,
Oh what have we done?
The landscapes once green,
Are all now but a dream,
They have disappeared,
By the industrial machine.
The beautiful clear skies,
That once graced my eyes,
Are cold, dark and grey,
The blue has gone away.
The oceans aren’t clean,
All of its life now it seems,
Has left and vanished,
Never to...
The waters are poisoned,
What have we done?
I’m famished but can’t eat,
The fruit is all spoiled,
Burned under the sun,
Oh what have we done?
The landscapes once green,
Are all now but a dream,
They have disappeared,
By the industrial machine.
The beautiful clear skies,
That once graced my eyes,
Are cold, dark and grey,
The blue has gone away.
The oceans aren’t clean,
All of its life now it seems,
Has left and vanished,
Never to...
#hope
#environment
#pollution #rebirth
#pollution #rebirth
684 reads
2 Comments
BabydoII
Itty Bitty
Itty Bitty
Poem Published
29th Oct 2019 5:00pm
29th Oct 2019 5:00pm
Love Letters From Mom
Can I protect you
Bathe in your endless streams
May I live in you
Ensure my print never impedes
'Cause I'm so sorry mother
I see your skin covered in dust
Death rises to surface
And nourish the burning dusk
Hell fires cover miles
Quakes shake unlike before
We haven't breathed clean a while
Clouds amass like poisonous storms
Tsnumsmis drench and scrub the land
Hurricanes swarm with the help of our hands
Tornados reach categories rarely seen
The...
Bathe in your endless streams
May I live in you
Ensure my print never impedes
'Cause I'm so sorry mother
I see your skin covered in dust
Death rises to surface
And nourish the burning dusk
Hell fires cover miles
Quakes shake unlike before
We haven't breathed clean a while
Clouds amass like poisonous storms
Tsnumsmis drench and scrub the land
Hurricanes swarm with the help of our hands
Tornados reach categories rarely seen
The...
#betrayal
#environment
#pollution
352 reads
4 Comments
RByron418
Poem Published
26th Oct 2019 5:08am
26th Oct 2019 5:08am
polluted
the moon silent
in a thriving, vivid
blossom trapped between
Eden. Dead.
Behold the ancient
always, this wild path
fertile only in the dusk
of being. Night.
Winter.
A withering growth birthed
in fresh shade, a
dark song living cold,
preservered, but
No Sanctuary in
our confused season -
wander or walk,
rest or leave.
every Above is
just so Below.
Polluted root.
in a thriving, vivid
blossom trapped between
Eden. Dead.
Behold the ancient
always, this wild path
fertile only in the dusk
of being. Night.
Winter.
A withering growth birthed
in fresh shade, a
dark song living cold,
preservered, but
No Sanctuary in
our confused season -
wander or walk,
rest or leave.
every Above is
just so Below.
Polluted root.
#depression
#politics
#bipolar
#pollution
#MentalHealth
433 reads
1 Comment
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
25th Oct 2019 11:15pm
25th Oct 2019 11:15pm
Marching Song for the Patr'idiot
PHOTO by: Nikki Mo
Retreat, Advance,
Retreat, Advance !
Engage the enemy forthrighteously!
Advance. Retreat.
Retreat
Retreat
retreat
retre
retr
battle fades......plenty of blood, limbs, exposed viscera of Death
to deal with, to bury, to burn.
Such a savage species,
Such a wasteful humanity
Such an insult
...
Retreat, Advance,
Retreat, Advance !
Engage the enemy forthrighteously!
Advance. Retreat.
Retreat
Retreat
retreat
retre
retr
battle fades......plenty of blood, limbs, exposed viscera of Death
to deal with, to bury, to burn.
Such a savage species,
Such a wasteful humanity
Such an insult
...
#corruption
#war
#death
#environment
#pollution
406 reads
2 Comments
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