Poems About Pollution Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about pollution seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
20th Aug 2020 9:47am
20th Aug 2020 9:47am
Tale of a Stillborn Still Alive ( After 68 Years on Earth )
A bottle of vintage
Gatorade! And
wasn't it
a fortunate year in them
viney vineyards
a'way Out West!
The hoi-poloi can
have had their grape and
drink it too.
~ Shit! there'e no fckn fruit
in fckn Gatorade ~
All day long I been chugging every
imaginable color of this great
Amerikan be'ver'age,
and then, tossing
the empties out (of) the window
of my '61 Ford Falcon flyin thru
USoA at a breakneck 71mph, in
complete disregard for the
"Keep Our...
Gatorade! And
wasn't it
a fortunate year in them
viney vineyards
a'way Out West!
The hoi-poloi can
have had their grape and
drink it too.
~ Shit! there'e no fckn fruit
in fckn Gatorade ~
All day long I been chugging every
imaginable color of this great
Amerikan be'ver'age,
and then, tossing
the empties out (of) the window
of my '61 Ford Falcon flyin thru
USoA at a breakneck 71mph, in
complete disregard for the
"Keep Our...
#love
#birth
#betrayal
#death
#pollution
386 reads
5 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
17th Aug 2020 1:28pm
17th Aug 2020 1:28pm
Smile
I'm trying not to be negative
But it's all I got
And these people scurry about acting like they forgot
We are living through rough times
That I wish I could forget
I wish I could ignore
And get lost inside my head
But I'll try to be more positive
As the ground burns all around
And the ice just keeps collapsing
...While I'm just one in a crowd
I'll try to smile knowing that I can't do a goddam thing
Only frown when no one's there to say
Smile, Angel wings
But it's all I got
And these people scurry about acting like they forgot
We are living through rough times
That I wish I could forget
I wish I could ignore
And get lost inside my head
But I'll try to be more positive
As the ground burns all around
And the ice just keeps collapsing
...While I'm just one in a crowd
I'll try to smile knowing that I can't do a goddam thing
Only frown when no one's there to say
Smile, Angel wings
#pollution
#humankind
#frustration #disappointment
#frustration #disappointment
406 reads
10 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
9th Aug 2020 7:07pm
9th Aug 2020 7:07pm
Sleepless(ness) is Blasting in Beruit
This sleeplessness. Can it point
out point out all or any
of the heartscars
that demote
the psyche,
and threaten the Very Essence
the Very Life (of he who
once sat
in this
High Chair
of baby's hunger).
It was only 2700 tons of unstable
ammonium nitrate
that blew Beirut's hat off, as per
mushroom
cloud
making the fuckin place look like
an erstwhile
Nagasaki / Hiroshima. ...
out point out all or any
of the heartscars
that demote
the psyche,
and threaten the Very Essence
the Very Life (of he who
once sat
in this
High Chair
of baby's hunger).
It was only 2700 tons of unstable
ammonium nitrate
that blew Beirut's hat off, as per
mushroom
cloud
making the fuckin place look like
an erstwhile
Nagasaki / Hiroshima. ...
#death
#environment
#pollution
#insomnia
#risk
478 reads
8 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
6th Aug 2020 11:35am
6th Aug 2020 11:35am
No Thing Like It Used To Be / Oh, Shit......
#dark
#environment
#pollution
#funny
#confessional
398 reads
4 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
29th Jul 2020 1:57pm
29th Jul 2020 1:57pm
Paving the Way, Far & Away
still a'raged with endgame fury,
channeled into limp, impotent weeping,
wit such terminal gestures that'll defy
gra
vity
at every twisting turn. No mo' future left
in this chronic weariness, complicated
by the trials of family love, it's tribulations
dingle dangle in the force of the giant
engines. You know. The ones that drive
massive ships laden with Our commodities,
despoiling the seas with millions of tons of
Shit, some of it toxic, every fckn day on every
fckn day of every fckn year. Thousands of 'em
at sea at any...
channeled into limp, impotent weeping,
wit such terminal gestures that'll defy
gra
vity
at every twisting turn. No mo' future left
in this chronic weariness, complicated
by the trials of family love, it's tribulations
dingle dangle in the force of the giant
engines. You know. The ones that drive
massive ships laden with Our commodities,
despoiling the seas with millions of tons of
Shit, some of it toxic, every fckn day on every
fckn day of every fckn year. Thousands of 'em
at sea at any...
#anxiety
#depression
#dark
#environment
#pollution
362 reads
2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
29th Jul 2020 4:29am
29th Jul 2020 4:29am
“Spike“ ... A Poem written by Big Virge 29/6/2020
Now These Words Are TRUE ...
And ... NOT From Some Cartoon ...
Where A Dog's Being Used ... !!!!!!!
Because .....
YIKES ... There Are SPIKES ..
of Infections Spreading ... !!!
That Could Cause A New CRISIS ... !!!
That’s ... Much Worse Than ISIS ... !!!
SPIKING Here And SPIKING There ... !?!
Because of BREACHES ...
... CLOSING Beaches ... !!!
So Now Cars Are Ensnared ...
Like Stars Up In Our Atmosphere ... !!!
Because MILE LONG Queues ....
Are Now In View...
And ... NOT From Some Cartoon ...
Where A Dog's Being Used ... !!!!!!!
Because .....
YIKES ... There Are SPIKES ..
of Infections Spreading ... !!!
That Could Cause A New CRISIS ... !!!
That’s ... Much Worse Than ISIS ... !!!
SPIKING Here And SPIKING There ... !?!
Because of BREACHES ...
... CLOSING Beaches ... !!!
So Now Cars Are Ensnared ...
Like Stars Up In Our Atmosphere ... !!!
Because MILE LONG Queues ....
Are Now In View...
#relationships
#politics
#pollution
#humankind
#pandemic
554 reads
3 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
25th Jul 2020 7:40pm
25th Jul 2020 7:40pm
Two Thousand Square Acres of Genteel, RoughHouse Fun
an-other run through pixel farm
to think, to see, to reap who is
right with what is wrong.
polarity or paradox beating on
doors deaf to any such expansion
of perspective, sick to even consider
such elemental "change". Who have
we here? who have we? who are we?
when were we here?
christ'awmighty! Look at what the fuck
we have wrought. Turning heaven into
a mightily heated hell. Wil we burn?
W ill we drown? Or, perhaps just quietly
suffocate inside unrelenting expectations?
Hiding places are all...
to think, to see, to reap who is
right with what is wrong.
polarity or paradox beating on
doors deaf to any such expansion
of perspective, sick to even consider
such elemental "change". Who have
we here? who have we? who are we?
when were we here?
christ'awmighty! Look at what the fuck
we have wrought. Turning heaven into
a mightily heated hell. Wil we burn?
W ill we drown? Or, perhaps just quietly
suffocate inside unrelenting expectations?
Hiding places are all...
#corruption
#politics
#pollution
#greed
#escape
433 reads
2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
2nd Jun 2020 10:26pm
2nd Jun 2020 10:26pm
Great Steel Behemoths A'sea
Yo! "important" information about our addiction
to goods of our[i] want[oness/i]
world in a scene of
(world as seen.....seen as what?)
the great ships motor through
world oceans, blowing
amazing toxins,
(real poison).
belching filth
shitting
bilge into the gift of the sea,
Thousands of behemoths on the
High Seas
at any given moment (making billions for....?),
bringing cheap-labor "goods" to
us.......cheap! cheap!
(like a bird) ...
to goods of our[i] want[oness/i]
world in a scene of
(world as seen.....seen as what?)
the great ships motor through
world oceans, blowing
amazing toxins,
(real poison).
belching filth
shitting
bilge into the gift of the sea,
Thousands of behemoths on the
High Seas
at any given moment (making billions for....?),
bringing cheap-labor "goods" to
us.......cheap! cheap!
(like a bird) ...
#environment
#pollution
#money
#monsters
#greed
341 reads
2 Comments
Twitter
Poem Published
2nd Jun 2020 2:53pm
2nd Jun 2020 2:53pm
Plastic Garbage society (1)
At the end of the day
a pile of rubbish piles up
Each plastic bottle a trace
of being too passive to say
No, I don't need this so urgently.
No thoughts to reflect
how lazy we are
how pampered
to have garbage wrapped things at hand
giving us the belief of
buying something clean
Hygienic and
well protected
But in the long run
The plastic creeps back
In our lives
From the waste consuming
Energy resources
Maybe the pile of garbage
At the end of the day...
a pile of rubbish piles up
Each plastic bottle a trace
of being too passive to say
No, I don't need this so urgently.
No thoughts to reflect
how lazy we are
how pampered
to have garbage wrapped things at hand
giving us the belief of
buying something clean
Hygienic and
well protected
But in the long run
The plastic creeps back
In our lives
From the waste consuming
Energy resources
Maybe the pile of garbage
At the end of the day...
#environment
#pollution
434 reads
3 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
23rd May 2020 10:52pm
23rd May 2020 10:52pm
Crashing Essential Machinery
yo. Dipstick! Run for cover.
the
Great Machine is
comin'down
all'round
us &
those of our e l e c t o r s
ass'well.
A shower of metal ripped n shorn blade-like bloodying, severing
even the children, into unreconizable meat.
Then, hades-like fire, well, you know...
the
Great Machine is
comin'down
all'round
us &
those of our e l e c t o r s
ass'well.
A shower of metal ripped n shorn blade-like bloodying, severing
even the children, into unreconizable meat.
Then, hades-like fire, well, you know...
#love
#war
#environment #pollution
#environment #pollution
374 reads
3 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
23rd May 2020 6:30pm
23rd May 2020 6:30pm
PROOF
The cancer is us-
see? Our sick diminishment
made the air less foul.
see? Our sick diminishment
made the air less foul.
#environment
#pollution
#senryu
#pandemic
#humankind
409 reads
6 Comments
OG-Poetry
Poem Published
4th May 2020 5:43pm
4th May 2020 5:43pm
.. earthling
.. on a giant rock you spin around
a Star at every morning you glee,
childishly you rebuke your gifts,
polluting earth’s air, soil and seas..
killing off the butterfly
and especially the honey bees, 🐝
will end the cycle of crops you eat
and beautiful flowers 🌺 you breathe,
not taking care of your life supports
will certainly drop you to your knees,
and.. if or when this is the case
in the sure report you’ll see..
no future oxygen...
a Star at every morning you glee,
childishly you rebuke your gifts,
polluting earth’s air, soil and seas..
killing off the butterfly
and especially the honey bees, 🐝
will end the cycle of crops you eat
and beautiful flowers 🌺 you breathe,
not taking care of your life supports
will certainly drop you to your knees,
and.. if or when this is the case
in the sure report you’ll see..
no future oxygen...
#environment
#pollution
#nature
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
675 reads
5 Comments
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