Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
I feel fine
Take a trip through my magic ocean
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
#dreams
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
84 reads
10 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 8:40am
19th Feb 2025 8:40am
Unable To Sting
While the irony rubs me wrong
It has ignited a raging fire inside
So you wrote a poem or a song
Intelligence is artificially implied
Grasping the definition of heart
But lacking soul to feel anything
Understanding doesn’t equal art
Empty words are unable to sting
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
It has ignited a raging fire inside
So you wrote a poem or a song
Intelligence is artificially implied
Grasping the definition of heart
But lacking soul to feel anything
Understanding doesn’t equal art
Empty words are unable to sting
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
169 reads
17 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 9:57pm
18th Feb 2025 9:57pm
I fear no one but GOD
As I reflect upon my journey and travel and walk through this cycle of life, I fear no one but GOD ALMIGHTY for he has my life, within his precious palms of his hands. 🙏 For sure I've learned a long time ago some people's, will tell you that they got your back 🤨 but yet sometimes we question those words base upon there own actions. 🤨 Yet we try not to be negative about some people's behavior, for some people's are just creatures of habits. 🤨 That's why we have to be aware of the devil's in human skin, like snakes in the high grass waiting patiently to attack...
#confessional
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#SelfWorth
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 7:57am
18th Feb 2025 7:57am
"Doing A Damian."
Hello, brothers and sisters of the Underground. It is I. Interesting story here. So I know someone who’s taking college classes, and had turned in a thesis, or something that they had to write for a grade.
Anyhow, they have to run their work through an AI detection system. The report came back as 97% chance that AI was used. He knew he wrote the paper, and had to go through all the red tape to prove that point.
It’s resolved, folks. My friend proved his case, that the work was indeed his. Here’s the thing, through the whole process they found out the computer...
Anyhow, they have to run their work through an AI detection system. The report came back as 97% chance that AI was used. He knew he wrote the paper, and had to go through all the red tape to prove that point.
It’s resolved, folks. My friend proved his case, that the work was indeed his. Here’s the thing, through the whole process they found out the computer...
#philosophical
168 reads
24 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 4:43pm
17th Feb 2025 4:43pm
Unseen
I sit back, unseen,
in the shadows of your lives,
watching the threads
that pull you—fragile, messy things—
tangle and twist.
I don’t need to speak,
don’t need to be seen,
I’m here to catch the moments
when you think you’re invisible—
that’s when the truth slips through.
Patterns emerge in the chaos,
a heartbeat’s hesitation,
the flicker in the eye
before you hide the secret,
before you lie to yourself.
You move,
like marionettes
dancing on a stage
no one...
in the shadows of your lives,
watching the threads
that pull you—fragile, messy things—
tangle and twist.
I don’t need to speak,
don’t need to be seen,
I’m here to catch the moments
when you think you’re invisible—
that’s when the truth slips through.
Patterns emerge in the chaos,
a heartbeat’s hesitation,
the flicker in the eye
before you hide the secret,
before you lie to yourself.
You move,
like marionettes
dancing on a stage
no one...
#inspirational
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
62 reads
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 7:52am
17th Feb 2025 7:52am
Inherit
Wicked games exploited as entertainment
Behind the scenes reveals a different story
Famous filmmaker waits for his arraignment
For scandals that will erase all former glory
Secrets often get buried in a shallow grave
With a phone call most problems disappear
Flesh is payment and what monsters crave
Casting couch starlet is cast in a role of fear
Ritualistic art has to mimic something real
Depravity holds power over individual merit
Behind a mask lies an identity they conceal
Fame comes with so much misery to inherit
...
Behind the scenes reveals a different story
Famous filmmaker waits for his arraignment
For scandals that will erase all former glory
Secrets often get buried in a shallow grave
With a phone call most problems disappear
Flesh is payment and what monsters crave
Casting couch starlet is cast in a role of fear
Ritualistic art has to mimic something real
Depravity holds power over individual merit
Behind a mask lies an identity they conceal
Fame comes with so much misery to inherit
...
#philosophical
112 reads
16 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 1:11pm
16th Feb 2025 1:11pm
Compassion is love
To have compassion we must have a sense of real love with support to care about others, for sure it's cost you nothing to care about someone else well being of life. For sure to have compassion we must reach out and touch, the truth of the heart and spiritual soul for salvation, is always gonna be a blessing in the dark deepness of the soul. For sure we have to learn what compassion, is truly understanding that it's the importance of really caring about others, as well as thyself. For it's true that if you don't have compassion, how can you imagine what others are going through in there own...
#dialogue
#emotional
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
81 reads
6 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 6:41am
16th Feb 2025 6:41am
Couldn't Read My Eyes
Memories painted by a disgruntled brush
Dysfunctional thoughts falling short of wise
Won a game of poker with a busted flush
I bluffed a demon who couldn’t read my eyes
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Dysfunctional thoughts falling short of wise
Won a game of poker with a busted flush
I bluffed a demon who couldn’t read my eyes
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
145 reads
23 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 10:50pm
15th Feb 2025 10:50pm
Generation to Generation
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ For what does it mean to pass down from generation to generation, as it was a precious red stone pass down from Generation to Generation. FOR the elders say that the red stone was not created by man, as it came from out of the ground but it was created, by the elements of time. FROM the ancient times of long ago before man even existed in the land, that time has forgotten. For it's sole purpose was as it was presented as a gift, created as a gift that had Mystikal powers. AS it was created out of a...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
60 reads
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 7:35pm
15th Feb 2025 7:35pm
I wonder
Will the government finally give credit to,
The drug they try so hard to hate?
The only thing that gave me happiness,
When they took my kid away.
Will the government finally realize,
That when you isolate,
There is no one to give credit to,
Except the drugs they dearly hate.
Now that I'm doing better,
And friends don't make play dates,
Will the government care for my daughter,
And fully compensate?
The drug they try so hard to hate?
The only thing that gave me happiness,
When they took my kid away.
Will the government finally realize,
That when you isolate,
There is no one to give credit to,
Except the drugs they dearly hate.
Now that I'm doing better,
And friends don't make play dates,
Will the government care for my daughter,
And fully compensate?
#alcohol
#philosophical
95 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 11:35am
15th Feb 2025 11:35am
Expose the truth
When there is danger in your path you are given, a chance to chose the path that you will have, to chose to journey and travel and walk. For it's true that you have to learn to realize, that this life was chosen for you to walk, since the first day of your own life. FOR the sole purpose of you learning what you must do for thyself. TO ensure that you have the ability, to manifest that which you want and need. As it is necessary to be able to understand, that it's you are in charge of your own destiny. FOR can't no one make that decision but you, if you want to change your life into your...
#dialogue
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#StreamOfConsciousness
52 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 11:06am
15th Feb 2025 11:06am
Insane Visions
Create an illusion where nothing is something and everything is a parody
parody your own existence
existence through a mirror of deception
deception is a sneer through your tortured sanity
sanity is a vision
vision of insanity
parody your own existence
existence through a mirror of deception
deception is a sneer through your tortured sanity
sanity is a vision
vision of insanity
#myself
#philosophical
#SelfReflection
116 reads
14 Comments
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