Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 5:45am
26th Jan 2025 5:45am
Submission of love
When we give someone our love with our submission, we give them apart of us in ways, that requires honesty and truth and trust. For sure it's not a debate, nor is it is not something to be taken, for granted by no means of deception and lies and false promises, that they want you to believe. 🤔 For sure in order for it to work, we must have a serious commitment with real consistency and real communications skills. TO articulate what we are doing and saying, by letting my actions speak louder than my words. For above all I'm not coming through the 🚪 door, I'm coming doing what I...
#dialogue
#emotional
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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drone
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 9:58am
24th Jan 2025 9:58am
Disreapect
Could it be
When One
Disreapects
One's Own Life
Then the Life
That
keeps You Alive
Has no choice
But
To fuck You Up
While Waiting
For You
To Catch up
When One
Disreapects
One's Own Life
Then the Life
That
keeps You Alive
Has no choice
But
To fuck You Up
While Waiting
For You
To Catch up
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
65 reads
2 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 7:04am
24th Jan 2025 7:04am
Pretend
Frozen stare fixed on a computer screen
Watching the waves move with the sound
Voice of reason always ready to intervene
How long till the next song comes around
When did you start second guessing me?
Turning mole hills into full blown calamity
Funneling booze into a hemorrhaging mind
Leads to blame pointed in the wrong place
Haunted by ghosts while logic turned blind
Demons work while wearing a familiar face
When was it you sold your light my friend?
Deciding to surrender just to play pretend
...
Watching the waves move with the sound
Voice of reason always ready to intervene
How long till the next song comes around
When did you start second guessing me?
Turning mole hills into full blown calamity
Funneling booze into a hemorrhaging mind
Leads to blame pointed in the wrong place
Haunted by ghosts while logic turned blind
Demons work while wearing a familiar face
When was it you sold your light my friend?
Deciding to surrender just to play pretend
...
#philosophical
117 reads
20 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:57am
24th Jan 2025 2:57am
Stop Hiding
Why hide?
If your feelings are real.
Where's the appeal?
Of fake faces and secret deals.
Friendships with losers,
Is that mass appeal?
Or the desperation,
You try not to reveal?
You threaten to kill.
Like it's your last meal.
I know it's all a shill.
A petty amusement and a thrill.
But what happens,
When you take that last pill?
When your fate is sealed?
And the only one you tried to convince,
Doesn't think you're real?
If your feelings are real.
Where's the appeal?
Of fake faces and secret deals.
Friendships with losers,
Is that mass appeal?
Or the desperation,
You try not to reveal?
You threaten to kill.
Like it's your last meal.
I know it's all a shill.
A petty amusement and a thrill.
But what happens,
When you take that last pill?
When your fate is sealed?
And the only one you tried to convince,
Doesn't think you're real?
#philosophical
67 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:47am
24th Jan 2025 2:47am
The awakening of the soul
What is your spiritual awakening of the truth of your own thoughts, and insight and spiritually subconsciousness of your, own soul vibes of your energy. For sure through this cycle of life there will be a moment in your life, that you will have to step back and reflect upon the trails and tribulations, you had to face in yourself in body and spiritual soul. For even now as you are going through a situation, that isn't for you nor is it made for you, as they say that no one is sent to you by chance or accident. But yet there is someone who was sent to you. For it's in you to be able to do that...
#faith
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
48 reads
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drone
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 9:34am
23rd Jan 2025 9:34am
Light
Even those of us
With a Dim
Light of Knowledge
Still Shine
In The Darkness
Of all the Lies
Deceptions
And Greed
With a Dim
Light of Knowledge
Still Shine
In The Darkness
Of all the Lies
Deceptions
And Greed
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 12:39pm
22nd Jan 2025 12:39pm
Challenges that tested your spirit
Challenges that have tested your spirit and even your own way of thinking, but yet it's still apart of life. For there will always, be challenges in this cycle of life whether, we want to believe it or not for it's still apart of life. For it's imperative for us to truly understand that it's those things that we face that could change on how we view the world and our lives. For example the landscape as change in retrospective to how we choose to live our lives, man to woman and woman to man. But yet it didn't stop there, for now there are those things that we may never truly understand, yet...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 11:25am
22nd Jan 2025 11:25am
How we each see the world
Judge not others until you judge thyself 🙏 How we each see the world is as different as day and night, yet we each have our own opinions on what we see and hear and believe. Yet sometimes we have to learn to understand that, there are those things that we may never truly understand about the government 🤨 For sure as this world is constantly changing right, before our eyes but yet it's times like these often times, the deepness of the truth will reveal itself and awaken your own thoughts and insight and mind. For sure we can agree or disagree, whether right or wrong fits the...
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
75 reads
4 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 6:37am
22nd Jan 2025 6:37am
Reveals The Direction
Another hour passes in a distorted flash
Ambitious details scattered across time
Fantasy meets reality such a fatal crash
It’s only a secret if nobody drops a dime
Promises get lost amidst this chaotic ride
Every scenario imaginable unlocks a hurdle
Caught in a moment filled with foolish pride
Regret comes back around again full-circle
Masks fade with years sounds so clever
But this bitter memory stains all meaning
Standing in a bullseye reaching for a lever
Reveals the direction one’s faith is leaning
...
Ambitious details scattered across time
Fantasy meets reality such a fatal crash
It’s only a secret if nobody drops a dime
Promises get lost amidst this chaotic ride
Every scenario imaginable unlocks a hurdle
Caught in a moment filled with foolish pride
Regret comes back around again full-circle
Masks fade with years sounds so clever
But this bitter memory stains all meaning
Standing in a bullseye reaching for a lever
Reveals the direction one’s faith is leaning
...
#philosophical
178 reads
23 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 5:00pm
21st Jan 2025 5:00pm
Marpa The Translator
Thought he would be some elite MC
spitting rhymes about towers
peace love and those happy feel showers
even presented with an offering of nettles and flowers
turns out he was some Buddhist sage
saw through the emptiness of the gesture
this lineage is not for you
back to the cave for contemplation green man
spitting rhymes about towers
peace love and those happy feel showers
even presented with an offering of nettles and flowers
turns out he was some Buddhist sage
saw through the emptiness of the gesture
this lineage is not for you
back to the cave for contemplation green man
#Buddhist
#philosophical
#spiritual
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 6:19am
21st Jan 2025 6:19am
Reverberated
Tired of all the voices spreading false hope
Got their fingers crossed behind their back
Still some people kept on feeding them rope
Everyone will hang with the remaining slack
When someone pardons their entire family
Before the first crime has been perpetrated
Catastrophic times bring forth this calamity
Curses screamed disapproval reverberated
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Got their fingers crossed behind their back
Still some people kept on feeding them rope
Everyone will hang with the remaining slack
When someone pardons their entire family
Before the first crime has been perpetrated
Catastrophic times bring forth this calamity
Curses screamed disapproval reverberated
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
109 reads
21 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
Be aware, look out!
A job worth doing is a job worth doing well, so they say
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
#betrayal
#lies
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
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16 Comments
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