Couldn't Read My Eyes

That's sharp, cynical, and darkly clever. It's got a cool, almost noir vibe, and that last line is a killer.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mr. Black. I'm glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.

Damian

I truly enjoyed reading this piece of enlightenment and insight into the process of thoughts 💪👊👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Glad you connected with write, my friend. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.

Damian

Respect Brother Poet ✍️🪬📿🪷

This cut like a knife. Well said and well played. Cool piece my friend.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

a win is not even a win.. when it’s not the wise n truth .. what you say us piercing sharp that one truth Damian .. I loved the title much .. o feel eyes are the windows to the soul .. it can only speak n pulse n paint truth n nothing else xx superb minimalism & truth there in dear friend sx

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Uma. Always honored to make your RL. Glad you connected the write, my friend. I agree that a win is not a win in this scenario. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

Damian    

Love that last line Damian, superb ♥️

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Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jade. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Think there is a lot of dysfunctional thinking lately. clever observations.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Ain't that the truth. Appreciate you.

Damian

Enjoyed this read, nice piece..

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, NQ. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Might have been playing with words here but you were wielding them with much skill & power. What we read is what is usually in our minds, regardless how the writer intended it. What you did here gives a reader lots of avenues to wander. Damn...

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Well I try to be open to interpretation. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

Damian  

I love the idea of painting memories. I think that's what we do with poetry.

That list line is simply stunning, my friend. Playing with words or not, it's so very clever. Like this one a lot :-)

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. My favorite line as well, but that one might have been obvious. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Paint my memories, be an artist
Dysfunctional thoughts, yours, mine,
And I like your games too much
Reading your eyes, a burning omen,
This succubus in disguise, begging,
Pull me under, make me, take me,
Trap me deep in these memories

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kristina. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write. Nice commentary, a great write. Appreciate you.

Damian