Poems About Myself Seeking Honest Critique
#myself
Poems about myself seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 11:44am
16th Nov 2024 11:44am
Grey cells
I think, for myself.
I, love words.
Regurgitating,
Is for the birds.
A.R.M.
Lorane Post 97451
I, love words.
Regurgitating,
Is for the birds.
A.R.M.
Lorane Post 97451
#myself
#philosophical
#SelfReflection #TruthOfLife
#SelfReflection #TruthOfLife
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LunasChild8
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 3:13am
13th Nov 2024 3:13am
Stand Up
I’m sick of this bullshit that most people use as fuel
I’d rather be called crazy than played as a fool
What wouldn’t I give if it meant freedom?
Most people wouldn’t walk this path, but I’ve got my reasons.
Stand up and feel the fire
Reach out to ignite my heart’s desires
An organ I once thought dead and cold
Now I watch the events unfold.
Stand up; get my ass into gear
I’ll face life head-on and vanquish all my fears
I value actions over words
The unspoken language that can’t be heard.
I’m sick of this bullshit...
I’d rather be called crazy than played as a fool
What wouldn’t I give if it meant freedom?
Most people wouldn’t walk this path, but I’ve got my reasons.
Stand up and feel the fire
Reach out to ignite my heart’s desires
An organ I once thought dead and cold
Now I watch the events unfold.
Stand up; get my ass into gear
I’ll face life head-on and vanquish all my fears
I value actions over words
The unspoken language that can’t be heard.
I’m sick of this bullshit...
#determination
#LifeStruggles
#loneliness
#myself
#rhyming
131 reads
6 Comments
AaHarvey
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 8:23pm
12th Nov 2024 8:23pm
0 - Unfinished poetry 47
Once upon a life
Once I was 7 years old,
I had a best friend
And I even had a girl who said she liked me.
Once I was 11 years old...
It was a scary time ‘cause big school terrified me.
I had to grow up quick, no more fun just simply being a kid.
My best friend went away and my brother he just disowned me.
That’s when I found Oasis and later rock, I think it starts with indie.
A kid said “Insane in the...
Once I was 7 years old,
I had a best friend
And I even had a girl who said she liked me.
Once I was 11 years old...
It was a scary time ‘cause big school terrified me.
I had to grow up quick, no more fun just simply being a kid.
My best friend went away and my brother he just disowned me.
That’s when I found Oasis and later rock, I think it starts with indie.
A kid said “Insane in the...
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeStruggles
#myself
#TruthOfLife
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PAR
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 11:53am
12th Nov 2024 11:53am
lack of appetite
this is faint-astic
and in-cunt-prehensible
way out of the real cap a city
give some room
to the space extent range
in the scope of a hole sun of a compass
sorry, no pun intended...
die, motherfucker, die.
and in-cunt-prehensible
way out of the real cap a city
give some room
to the space extent range
in the scope of a hole sun of a compass
sorry, no pun intended...
die, motherfucker, die.
#anger
#anxiety
#conflict
#myself
#violence
80 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 11:31am
10th Nov 2024 11:31am
Inconvenience
Vanity vanishes in the thin air...
Was it a kiss? Was it a crash?
This pair in despair, unapproachable!
Velvety ice explodes in tongues skin.
Was it this or was it that?
This flair is such an unfair rain.
Drain my body in seconds
skin abandoned in the background
useless, timeless, nevertheless...
Avoiding falling in trhe void.
Trying, failling, crying and sailling
away from your overwelming presence.
Was it a bliss? Was it a rash?
Is it the first next step to go from here?
In the air,...
Was it a kiss? Was it a crash?
This pair in despair, unapproachable!
Velvety ice explodes in tongues skin.
Was it this or was it that?
This flair is such an unfair rain.
Drain my body in seconds
skin abandoned in the background
useless, timeless, nevertheless...
Avoiding falling in trhe void.
Trying, failling, crying and sailling
away from your overwelming presence.
Was it a bliss? Was it a rash?
Is it the first next step to go from here?
In the air,...
#anxiety
#confessional
#ghosts
#myself
#strength
91 reads
7 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:20pm
7th Nov 2024 1:20pm
Collage YO New Art Entry
Collage
Defines me
Pieces of dreams
Word speak
Color
Box Heads
Fun
No politics
Sexy sometimes
Mood
Always …
Defines me
Pieces of dreams
Word speak
Color
Box Heads
Fun
No politics
Sexy sometimes
Mood
Always …
#art
#emotions
#identity
#myself
#risk
141 reads
12 Comments
MYSTERIOUS_GIRL
Lizzy_3164
Lizzy_3164
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 3:00pm
6th Nov 2024 3:00pm
IT'S SO MUCH LOUDER HERE INSIDE
It so much louder here inside
That voice you can not hear
It's burried deep within
Where my tears do disappear
~
It's so much louder here inside
That strength that keeps me strong
When I've vacated this world around us
That's the place where i have gone
~
It's so much louder here inside
That will i have to fight
When the days have reached an end
I still battle through the night
~
It's so much louder here inside
In the middle of this war
When the walls come caving in
You'll hear me knocking...
That voice you can not hear
It's burried deep within
Where my tears do disappear
~
It's so much louder here inside
That strength that keeps me strong
When I've vacated this world around us
That's the place where i have gone
~
It's so much louder here inside
That will i have to fight
When the days have reached an end
I still battle through the night
~
It's so much louder here inside
In the middle of this war
When the walls come caving in
You'll hear me knocking...
#myself
#SelfReflection
98 reads
3 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 11:52am
6th Nov 2024 11:52am
Raging
Raging
Will you laugh before you cry
Will your emotions take over
I’m gonna laugh until I’m sleeping in
A sarcophagus dreaming dirt naps
Happiness Anger everything in between
Wear an emotion on my sleeve
I show you what I’m all about I’m scary real
My temper rules my world and I want to escape
Sometimes I scare even myself when I see
The Rage that lives within me
5’7” I scare Mountains of men
I go back and replay what happened
And I’m amazed that my Rage is a Bull in a...
Will you laugh before you cry
Will your emotions take over
I’m gonna laugh until I’m sleeping in
A sarcophagus dreaming dirt naps
Happiness Anger everything in between
Wear an emotion on my sleeve
I show you what I’m all about I’m scary real
My temper rules my world and I want to escape
Sometimes I scare even myself when I see
The Rage that lives within me
5’7” I scare Mountains of men
I go back and replay what happened
And I’m amazed that my Rage is a Bull in a...
#anger
#confessional
#identity #myself
#identity #myself
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oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 3:19am
6th Nov 2024 3:19am
Dragon Train
Dragon Train
Ride the dragon train
Till he tosses you off
Hit a bump thought it was a hiccup
Breathing fire through my veins
Try and put a collar on this dragon
Cinch it tight maybe some boulders will hold me down
Hear a rumble in the distance
Four Horsemen thundering down
Get closer and it’s clearer
Bass drum and guitar
The life of my love
Thought I wouldn’t fit in
But I can’t deny my true passion
An assassin on the court
Love tickling the twine
But my true sport is...
Ride the dragon train
Till he tosses you off
Hit a bump thought it was a hiccup
Breathing fire through my veins
Try and put a collar on this dragon
Cinch it tight maybe some boulders will hold me down
Hear a rumble in the distance
Four Horsemen thundering down
Get closer and it’s clearer
Bass drum and guitar
The life of my love
Thought I wouldn’t fit in
But I can’t deny my true passion
An assassin on the court
Love tickling the twine
But my true sport is...
#lyrics
#music
#myself
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MYSTERIOUS_GIRL
Lizzy_3164
Lizzy_3164
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 2:46am
4th Nov 2024 2:46am
DO MY PICTURES LIE
What if i told you my pictures lie
That what you see on the outside is an illusion
That if the camera could capture the truth
You'd see many tears falling down my cheeks
~
If only the flash brought you within this mind
Then you'd witness the darkness here inside
How the shadows are my only sanctuary
That the light has not been able to build a home
~
You'd see the walls of my own design
The ones i originally built to keep the darkness in
Blissfully unaware that i would get trapped too
I guess that's the price i paid for...
That what you see on the outside is an illusion
That if the camera could capture the truth
You'd see many tears falling down my cheeks
~
If only the flash brought you within this mind
Then you'd witness the darkness here inside
How the shadows are my only sanctuary
That the light has not been able to build a home
~
You'd see the walls of my own design
The ones i originally built to keep the darkness in
Blissfully unaware that i would get trapped too
I guess that's the price i paid for...
#myself
#SelfReflection
108 reads
5 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 4:22am
27th Oct 2024 4:22am
I cry too much even
I cry too much even
When I don’t why and talk too much
But you won’t stop me from spreading
My Truth it’s my True even if you can’t see
Everything you’d imagine but it’s my dream
Can’t slip between the covers of my soul
I know just which way to go
Stand upon my demons and say
Stand down I can’t see them
They are blemishes of my life
But they don’t say who I Am
But I wear them like a badge of honor
Who I am and who I want to become
Step aside all the hate ...
When I don’t why and talk too much
But you won’t stop me from spreading
My Truth it’s my True even if you can’t see
Everything you’d imagine but it’s my dream
Can’t slip between the covers of my soul
I know just which way to go
Stand upon my demons and say
Stand down I can’t see them
They are blemishes of my life
But they don’t say who I Am
But I wear them like a badge of honor
Who I am and who I want to become
Step aside all the hate ...
#confessional
#mirror
#myself
69 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
Teeth
Alien Predator within me
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
#aliens
#myself
#shadows #symbolism
#shadows #symbolism
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0 Comments
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