Poems About Myself Seeking Friendly Advice
#myself
Poems about myself seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
the process
21 of 30
I jot a thought & save it
hoping to complete it later
sometimes it works
others...not so much
& I'm left with a buncha scraps of this & that
no idea where I was originally heading
so I set them aside
again...for eventual retrieval
I think my muse has a prickly personality
obstinate to a fault
refusing my attempts to channel our thinking
she clearly has other ideas
{apparently mine are too boring}
I'd appreciate it if she'd share her own musings
{pun intended...}
give me a...
I jot a thought & save it
hoping to complete it later
sometimes it works
others...not so much
& I'm left with a buncha scraps of this & that
no idea where I was originally heading
so I set them aside
again...for eventual retrieval
I think my muse has a prickly personality
obstinate to a fault
refusing my attempts to channel our thinking
she clearly has other ideas
{apparently mine are too boring}
I'd appreciate it if she'd share her own musings
{pun intended...}
give me a...
#confessional
#myself
#WritingPoetry
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Disassociated
19/30
Disassociated
Trying my best to do my inner work
Being content with myself
with
no god
no friend
no lover
no mentor
not giving in to the temptation
to digest mushrooms
or CBD gummies
or massive amounts of libation
(as if the alcohol would surpass
and be stronger than the mind-
altering natural shit)
I believe, at one time, I was
ever alone, happy, WITHOUT
anything ….. anyone
to get me to that higher plane
of consciousness,
that existence
Somewhere...
Disassociated
Trying my best to do my inner work
Being content with myself
with
no god
no friend
no lover
no mentor
not giving in to the temptation
to digest mushrooms
or CBD gummies
or massive amounts of libation
(as if the alcohol would surpass
and be stronger than the mind-
altering natural shit)
I believe, at one time, I was
ever alone, happy, WITHOUT
anything ….. anyone
to get me to that higher plane
of consciousness,
that existence
Somewhere...
#myself
#NaPoWriMo2024
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1 Comment
QUANTA
18/30
QUANTA
Got more than my daily dose
of vitamin “D”
which hurriedly knocked me
into a lackadaisical stupor
I did not feel like writing,
let alone, anything worth
accomplishing to
fruition
so I took me a lengthy nap
Woke up thinking about
the poker game
with the neighbors, yesterday
and 3 of us trying to
explain to one the
interaction (definition) of
Quantum Entanglement
with varied success.
I think she is still confused
61...
QUANTA
Got more than my daily dose
of vitamin “D”
which hurriedly knocked me
into a lackadaisical stupor
I did not feel like writing,
let alone, anything worth
accomplishing to
fruition
so I took me a lengthy nap
Woke up thinking about
the poker game
with the neighbors, yesterday
and 3 of us trying to
explain to one the
interaction (definition) of
Quantum Entanglement
with varied success.
I think she is still confused
61...
#myself
#NaPoWriMo2024
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1 Comment
Quiet And Loud
I don’t quite know myself yet
I don’t think anyone ever knows the full extent
Of their true being
No matter how long they have been on
This earth
But what I do know
Is that I am happy
And proud
I can be wholly and undeniably me
I’m so grateful for everything.
I don’t think anyone ever knows the full extent
Of their true being
No matter how long they have been on
This earth
But what I do know
Is that I am happy
And proud
I can be wholly and undeniably me
I’m so grateful for everything.
#gratitude
#myself
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Back to the Old Me
Is it truth or fantasy?
From now on
That’s the way it will be
Going back to the old me
Gotta keep ya’ll guessing
No longer in a cage
I’ve been set free
I don’t have the need
To spill all my honesty
Anymore
From now on
That’s the way it will be
Going back to the old me
Gotta keep ya’ll guessing
No longer in a cage
I’ve been set free
I don’t have the need
To spill all my honesty
Anymore
#myself
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My Saphenous veins
13/30
My Saphenous veins
During many NAPO’S* in the past
I drank the gods’ libations
assured I’d be spilling my guts
and thick spit on ancient
thought out upon
their parchment
Several past NAPO’S
downed beers, wine …..whiskey
for some odd reason today
libations not aiding me
with the spillage of
ANYTHING!!
Perhaps,
way too, TOO much
Goings on
going
in my linear line this year?
Yeah,
but I accept this
NOTHING
I can do
60...
My Saphenous veins
During many NAPO’S* in the past
I drank the gods’ libations
assured I’d be spilling my guts
and thick spit on ancient
thought out upon
their parchment
Several past NAPO’S
downed beers, wine …..whiskey
for some odd reason today
libations not aiding me
with the spillage of
ANYTHING!!
Perhaps,
way too, TOO much
Goings on
going
in my linear line this year?
Yeah,
but I accept this
NOTHING
I can do
60...
#alcohol
#myself
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Cuckoo Spit
08/30
Cuckoo Spit
Often feels like never
yet knowing it’s been
along, long time
Forever
Since I’ve had to stop
being indolent
and write.
A year of only daily journaling
makes me rusty
where thoughts chip away
at my creativity.
The submissive in me
I suppose,
causes me to sign up to
the challenge of
writing one spill a day
for thirty days
I KNOW I can vomit crap
wth little effort
It’s the attempt to spit
quality thick saliva
that is not that simple ...
Cuckoo Spit
Often feels like never
yet knowing it’s been
along, long time
Forever
Since I’ve had to stop
being indolent
and write.
A year of only daily journaling
makes me rusty
where thoughts chip away
at my creativity.
The submissive in me
I suppose,
causes me to sign up to
the challenge of
writing one spill a day
for thirty days
I KNOW I can vomit crap
wth little effort
It’s the attempt to spit
quality thick saliva
that is not that simple ...
#myself
#WritingPoetry
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Aggregate Atomism
07/30
Aggregate Atomism
I have matured to be me
more than least
Greater than I could have
fathomed ………… imagined
I am the only me that has
been or will be
even when I fail
(I still fall often)
I am still, no less,
the better, me
A true original facsimile,
today’s version
though schizophrenic,
I’ve grown to be
resilient, strong………kind
I will experience
more facets of me
as I age into
oblivious, abyss of a
chaotic universe
as pure energy
I...
Aggregate Atomism
I have matured to be me
more than least
Greater than I could have
fathomed ………… imagined
I am the only me that has
been or will be
even when I fail
(I still fall often)
I am still, no less,
the better, me
A true original facsimile,
today’s version
though schizophrenic,
I’ve grown to be
resilient, strong………kind
I will experience
more facets of me
as I age into
oblivious, abyss of a
chaotic universe
as pure energy
I...
#myself
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Calorific
03/30
Calorific
No tumbling nor word scrambles
in the Desert as I have
discovered I do not need
a Whirlpool Box filled with its
magick to dry out my assorted
fabric skins.
Whether in winter or summer
the air is very thin
and when within
I try to strongarm every
Doorknob,
Handle –
Damn near anything
the pin prick spark
reminds me of the
Desert!
I’ve been carrying metal in pockets
that once held tissues
to thwart – stem off the
charges that seemingly ...
Calorific
No tumbling nor word scrambles
in the Desert as I have
discovered I do not need
a Whirlpool Box filled with its
magick to dry out my assorted
fabric skins.
Whether in winter or summer
the air is very thin
and when within
I try to strongarm every
Doorknob,
Handle –
Damn near anything
the pin prick spark
reminds me of the
Desert!
I’ve been carrying metal in pockets
that once held tissues
to thwart – stem off the
charges that seemingly ...
#myself
#meditation
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Practice Bars
Ya neck snaps as I grab your attention.
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
#rhyming
#lyrics
#myself
#rap
#metaphor
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Writing Dirty is Cathartic
It’s like screaming
Dropping f bombs
Going for a long run
Expressing myself
Through dirty poetry
Purges thoughts
I’d rather not keep
Locked inside
DUP is my safe space
To give my internal
And external world
A voice
My healing journey
Of restoration
And renewal
I spent too many
Years hiding
From the me
I am today
Afraid of shame
Cowering to social pressure
I’ve been told
I can do better
Much better
That I’m capable
Of more ...
Dropping f bombs
Going for a long run
Expressing myself
Through dirty poetry
Purges thoughts
I’d rather not keep
Locked inside
DUP is my safe space
To give my internal
And external world
A voice
My healing journey
Of restoration
And renewal
I spent too many
Years hiding
From the me
I am today
Afraid of shame
Cowering to social pressure
I’ve been told
I can do better
Much better
That I’m capable
Of more ...
#sex
#myself
#WritingPoetry #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#WritingPoetry #DeepUndergroundPoetry
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Presumably
You think you know me
You can tell
What I want
Need
You got me
I used to think
That was everything
Until I realized
That in all your knowledge
You have zero
You don’t hear me
You give me
What you need me to have
What gives you satisfaction
Your savior complex
Drives you to do for me
I got that covered
If you really knew me
You would understand
That what I need
What I want ...
You can tell
What I want
Need
You got me
I used to think
That was everything
Until I realized
That in all your knowledge
You have zero
You don’t hear me
You give me
What you need me to have
What gives you satisfaction
Your savior complex
Drives you to do for me
I got that covered
If you really knew me
You would understand
That what I need
What I want ...
#forgiveness
#TimeHeals
#myself
#SelfReflection
#SelfDiscovery
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