Motivational by Top Critiquers Poems
#motivational
motivational by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 6:52am
10th Dec 2024 6:52am
emerging (her face)
her face
comes
out of
my
dreaming
darkness,
emerging
into
the light,
features
i look
upon
earnestly,
i admire,
and then
before i
fully awaken,
her face
moves
back into
the
darkness,
while mine
emerges
into the
light.
comes
out of
my
dreaming
darkness,
emerging
into
the light,
features
i look
upon
earnestly,
i admire,
and then
before i
fully awaken,
her face
moves
back into
the
darkness,
while mine
emerges
into the
light.
#admiration
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
100 reads
8 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
6th Jan 2018 00:18am
6th Jan 2018 00:18am
just sort of happened, like everything else ..
just a kid,
didn't think about growing up ..
imagine growing up!
but nobody
did ..
didn't think about growing up ..
imagine growing up!
but nobody
did ..
#childhood
#family
#motivational #memories
#motivational #memories
639 reads
4 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
10th Jun 2024 1:23am
10th Jun 2024 1:23am
the smaller the size, the greater the king
stray black and white
cat walked across the
street a car length
ahead of me
the creature neither
looked left
or right
his steps were slow
brave
measured
each one a pronouncement
of his royalty
the car in front of me
stopped to let him
pass
to keep ones courage
and wits without fear
when facing down a ton
of steel on four tires
the greatest of
nobility
he took off into a wooded
area to, no doubt, do ...
cat walked across the
street a car length
ahead of me
the creature neither
looked left
or right
his steps were slow
brave
measured
each one a pronouncement
of his royalty
the car in front of me
stopped to let him
pass
to keep ones courage
and wits without fear
when facing down a ton
of steel on four tires
the greatest of
nobility
he took off into a wooded
area to, no doubt, do ...
#determination
#inspirational
#motivational
128 reads
4 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 12:58pm
1st Apr 2024 12:58pm
Poemorama
There’s a cranky old poetry machine
tucked away in the back of my head.
It hasn’t been running well, of late,
only firing up in short, infrequent bursts
as a last-resort grasp at clarity
when emotions have become too tangled.
It has suffered from disuse,
its metaphors jammed,
flow revving unevenly in halting, coughing word-bursts.
Today I’m pulling it from the shed and
gently blowing off the dust.
I’ll gingerly test each lever and pulley,
searching for semblance of rhythm and rhyme,
replacing spark plugs of...
tucked away in the back of my head.
It hasn’t been running well, of late,
only firing up in short, infrequent bursts
as a last-resort grasp at clarity
when emotions have become too tangled.
It has suffered from disuse,
its metaphors jammed,
flow revving unevenly in halting, coughing word-bursts.
Today I’m pulling it from the shed and
gently blowing off the dust.
I’ll gingerly test each lever and pulley,
searching for semblance of rhythm and rhyme,
replacing spark plugs of...
#motivational
#WritingPoetry
#support #NaPoWriMo2024
#support #NaPoWriMo2024
169 reads
14 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 3:09am
25th Sep 2024 3:09am
If I want to wear my hair in a pink scrunchie bun, I will, dammit!
Beware!
It's another poem about my hair
I think it's the third.
Kind of stupid and absurd.
When the hot weather just won't stop
my long blonde hair goes atop
secured by the scrunchie of the day
there's not much you can say
if you want to be polite
best call it a night.
It's another poem about my hair
I think it's the third.
Kind of stupid and absurd.
When the hot weather just won't stop
my long blonde hair goes atop
secured by the scrunchie of the day
there's not much you can say
if you want to be polite
best call it a night.
#beauty
#motivational
141 reads
5 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
24th Nov 2018 8:12pm
24th Nov 2018 8:12pm
The Sermon of Mr. Brimstone Pt. 16 (The Darkness That Blinds)
#motivational
#honesty
#humankind
486 reads
2 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
19th Sep 2020 3:03am
19th Sep 2020 3:03am
Madam President
Voting for a new president
is coming at this moment
Will we get what we want
I really don't know
System is broken
Will we get a good president
Who the hell knows
So Michelle Obama,
Kim Kardashian-West
Oprah, Nicki Minaj
Gayle King, Camila Cabello
You need to run for president you
Ladies will be the
change we need
To fix the
screwed up system
is coming at this moment
Will we get what we want
I really don't know
System is broken
Will we get a good president
Who the hell knows
So Michelle Obama,
Kim Kardashian-West
Oprah, Nicki Minaj
Gayle King, Camila Cabello
You need to run for president you
Ladies will be the
change we need
To fix the
screwed up system
#happiness
#women
#politics
#motivational
#emotions
629 reads
35 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
28th May 2020 00:03am
28th May 2020 00:03am
Origami
The scars you see
are the testimony
of the twists and turns of life
Creases run sharp and deep
but they define my stride
Folded, pleated, ruffled
I cried in agony
but meaningful was the pain
for all in its grace
it shaped my identity.
a piece of paper so plain
turned into something beautiful
something extraordinary...
I'm work of art
I am life's origami
Unfold me
and you will find
a pattern in all its complexities
the...
are the testimony
of the twists and turns of life
Creases run sharp and deep
but they define my stride
Folded, pleated, ruffled
I cried in agony
but meaningful was the pain
for all in its grace
it shaped my identity.
a piece of paper so plain
turned into something beautiful
something extraordinary...
I'm work of art
I am life's origami
Unfold me
and you will find
a pattern in all its complexities
the...
#motivational
#SelfWorth
802 reads
17 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
19th Mar 2021 9:12pm
19th Mar 2021 9:12pm
A Blonde
A blonde is not a diagnosis
but a state of mind
There are many thoughts in
the bright mind
Smart, funny, energetic
And very pretty
Mistress of locks of discord
You will not forget her soon
They live in a blonde for a reason
Coquetry, intelligence and beauty
but a state of mind
There are many thoughts in
the bright mind
Smart, funny, energetic
And very pretty
Mistress of locks of discord
You will not forget her soon
They live in a blonde for a reason
Coquetry, intelligence and beauty
#strength
#women
#motivational #wisdom
#motivational #wisdom
777 reads
42 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 3:40pm
28th Nov 2024 3:40pm
Written in the Stars
Lying on a soft fragrant meadow
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
#admiration
#emotions
#motivational
106 reads
2 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
20th Jul 2023 5:13pm
20th Jul 2023 5:13pm
Forrest Gump (inspirational human)
what a human being
now we all should
aspire to have
a beautiful soul like that
now we all should
aspire to have
a beautiful soul like that
#kindness
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational
#spiritual
299 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
At The Crossroads Of Life
Waiting For a New Day
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#TimeHeals
46 reads
0 Comments
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