Motivational by Top Critiquers Poems
#motivational
motivational by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
TheOralizer
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 2:02pm
25th Mar 2025 2:02pm
MOUTH TECHNIQUES
I
had been interested
since I was a teenager
because of the stories and
things I had read about the
pleasure and joy that could
be experienced by the mouth.
ONE'S
mouth is unique to the individual's taste
and how they want to use it is a
personal choice.
IT
may be used to blow, suck, hum
and tongue each hole in the
Mouth Organ better known
as a harmonica and those who
blow it as a harmonicist.
THEY
come in various sizes and shapes;
each producing sounds enjoyed by
the blower and hearer. Meet...
had been interested
since I was a teenager
because of the stories and
things I had read about the
pleasure and joy that could
be experienced by the mouth.
ONE'S
mouth is unique to the individual's taste
and how they want to use it is a
personal choice.
IT
may be used to blow, suck, hum
and tongue each hole in the
Mouth Organ better known
as a harmonica and those who
blow it as a harmonicist.
THEY
come in various sizes and shapes;
each producing sounds enjoyed by
the blower and hearer. Meet...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
103 reads
6 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 9:34am
4th Feb 2025 9:34am
stir your soul
like lava bursting out of the ground
the choking feelings burst out
and flow out on virgin paper
then my soul gets relief
when a drop of dew falls on a bud
trembling in the cold wind,
the bud bears that gentle blow
and my soul gives magical peace to that bud through words
countless nests lying in the organic gardens
sad, empty and covered in dust
cry out for freedom
their silent screams ring in my ears
and their sobbing words shake my soul
...
the choking feelings burst out
and flow out on virgin paper
then my soul gets relief
when a drop of dew falls on a bud
trembling in the cold wind,
the bud bears that gentle blow
and my soul gives magical peace to that bud through words
countless nests lying in the organic gardens
sad, empty and covered in dust
cry out for freedom
their silent screams ring in my ears
and their sobbing words shake my soul
...
#motivational
#MyInspiration
147 reads
8 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
10th Jun 2024 1:23am
10th Jun 2024 1:23am
the smaller the size, the greater the king
stray black and white
cat walked across the
street a car length
ahead of me
the creature neither
looked left
or right
his steps were slow
brave
measured
each one a pronouncement
of his royalty
the car in front of me
stopped to let him
pass
to keep ones courage
and wits without fear
when facing down a ton
of steel on four tires
the greatest of
nobility
he took off into a wooded
area to, no doubt, do ...
cat walked across the
street a car length
ahead of me
the creature neither
looked left
or right
his steps were slow
brave
measured
each one a pronouncement
of his royalty
the car in front of me
stopped to let him
pass
to keep ones courage
and wits without fear
when facing down a ton
of steel on four tires
the greatest of
nobility
he took off into a wooded
area to, no doubt, do ...
#determination
#inspirational
#motivational
159 reads
4 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
24th Nov 2018 8:12pm
24th Nov 2018 8:12pm
The Sermon of Mr. Brimstone Pt. 16 (The Darkness That Blinds)
#motivational
#honesty
#humankind
529 reads
2 Comments
13
Poem Published
15th Jun 2020 1:40am
15th Jun 2020 1:40am
Unwealthy
She often brings more to most discussions than I do.
It’s seldom that you’ll see me start things that have a definitive end.
I usually end things that never began.
Then, proceed to whine about it in the aftermath.
But it’s her brilliance that draws me to her.
The blinding light of clarity that she exudes
burns the eyes of this blind moth
struggling desperately to be worthy of it.
I’m poor.
I’m poor of heart and mind;
of strength and will;
of words and wisdom.
But in her presence my idiocy...
It’s seldom that you’ll see me start things that have a definitive end.
I usually end things that never began.
Then, proceed to whine about it in the aftermath.
But it’s her brilliance that draws me to her.
The blinding light of clarity that she exudes
burns the eyes of this blind moth
struggling desperately to be worthy of it.
I’m poor.
I’m poor of heart and mind;
of strength and will;
of words and wisdom.
But in her presence my idiocy...
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
#gratitude
#admiration
598 reads
4 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
11th Apr 2022 12:27pm
11th Apr 2022 12:27pm
Philosophical Bastard
Stick
Out your tongue
Stretch your imagination
Taste the verbiage
Of those ubiquitous universal principalities
Erotic and existential they are
A malnourished humankind
Hungers for the orgasmic reprieve for such precepts
For the rapture
Poets are bastards at heart
Hemorrhaging seemingly nonsensical conversations
With{in} the self
Forever seeking salvation shelter
And a semblance of home
Words roam
With the wildness of spirit
We spit with the desire to never again
Bite out tongues ...
Out your tongue
Stretch your imagination
Taste the verbiage
Of those ubiquitous universal principalities
Erotic and existential they are
A malnourished humankind
Hungers for the orgasmic reprieve for such precepts
For the rapture
Poets are bastards at heart
Hemorrhaging seemingly nonsensical conversations
With{in} the self
Forever seeking salvation shelter
And a semblance of home
Words roam
With the wildness of spirit
We spit with the desire to never again
Bite out tongues ...
#motivational
#inspirational
#HumanRights
600 reads
4 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
28th Apr 2023 9:47pm
28th Apr 2023 9:47pm
Today, I drew a lemon in the dirt
Today, I drew a lemon in the dirt
on a stranger's van.
It was parked just across the road
and somebody had already scrawled,
'Chris is a lemon', amongst other things
into the grime.
I etched a lemon into the dirt,
then gave it a pair of stick-on googly eyes.
I bought myself a plastic fairy wand,
complete with flashing lights
and then, for a dare,
attached my bank card
and paid for my shopping with it.
Going one step further,
I tied it to my key card for work
and spent all day opening doors with it,
as well...
on a stranger's van.
It was parked just across the road
and somebody had already scrawled,
'Chris is a lemon', amongst other things
into the grime.
I etched a lemon into the dirt,
then gave it a pair of stick-on googly eyes.
I bought myself a plastic fairy wand,
complete with flashing lights
and then, for a dare,
attached my bank card
and paid for my shopping with it.
Going one step further,
I tied it to my key card for work
and spent all day opening doors with it,
as well...
#motivational
#funny
#NaPoWriMo2023
238 reads
0 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
30th Jun 2022 5:45pm
30th Jun 2022 5:45pm
MY PASSION POETRY
彡(✿╹◡╹) 𝘐𝘯𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘱𝘢𝘴𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘰 𝘸𝘳𝘪𝘵𝘦
𝘛𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘮𝘦 𝘩𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘦𝘳
𝘓𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘴 𝘢 𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘭𝘥...
𝘛𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘮𝘦 𝘩𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘦𝘳
𝘓𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘴 𝘢 𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘭𝘥...
#courage
#motivational
#admiration #respect
#admiration #respect
458 reads
8 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
30th Sep 2023 10:22am
30th Sep 2023 10:22am
Cuts Like a Knife
sometimes it's easy to forget
you are free
don't let doubt place you in shackles
you are free
don't let doubt place you in shackles
#motivational
#inspirational
#freedom
333 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Jan 2021 1:52pm
24th Jan 2021 1:52pm
What They Had Seen In That Gym
Some guys had nothing
to say after they saw her
slam on that bag hard.
to say after they saw her
slam on that bag hard.
#strength
#motivational
#haiku
#feminism
#masculinity
421 reads
0 Comments
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