Motivational by Top Critiquers Poems
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motivational by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
20th Jul 2023 5:13pm
20th Jul 2023 5:13pm
Forrest Gump (inspirational human)
what a human being
now we all should
aspire to have
a beautiful soul like that
now we all should
aspire to have
a beautiful soul like that
#kindness
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational
#spiritual
325 reads
2 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
29th Aug 2019 4:37pm
29th Aug 2019 4:37pm
A Little Less Fancy
Il n'y a pas besoin de mots fantaisistes
fancy doesn't excite me
I'm more of simplicity
lying down with reality
unfiltered
with a natural point of view
I am like the stream
moving thru life with ease
in every twist, bend or curve
my bottom crystal clear
showing of all that you'd like to see
I am a reflection of your moon
living as one with the sun
a lover of fortitude and valor
fermenting in your fortress
not allowed to be outshone
one sip, consumed
where vines have already known ...
fancy doesn't excite me
I'm more of simplicity
lying down with reality
unfiltered
with a natural point of view
I am like the stream
moving thru life with ease
in every twist, bend or curve
my bottom crystal clear
showing of all that you'd like to see
I am a reflection of your moon
living as one with the sun
a lover of fortitude and valor
fermenting in your fortress
not allowed to be outshone
one sip, consumed
where vines have already known ...
#happiness
#love
#kindness #motivational
#kindness #motivational
561 reads
4 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 12:50pm
16th Feb 2025 12:50pm
Porcelain Dreams
Empty days drift in a world made of smoke and disguise,
Made-up lies, a life of despise while she hides.
A castle of echoes, a throne built on fantasy,
Her lack of reality—this is her majesty.
A queen in her kingdom of neon-lit haze,
Words set relationships ablaze,
Pretending to raise while seeking pity then praise.
Where nothing is real, yet she basks in the sunlight, acts brave.
She dances with thoughts of grand junction, whispers her name—total dysfunction.
Plays puppets with fate in her self-written game.
Muppets...
Made-up lies, a life of despise while she hides.
A castle of echoes, a throne built on fantasy,
Her lack of reality—this is her majesty.
A queen in her kingdom of neon-lit haze,
Words set relationships ablaze,
Pretending to raise while seeking pity then praise.
Where nothing is real, yet she basks in the sunlight, acts brave.
She dances with thoughts of grand junction, whispers her name—total dysfunction.
Plays puppets with fate in her self-written game.
Muppets...
#motivational
#obsession
#wisdom
90 reads
2 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
29th May 2022 3:37pm
29th May 2022 3:37pm
First Dates: Dance Steps
First Dates: Dance Steps
When words
have become
too powerful
to speak
or write,
then
sublanguages
of human content
suffice
for the greetings
we once hailed
as our greetings
grew then,
further on,
obrusive.
Let us then
strive for
a conversation
of equals.
When words
have become
too powerful
to speak
or write,
then
sublanguages
of human content
suffice
for the greetings
we once hailed
as our greetings
grew then,
further on,
obrusive.
Let us then
strive for
a conversation
of equals.
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational #respect
#inspirational #respect
267 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
14th Aug 2022 5:58am
14th Aug 2022 5:58am
Olympia
After the year two thousand, they stopped making bodies like that
Hahaha able and willing, with a tight kitty kat
She doesn't let just anybody hit that, she's very particular
She doesn't consider sex simply an extra curriculum
Fuck what you've faced and where you've been, she wasn't it
You've gotta be more than worthy to hit that shit
She's no blunt and won't be rolled or passed around
You've gotta come with the real if you want to get down
Flashy clothes and cars isn't gonna do it
Hell, you could have nine baby mommas cause...
Hahaha able and willing, with a tight kitty kat
She doesn't let just anybody hit that, she's very particular
She doesn't consider sex simply an extra curriculum
Fuck what you've faced and where you've been, she wasn't it
You've gotta be more than worthy to hit that shit
She's no blunt and won't be rolled or passed around
You've gotta come with the real if you want to get down
Flashy clothes and cars isn't gonna do it
Hell, you could have nine baby mommas cause...
#women
#LifeStruggles
#motivational
453 reads
5 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 2:11am
10th Mar 2025 2:11am
Happy Is As Happy Does...
Sunsets
the sound of the ocean
a breeze through the trees
a good strong hug
a brand new box of chocolates
fresh bed sheets
fresh morning dew
falling in love
a full moon
an ice cold mug of beer
walking in the summer rain
a Big $ winning loto ticket
Mickey and Minnie Mouse
music
life
et cetera, et cetera...
the sound of the ocean
a breeze through the trees
a good strong hug
a brand new box of chocolates
fresh bed sheets
fresh morning dew
falling in love
a full moon
an ice cold mug of beer
walking in the summer rain
a Big $ winning loto ticket
Mickey and Minnie Mouse
music
life
et cetera, et cetera...
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
69 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
10th Jun 2024 1:23am
10th Jun 2024 1:23am
the smaller the size, the greater the king
stray black and white
cat walked across the
street a car length
ahead of me
the creature neither
looked left
or right
his steps were slow
brave
measured
each one a pronouncement
of his royalty
the car in front of me
stopped to let him
pass
to keep ones courage
and wits without fear
when facing down a ton
of steel on four tires
the greatest of
nobility
he took off into a wooded
area to, no doubt, do ...
cat walked across the
street a car length
ahead of me
the creature neither
looked left
or right
his steps were slow
brave
measured
each one a pronouncement
of his royalty
the car in front of me
stopped to let him
pass
to keep ones courage
and wits without fear
when facing down a ton
of steel on four tires
the greatest of
nobility
he took off into a wooded
area to, no doubt, do ...
#determination
#inspirational
#motivational
153 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2018 4:31pm
23rd Jun 2018 4:31pm
beautiful lily
delicate day caress
within a gentleness only you possess
tend to the aching wounds
and kiss the hurt spots
a beautiful lily was trampled
because of my careless wandering
heal her with your light shine
of this I beseech you
within your divinity
you know how to make things right
when I don't
tender day guide my tongue
may it give breath
to fill one's sails
and send them gliding across lake peace
you alone have the wisdom
to set things straight
let her again visit...
within a gentleness only you possess
tend to the aching wounds
and kiss the hurt spots
a beautiful lily was trampled
because of my careless wandering
heal her with your light shine
of this I beseech you
within your divinity
you know how to make things right
when I don't
tender day guide my tongue
may it give breath
to fill one's sails
and send them gliding across lake peace
you alone have the wisdom
to set things straight
let her again visit...
#love
#beauty
#strength #motivational
#strength #motivational
587 reads
8 Comments
Zazzles
Broom
Broom
Poem Published
20th Jan 2021 3:25am
20th Jan 2021 3:25am
Mystery Item
I will be starting a new round
of The Mystery Item Game,
this Thursday morning at 8:00 am
EST stay tuned! ☺️☺️☺️
of The Mystery Item Game,
this Thursday morning at 8:00 am
EST stay tuned! ☺️☺️☺️
#happiness
#love
#motivational
428 reads
11 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 3:40pm
28th Nov 2024 3:40pm
Written in the Stars
Lying on a soft fragrant meadow
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
#admiration
#emotions
#motivational
132 reads
2 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
30th Sep 2023 10:22am
30th Sep 2023 10:22am
Cuts Like a Knife
sometimes it's easy to forget
you are free
don't let doubt place you in shackles
you are free
don't let doubt place you in shackles
#motivational
#inspirational
#freedom
319 reads
8 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
27th Nov 2018 2:58am
27th Nov 2018 2:58am
never
never acting like
never turning away
never giving only a bit
never, never someday.
never, never enough
never enough time
never serious,
never silly stuff.
O, just never sometimes
O, never speaking
O, never not mine
O, never Freaking
out of O-never mind
never, never land
and never again
never, never sands
of time Yet
still ever my friend.
Without
and in not so many words
without
and in not so many feelings
still
somehow knowing ...
never turning away
never giving only a bit
never, never someday.
never, never enough
never enough time
never serious,
never silly stuff.
O, just never sometimes
O, never speaking
O, never not mine
O, never Freaking
out of O-never mind
never, never land
and never again
never, never sands
of time Yet
still ever my friend.
Without
and in not so many words
without
and in not so many feelings
still
somehow knowing ...
#friendship
#motivational
#humankind
#WritingPoetry
#acceptance
498 reads
0 Comments
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