Motivational by Top Critiquers Poems
#motivational
motivational by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Her
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 7:48am
16th Dec 2024 7:48am
Keep Swimming (moony_)
Carve out your path
Young sister of mine
And
Don’t ever forget:
Your mind
Is gorgeous
You’re tenacious
Intelligent
Beautiful
Creative
Introspective
Enough
You’ve already moved mountains
When the world
Suddenly feels too heavy
And you just need
To hear
Something friendly
Remember:
My world has been
Enhanced
Since I’ve had
The opportunity
To get to know you
moony_
You inspire me daily
To be a better me ...
Young sister of mine
And
Don’t ever forget:
Your mind
Is gorgeous
You’re tenacious
Intelligent
Beautiful
Creative
Introspective
Enough
You’ve already moved mountains
When the world
Suddenly feels too heavy
And you just need
To hear
Something friendly
Remember:
My world has been
Enhanced
Since I’ve had
The opportunity
To get to know you
moony_
You inspire me daily
To be a better me ...
#admiration
#motivational
#MyInspiration
#respect
#strength
113 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 7:10pm
8th Jan 2025 7:10pm
Invoke Happiness
I stabbed myself repeatedly in the stomach about 3 times
there was no pain
there was no blood
instead, a greenish black goo oozed out onto the floor
A sign of relief
I was eradicating all negative energy from my body
this built up from years of anger, hostility, rage, hatred, tension and bitterness
surrounding yourself with people who bring you down
make a change, create and release the positive vibes within
associate with like minded individuals who love to invoke happiness
there was no pain
there was no blood
instead, a greenish black goo oozed out onto the floor
A sign of relief
I was eradicating all negative energy from my body
this built up from years of anger, hostility, rage, hatred, tension and bitterness
surrounding yourself with people who bring you down
make a change, create and release the positive vibes within
associate with like minded individuals who love to invoke happiness
#fiction
#horror
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
52 reads
6 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
Finally My Dream
Once, I had a dream
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
#courage
#motivational
#strength
198 reads
22 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
Collage - A New Calling
Pieces
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
#identity
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
#art
234 reads
28 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Aug 2018 4:03pm
10th Aug 2018 4:03pm
the homecoming
turning up the furnace
we're going full bore now
I enjoy war
this is where I excel
but this lady would like to take her armor off
imagine now a soul fully undressed
climbing into the celestial pools with you
cooling waters it's been a long day
a millennia has come and gone
I see you on the horizon
coming home from work
from the ninth sector of the nix universe
I'm emotional at the homecoming
watching our warriors
one by one come in
yes, it's a sight no one thought they'd ever see ...
we're going full bore now
I enjoy war
this is where I excel
but this lady would like to take her armor off
imagine now a soul fully undressed
climbing into the celestial pools with you
cooling waters it's been a long day
a millennia has come and gone
I see you on the horizon
coming home from work
from the ninth sector of the nix universe
I'm emotional at the homecoming
watching our warriors
one by one come in
yes, it's a sight no one thought they'd ever see ...
#love
#ILoveYou
#motivational
#inspirational
#admiration
685 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 2:54pm
24th Dec 2024 2:54pm
IN THIS MOMENT
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. For real that in this moment of tranquility and space and time, a scenario slowly begins to unfold the deepness of my thoughts, as I reflect upon where I've been and gone. 😭 THAT will forever change my mind and heart, plus my spiritual soul of my SUBCONSCIOUSNESS. THOUGHTS of my brain and what I've learned from these two brain tumors, 🧠 that I have gone through some mental changes. Yet as I sit here and now, within this place I can truly say that I am truly grateful and...
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
42 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 10:05pm
6th Nov 2024 10:05pm
THE APPEAL OF THE NATURIST BEACH
#beach
#holiday
#inspirational
#motivational
#sea
51 reads
0 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:51pm
10th Jan 2025 8:51pm
MY ROSE
AMAZING!
My beautiful rose
has become a star,
the brightest in heaven.
HER
light is so brilliant
the sun wears sunglasses.
The radiant glow travels
to the core of the soul
and is so luminous in darkness
of doubt that the magic of love's
power ignites forever in the soul.
OH
my beautiful rose keep shining
refilling my heart with new love
only YOU can bestow.
R-O-S-E you are:
R-adiant
O-ne of a kind
S-ent from heaven
E-xuberant in spirit
My beautiful rose
has become a star,
the brightest in heaven.
HER
light is so brilliant
the sun wears sunglasses.
The radiant glow travels
to the core of the soul
and is so luminous in darkness
of doubt that the magic of love's
power ignites forever in the soul.
OH
my beautiful rose keep shining
refilling my heart with new love
only YOU can bestow.
R-O-S-E you are:
R-adiant
O-ne of a kind
S-ent from heaven
E-xuberant in spirit
#admiration
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
56 reads
10 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 8:50pm
18th Nov 2024 8:50pm
DuP
Deep underground real poets live
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#romantic
#wisdom
98 reads
7 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
Stay
Rest your weary feet
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
67 reads
12 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2019 12:23pm
22nd Jul 2019 12:23pm
Motivate
Motivate me
To set my mind free.
Don't wait for someone
To care about me.
Trust in me
To be all I can be
No reason to hesitate.
Favor the greed
Its plentiful, you see?
No end in sight, this hunger.
To motivate me
To fulfill my dreams
Not sulk in useless somber.
Gather the will
There's something inside.
Let it out!
There's really nothing to hide.
All I need,
Is to let them see.
Let motivation be the key.
Don't wait too long,
Or you never will.
Don't be ashamed
For...
To set my mind free.
Don't wait for someone
To care about me.
Trust in me
To be all I can be
No reason to hesitate.
Favor the greed
Its plentiful, you see?
No end in sight, this hunger.
To motivate me
To fulfill my dreams
Not sulk in useless somber.
Gather the will
There's something inside.
Let it out!
There's really nothing to hide.
All I need,
Is to let them see.
Let motivation be the key.
Don't wait too long,
Or you never will.
Don't be ashamed
For...
#motivational
579 reads
3 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 00:00am
11th Oct 2024 00:00am
Angels
(Fia Naturie/Billy Snagg)
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
#love
#motivational
#relationships
#respect
#sonnet
466 reads
17 Comments
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