Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers
#moon
Poems about the moon by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Cyclical
One state pursues another state.
You are always yourself.
Delicate finger tips, tactile,
In caresses like the edges of butterfly wings.
Behind your eyes is beauty, always.
A spirit in formations of breezes
The color of bliss, a divine contrast
To all of this, world in grotesque.
From place to place – Your foot prints
Have grace, in every phase of every place,
As the world knows how to heal itself
In your essence, sprung forth in butterflies.
A marvel is a voice that inspires longing.
Soothsaying spells that...
You are always yourself.
Delicate finger tips, tactile,
In caresses like the edges of butterfly wings.
Behind your eyes is beauty, always.
A spirit in formations of breezes
The color of bliss, a divine contrast
To all of this, world in grotesque.
From place to place – Your foot prints
Have grace, in every phase of every place,
As the world knows how to heal itself
In your essence, sprung forth in butterflies.
A marvel is a voice that inspires longing.
Soothsaying spells that...
#sun
#moon
#stars
#shadows
#evolution
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2 Comments
Moon love
Dark mind,
bright thoughts
for distant muses:
humble egotists
dirty old artists
musical empaths
benevolent firestorms
warrior poets
Love bouncing off full moon..
Can you feel it?
bright thoughts
for distant muses:
humble egotists
dirty old artists
musical empaths
benevolent firestorms
warrior poets
Love bouncing off full moon..
Can you feel it?
#loneliness
#friendship
#moon
777 reads
11 Comments
Rain on Water
Somewhere where it rains
is my hidden lifetime
where I'm comforted by cool flow
not hot stagnant air
i don't care
if I've been there before
I need to wake up to a new dream
where there is more
a foreign shore
where i breathe
with an ocean
kissed by raindrops
until it can't possibly be loved
any more
moonrise
covers her in a blanket of silver
I slip inside
and sleep
so deep
cresting waves and falling
breathing out to sea
breathing back to shore
is my hidden lifetime
where I'm comforted by cool flow
not hot stagnant air
i don't care
if I've been there before
I need to wake up to a new dream
where there is more
a foreign shore
where i breathe
with an ocean
kissed by raindrops
until it can't possibly be loved
any more
moonrise
covers her in a blanket of silver
I slip inside
and sleep
so deep
cresting waves and falling
breathing out to sea
breathing back to shore
#moon
#rain
#sea #StreamOfConsciousness
#sea #StreamOfConsciousness
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10 Comments
I cried
( my picture of the eclipse )
I broke down and I
Cried.
The Sun
Had died
In the sky.
I could not
breath.
As much
As I wanted
To try.
I thought
Death
Had come.
I wanted with him
To fly.
Will the
Moon
Release her grip
Soon
Before she finally dies?
Will the
Light
Return again
Bright
On my tired Eyes?
Will the
World
Ponder this
Wonder or
As...
I broke down and I
Cried.
The Sun
Had died
In the sky.
I could not
breath.
As much
As I wanted
To try.
I thought
Death
Had come.
I wanted with him
To fly.
Will the
Moon
Release her grip
Soon
Before she finally dies?
Will the
Light
Return again
Bright
On my tired Eyes?
Will the
World
Ponder this
Wonder or
As...
#sun
#moon
359 reads
16 Comments
The Coronation
a caravan of stars
lit up the sky,
placid blue heavens
veiled with soft moon sighs...
the June midnight
seemed a jubilant celebration,
for the dark enchantress-
the mysterious night...
a coronation by the cosmos
for the black beauty
to be the queen of earth
so she could grow in her supremacy;
with each passing day
the night would be longer to stay...
those shimmering stellar gypsies
in hues of gold, red and blue
dazzling the ether
with their joyous laughter,...
lit up the sky,
placid blue heavens
veiled with soft moon sighs...
the June midnight
seemed a jubilant celebration,
for the dark enchantress-
the mysterious night...
a coronation by the cosmos
for the black beauty
to be the queen of earth
so she could grow in her supremacy;
with each passing day
the night would be longer to stay...
those shimmering stellar gypsies
in hues of gold, red and blue
dazzling the ether
with their joyous laughter,...
#moon
#night
#stars
#summer
#universe
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6 Comments
A Winter Night
Silently rolling still
'Neath cast planetary night
Breathes the crystalline horizon
Under ages of eon
Befallen crescent eclipse
Barren cold barrels
As frost planes sweep
Freezing with a touch
Where the earthen gathers
From ether to dust
Stopping waterways
Like time in space afar
Courses meander
Between the deep
Unfolding suspense
Traveling distant
Atmospheric pass
As silhouette and shadow ...
'Neath cast planetary night
Breathes the crystalline horizon
Under ages of eon
Befallen crescent eclipse
Barren cold barrels
As frost planes sweep
Freezing with a touch
Where the earthen gathers
From ether to dust
Stopping waterways
Like time in space afar
Courses meander
Between the deep
Unfolding suspense
Traveling distant
Atmospheric pass
As silhouette and shadow ...
#earth
#moon
#night
#sun
#winter
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2 Comments
Mundus Intus Me
Souls and black holes,
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
#clouds
#dreams
#moon
#SelfDiscovery
#sun
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10 Comments
barren reflection of night
the moon is simply an insignificant piece
of rock, caught up in the gravitational pull
of a much larger piece of rock, and yes, alright,
you think it's beautiful, but it's really not ..
of rock, caught up in the gravitational pull
of a much larger piece of rock, and yes, alright,
you think it's beautiful, but it's really not ..
#moon
429 reads
10 Comments
the future has stars in it
I see his indigo silhouette
a lonely astronaut
untethered
reaching for the man in the moon
Sometimes I wonder
if I just imagined him
treading dawn
as the electric dark
gives way to unholy sunshine
I'm learning to see
through the fire
and over the walls
but I'm numb to the inferno
that rages around us
heralding a future
we can't set right
I think he's got the right idea
my indigo astronaut
dialling off world in the hopes
the stars hold something more
for...
a lonely astronaut
untethered
reaching for the man in the moon
Sometimes I wonder
if I just imagined him
treading dawn
as the electric dark
gives way to unholy sunshine
I'm learning to see
through the fire
and over the walls
but I'm numb to the inferno
that rages around us
heralding a future
we can't set right
I think he's got the right idea
my indigo astronaut
dialling off world in the hopes
the stars hold something more
for...
#moon
#scifi
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
144 reads
2 Comments
Time to Leave
Facing the moon
silhouetted against grey mountains
a figure alone
without company
the day is done
seasons circle
as in autumn
leaves falling to the ground
tears as dew on leaves
falling, moistening the ground
and memories divine
just fading away
like ghosts departing before dawn
leaving nothing but faint whispers
murmured words breathed on mirrors
heavens don’t ever get dark
leave me a passage
with guiding lights.
silhouetted against grey mountains
a figure alone
without company
the day is done
seasons circle
as in autumn
leaves falling to the ground
tears as dew on leaves
falling, moistening the ground
and memories divine
just fading away
like ghosts departing before dawn
leaving nothing but faint whispers
murmured words breathed on mirrors
heavens don’t ever get dark
leave me a passage
with guiding lights.
#moon
#morning
#nature
#spiritual
#magic
2129 reads
8 Comments
questions ???
a question
came to the
mind of darkness,
can I click a picture of light?
the moon also
expressed its thoughts,
can't the phases of the sun
also increase or decrease like me?
came to the
mind of darkness,
can I click a picture of light?
the moon also
expressed its thoughts,
can't the phases of the sun
also increase or decrease like me?
#moon
#sun
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11 Comments
Tender Whispers Of Ire (An Yoruba Goddess)
Land before time as we’ve embraced in a timeless dance
The utopia of Heavenly’s grace, a hidden romance
Aphrodisiac to enslave the loins of every mortal man
From where he lies to where he stands
Entwined of silk as we lay
I like how we come together, kisses to my mind, when our hearts, the fusing of our souls, he has me, my scent he wears when we foreplay
Butterrumming, him with the gyrating of my curvaceous hips
His palms tattooing my body, gripping my skin tighter, oh, shit
His grunting, ahhh...the aroma of us sailing in...
The utopia of Heavenly’s grace, a hidden romance
Aphrodisiac to enslave the loins of every mortal man
From where he lies to where he stands
Entwined of silk as we lay
I like how we come together, kisses to my mind, when our hearts, the fusing of our souls, he has me, my scent he wears when we foreplay
Butterrumming, him with the gyrating of my curvaceous hips
His palms tattooing my body, gripping my skin tighter, oh, shit
His grunting, ahhh...the aroma of us sailing in...
#moon
#mythology
#spiritual
#sun
#water
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers