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barren reflection of night
the moon is simply an insignificant piece
of rock, caught up in the gravitational pull
of a much larger piece of rock, and yes, alright,
you think it's beautiful, but it's really not ..
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Re. barren reflection of night
19th Mar 2019 00:02am
ha! this hurts... all my mystic sensibilities, hahaha!
she's cool, changing, wet...don't you see, she's a lady :)
she's cool, changing, wet...don't you see, she's a lady :)
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Re: Re. barren reflection of night
19th Mar 2019 00:29am
don't get me wrong, I use symbolism
in poetry too, this is just a reality check ..
in poetry too, this is just a reality check ..
Re. barren reflection of night
19th Mar 2019 1:00am
I would say it depends on whether or not one likes rocks, which I happen to love! 🌕
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19th Mar 2019 6:23pm
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20th Mar 2019 3:56pm
Re. barren reflection of night
19th Mar 2019 5:16am
there's a certain danger
in mocking the gods...
ignorance is no excuse
they'll spite you, nonetheless
in mocking the gods...
ignorance is no excuse
they'll spite you, nonetheless
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19th Mar 2019 11:13pm
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20th Mar 2019 5:47am
It's easier to beg forgiveness than ask permission...
that's where the fun lies...after all...Ely
that's where the fun lies...after all...Ely
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Re. barren reflection of night
21st Mar 2019 3:52pm