Poems About Marriage by Top Critiquers
#marriage
Poems about marriage by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Pleasent ride
after a friendship n long dating
the moments of wedding bells
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure!
the moments of wedding bells
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure!
#love
#marriage
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Gifts
I hear it in your stories
and in rare moments, I've witnessed it:
your gift --
and I marvel at the empathy
with which you guide families
through their worst moments
Never impatient, judgement at bay
Always respectful, giving space
as they cope
and grieve
and make decisions,
wrapped in the stability of your care,
feeling heard and supported.
I wish you could bring the gift home,
but I know it's finite,
and I know it takes its toll.
In weak moments, I'm envious
that they aren't expected...
and in rare moments, I've witnessed it:
your gift --
and I marvel at the empathy
with which you guide families
through their worst moments
Never impatient, judgement at bay
Always respectful, giving space
as they cope
and grieve
and make decisions,
wrapped in the stability of your care,
feeling heard and supported.
I wish you could bring the gift home,
but I know it's finite,
and I know it takes its toll.
In weak moments, I'm envious
that they aren't expected...
#love
#kindness
#marriage #responsibility
#marriage #responsibility
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8 Comments
FORMATIVE YEARS CHAPTER 3 Part 4
#lust
#girlfriend
#marriage
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3 Comments
I deserved ‘em
my wife is the best person I’ve ever known,
but she’s got her faults
are as slight as a thoughtless word here or there
are a few that hit home
but she’s got her faults
are as slight as a thoughtless word here or there
are a few that hit home
#marriage
#relationships
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1 Comment
Sick Marriage
He takes care of home, but won’t fuck
“He takes care of the kids, but won’t fuck
“He gives her whatever she ask, but won’t fuck
“Now she’s contemplating about head-hunting for the nut,
“In the beginning he always called her baby
Telling her she would forever be his special lady,
“That he would always treat her brand new
Now he looks at her like dog shit found on his shoe,
“For months and heartbreaking years she attempts to hold on
Trying new things like sending...
“He takes care of the kids, but won’t fuck
“He gives her whatever she ask, but won’t fuck
“Now she’s contemplating about head-hunting for the nut,
“In the beginning he always called her baby
Telling her she would forever be his special lady,
“That he would always treat her brand new
Now he looks at her like dog shit found on his shoe,
“For months and heartbreaking years she attempts to hold on
Trying new things like sending...
#marriage
#heartbroken
#denial #temptation
#denial #temptation
803 reads
12 Comments
In Her Sexual Prime
#lust
#marriage
#erotic #dirty
#erotic #dirty
759 reads
6 Comments
Torture
I'm leaving."
"Go ahead!"
" Doesn't that
bother you?"
"no..."
"Then I'll stay."
"Go ahead!"
" Doesn't that
bother you?"
"no..."
"Then I'll stay."
#marriage
749 reads
9 Comments
Wife... Not.
Whisper behind my back,
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
#boyfriend
#relationships
#marriage
#conflict
#funny
597 reads
61 Comments
Pueblo Wedding
Pueblo Wedding
Cruising the asphalt road to Cibola
Ancient Mission beckons
From the desert shore of a primordial sea
Now sear hills in a brown terrain of mountains
We follow the river of highway
Onto the parking lot
Of the church made from the mud of ages
Shaped by earthen hands of ancestors
Whose chants haunt the whispering wind
Upon parting the gates of the sanctuary
Low and behold a Wedding unfolding
We enter the sacred space
Where ancient art
of pueblo women gathering corn
is frescoed on...
Cruising the asphalt road to Cibola
Ancient Mission beckons
From the desert shore of a primordial sea
Now sear hills in a brown terrain of mountains
We follow the river of highway
Onto the parking lot
Of the church made from the mud of ages
Shaped by earthen hands of ancestors
Whose chants haunt the whispering wind
Upon parting the gates of the sanctuary
Low and behold a Wedding unfolding
We enter the sacred space
Where ancient art
of pueblo women gathering corn
is frescoed on...
#happiness
#love
#marriage
#tradition
#travel
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2 Comments
The Angle of Incidence
The Angle of Incidence
An experience,
However
Temporarily
Escaping
The daily
Run
Of the mill
Routine,
May
Feel
Well
Worth it
If the angle
Of incidence
Covers
The gap
Between
The unnumbed
Reality
Of stark living
And that
Pounding
Sense
Of mindless
Security
That
Comes
In the wake
Of turning
Off
The accountability
For the life
Someone
Seems
To have made
For...
An experience,
However
Temporarily
Escaping
The daily
Run
Of the mill
Routine,
May
Feel
Well
Worth it
If the angle
Of incidence
Covers
The gap
Between
The unnumbed
Reality
Of stark living
And that
Pounding
Sense
Of mindless
Security
That
Comes
In the wake
Of turning
Off
The accountability
For the life
Someone
Seems
To have made
For...
#teens
#marriage
#LifeCycle #nostalgia
#LifeCycle #nostalgia
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5 Comments
When I Was Naked
#love
#marriage
#sex
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4 Comments
Rekindling
Time drifts quickly,
Issuing desperation into the void.
A besom's stirring memory,
Ascends to the fore.
Reflection, stokes a flame,
That sparked long ago.
Yours, is a prod, that could ignite;
A flicker, that might engulf, into burning.
Do you recall?
Or is it mere imagination,
What almost was?
It's something I relive,
When warm winds, only arouse memories.
Memories, that invoke you,
& that cause me to think about rekindling, an old ember.
Issuing desperation into the void.
A besom's stirring memory,
Ascends to the fore.
Reflection, stokes a flame,
That sparked long ago.
Yours, is a prod, that could ignite;
A flicker, that might engulf, into burning.
Do you recall?
Or is it mere imagination,
What almost was?
It's something I relive,
When warm winds, only arouse memories.
Memories, that invoke you,
& that cause me to think about rekindling, an old ember.
#aging
#disappointment
#marriage
#romantic
#UnrequitedLove
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2 Comments
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