Poems About Luck Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about luck seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
GypsySoul86
Poem Published
13th Jun 2021 1:48pm
13th Jun 2021 1:48pm
Spinning Wheel
Wisdom gained is
innocence lost.
He who seeks truth
always pays a high cost.
For hearts are deceitful,
they tell such sweet lies...
Love conquers all they shout,
there's no such thing as goodbye.
Emotions are a temptress,
desire a snare,
one leads us to our doom,
the other strips us bare.
The mind is a dark pit
hiding all manner of monsters inside,
we give our all to slay the beasts
all the while feeding our biggest one;
PRIDE.
We spend our finite existence racing
trying to always be first in line, ...
innocence lost.
He who seeks truth
always pays a high cost.
For hearts are deceitful,
they tell such sweet lies...
Love conquers all they shout,
there's no such thing as goodbye.
Emotions are a temptress,
desire a snare,
one leads us to our doom,
the other strips us bare.
The mind is a dark pit
hiding all manner of monsters inside,
we give our all to slay the beasts
all the while feeding our biggest one;
PRIDE.
We spend our finite existence racing
trying to always be first in line, ...
#fate
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#luck
#wisdom
697 reads
2 Comments
Leethal
Poem Published
1st Jun 2021 11:45am
1st Jun 2021 11:45am
Black wHole Son… An ode to Eden and Sound Garden
#fate
#apocalypse
#mythology
#luck
#nightmares
435 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
18th May 2021 1:26am
18th May 2021 1:26am
unforeseen
even the smallest
pebble cast into the
water creates ripples
pebble cast into the
water creates ripples
#universe
#fate
#luck
523 reads
8 Comments
Alan-S-Jeeves
Poem Published
10th May 2021 9:59am
10th May 2021 9:59am
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
I had a chocolate soldier
He had a chocolate heart;
He had a chocolate lady fair,
They never were apart.
They marched out in the morning
As daytime had begun
And there, beneath a cloudless sky,
They melted in the sun.
He had a chocolate heart;
He had a chocolate lady fair,
They never were apart.
They marched out in the morning
As daytime had begun
And there, beneath a cloudless sky,
They melted in the sun.
#fate
#luck
318 reads
2 Comments
BlueBeastGirl
Beasty
Beasty
Poem Published
4th May 2021 7:51am
4th May 2021 7:51am
Fairy God Cousin
Dear Little one, I'm thinking of you
Hoping the bed you're in is comfy
That you belly is full of good food
My mind is full of lists of what I'm wishing for you
Clothes that fit, toys that bring joy, a safe place to be
My dreams keep bringing you back to me
I've never wanted a baby, never wanted pregnancy or any of that
Instead I've always dreamt of a child
That just floated into my life like dandelion fluff on wind
The very idea of a child who needs me
Twists my stomach into hundreds knots
And this idea that I couldn't give what is...
Hoping the bed you're in is comfy
That you belly is full of good food
My mind is full of lists of what I'm wishing for you
Clothes that fit, toys that bring joy, a safe place to be
My dreams keep bringing you back to me
I've never wanted a baby, never wanted pregnancy or any of that
Instead I've always dreamt of a child
That just floated into my life like dandelion fluff on wind
The very idea of a child who needs me
Twists my stomach into hundreds knots
And this idea that I couldn't give what is...
#children
#fairies
#support
#luck
#witches
424 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
15th Apr 2021 9:17pm
15th Apr 2021 9:17pm
In a State of Grace
Spin the wheel” the professor brightly said
So I did and went back to nineteen ninety-one
To days of youth and paths I once feared to tread
To a time when passion seemed to weigh a ton
I smiled reliving the moments I once treasured
For the times I sighed and cried with a heavy heart
For the formative years when I felt the pressure
Through a depression I hid while playing the part
But I kept it hidden below the undergrowth
Like secrets in the deepest recesses of the soul
It grew roots to the core and swore an oath ...
So I did and went back to nineteen ninety-one
To days of youth and paths I once feared to tread
To a time when passion seemed to weigh a ton
I smiled reliving the moments I once treasured
For the times I sighed and cried with a heavy heart
For the formative years when I felt the pressure
Through a depression I hid while playing the part
But I kept it hidden below the undergrowth
Like secrets in the deepest recesses of the soul
It grew roots to the core and swore an oath ...
#love
#fate
#music
#luck
#NaPoWriMo2021
499 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
14th Apr 2021 1:47am
14th Apr 2021 1:47am
the easy things
eggs in the morning
with yokes shinning
like twin sun
rises
staying in bed all day
under the cocoon
of blankets in
January
the unexpected gift
of a day with
nothing to
do
the smell of pages from
an old book unfolding
years of
memory
how our shadows never
abandons us no
matter what
we have
done
the assurance and safety in
knowing nothing last
forever
not you
not I
...
with yokes shinning
like twin sun
rises
staying in bed all day
under the cocoon
of blankets in
January
the unexpected gift
of a day with
nothing to
do
the smell of pages from
an old book unfolding
years of
memory
how our shadows never
abandons us no
matter what
we have
done
the assurance and safety in
knowing nothing last
forever
not you
not I
...
#death
#fate
#luck
524 reads
5 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
13th Apr 2021 10:51pm
13th Apr 2021 10:51pm
Bless: Flame Imperishable
Silently, she would remember a cry
in lands unseen and not foretold
would she know how she would die
or she sought shelter in the cold?
Awaking in a state of knowledge
where a device undying
will not withstand its pledge
because it would be lying.
So Let it Be a Law of Voice
the Absolutness in the Word
Intent when it's the Noise
cannot kill him, or hurt
the Flame Impereshable, or the Phoenix,
the being that observed him silent,
so he made un dono* for it's ennex*
and the Vedic Way is...
in lands unseen and not foretold
would she know how she would die
or she sought shelter in the cold?
Awaking in a state of knowledge
where a device undying
will not withstand its pledge
because it would be lying.
So Let it Be a Law of Voice
the Absolutness in the Word
Intent when it's the Noise
cannot kill him, or hurt
the Flame Impereshable, or the Phoenix,
the being that observed him silent,
so he made un dono* for it's ennex*
and the Vedic Way is...
#God
#spiritual
#luck
#karma
#JRRTolkien
497 reads
0 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
12th Apr 2021 8:51pm
12th Apr 2021 8:51pm
CLOVERS
Any April Redwood Valley
I could lose you in the clover
Do you see the lover
In a sea of green?
Somewhere lies a mutant
Blessed with superpower luck
Any other though
Can be disassembled thusly:
Pull one leaf
And it’s a butterfly
The remainder you are holding
Is a disconnected heart
The truth is
We refer to many things as clover
These are what all of them
Have in common
I could lose you in the clover
Do you see the lover
In a sea of green?
Somewhere lies a mutant
Blessed with superpower luck
Any other though
Can be disassembled thusly:
Pull one leaf
And it’s a butterfly
The remainder you are holding
Is a disconnected heart
The truth is
We refer to many things as clover
These are what all of them
Have in common
#flowers
#nature
#luck #NaPoWriMo2021
#luck #NaPoWriMo2021
470 reads
1 Comment
buddhakitty
Poem Published
9th Apr 2021 2:14am
9th Apr 2021 2:14am
the kings knowledge
I will dance
with the bones
of Mozart
whistle tunes
of old men,
old woman,
old times
I will break the
neck of dawn
for waking me
and throw scalding
hot coffee into
the face of
morning
run with strays,
bellies aching,
souls burning,
teeth bared at
the throat of
the living
live in small
dingy rooms
that smell of:
drunken
nights,
love gone
bad
and
suicide
to be king is not
to sit upon...
with the bones
of Mozart
whistle tunes
of old men,
old woman,
old times
I will break the
neck of dawn
for waking me
and throw scalding
hot coffee into
the face of
morning
run with strays,
bellies aching,
souls burning,
teeth bared at
the throat of
the living
live in small
dingy rooms
that smell of:
drunken
nights,
love gone
bad
and
suicide
to be king is not
to sit upon...
#fate
#luck
#morality
467 reads
6 Comments
Scolar37
Scott Millar
Scott Millar
Poem Published
11th Feb 2021 10:21pm
11th Feb 2021 10:21pm
My Safe Place
This poem page is my safe place
It's a place I come tto unleash my mind
On here no one judges you
Infact so far you've all been kind
I like coming here to my safe place
I can express myself free of fear
Cos in the real world it's no that easy
Real life it's different than being on here...
On here no one is opinionated
I think were all here to unleash our brain?
I use this site to say exactly what I feel
I know guys, you all think I'm insane...
But truth is easy to say on this site
All my poems are straight...
It's a place I come tto unleash my mind
On here no one judges you
Infact so far you've all been kind
I like coming here to my safe place
I can express myself free of fear
Cos in the real world it's no that easy
Real life it's different than being on here...
On here no one is opinionated
I think were all here to unleash our brain?
I use this site to say exactly what I feel
I know guys, you all think I'm insane...
But truth is easy to say on this site
All my poems are straight...
#luck
400 reads
1 Comment
Poetikmind
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Poem Published
5th Feb 2021 10:53pm
5th Feb 2021 10:53pm
When the well runs dry...
They...
come
in
droves
to partake
Take...
for
granted
mind’s
bountiful seed
See...
those
livin’
lies at stake
Forsake...
the
innocence
of pure need
Needless...
sorrows
abound
space thru time
Enslaved...
to
the
mindset,
shackles freed
Yet...
where
go
leaders
if
the flock dies
Bare...
witness
to
the
suffrage
When...
the
well, ...
come
in
droves
to partake
Take...
for
granted
mind’s
bountiful seed
See...
those
livin’
lies at stake
Forsake...
the
innocence
of pure need
Needless...
sorrows
abound
space thru time
Enslaved...
to
the
mindset,
shackles freed
Yet...
where
go
leaders
if
the flock dies
Bare...
witness
to
the
suffrage
When...
the
well, ...
#fate
#mythology
#luck
580 reads
11 Comments
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