Poems About Luck Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about luck seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:28am
Yesterday 4:28am
Ea$y Money (Not so Easy)
Ea$y Money (Not so easy)
Cutting in line
Won’t wait my turn
It’s my money and
I want to collect
But the game ain’t over
There’s still time
For it to fall to pieces
Does it almost every time
Life of a Rider
Comin up short in the end
They say insanity is
When you rinse and repeat
Tryin to make an easy buck
Instead of just being
Losing an easy buck instead
Of pocketing
Life of a Rider
Isn’t an easy path
Want to get rid of this
Insanity not so easy
...
Cutting in line
Won’t wait my turn
It’s my money and
I want to collect
But the game ain’t over
There’s still time
For it to fall to pieces
Does it almost every time
Life of a Rider
Comin up short in the end
They say insanity is
When you rinse and repeat
Tryin to make an easy buck
Instead of just being
Losing an easy buck instead
Of pocketing
Life of a Rider
Isn’t an easy path
Want to get rid of this
Insanity not so easy
...
#addiction
#curse
#fate #luck
#fate #luck
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 8:21am
5th Sep 2024 8:21am
A TINY TRAVEL
Riding on an insect cause I'm tiny Mrs May
A black ant as sugar rages it's hyper way
Passing through the woods I hear some voice say.....
I'm a better ride as I can fly you away
To my surprise, why it's a bumble bee
As I utter back, ok then please take me to see the raw honey...
The bee speaks as it flails and speeds its wings
As you wish, yet do you mind in the journey that I can sing?
A black ant as sugar rages it's hyper way
Passing through the woods I hear some voice say.....
I'm a better ride as I can fly you away
To my surprise, why it's a bumble bee
As I utter back, ok then please take me to see the raw honey...
The bee speaks as it flails and speeds its wings
As you wish, yet do you mind in the journey that I can sing?
#dystopian
#fate
#luck
137 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 3:45am
5th Sep 2024 3:45am
wishes
hidden in the shadows are all the stars I've collected
they don't wish for the sky
they are happy to shine in my smile and eyes
they raced from the heavens
really just shiny wishes
light a smile and kiss a super nova
starlight shine with hope in the moment
glittery synchronicity brightly lit to fulfill a dream or two
a sprinkle of lust should light the wick
and a spark can become a bonfire
twinkle twinkle
take that girl from the bar home
fate brought her to you for the night
effervescence let her...
they don't wish for the sky
they are happy to shine in my smile and eyes
they raced from the heavens
really just shiny wishes
light a smile and kiss a super nova
starlight shine with hope in the moment
glittery synchronicity brightly lit to fulfill a dream or two
a sprinkle of lust should light the wick
and a spark can become a bonfire
twinkle twinkle
take that girl from the bar home
fate brought her to you for the night
effervescence let her...
#luck
#magic
94 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 3:56am
28th Jul 2024 3:56am
lasting impressions
the last words
spoken
the last breath
taken
the last piece
of pie
the last bullet
in the
chamber
last chance at:
love
hope
salvation
murder
last of its
kind
last ticket
sold
last one
out
last man
standing
last to be
picked
it won't
last
but it always
does
spoken
the last breath
taken
the last piece
of pie
the last bullet
in the
chamber
last chance at:
love
hope
salvation
murder
last of its
kind
last ticket
sold
last one
out
last man
standing
last to be
picked
it won't
last
but it always
does
#luck
123 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 3:06am
9th Jul 2024 3:06am
perplexed
I couldn't catch
the wind
so I sat with myself
and wondered
what to do
next
the wind
so I sat with myself
and wondered
what to do
next
#luck
105 reads
8 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
13th Jun 2024 1:23am
13th Jun 2024 1:23am
more or less than more or less
when there is little
left to live for
never live
for any less
left to live for
never live
for any less
#luck
96 reads
4 Comments
Vandelious
Neil Stewart
Neil Stewart
Poem Published
7th Jun 2024 5:44pm
7th Jun 2024 5:44pm
Relativity
The course of relativity
The cause is relativity
The force is relativity
The more is relativity
The less is relativity
The best is relativity
Said to set a mini me
A head of mess is tricky see
The cause is relativity
The force is relativity
The more is relativity
The less is relativity
The best is relativity
Said to set a mini me
A head of mess is tricky see
#evolution
#fate
#LifeCycle
#luck
#nature
104 reads
1 Comment
Vandelious
Neil Stewart
Neil Stewart
Poem Published
5th Jun 2024 9:11pm
5th Jun 2024 9:11pm
Youl see.
What you see,
What you hear,
What you do,
What you don't,
What you note,
Where you book,
Where you hook, who you know
Where you are,
Where youl be,
When youl know?
Well, youl see.
What you hear,
What you do,
What you don't,
What you note,
Where you book,
Where you hook, who you know
Where you are,
Where youl be,
When youl know?
Well, youl see.
#aging
#fate
#luck #responsibility
#luck #responsibility
94 reads
1 Comment
buddhakitty
Poem Published
24th May 2024 2:21am
24th May 2024 2:21am
don't you believe it
2:28 AM
sleep is a one way street
leading away from my
cement bed
I tell myself
dont worry...
everything
will be alright
but I'm lying to myself
like I've done so many
times over the years
thank God
no one is around
to hear
me
sleep is a one way street
leading away from my
cement bed
I tell myself
dont worry...
everything
will be alright
but I'm lying to myself
like I've done so many
times over the years
thank God
no one is around
to hear
me
#luck
87 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
19th May 2024 2:47am
19th May 2024 2:47am
...so I did
it was a good day
to wake up after
a night without
nightmares
...so I did
it was a good day
to shower and wash
off the terror of
yesterday
...so I did
it was a good day
to go my favorite
coffee shop and
sit in my best chair
...so I did
it was a good day
to watch the faces
of people around
me a wonder about
the lives they lead
...so I did
it was a good day
to see the fist
monarch butterfly
of spring
...
to wake up after
a night without
nightmares
...so I did
it was a good day
to shower and wash
off the terror of
yesterday
...so I did
it was a good day
to go my favorite
coffee shop and
sit in my best chair
...so I did
it was a good day
to watch the faces
of people around
me a wonder about
the lives they lead
...so I did
it was a good day
to see the fist
monarch butterfly
of spring
...
#luck
107 reads
8 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 5:23pm
9th Mar 2024 5:23pm
the mess
whether walking on the
dangerous icy roads of
love
or eating small Viennise
wiennies out of a tin
whether searching for
a purpose bigger than
then the pale phantoms
of dreams
or losing bits and pieces
of life to the wealth of
shadows
time has no wings, but
still flys like an angry
Falcone preying on
vermin
the beginning of the
end is the ends beginning
and is some kind of sick
joke that only the gods
could understand ...
dangerous icy roads of
love
or eating small Viennise
wiennies out of a tin
whether searching for
a purpose bigger than
then the pale phantoms
of dreams
or losing bits and pieces
of life to the wealth of
shadows
time has no wings, but
still flys like an angry
Falcone preying on
vermin
the beginning of the
end is the ends beginning
and is some kind of sick
joke that only the gods
could understand ...
#fate
#luck
133 reads
6 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
6th Mar 2024 3:07am
6th Mar 2024 3:07am
at this moment in this hour
at this moment
in this hour
sitting in my room
alone looking up as
the ceiling smiles
at this moment
in this hour
lighting another
smoke for myself
and the ghost of
Dan Fante
at this moment
in this hour
deciding there is
nothing more
important to do
then nothing
at this moment
in this hour
remembering a
hundred wars of
defeat, a hundred
wars of victory
at this moment
in this hour
the old...
in this hour
sitting in my room
alone looking up as
the ceiling smiles
at this moment
in this hour
lighting another
smoke for myself
and the ghost of
Dan Fante
at this moment
in this hour
deciding there is
nothing more
important to do
then nothing
at this moment
in this hour
remembering a
hundred wars of
defeat, a hundred
wars of victory
at this moment
in this hour
the old...
#death
#fate
#luck
#bittersweet
#risk
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4 Comments
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