Poems About Luck Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about luck seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
29th Aug 2022 10:05pm
29th Aug 2022 10:05pm
LUCK OR WHAT?
LUCK OR WHAT?
Do you think that there is luck
and it rains on one while he
is so thirsty up a dune
and he quenches burning thirst?
It is said that luck can make
rainy days become quite clear
when a woman wants the sky
for a picnic to be fair.
Lots of people get so rich
through a business of no worth.
They have little mind to use,
but their dumbness is the cause.
Is it luck or is it skill,
or can it be lots of work?
Some would say that luck is all;
others laugh at what they drawl.
BY JOSEPH...
Do you think that there is luck
and it rains on one while he
is so thirsty up a dune
and he quenches burning thirst?
It is said that luck can make
rainy days become quite clear
when a woman wants the sky
for a picnic to be fair.
Lots of people get so rich
through a business of no worth.
They have little mind to use,
but their dumbness is the cause.
Is it luck or is it skill,
or can it be lots of work?
Some would say that luck is all;
others laugh at what they drawl.
BY JOSEPH...
#luck
178 reads
7 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
8th Jun 2022 8:23pm
8th Jun 2022 8:23pm
Happy Coincidence
That two
fully functioning
human beings, capable
of language, memory, and
reflective thought, would choose the “yes”
of possible union over loneliness and fear is an
unlikely, but happy coincidence.
fully functioning
human beings, capable
of language, memory, and
reflective thought, would choose the “yes”
of possible union over loneliness and fear is an
unlikely, but happy coincidence.
#love
#fate
#luck
598 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Jun 2022 9:41pm
6th Jun 2022 9:41pm
Imbroglio
Embrace the void
Avoid to brace
Return to no womb
Turn left and then
go straight to hell
Follow the roles
of the major arcana
Leave all skeletons
in the armoir
Leave all the gates
opened and remove
yourself to another
kingdom.
PAR
Avoid to brace
Return to no womb
Turn left and then
go straight to hell
Follow the roles
of the major arcana
Leave all skeletons
in the armoir
Leave all the gates
opened and remove
yourself to another
kingdom.
PAR
#fate
#hell
#nostalgia
#luck
#responsibility
293 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2022 7:34pm
3rd Jun 2022 7:34pm
Pill and Contagion…
Before the contagion he was lost!
After the contagion he was lost!
It was not cured with pills,
not cured with intravenous,
he did not heal in verse or prose.
He was just lost!
During the contagion he was in love:
He raved, dreamed, castellated winds!
PAR
After the contagion he was lost!
It was not cured with pills,
not cured with intravenous,
he did not heal in verse or prose.
He was just lost!
During the contagion he was in love:
He raved, dreamed, castellated winds!
PAR
#death
#fate
#nostalgia
#luck
#dating
238 reads
0 Comments
CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
19th Apr 2022 4:09am
19th Apr 2022 4:09am
Spellcraftian Magickacious Allegoricum1
Peering through black looking-glass
Opening gateway to surreal
Ceremonial incanting stages
She quotes the secret words from the pages
Of Spellcraftian Magickacious Allegoricum
Now begins the astral astranomical ordeal......
Abracian foetuses
forming
Cadabrianic seed
Malleus matophicility
Maletastic ona
Ficariosis breed
Hocustific pontus for the
Pocustriation need
Bricandium icosisonyx
Ascending
Bracustrionic deed
Powder to rustic crucible
Candleheat prepares the way ...
Opening gateway to surreal
Ceremonial incanting stages
She quotes the secret words from the pages
Of Spellcraftian Magickacious Allegoricum
Now begins the astral astranomical ordeal......
Abracian foetuses
forming
Cadabrianic seed
Malleus matophicility
Maletastic ona
Ficariosis breed
Hocustific pontus for the
Pocustriation need
Bricandium icosisonyx
Ascending
Bracustrionic deed
Powder to rustic crucible
Candleheat prepares the way ...
#spiritual
#funny
#WritersBlock
#magic
#luck
263 reads
0 Comments
Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
18th Apr 2022 6:17pm
18th Apr 2022 6:17pm
Adorned (NaPoWriMo 2022 #18)
Days without jewellery
plain, unadorned,
lacking sparkle
and magic
un-fated attempts
at doing.
When I do,
I wear an Ankh.
To be reborn
each day,
auraed in destiny
as the Pharaohs were,
vitality infused
potent potentiality
animated and energised.
Gold,
Bold Fortune,
radiate bright like skin.
Silver,
Steady Reliability,
foundations like bones.
Steel chain,
Impervious and Resolute,
armoured and ready.
plain, unadorned,
lacking sparkle
and magic
un-fated attempts
at doing.
When I do,
I wear an Ankh.
To be reborn
each day,
auraed in destiny
as the Pharaohs were,
vitality infused
potent potentiality
animated and energised.
Gold,
Bold Fortune,
radiate bright like skin.
Silver,
Steady Reliability,
foundations like bones.
Steel chain,
Impervious and Resolute,
armoured and ready.
#identity
#fate
#luck
280 reads
5 Comments
to_be_me
Poem Published
15th Apr 2022 5:34am
15th Apr 2022 5:34am
ass ig nation
may i begin here now
to bring you
some pain and
can i even promise
lovely (pre)tenses
present(s) and
unsoiled warmth
you say! eh ?
freshly unspooled, straw made,
richly soaked in sensuous snow
maybe even a vested verb, or
better still, a kiss?
nah. just a gerund will do
you protest. you and me, us
doing doing doing
thrice and more of
blah blah ahhhh
on the roof of
a naked noun
our world beautifully
excised. oh shit!
i cum
to bring you
some pain and
can i even promise
lovely (pre)tenses
present(s) and
unsoiled warmth
you say! eh ?
freshly unspooled, straw made,
richly soaked in sensuous snow
maybe even a vested verb, or
better still, a kiss?
nah. just a gerund will do
you protest. you and me, us
doing doing doing
thrice and more of
blah blah ahhhh
on the roof of
a naked noun
our world beautifully
excised. oh shit!
i cum
#FreeVerse
#luck
457 reads
0 Comments
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
27th Feb 2022 6:53am
27th Feb 2022 6:53am
The Sky Is A Goddess, And The Sun Is Her Vagina
Imagine the sky in the morning as a naked woman, even a goddess.
Like a woman gives birth to her offspring thru her vagina,
the sky goddess gives birth to all forms and shapes each morning thru the sun.
(At night there is only blackness.
Then as the sun appears at dawn, everything comes forth from it).
So the sun is the sky goddess's shining womanhood,
naked before the whole world.
Earlier, the sun had been covered by clouds like the vagina is enveloped by white panties.
But then the clouds melted, exposing the naked sun in all her female glory....
Like a woman gives birth to her offspring thru her vagina,
the sky goddess gives birth to all forms and shapes each morning thru the sun.
(At night there is only blackness.
Then as the sun appears at dawn, everything comes forth from it).
So the sun is the sky goddess's shining womanhood,
naked before the whole world.
Earlier, the sun had been covered by clouds like the vagina is enveloped by white panties.
But then the clouds melted, exposing the naked sun in all her female glory....
#mythology
#luck
381 reads
0 Comments
dizzzzzzy
Poem Published
8th Feb 2022 7:00pm
8th Feb 2022 7:00pm
Wisdom of the oracle 2
BUILDING BLOCKS
UNFINISHED SYMPHONY
YANG
CO-CREATE
UNFINISHED SYMPHONY
YANG
CO-CREATE
#spiritual
#magic
#luck
480 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
8th Jan 2022 6:38am
8th Jan 2022 6:38am
ace up the your sleeve
winning isn't nearly
half as important
as to how we
play the
game
so play it
well
don't
sweat
dont
stutter
and never let
them see you
blink
half as important
as to how we
play the
game
so play it
well
don't
sweat
dont
stutter
and never let
them see you
blink
#strength
#fate
#humankind #luck
#humankind #luck
392 reads
13 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2022 10:08am
2nd Jan 2022 10:08am
Love supreme
You never really know you're alive
Until the sea turns rough and you're boats capsized
We all floating along on a dream
Until the light comes on and you're world comes undone at the seems
I know in my heart I'll survive
Because I've been through hell and I'm still alive
Nothing is just as it seems
Until you get where you're going and remember where you have been
Lord shed some light on my drunken dream
I need to to find some love in a world so extreme
I need to find some folk who know what I mean
So shed some light on my drunken...
Until the sea turns rough and you're boats capsized
We all floating along on a dream
Until the light comes on and you're world comes undone at the seems
I know in my heart I'll survive
Because I've been through hell and I'm still alive
Nothing is just as it seems
Until you get where you're going and remember where you have been
Lord shed some light on my drunken dream
I need to to find some love in a world so extreme
I need to find some folk who know what I mean
So shed some light on my drunken...
#fate
#luck
537 reads
10 Comments
FeNyX
Poem Published
18th Dec 2021 7:59am
18th Dec 2021 7:59am
Stolen Glances
A sliver of a glance floats freely
High up in frigid air singly
Uniquely precious and warm
Before the cold triggers the storm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWTQqpYBHQ8
High up in frigid air singly
Uniquely precious and warm
Before the cold triggers the storm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWTQqpYBHQ8
#love
#luck
16 reads
8 Comments
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