Poems About Loneliness by Top Critiquers
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 6:44pm
26th Mar 2024 6:44pm
chilled bones
the wind came calling today
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
#sadness
#loneliness
197 reads
8 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
16th Jan 2023 9:00pm
16th Jan 2023 9:00pm
Succubus
Again the night follows the day,
And again I am next to you.
Silent as a Shadow
Torture with a passionate stare...
Again my power over the body
You suffering from the burns.
No longer caring...
You wanted this?
Once again captivated by beauty,
The aroma of perfume intoxicates ...
Again it seems: in Love.
But the vision will again deceive.
An uneven beat of the heart is heard,
You are breathing deeply, hotly.
My body is closer, closer...
So alluring and shameless!
Only in the morning -...
And again I am next to you.
Silent as a Shadow
Torture with a passionate stare...
Again my power over the body
You suffering from the burns.
No longer caring...
You wanted this?
Once again captivated by beauty,
The aroma of perfume intoxicates ...
Again it seems: in Love.
But the vision will again deceive.
An uneven beat of the heart is heard,
You are breathing deeply, hotly.
My body is closer, closer...
So alluring and shameless!
Only in the morning -...
#love
#lust
#loneliness
#dark
#emptiness
1117 reads
47 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
7th Mar 2017 4:59am
7th Mar 2017 4:59am
The Fight
it feels like
i’m in a
battle
with life
but i’m losing
the fight
i am
losing
the fight
i smile
i’m polite
but inside it
screams, it rages
i’m fading'
h a n d s
stretch out
into the
world
looking for
someone
Some One
to hold on to
but it’s too late
i’m tired, ...
i’m in a
battle
with life
but i’m losing
the fight
i am
losing
the fight
i smile
i’m polite
but inside it
screams, it rages
i’m fading'
h a n d s
stretch out
into the
world
looking for
someone
Some One
to hold on to
but it’s too late
i’m tired, ...
#dark
#loneliness
1012 reads
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 1:33pm
14th Feb 2025 1:33pm
Like Water
There's a lot of fish in the sea.
Most of them don't notice me.
I'm on my back, counting sheep.
Slowly sinking into the deep.
I see a fluffy storm front form.
I see Olympus where Zeus was born.
I love the way thunder vibrates like porn.
When I'm rushing through a maze of corn.
I strip down, let my feelings go.
My energy deep dives far below.
The humpbacks offer a glory hole.
A bubble bath for all the hoes.
A reach around for emotional pain.
The storm is here, wrapped in rain.
Don't tread on me after the...
Most of them don't notice me.
I'm on my back, counting sheep.
Slowly sinking into the deep.
I see a fluffy storm front form.
I see Olympus where Zeus was born.
I love the way thunder vibrates like porn.
When I'm rushing through a maze of corn.
I strip down, let my feelings go.
My energy deep dives far below.
The humpbacks offer a glory hole.
A bubble bath for all the hoes.
A reach around for emotional pain.
The storm is here, wrapped in rain.
Don't tread on me after the...
#loneliness
82 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 6:20pm
26th Jan 2025 6:20pm
January
January's twilight horizon was a striking tangerine pink.
The cold brittle hours seem to turn agonizingly slow.
Soul searching with way too much time to think.
Frigid air preserves the stark milk white snow.
The sun and my heart struggle in their morning ascent.
The enigma of despair is disguised in many forms.
Questioning life where the road is unknown and bent.
Answers buried in the ravage of mental storms.
I imagine the soft warmth of spring sun on my face.
Hope prevails despite winter's brutal little death's. ...
The cold brittle hours seem to turn agonizingly slow.
Soul searching with way too much time to think.
Frigid air preserves the stark milk white snow.
The sun and my heart struggle in their morning ascent.
The enigma of despair is disguised in many forms.
Questioning life where the road is unknown and bent.
Answers buried in the ravage of mental storms.
I imagine the soft warmth of spring sun on my face.
Hope prevails despite winter's brutal little death's. ...
#loneliness
#winter
#hope
85 reads
12 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
4th Feb 2023 10:27pm
4th Feb 2023 10:27pm
Putting You Away
The last tide of the day is going out
I guess it's a good time for our goodbye
even though you left hours ago
I waited, to watch the ocean follow you.
I knew, you had that kind of power
even if you didn't
Because you were looking away.
I walk the bartering line
where the waves recede from the sand
as several grains go with it
Thousands really, but who notices
from the millions left behind
Like my thoughts of you, like the love
that follows you
Maybe it will keep you safe.
I could never wish anything
but the...
I guess it's a good time for our goodbye
even though you left hours ago
I waited, to watch the ocean follow you.
I knew, you had that kind of power
even if you didn't
Because you were looking away.
I walk the bartering line
where the waves recede from the sand
as several grains go with it
Thousands really, but who notices
from the millions left behind
Like my thoughts of you, like the love
that follows you
Maybe it will keep you safe.
I could never wish anything
but the...
#loneliness
#bittersweet
682 reads
22 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 4:48am
27th Sep 2024 4:48am
Forgotten Man
He did something weird for a living.
Something to do with coin boxes in laundromats
He lived a short dirt path away from his mother,
two blocks at most.
He went there every night for dinner,
boasting that lately he had been walking there
instead of driving.
Mama don't cook nothin' without gravy on it
said the 45-year-old laundromat man.
He also told me
in our last conversation,
that he masturbated to hardcore porn before bed
Women being hurt.
He called it taking a Sominex.
By that point I was just...
Something to do with coin boxes in laundromats
He lived a short dirt path away from his mother,
two blocks at most.
He went there every night for dinner,
boasting that lately he had been walking there
instead of driving.
Mama don't cook nothin' without gravy on it
said the 45-year-old laundromat man.
He also told me
in our last conversation,
that he masturbated to hardcore porn before bed
Women being hurt.
He called it taking a Sominex.
By that point I was just...
#loneliness
90 reads
5 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
14th Dec 2022 1:00am
14th Dec 2022 1:00am
Isle Of Man
Rain pouring down, my car broke down on side the road, what the fuck
And me with no cell phone or fucking tools, this is just my luck
This is a true test bitch of how you've lived your life
As you walk through that pouring rain and motorist watch you endure this strife
Pay attention Fuckboy don't you work with him, her, and them
They're driving by and honking their horns like you don't even know them
Wasn't it earlier today at work that they were all smiling up in your face
Ha, you find yourself praying silently that the rain washes the hate from your...
And me with no cell phone or fucking tools, this is just my luck
This is a true test bitch of how you've lived your life
As you walk through that pouring rain and motorist watch you endure this strife
Pay attention Fuckboy don't you work with him, her, and them
They're driving by and honking their horns like you don't even know them
Wasn't it earlier today at work that they were all smiling up in your face
Ha, you find yourself praying silently that the rain washes the hate from your...
#sadness
#loneliness
#disappointment
227 reads
4 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2023 4:34pm
2nd Apr 2023 4:34pm
.
A place of distance
Where belief seems like make believe
Reason finding no concrete purchase in alone
There is no saying
For whatever speech might be
Doesn't change a thing
Just dark muttering
Forlorn
As the weight upon the soul now borne
The world, indifferent, has no cause to pause
It knows no pain that naws
I know the broken end of things
The hollowness of truth that rings
A blackness knelling
The soot, the ash, the char of...
Where belief seems like make believe
Reason finding no concrete purchase in alone
There is no saying
For whatever speech might be
Doesn't change a thing
Just dark muttering
Forlorn
As the weight upon the soul now borne
The world, indifferent, has no cause to pause
It knows no pain that naws
I know the broken end of things
The hollowness of truth that rings
A blackness knelling
The soot, the ash, the char of...
#loneliness
385 reads
8 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 8:06am
22nd Feb 2025 8:06am
sleep
i can't sleep,
i can't sleep at all
after he left,
i changed the place
but i can't sleep,
i changed the bed sheet
but i can't sleep,
i changed the pillow but
i can't sleep,
n now i have stopped sleeping,
and i can't sleep...
n i realized on a night
there was
NO SLEEP
in the bed,
ONLY BECAUSE,,,
i was in his embrace,
N that's why I was able to sleep,
it was the warm scent of his body
that mesmerized me
and that's why i was able to sleep,
sleep was not hidden anywhere, ...
i can't sleep at all
after he left,
i changed the place
but i can't sleep,
i changed the bed sheet
but i can't sleep,
i changed the pillow but
i can't sleep,
n now i have stopped sleeping,
and i can't sleep...
n i realized on a night
there was
NO SLEEP
in the bed,
ONLY BECAUSE,,,
i was in his embrace,
N that's why I was able to sleep,
it was the warm scent of his body
that mesmerized me
and that's why i was able to sleep,
sleep was not hidden anywhere, ...
#loneliness
#sadness
#sex
120 reads
26 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
18th Dec 2022 11:42am
18th Dec 2022 11:42am
"tWitch" so real, so scary...
A million dollar smile
always ready
to move to the groove
no worries at all
shinning bright
flying high
getting by
on the outside
struggling inside
dark places
no one sees
my disease
the hurt
the fight
every day and every night
somewhere, someone
struggles with something ♥
RIP
always ready
to move to the groove
no worries at all
shinning bright
flying high
getting by
on the outside
struggling inside
dark places
no one sees
my disease
the hurt
the fight
every day and every night
somewhere, someone
struggles with something ♥
RIP
#sadness
#loneliness
#fear
264 reads
8 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
10th Nov 2023 1:34am
10th Nov 2023 1:34am
and so loud
yes, I was lazy, but also scared
working in the factory, everything and everyone seemed so hard
to remember it now
working in the factory, everything and everyone seemed so hard
to remember it now
#loneliness
116 reads
0 Comments
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