Poems About Loneliness by Top Critiquers
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 8:45pm
15th Apr 2025 8:45pm
Swallowed Me Whole
I tried to feel something
I loved her & she loved me
I don't know what happened
Everything was going well
Then all of a sudden, I got cold like there was a stranger next to me
I tried to get rid of the feeling but it swallowed me
She asked me what my problem was and how she can help
She was right next to me and it sounded like she was from another planet
I almost forgot her name
I still don't understand it
I was in love with her and then in a flash, I couldn't think of a single reason that I should be with her
I left her that night...
I loved her & she loved me
I don't know what happened
Everything was going well
Then all of a sudden, I got cold like there was a stranger next to me
I tried to get rid of the feeling but it swallowed me
She asked me what my problem was and how she can help
She was right next to me and it sounded like she was from another planet
I almost forgot her name
I still don't understand it
I was in love with her and then in a flash, I couldn't think of a single reason that I should be with her
I left her that night...
#confusion
#emptiness
#FeelingLost
#loneliness
#love
102 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 3:48am
21st Nov 2024 3:48am
sincere
loneliness emits a certain keen
if you're listening you will hear it
an emptiness that gnaws at the soul
indifferent to my own pain
it sometimes rises with pangs of ache
and I am taken aback
doubled over with pain
my heart's sorrow clearly seen
hidden deep within, I swallow it down
regretful emotion, I don't want you to see me this way
it hurts my pride to know you get to me
salvation in a hugs sometimes that's all it takes
a smile, to keep those uneasy feelings at bay
tender emotion, when I can express...
if you're listening you will hear it
an emptiness that gnaws at the soul
indifferent to my own pain
it sometimes rises with pangs of ache
and I am taken aback
doubled over with pain
my heart's sorrow clearly seen
hidden deep within, I swallow it down
regretful emotion, I don't want you to see me this way
it hurts my pride to know you get to me
salvation in a hugs sometimes that's all it takes
a smile, to keep those uneasy feelings at bay
tender emotion, when I can express...
#emptiness
#loneliness
#love
171 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 3:26am
5th Apr 2025 3:26am
Water Over Rocks
Sometimes we find ourselves involved in creating, the wrong kind of a relationship, that will eventually create an environment of despair, and loneliness with emptyness. But yet it's not a situation that you can make it right when it has been wrong. Sometimes a relationship is like water over to rocks running smoothly like water over glass. YET it's appears as thought everything was fine, but yet behind close doors 🚪 As Hell has no fury like the feelings of a lost love, due to deception filled with anger and hatred and self destruction. For the worst thing you can do to someone, is...
#despair
#emptiness
#hurt
#loneliness
#suicide
113 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
12th Dec 2020 8:18am
12th Dec 2020 8:18am
WHEN I AM PARTED
When I am parted from my guy,
I maintain my orgasmic high,
kneeling like nude inverted Y,
by pleasuring between my thigh,
raising many a pant and sigh
with eyes raised as if to the sky.
To my lower lips I apply
my finger tips externally,
gradually internally,
wetting hand as I liquefy,
a desert place no longer dry.
Incantingly your name I cry.
I maintain my orgasmic high,
kneeling like nude inverted Y,
by pleasuring between my thigh,
raising many a pant and sigh
with eyes raised as if to the sky.
To my lower lips I apply
my finger tips externally,
gradually internally,
wetting hand as I liquefy,
a desert place no longer dry.
Incantingly your name I cry.
#loneliness
#erotic
#rhyming
469 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 7:26pm
9th Mar 2025 7:26pm
The Lonliness
The loneliness
It grabs at my heart
The loneliness
An affair from the start
The loneliness
You pulled me in
The loneliness
I'm your broken sin
The loneliness
I hope and pray
The loneliness
You made me pay
Chorus
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
Never knew how to be strong
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
I'm no hero till I'm gone
You took me in
You gave me a pen
You showed me your bed
You gave me head
You fed me your food ...
It grabs at my heart
The loneliness
An affair from the start
The loneliness
You pulled me in
The loneliness
I'm your broken sin
The loneliness
I hope and pray
The loneliness
You made me pay
Chorus
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
Never knew how to be strong
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
I'm no hero till I'm gone
You took me in
You gave me a pen
You showed me your bed
You gave me head
You fed me your food ...
#loneliness
#lyrics
#WritingPoetry
221 reads
33 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 1:03am
4th Mar 2025 1:03am
Fading Away Our Love (collab with Vision of Insanity)
I knew the end
Before it has started
A cold wind
Freezes my heart
And the pain tears us apart
Always weeping
inside my chest
I had to tell him
I couldn't string this along
Our two hearts were once one
Now only emptiness
I call home
Our time will fade
The end of all today
A blackened sun
Shines my next day
As the stars come out
I want to be with you
But the next day
Realization shows through
We were no good together
You know this to be true
Nothing harder ...
Before it has started
A cold wind
Freezes my heart
And the pain tears us apart
Always weeping
inside my chest
I had to tell him
I couldn't string this along
Our two hearts were once one
Now only emptiness
I call home
Our time will fade
The end of all today
A blackened sun
Shines my next day
As the stars come out
I want to be with you
But the next day
Realization shows through
We were no good together
You know this to be true
Nothing harder ...
#despair
#grief
#loneliness
199 reads
26 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 6:44pm
26th Mar 2024 6:44pm
chilled bones
the wind came calling today
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
#sadness
#loneliness
231 reads
8 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Apr 2018 10:44pm
11th Apr 2018 10:44pm
darkness doesn't need stars or a spark to highlight itself
gently shrinks the twilight's brimming eyes
to a bokeh of starry diamonds in fluffiness
flows from the frontally stared nothings
to the unfocusingly glanced sideways
in some subtleties
how easy it is for you
to shed this love
and wear on
those fading shades
at such rudity precision and pace
that even shames a chameleon
how whorish you try make me feel
from your roughened tongue
that's dismembered
from lively arterial strings
since unremembered times
as you spell black and white...
to a bokeh of starry diamonds in fluffiness
flows from the frontally stared nothings
to the unfocusingly glanced sideways
in some subtleties
how easy it is for you
to shed this love
and wear on
those fading shades
at such rudity precision and pace
that even shames a chameleon
how whorish you try make me feel
from your roughened tongue
that's dismembered
from lively arterial strings
since unremembered times
as you spell black and white...
#loneliness
#rejection
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#SelfReflection
600 reads
3 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
15th Mar 2025 2:00pm
15th Mar 2025 2:00pm
My Bones
"Sleep" hits me
deep in my core
brings me chills
and moves me
makes me tear
up surrender to
their poetic vibe
carried by their
lyrics & voices
i feel the ache
i need to sleep
it's been a week
afraid of what's
down there of
the hurt inside
and i can't hide
i need serenity
some quietness
the anxiety rises
i feel the hits in the
silence of my soul &
the marrow of my bones
deep in my core
brings me chills
and moves me
makes me tear
up surrender to
their poetic vibe
carried by their
lyrics & voices
i feel the ache
i need to sleep
it's been a week
afraid of what's
down there of
the hurt inside
and i can't hide
i need serenity
some quietness
the anxiety rises
i feel the hits in the
silence of my soul &
the marrow of my bones
#loneliness
#sleep
251 reads
14 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 5:41pm
19th Oct 2024 5:41pm
Why?
When I see you cry,
I see an ocean
in your eyes,
drowning you from inside.
A tempest raging;
scarlet scarring your skies...
Heat of your pain
like a thick fog
damping your sight...
A silent scream
"O god why..."
I see an ocean
in your eyes,
drowning you from inside.
A tempest raging;
scarlet scarring your skies...
Heat of your pain
like a thick fog
damping your sight...
A silent scream
"O god why..."
#despair
#LifeStruggles
#loneliness #SelfReflection
#loneliness #SelfReflection
249 reads
16 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
11th Jul 2022 6:30am
11th Jul 2022 6:30am
It Appears In The Pattern Of Fibonacci, Isosceles triangles and tangents
when winter comes baring its cold teeth
I seek warmth
the hazy sky reflects grey depths
that sit just behind my eyes
it seems to trigger a migration
I started
with mathematics that has
rational answers
but I think Dostoyevsky said it best
when he said man was not a piano key
I try to find stars behind the clouds
galaxies and imagination
we all have to believe
with faith
because if you can’t believe
how can you realise your dreams
know what’s tangible
I get lost in my...
I seek warmth
the hazy sky reflects grey depths
that sit just behind my eyes
it seems to trigger a migration
I started
with mathematics that has
rational answers
but I think Dostoyevsky said it best
when he said man was not a piano key
I try to find stars behind the clouds
galaxies and imagination
we all have to believe
with faith
because if you can’t believe
how can you realise your dreams
know what’s tangible
I get lost in my...
#regret
#loneliness
#confusion
274 reads
8 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 5:38am
26th Mar 2025 5:38am
This Old Mechanical Heart
A song comes on
Memories are sparked that were once lost to time
Wondering where my adolescence went
Bound by the bonds of a cruel fate’s design…
A glance leads to curiosity
When her eyes gaze closer at me in the dim light
The device ticks away behind a glass door on my chest
This old mechanical heart is wound every night
How old are you? She asks
I grin remembering my youth back in 1849
Too old, I reply with a smile, gazing into her eyes
A secret I carry with me after such a long time
The wrinkles on my...
Memories are sparked that were once lost to time
Wondering where my adolescence went
Bound by the bonds of a cruel fate’s design…
A glance leads to curiosity
When her eyes gaze closer at me in the dim light
The device ticks away behind a glass door on my chest
This old mechanical heart is wound every night
How old are you? She asks
I grin remembering my youth back in 1849
Too old, I reply with a smile, gazing into her eyes
A secret I carry with me after such a long time
The wrinkles on my...
#Fanfiction
#loneliness
#love
#scifi
#steampunk
93 reads
7 Comments
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