Poems About Loneliness Seeking Honest Critique
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
shelly_crash
Shekhar
Shekhar
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 3:01pm
18th Feb 2025 3:01pm
Ode to the Faded
Behold the shaken mercy and rising misery
Unfold the dark past filled with secret trickery
Sold by emotions, devotions, and unfulfilling savory
Owned by cold, gold, and fate that is silvery
The world's full of unjust, sick lust and worships knavery
so hold on tightly to the choices, inner voices, and aching bravery
Exposed to an acquisitive life everything is fake and glittery
Road to the bliss; a lipless kiss— a distant scenery!
Unfold the dark past filled with secret trickery
Sold by emotions, devotions, and unfulfilling savory
Owned by cold, gold, and fate that is silvery
The world's full of unjust, sick lust and worships knavery
so hold on tightly to the choices, inner voices, and aching bravery
Exposed to an acquisitive life everything is fake and glittery
Road to the bliss; a lipless kiss— a distant scenery!
#emptiness
#loneliness
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Mercurial
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 9:04am
15th Feb 2025 9:04am
Suicide Train
Glued to soft and fine grass,
View of the sky like fine glass,
Greenery whispering without doubt,
A plan to suck my soul out.
Days and nights passed,
Sun became cold and harsh,
Grass with hay’s complexion,
Treated He with bitter compassion.
Soft touch of the wind,
Swifting over my skin,
Grass became stickier,
Deceit became comfier.
Boredom knocked on my head,
Welcomed an old friend,
Bantered about the sun,
Fatigued with its sweet burn.
Excitement knocked on my nerves,
Welcomed with joy...
View of the sky like fine glass,
Greenery whispering without doubt,
A plan to suck my soul out.
Days and nights passed,
Sun became cold and harsh,
Grass with hay’s complexion,
Treated He with bitter compassion.
Soft touch of the wind,
Swifting over my skin,
Grass became stickier,
Deceit became comfier.
Boredom knocked on my head,
Welcomed an old friend,
Bantered about the sun,
Fatigued with its sweet burn.
Excitement knocked on my nerves,
Welcomed with joy...
#bittersweet
#boredom
#confusion #loneliness
#confusion #loneliness
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 1:33pm
14th Feb 2025 1:33pm
Like Water
There's a lot of fish in the sea.
Most of them don't notice me.
I'm on my back, counting sheep.
Slowly sinking into the deep.
I see a fluffy storm front form.
I see Olympus where Zeus was born.
I love the way thunder vibrates like porn.
When I'm rushing through a maze of corn.
I strip down, let my feelings go.
My energy deep dives far below.
The humpbacks offer a glory hole.
A bubble bath for all the hoes.
A reach around for emotional pain.
The storm is here, wrapped in rain.
Don't tread on me after the...
Most of them don't notice me.
I'm on my back, counting sheep.
Slowly sinking into the deep.
I see a fluffy storm front form.
I see Olympus where Zeus was born.
I love the way thunder vibrates like porn.
When I'm rushing through a maze of corn.
I strip down, let my feelings go.
My energy deep dives far below.
The humpbacks offer a glory hole.
A bubble bath for all the hoes.
A reach around for emotional pain.
The storm is here, wrapped in rain.
Don't tread on me after the...
#loneliness
81 reads
4 Comments
ChloesPoeticInk
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 12:20pm
14th Feb 2025 12:20pm
Goodbye
Rest In Peace to Myself.
The final call has been made, and with it, a quiet goodbye to what's been.
The Last salute offered to the memories, the moments, and the pieces of me that once lived here.
It's time to let go, to rest in the stillness that follows the end of a chapter.
The journey has closed, and the silence speaks now, but in that silence, there's peace.
The past is no longer mine to carry. It's time to rest.
Goodbye.
The final call has been made, and with it, a quiet goodbye to what's been.
The Last salute offered to the memories, the moments, and the pieces of me that once lived here.
It's time to let go, to rest in the stillness that follows the end of a chapter.
The journey has closed, and the silence speaks now, but in that silence, there's peace.
The past is no longer mine to carry. It's time to rest.
Goodbye.
#bittersweet
#despair
#loneliness
#regret
#sadness
89 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 2:07pm
12th Feb 2025 2:07pm
Everything is just the same
Time flies by, so rather quick
Everyday repeats itself, week after week
Relentless agony, when nothing awaits
Maybe one day life will smile at you
Stuck in the middle without progression
Only you can guide yourself out of there
You can create another world, all in your mind
In solitude you will find
in your head everything is better than you'll ever be
Life is seldom fair
It leads you to despair
After every uphill
You will descend
You can hide from your fears
to avoid all the pain
but never get to...
Everyday repeats itself, week after week
Relentless agony, when nothing awaits
Maybe one day life will smile at you
Stuck in the middle without progression
Only you can guide yourself out of there
You can create another world, all in your mind
In solitude you will find
in your head everything is better than you'll ever be
Life is seldom fair
It leads you to despair
After every uphill
You will descend
You can hide from your fears
to avoid all the pain
but never get to...
#depression
#grief
#hurt
#loneliness
#sadness
112 reads
10 Comments
COOPCAT
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 12:33pm
9th Feb 2025 12:33pm
WINTERS TEETH
Winter's teeth.
The wind is a harp
Of resin and timber.
I watch from the shore
Listening to your absence,
Soundless.
The wind is a harp
Of resin and timber.
I watch from the shore
Listening to your absence,
Soundless.
#loneliness
86 reads
2 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 4:53am
8th Feb 2025 4:53am
Our Commitment
The sensation of her fingertips
Gently touching my hardened face
The taste of her tender lips
Memories I can't erase
Soft touch all over my skin
Her body I to explored
Her passion burned from within
As her key opened my hearts door
So many moments that we shared
Over time our love deeply grew
Emotional boundaries that we dared
My deepest secrets only she knew
We tried new things together
Expanding experiences from our past
Forging our relationship to last forever
Everything about us was meant to...
Gently touching my hardened face
The taste of her tender lips
Memories I can't erase
Soft touch all over my skin
Her body I to explored
Her passion burned from within
As her key opened my hearts door
So many moments that we shared
Over time our love deeply grew
Emotional boundaries that we dared
My deepest secrets only she knew
We tried new things together
Expanding experiences from our past
Forging our relationship to last forever
Everything about us was meant to...
#heartbroken
#loneliness
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0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
Dear friend
Dear friend
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
#anger
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
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NoQuarter
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:50am
7th Feb 2025 3:50am
Silence That Devours
i knock but the door does not open
i speak my name into the dark
but even the echoes refuse to answer
the walls should hold memories
but they are empty
hollow bones of a place that never wanted me
the mirror stands waiting
but i am not in it
i press my hand to the glass
expecting warmth
but it is only cold only blank
only a reflection of nothing
somewhere a door swings open to nothing
somewhere my shadow walks without me
i thought if i waited long enough
the silence would break
that...
i speak my name into the dark
but even the echoes refuse to answer
the walls should hold memories
but they are empty
hollow bones of a place that never wanted me
the mirror stands waiting
but i am not in it
i press my hand to the glass
expecting warmth
but it is only cold only blank
only a reflection of nothing
somewhere a door swings open to nothing
somewhere my shadow walks without me
i thought if i waited long enough
the silence would break
that...
#disappointment
#loneliness
#sadness
126 reads
2 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 1:26pm
6th Feb 2025 1:26pm
Wallow
Nowhere is my place.
Escape evades my chase.
Shunned by lifes embrace.
Imbue with hindrance grace.
Consumed by peace I rot.
Exhume long hidden plot.
Solitude sought where it's not.
Accursed sanctum death forgot.
Self became a state of disassembling.
Formless integration of dismembering.
A gorgeous desecration of resembling.
Hopelessly fixate on not remembering.
Aimless unknown into wanderer strays.
Time lost in the wake of endless daze.
Necrosis grows so gorge on what decays.
Another phantom slipping...
Escape evades my chase.
Shunned by lifes embrace.
Imbue with hindrance grace.
Consumed by peace I rot.
Exhume long hidden plot.
Solitude sought where it's not.
Accursed sanctum death forgot.
Self became a state of disassembling.
Formless integration of dismembering.
A gorgeous desecration of resembling.
Hopelessly fixate on not remembering.
Aimless unknown into wanderer strays.
Time lost in the wake of endless daze.
Necrosis grows so gorge on what decays.
Another phantom slipping...
#depression
#drugs
#loneliness
72 reads
2 Comments
BlackBox
Black Box
Black Box
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 00:59am
6th Feb 2025 00:59am
This Feeling
I think of you often
Fondly, softly
Quietly in my prison of a mind
During my days and my nights
As I sit typing these small mementos
I’m reminded of how close we became
Your laughter, your beauty
The never ending conversations
This feeling of emptiness, loneliness
This somber sadness grips my soul
Clutching with intent to crush what’s left
Mangled and mashed into dust
Tears well up ready to burst forth
A briny, saline waterfall crashing into the depths of my heart
Inducing an anxious panic overriding all...
Fondly, softly
Quietly in my prison of a mind
During my days and my nights
As I sit typing these small mementos
I’m reminded of how close we became
Your laughter, your beauty
The never ending conversations
This feeling of emptiness, loneliness
This somber sadness grips my soul
Clutching with intent to crush what’s left
Mangled and mashed into dust
Tears well up ready to burst forth
A briny, saline waterfall crashing into the depths of my heart
Inducing an anxious panic overriding all...
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#sadness
#UnrequitedLove
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Nvmb
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 10:58pm
5th Feb 2025 10:58pm
The words to save me
I have never belonged.
Not to a place,
not to a moment,
not to anyone’s arms for long enough
to believe I was ever meant to be held.
I have stood in rooms full of people
and felt like a ghost,
like a name no one would remember,
like a shadow cast too faint
to ever matter.
I have loved before,
or at least, I thought I did.
I have given every piece of myself
to hands that only knew
how to let go.
I have been kissed by lips
that whispered promises
like smoke in the dark,
disappearing the moment...
Not to a place,
not to a moment,
not to anyone’s arms for long enough
to believe I was ever meant to be held.
I have stood in rooms full of people
and felt like a ghost,
like a name no one would remember,
like a shadow cast too faint
to ever matter.
I have loved before,
or at least, I thought I did.
I have given every piece of myself
to hands that only knew
how to let go.
I have been kissed by lips
that whispered promises
like smoke in the dark,
disappearing the moment...
#bittersweet
#hope
#loneliness #love
#loneliness #love
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