Poems About Kindness by Top Critiquers
#kindness
Poems about kindness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 11:06am
18th Dec 2024 11:06am
The Friendly Abductor
Get in the car please
No not in the seat, in the trunk
Oh I'm terribly sorry
Where's my manners
I'll open that for you
Comfy now?
Good
I'll move those items over for you
Yes, that's right, that's a sledgehammer, a shovel, an axe and a hunting knife
Don't worry, once we arrive to our destination,
I will bludgeon you, chop you up and throw you into a shallow grave
I promise, you won't feel a thing
Enjoy the ride
SLAM!
No not in the seat, in the trunk
Oh I'm terribly sorry
Where's my manners
I'll open that for you
Comfy now?
Good
I'll move those items over for you
Yes, that's right, that's a sledgehammer, a shovel, an axe and a hunting knife
Don't worry, once we arrive to our destination,
I will bludgeon you, chop you up and throw you into a shallow grave
I promise, you won't feel a thing
Enjoy the ride
SLAM!
#kindness
#murder
#parody
75 reads
14 Comments
Her
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 10:08am
20th Dec 2024 10:08am
The Leader of the Pack (Styxian)
He probably doesn’t think he is
I can see him laughing
Even though I’ve never met him
The unofficial leader of the pack
His poems, poetic masterpieces
The rare times he writes erotica?
It’s like nobody’s business
Even I blush
A sensual and romantic journey
We’re witness to “the DUP romance”
I’m not alone when I say
Newbies with a thirst for greatness
Have looked to him for approval
While sweating for a visit
Like I said, he’s probably laughing
Blushing maybe?
I wonder if he knows this?
The man of steel ...
I can see him laughing
Even though I’ve never met him
The unofficial leader of the pack
His poems, poetic masterpieces
The rare times he writes erotica?
It’s like nobody’s business
Even I blush
A sensual and romantic journey
We’re witness to “the DUP romance”
I’m not alone when I say
Newbies with a thirst for greatness
Have looked to him for approval
While sweating for a visit
Like I said, he’s probably laughing
Blushing maybe?
I wonder if he knows this?
The man of steel ...
#admiration
#kindness
#respect
177 reads
13 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 10:19pm
30th Nov 2024 10:19pm
Their Beginning
Beginnings
Styxian
I woke up this mornin’
And I did not know what to expect
The sun was shinin’
The sky was blue
But in my heart something is comin’
Just did not know what yet
Adelphina
I am inspired and the words
Will not be contained.
DUP here I come
I will bleed for you all the joy and the pain
Styxian
What did I just read?
Did she just strike a match?
A poem about yellow jackets
I have to comment.
Something clever
Let me think on that ...
Styxian
I woke up this mornin’
And I did not know what to expect
The sun was shinin’
The sky was blue
But in my heart something is comin’
Just did not know what yet
Adelphina
I am inspired and the words
Will not be contained.
DUP here I come
I will bleed for you all the joy and the pain
Styxian
What did I just read?
Did she just strike a match?
A poem about yellow jackets
I have to comment.
Something clever
Let me think on that ...
#happiness
#kindness
#love
306 reads
31 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:10pm
Yesterday 8:10pm
A SINGING HEART
In the ebb and flow of life
love runs hot and cold;
It'll chase you when you're young
and neglect you when you're old.
I do not know WHY
love acts in such mysterious ways.
but it's the challenges you gladly accept
and the price you'll gladly pay.
So do not be upset or surprised
when love starts to do its thing;
treat it like you want to be treated,
and it'll give your heart and new song to sing.
Meet me at the Kissing Place and our
hearts will dance and sing a duet.
love runs hot and cold;
It'll chase you when you're young
and neglect you when you're old.
I do not know WHY
love acts in such mysterious ways.
but it's the challenges you gladly accept
and the price you'll gladly pay.
So do not be upset or surprised
when love starts to do its thing;
treat it like you want to be treated,
and it'll give your heart and new song to sing.
Meet me at the Kissing Place and our
hearts will dance and sing a duet.
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness
#motivational
41 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 11:54pm
15th Oct 2024 11:54pm
Sanctuary of Desire
That indescribable place
It has no name
When all the fear has been conquered
Remains the desire core
You've arrived ...
My heart bathes in you
It has no name
When all the fear has been conquered
Remains the desire core
You've arrived ...
My heart bathes in you
#emotions
#kindness
#lover
165 reads
26 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 10:37pm
12th Sep 2024 10:37pm
the acts of the souless
your careless handling of my soul
bruised redemption another piece of my soul gone
sadness collects who she can
the delicate parts of my feelings recess to the shadows
forlorn they don't know how to pretend they love
they are cherry blossoms in spring
falling from the trees to never blossom
the wind carried their fragile petals away
what might have been, fell to the ground in dismay
brightly colored pain
true in my forlorn state
if you get a smile from me
it will warm your soul
there are those...
bruised redemption another piece of my soul gone
sadness collects who she can
the delicate parts of my feelings recess to the shadows
forlorn they don't know how to pretend they love
they are cherry blossoms in spring
falling from the trees to never blossom
the wind carried their fragile petals away
what might have been, fell to the ground in dismay
brightly colored pain
true in my forlorn state
if you get a smile from me
it will warm your soul
there are those...
#heartbroken
#honesty
#kindness #support
#kindness #support
123 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
10th Aug 2018 8:44pm
10th Aug 2018 8:44pm
SAFE SEX ADVICE FOR A NIGHT OUT
If you anticipate a 'shag',
A one-off sex encounter,
Take a condom, in your handbag,
You can offer to your mounter.
They are not made to stop the fun
But protect your sexual health
When you're together, one to one.
Condom him, not condemn yourself.
To see you take the condom out
Shows your availability
And intent to keep safe, no doubt,
From an unwanted STD.
Think this, offering protection
Can come across as loving,
Make sex an act of affection
Rather than a 'wham bam' shoving. ...
A one-off sex encounter,
Take a condom, in your handbag,
You can offer to your mounter.
They are not made to stop the fun
But protect your sexual health
When you're together, one to one.
Condom him, not condemn yourself.
To see you take the condom out
Shows your availability
And intent to keep safe, no doubt,
From an unwanted STD.
Think this, offering protection
Can come across as loving,
Make sex an act of affection
Rather than a 'wham bam' shoving. ...
#kindness
#sex
#rhyming
650 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 2:17pm
5th Jan 2025 2:17pm
Through this life
They elders say that through this one life, that you will have encounters that we may never truly understand. FOR each one will be different, than the one before it 🤔 For sure each one will have lessons, that we must learn to navigate through the next, chapter of our lives. FOR nothing in particular in life comes easy 🤨 as it will have challenges that could make you or break you, down to the point of just giving up to fight against the deepness, of that damage of the truth of your heart and spiritual soul.🙏 Your own health of your will being or it could be your mistake...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
54 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 6:19am
8th Jan 2025 6:19am
CPR
I love you so much
I want to rip your tortured heart
from your body
place it next to mine
and bring us both back to life.
I want to rip your tortured heart
from your body
place it next to mine
and bring us both back to life.
#emotions
#kindness
#love
75 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
21st Jul 2022 11:12am
21st Jul 2022 11:12am
Masculinity
you made me
feel
delicate
for a moment
not fragile,
delicate.
the difference
haunts me
feel
delicate
for a moment
not fragile,
delicate.
the difference
haunts me
#kindness
#minimalist
#obsession
519 reads
5 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
19th Aug 2023 7:17pm
19th Aug 2023 7:17pm
You
Reassuring and safe,
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
#kindness
#friendship
#confessional
#support
#wisdom
940 reads
42 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2023 12:55pm
23rd Nov 2023 12:55pm
mask off...naked eyes
I used to believe I was a master at masking
no one could read beneath my eyes
but I've recently revised my opinion
people will see what you want them to see
what they want to see
because removing the mask from view
...makes them uncomfortable
...it only leads to questions
possible expenditures of compassion
once they finally learn the answers
and let's face it...
we're all operating at maximum
not much left...
for the pain we don't have the capacity to acknowledge
if it's not our own...
...somebody else's problem...
no one could read beneath my eyes
but I've recently revised my opinion
people will see what you want them to see
what they want to see
because removing the mask from view
...makes them uncomfortable
...it only leads to questions
possible expenditures of compassion
once they finally learn the answers
and let's face it...
we're all operating at maximum
not much left...
for the pain we don't have the capacity to acknowledge
if it's not our own...
...somebody else's problem...
#kindness
#strength
#humankind #respect
#humankind #respect
160 reads
6 Comments
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