Poems About Kindness Seeking Honest Critique
#kindness
Poems about kindness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Spring On March
On march flowers incense the air
daisies create a fine poetic flair
and with ease, Nature will please
the fair time, for a vernal breeze
It is spring;the souls glean joy
while Juliets, look redly coy
their Romeos swell with love
serenade songs to their doves
Like birds, bees spin around
drones give tempting sound
in the flowering sunny orchard
grapes hung heavy, in vines
I take a light stroll uphill
faint wind seems just still
with whiff from the west
when lights fade in sunset
And March is...
daisies create a fine poetic flair
and with ease, Nature will please
the fair time, for a vernal breeze
It is spring;the souls glean joy
while Juliets, look redly coy
their Romeos swell with love
serenade songs to their doves
Like birds, bees spin around
drones give tempting sound
in the flowering sunny orchard
grapes hung heavy, in vines
I take a light stroll uphill
faint wind seems just still
with whiff from the west
when lights fade in sunset
And March is...
#kindness
#motivational
#inspirational
#admiration
#emotions
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4 Comments
Helping people cross the road
Helping people cross the road
Strategy 1.
Employ subliminal messaging via all media outlets so people want to cross to the right side. For the few who don’t, encourage social policing, passive aggressive coercion and public ridicule.
Strategy 2.
Make it beneficial to cross to the right side, financially and socially.
Strategy 3.
Make it financially hard and unpopular to be on the wrong side.
Strategy 4.
Surround the agertaters with agents, acting as friends,...
Strategy 1.
Employ subliminal messaging via all media outlets so people want to cross to the right side. For the few who don’t, encourage social policing, passive aggressive coercion and public ridicule.
Strategy 2.
Make it beneficial to cross to the right side, financially and socially.
Strategy 3.
Make it financially hard and unpopular to be on the wrong side.
Strategy 4.
Surround the agertaters with agents, acting as friends,...
#kindness
#manipulation
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4 Comments
A Blessing If You Would Learn
The heart when young, so blissful and knows no sin
the mind's ego knows no bounds, its strength within
The earth, sound and steep, its fruits the soul entice
the taste of spice great! to every slice a price
The eyes rain and the mouth would savour its pain
when dry is your land, sow no seed, reap no grain
Valiant steps fear no edge nor the burn of sands
wish die for the glory of walking God's Lands
Specks of dust make souls blind can turn lives to dust
just a spark of deep Faith heralds paths to trust
Ascend and...
the mind's ego knows no bounds, its strength within
The earth, sound and steep, its fruits the soul entice
the taste of spice great! to every slice a price
The eyes rain and the mouth would savour its pain
when dry is your land, sow no seed, reap no grain
Valiant steps fear no edge nor the burn of sands
wish die for the glory of walking God's Lands
Specks of dust make souls blind can turn lives to dust
just a spark of deep Faith heralds paths to trust
Ascend and...
#kindness
#WritingPoetry
#LifeCycle #gratitude
#LifeCycle #gratitude
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6 Comments
Flash Love
I give you my soul… daily
You take it and massage it
You know when I’m hurting
Then you say the perfect things
The words that allow me to come back..
To you
Even stronger than before
I live for that
You take it and massage it
You know when I’m hurting
Then you say the perfect things
The words that allow me to come back..
To you
Even stronger than before
I live for that
#love
#kindness
#spiritual
#LifeAsAWriter
#StreamOfConsciousness
148 reads
34 Comments
The Words Rider
Not here to impress
Giving poetic address
Its just about stress
Words still meaningless
Truth is always stiff
Its words are brief
They cause pain and grief.
With no buts, and no ifs
Weigh what you say
For you will have to pay
Truth is not a play
With honesty start your day
Don't build on false pretence
Give your self a human sense
Your ego is the worst instance
I don't befriend chameleons
Even if a poetic reptilian
Or...
Giving poetic address
Its just about stress
Words still meaningless
Truth is always stiff
Its words are brief
They cause pain and grief.
With no buts, and no ifs
Weigh what you say
For you will have to pay
Truth is not a play
With honesty start your day
Don't build on false pretence
Give your self a human sense
Your ego is the worst instance
I don't befriend chameleons
Even if a poetic reptilian
Or...
#kindness
#motivational
#TimeHeals #emotions
#TimeHeals #emotions
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0 Comments
YOUR MIND AND HEART AND SOUL
Have you ever had the opportunity to get involved, with someone who was a breath of fresh air. For lets be real for a moment when we realize, that what you want and need is someone who comes into your life. NOT pimpin but coming into your life. With real confidence and consistency and real communications and a real commitment. Not coming in your life not doing what they say, only the opposite plain and simple NOTHING!!! FOR WE MUST ASK THYSELF IF IM NOT GETTING, WHAT I PUT OUT AND GET THE SAME OLDE THINGS, THAT I HAVE BEEN MANY TIMES GETTING BEFORE. Then what is the point if it ain't real...
#love
#kindness
#strength
#respect
#emotions
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a delicate balance
Talent is God-given: be humble. Fame is man-given: be grateful.
Conceit is self-given: be careful."―John Wooden
all's not fair in love and war;
each may leave a deadly scar.
even Christ, upon the Cross,
suffered, for His love, great loss.
tread with care in right and wrong;
you may sing a different song,
if the confidence you boast
finds you sleeping at your post.
let loud laughter and soft tears
never find you in arrears;
celebrate with those who joy,
shed a tear with those who cry....
Conceit is self-given: be careful."―John Wooden
all's not fair in love and war;
each may leave a deadly scar.
even Christ, upon the Cross,
suffered, for His love, great loss.
tread with care in right and wrong;
you may sing a different song,
if the confidence you boast
finds you sleeping at your post.
let loud laughter and soft tears
never find you in arrears;
celebrate with those who joy,
shed a tear with those who cry....
#kindness
#fate
#LifeChangingMoment
#wisdom
#choices
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0 Comments
MY BLOSSOMING HEART
Your soft arms sweetly hold it
And strong hands gently mold it
You've taken it from very lonely
To make it your one and only
Beating faster with each touch
Its thumping now, so very much.
So very more than it has ever been
You have brought it to life again
Bringing the rhythm back slowly
Like a planted seed you grow me.
Into a flower that is in full bloom
Out from my darkened ugly doom
Is now gone and proudly showing
The love inside that keeps growing
All from your tender loving care
Now I'm giving with much to share....
And strong hands gently mold it
You've taken it from very lonely
To make it your one and only
Beating faster with each touch
Its thumping now, so very much.
So very more than it has ever been
You have brought it to life again
Bringing the rhythm back slowly
Like a planted seed you grow me.
Into a flower that is in full bloom
Out from my darkened ugly doom
Is now gone and proudly showing
The love inside that keeps growing
All from your tender loving care
Now I'm giving with much to share....
#happiness
#kindness
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
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8 Comments
From Nature With Love
i was never fated to rot inside the book
rather would i stroll in the fields of wheat
golden seas swaying in the warm Summer's heat.
sailing the fields with cicada and silent brooks
nor the one gaping into an empty void
time is poesy gleaned from far afield
or even crying out my pains on inky sheet
wasting health, glued by a silver shield
i have known Pan, crook, and so many a hook
and yellow books, decked with fine history
fairy tales, tailed with the fairest endings
and sad stories, starting with romantic...
rather would i stroll in the fields of wheat
golden seas swaying in the warm Summer's heat.
sailing the fields with cicada and silent brooks
nor the one gaping into an empty void
time is poesy gleaned from far afield
or even crying out my pains on inky sheet
wasting health, glued by a silver shield
i have known Pan, crook, and so many a hook
and yellow books, decked with fine history
fairy tales, tailed with the fairest endings
and sad stories, starting with romantic...
#kindness
#strength
#hope
#admiration
#emotions
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7 Comments
Immortal
If I could only write to you
The severity of my sentiment
If characters were enough
To describe your character
Of kindness, strength and perseverance
If I could only sing to you
I would compare you to the spring
You have awaken dead parts of me
Gracefully revived through gentil strides
And once more I hear the birds melody
If I could only sketch
Your fire agate eyes
And the diagonal lines leading down
To your tender lips I long to kiss
I’d etch you into every corner of the earth
If I could...
The severity of my sentiment
If characters were enough
To describe your character
Of kindness, strength and perseverance
If I could only sing to you
I would compare you to the spring
You have awaken dead parts of me
Gracefully revived through gentil strides
And once more I hear the birds melody
If I could only sketch
Your fire agate eyes
And the diagonal lines leading down
To your tender lips I long to kiss
I’d etch you into every corner of the earth
If I could...
#happiness
#love
#kindness
#relationships
#romantic
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4 Comments
Poetic Delight
poetic delight
when the sun shines, then i delight
from behind the hills,floods my sight
and the fragrant perfume of the dawn
smells like blissful Eden's incense
i can't but be in an ecstatic height
when the sunset throws a fading light
when tall Eucalyptus stand in the twilight
guardian of sweet dreams of the night
where the beaten pathways bend
up around the steep rocky mound
and the far off small town surges
into my view, then like a child i smile
when delightful bee for juicy...
when the sun shines, then i delight
from behind the hills,floods my sight
and the fragrant perfume of the dawn
smells like blissful Eden's incense
i can't but be in an ecstatic height
when the sunset throws a fading light
when tall Eucalyptus stand in the twilight
guardian of sweet dreams of the night
where the beaten pathways bend
up around the steep rocky mound
and the far off small town surges
into my view, then like a child i smile
when delightful bee for juicy...
#happiness
#kindness
#inspirational
#gratitude
#emotions
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0 Comments
From Earth With Poesy
Nature, Earth and poetry
Glory to the tree, splendor of the mountain....
Energy of the wind and of the sea
Solid is the rock on the mountain's top
Fluent, the waters when they stream like poetry....
carrying all the human cares, sins and pains ashore...
Nature is worth the words shed on her land
full of warmth that breaths humanity and spirituality
Patience rhymes with obedience, with kindness....
Lore comes to you when you go outdoors, feel the flora,
probe the distant expansion of earth, not inside a mundane agora,
when they...
Glory to the tree, splendor of the mountain....
Energy of the wind and of the sea
Solid is the rock on the mountain's top
Fluent, the waters when they stream like poetry....
carrying all the human cares, sins and pains ashore...
Nature is worth the words shed on her land
full of warmth that breaths humanity and spirituality
Patience rhymes with obedience, with kindness....
Lore comes to you when you go outdoors, feel the flora,
probe the distant expansion of earth, not inside a mundane agora,
when they...
#kindness
#strength
#motivational
#gratitude
#emotions
40 reads
4 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Kindness Seeking Honest Critique