Poems About Kindness Seeking Honest Critique
#kindness
Poems about kindness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 10:02pm
18th Mar 2025 10:02pm
A blanket of stars
Here I am again upon another sleepless night, trying desperately to close my eyes, 👁️👁️ as I toss and turn from one side to another, again upon another sleepless night. For sure I would give my thoughts of love, as I would give anything to be able to fall asleep for just one night. 🥱 For sure that is when we have beautiful dreams, of having a real love to keep us warm up under the blanket of the stars, 🌠 that covers us together as one. For they say that we all have a need and want, to be able to share our thoughts on love and happiness and...
#admiration
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
#respect
91 reads
2 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 11:07pm
13th Mar 2025 11:07pm
Are We Lost? Goodbye everybody huge thank you to everyone
Are we lost?
There is no path to follow
There used to be a path
I swear there was a path once
Lost in the trees
There was a point to life
But we've lost it
Some one has hold of the point
And they are prodding us with it
Prodding those who have lost the point
There's a bad case of viral ignorance
Infectious
Burning across the land
Like a forest fire
Burning ignorance
Freezing ignorance
Chopping ignorance
Murderous ignorance
Burning burning...
There is no path to follow
There used to be a path
I swear there was a path once
Lost in the trees
There was a point to life
But we've lost it
Some one has hold of the point
And they are prodding us with it
Prodding those who have lost the point
There's a bad case of viral ignorance
Infectious
Burning across the land
Like a forest fire
Burning ignorance
Freezing ignorance
Chopping ignorance
Murderous ignorance
Burning burning...
#inequality
#kindness
#violence
205 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 10:43pm
11th Mar 2025 10:43pm
The Doors - The End - 1967
Knowing things always get to an end
I felt like putting a record to play loud:
Art - Supernatural Fairy Tales - 1967
Knowing things always get all loud
I felt like putting a record to an end:
Spooky Tooth - Sunshine Help Me - 1968
I felt like putting a record
I felt like putting
I felt...
I felt like putting a record to play loud:
Art - Supernatural Fairy Tales - 1967
Knowing things always get all loud
I felt like putting a record to an end:
Spooky Tooth - Sunshine Help Me - 1968
I felt like putting a record
I felt like putting
I felt...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#happiness
#kindness #music
#kindness #music
144 reads
9 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 2:33pm
7th Mar 2025 2:33pm
FREE
It's so warm
so free
so special
with the sun
beating down on me
no hate
no anger
no hurt...
it's here
the sun
the air
the free
it's so warm
so free
so special
it's here
it's now
it's you
it's me
so free
so special
with the sun
beating down on me
no hate
no anger
no hurt...
it's here
the sun
the air
the free
it's so warm
so free
so special
it's here
it's now
it's you
it's me
#hope
#kindness
#love
87 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 2:09pm
25th Feb 2025 2:09pm
To Have Two Lovers In Front Of An Audience
Would you please
do us a favor and
look the other way? It really
is not a good idea to have two naked
lovers do their humping act in front
of an audience. Don't
you agree?
do us a favor and
look the other way? It really
is not a good idea to have two naked
lovers do their humping act in front
of an audience. Don't
you agree?
#dialogue
#fiction
#kindness
#lover
#sex
157 reads
0 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 00:28am
23rd Feb 2025 00:28am
Kind gestures
Swallowed by your gaze,
You smile brightly
Your kind gestures awoken me
My lips curl into a smile that reached my eyes
You made me feel alive
You smile brightly
Your kind gestures awoken me
My lips curl into a smile that reached my eyes
You made me feel alive
#admiration
#kindness
80 reads
2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 10:56am
21st Feb 2025 10:56am
Heart Of Gold
What makes a heart of gold?
It doesn't matter are you young or old.
Whether you are shy or bold.
Maybe it's when you don't believe all the stories you are told.
And when kindness ,patience through you unfold.
A golden heart is a rare sight.
You can find it often within the guiding light.
Walking through the forest at night.
You catch a shiny gleam.
Gold and bright,like once upon a dream.
A heart of gold is not always what it seem.
Because you can't see it on the outside.
You have to peek through.
Through...
It doesn't matter are you young or old.
Whether you are shy or bold.
Maybe it's when you don't believe all the stories you are told.
And when kindness ,patience through you unfold.
A golden heart is a rare sight.
You can find it often within the guiding light.
Walking through the forest at night.
You catch a shiny gleam.
Gold and bright,like once upon a dream.
A heart of gold is not always what it seem.
Because you can't see it on the outside.
You have to peek through.
Through...
#happiness
#hope
#kindness
#motivational
#uplifting
106 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 5:40am
21st Feb 2025 5:40am
AFTER HOURS
When was the last time we were in that moment of existence, in the heat of the moments of an sensual healing in between, the sheets subconsciously lost in ecstasy. For sure we are still going through, the process of the heat of the night 🔥 Recreating a beautiful time together as one. For it's after hours when we can really close the 🚪door, and let's get closer then close
reaching into the very deepness of each other's soul. For sure let's go to the deepness of the truth, of our feelings and the innocences of our emotions reaching beneath.The surface under our skins as we...
reaching into the very deepness of each other's soul. For sure let's go to the deepness of the truth, of our feelings and the innocences of our emotions reaching beneath.The surface under our skins as we...
#emotional
#kindness
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
151 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 00:08am
19th Feb 2025 00:08am
Get back to what's important
Let's get back to love honor and respect that is what's important, to clean up the mess of the truth of the nonsense and negativity.
THAT almost destroyed us mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. For it's necessary to truly understand, that we have the ability and power to eliminate, the deepness of the hurt and pain. THAT has been inflicted upon our soul, and tapping into our own mind. THOUGHTS but yet you still have to believe in your faith which can't no one take that away from you. For sure what is more important to you than putting love back in your life and world...
THAT almost destroyed us mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. For it's necessary to truly understand, that we have the ability and power to eliminate, the deepness of the hurt and pain. THAT has been inflicted upon our soul, and tapping into our own mind. THOUGHTS but yet you still have to believe in your faith which can't no one take that away from you. For sure what is more important to you than putting love back in your life and world...
#courage
#kindness
#love
#respect
#strength
95 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 1:11am
18th Feb 2025 1:11am
karmic wheel
unyielding pain has me meditating, entering an altered state
my third eye blinks open and I see the shadow world around me
many denizens balancing the Karmic wheel
my heart is broken and I wonder why
inquiring, the denizens only stop for moment, to answer my question
it you heart is to break it will be broken, because it is ordered
your understanding of this powerful emotion is in it's infancy
please consider your actions in regards to you self only
the wheel will remain balanced
then they point out over a desert city
where...
my third eye blinks open and I see the shadow world around me
many denizens balancing the Karmic wheel
my heart is broken and I wonder why
inquiring, the denizens only stop for moment, to answer my question
it you heart is to break it will be broken, because it is ordered
your understanding of this powerful emotion is in it's infancy
please consider your actions in regards to you self only
the wheel will remain balanced
then they point out over a desert city
where...
#karma
#kindness
#love
#morality
#spiritual
145 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 3:55pm
14th Feb 2025 3:55pm
Valentines Day
Here we are upon another day but what makes this so special is a blessing in disguise for so many people's lives 🙏 for it's a a day that we show your affection and love man to woman and woman to man. For sure it doesn't matter if you are alone, give thyself the same kind of love no matter how you wish to spend this day, treating yourself with kindness and love for you deserve it too have a blessed Valentine's Day. For sure for those that have someone to share this day with you, deserve to have a blessed and beautiful Valentine's Day, with love and honor and happiness and respect for...
#admiration
#kindness
#love
#respect
#ValentinesDay
76 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 1:03pm
14th Feb 2025 1:03pm
Happy Valentine'd Day
To share this only on one day is a shame
They get all the profits, don’t like the game
That is not what we need
We are individuals, do you not agree?
Ok, ok, love cannot conquer all
But it conquers some loneliness after all
I said no more XOXO’s once before
I take it back you can have it all
Happy Valentine's Day, DUP
They get all the profits, don’t like the game
That is not what we need
We are individuals, do you not agree?
Ok, ok, love cannot conquer all
But it conquers some loneliness after all
I said no more XOXO’s once before
I take it back you can have it all
Happy Valentine's Day, DUP
#admiration
#friendship
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
187 reads
23 Comments
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