Poems About Kindness Seeking Honest Critique
#kindness
Poems about kindness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 9:43pm
28th Jan 2025 9:43pm
Leave what's not yours
To a man or woman leave a man or woman, that's not yours alone 🤔 I say that to get you to think and understand, that there is a true differences, between a good woman and a good man. WHO believes in having, a strong relationship with someone, who doesn't have to cheat or lie for they have a real relationship with honesty and truth and trust. For sure it's a subconscious thoughts on your part, to be able to share your thoughts and insight and spiritual soul with love and honor and respect.
#courage
#kindness
#love
#respect
#strength
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0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 11:08am
27th Jan 2025 11:08am
Give
Love can be a hug
love can be a smile
love can be a word
laugh,talk,look
be,care,know
hug,sit,silence
love can be all things
Love can B you ♥
love can be a smile
love can be a word
laugh,talk,look
be,care,know
hug,sit,silence
love can be all things
Love can B you ♥
#kindness
#love
53 reads
2 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 3:42am
26th Jan 2025 3:42am
In Praise of Oral Affections
How wondrous it is to stand
In the light of her gaze,
To receive her childlike smiles
That are not given to others,
But for me alone.
It is intimate, this unlikely mingling
Of two people.
Her mouth—gentle, expressive,
Strong, wet, and warm.
The center of her place
For speech and laughter
Accepting me completely.
That a woman surrenders the port
Where the breaths of life have passed
Since her birth is such a sweet gift.
How delightful it is to give a woman
My trust...
In the light of her gaze,
To receive her childlike smiles
That are not given to others,
But for me alone.
It is intimate, this unlikely mingling
Of two people.
Her mouth—gentle, expressive,
Strong, wet, and warm.
The center of her place
For speech and laughter
Accepting me completely.
That a woman surrenders the port
Where the breaths of life have passed
Since her birth is such a sweet gift.
How delightful it is to give a woman
My trust...
#kindness
#love
#sex
216 reads
3 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 2:30pm
20th Jan 2025 2:30pm
Lit Candle
I held a candle lit
For you to follow
You came close in fear of it
Scared to reveal what’s in the shadow
You ran to the light
Blew it out
Diminishing the spark
No one can see who you are
In the dark
You shed lonely tears
Not wanting to be held
Condemning all who want to hold you
Sending them to hell
Striking a match to light the wick
See all the tears shed behind it
The light that is held is an illusion you know
No one can be this good not even the white is...
For you to follow
You came close in fear of it
Scared to reveal what’s in the shadow
You ran to the light
Blew it out
Diminishing the spark
No one can see who you are
In the dark
You shed lonely tears
Not wanting to be held
Condemning all who want to hold you
Sending them to hell
Striking a match to light the wick
See all the tears shed behind it
The light that is held is an illusion you know
No one can be this good not even the white is...
#forgiveness
#kindness
125 reads
12 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 3:31pm
18th Jan 2025 3:31pm
I Am A Human In Life
I am a human in Life
Willing to walk
What life grants of paths
With a heart full of chambers
Of huge space
Allowing each smile
Each tear
To set their load on my face.
I believe in the knight
A visitor of dreams
A dweller of nights
Dreams that roam a world
Of their own
No room for a danger zone
No words would contain
Their very tone..
I am a human in Life
I have faith
In what my soul could feel
Despite a thousand miles
And the grief I could see
Behind the smiles
And...
Willing to walk
What life grants of paths
With a heart full of chambers
Of huge space
Allowing each smile
Each tear
To set their load on my face.
I believe in the knight
A visitor of dreams
A dweller of nights
Dreams that roam a world
Of their own
No room for a danger zone
No words would contain
Their very tone..
I am a human in Life
I have faith
In what my soul could feel
Despite a thousand miles
And the grief I could see
Behind the smiles
And...
#admiration
#hope
#kindness
#love
#strength
85 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 2:03pm
17th Jan 2025 2:03pm
Keep it alive
Love, in its essence, is an eternal flame
burning bright through the corridors of time.
In the quiet moments it whispers secrets
shared between souls like the rustling of leaves.
It is the meeting of hearts, unspoken understanding.
A gentle touch that speaks louder than words.
Love transcends the physical, reaching into the depths
binding us together in an unbreakable bond.
It is the comfort in the storm, a refuge.
The silent strength that holds us when we falter.
In its presence we find our truest selves.
Reflected...
burning bright through the corridors of time.
In the quiet moments it whispers secrets
shared between souls like the rustling of leaves.
It is the meeting of hearts, unspoken understanding.
A gentle touch that speaks louder than words.
Love transcends the physical, reaching into the depths
binding us together in an unbreakable bond.
It is the comfort in the storm, a refuge.
The silent strength that holds us when we falter.
In its presence we find our truest selves.
Reflected...
#art
#dance
#happiness
#kindness
#love
136 reads
8 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 6:31pm
16th Jan 2025 6:31pm
Love Rots
Love, my friends, is overrated.
Be compassionate, have empathy instead.
And not always regard yourself
as Tristan or Isolde,
the Lochinvar who came
to overturn the bridal feast.
Kindness,
when done with earnestness
and not as trickery,
is what disperses clouds
to give the withered crops fresh light.
Where love can be selfish, needful,
a passion rushing forth
as much to solder cracks
in one's own soul.
Love pressed the pillow down
on Desdemona's face,
or so Othello might have claimed.
Love...
Be compassionate, have empathy instead.
And not always regard yourself
as Tristan or Isolde,
the Lochinvar who came
to overturn the bridal feast.
Kindness,
when done with earnestness
and not as trickery,
is what disperses clouds
to give the withered crops fresh light.
Where love can be selfish, needful,
a passion rushing forth
as much to solder cracks
in one's own soul.
Love pressed the pillow down
on Desdemona's face,
or so Othello might have claimed.
Love...
#culture
#kindness
#love #mythology
#love #mythology
92 reads
3 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 6:30pm
16th Jan 2025 6:30pm
An Inspired Rose
Shall we guilty claim
A rose, as her beauties rain?
When suppressing her prickles
Floods of her blood
Bedew her roots
Absorbed in grace.
Shall we banish beaming scents
Of a rose rising in light?
When flourishing wonders
And streams of delight
Flowing into human veins
Avidly captured beyond words.
Shall we a beholder blame
For admiring in shining light a rose?
When many a reason
Grant noble human hands
To hold an evergreen rose
Rejoicing at divine creation.
Shall we a rose deny
A...
A rose, as her beauties rain?
When suppressing her prickles
Floods of her blood
Bedew her roots
Absorbed in grace.
Shall we banish beaming scents
Of a rose rising in light?
When flourishing wonders
And streams of delight
Flowing into human veins
Avidly captured beyond words.
Shall we a beholder blame
For admiring in shining light a rose?
When many a reason
Grant noble human hands
To hold an evergreen rose
Rejoicing at divine creation.
Shall we a rose deny
A...
#admiration
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#strength
66 reads
4 Comments
doriann_barrere
Dorian
Dorian
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:45am
12th Jan 2025 2:45am
Midnite's Scent
O Marri’onne, ethereal wraith,
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#kindness
#love
99 reads
1 Comment
Listentoact
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
Unlike words
Unlike words actions tend to stand in stature like the presence you give Is the statue to live by and be a monument of your self to pose for the test of time,
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
#courage
#gratitude
#kindness #redemption
#kindness #redemption
73 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 2:17pm
5th Jan 2025 2:17pm
Through this life
They elders say that through this one life, that you will have encounters that we may never truly understand. FOR each one will be different, than the one before it 🤔 For sure each one will have lessons, that we must learn to navigate through the next, chapter of our lives. FOR nothing in particular in life comes easy 🤨 as it will have challenges that could make you or break you, down to the point of just giving up to fight against the deepness, of that damage of the truth of your heart and spiritual soul.🙏 Your own health of your will being or it could be your mistake...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
70 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 4:18am
4th Jan 2025 4:18am
The Weight of Care ...
Don’t we ever grow weary of this act,
This endless caring, this fragile art?
Caring how we feel, our hearts laid bare,
Caring how others feel, their burdens to share.
Yet seldom do we pause, seldom do we see,
That we don’t feel like them, nor they like we.
It seem loadsome and heavy this thing, to carry the we,
To make their troubles ours, their joy an act
Of mutual faith, though rarely do we see
An arm extended back, a mirrored art.
It tires the soul, this caring we share,
This weight we bear, our hearts threadbare.
why...
This endless caring, this fragile art?
Caring how we feel, our hearts laid bare,
Caring how others feel, their burdens to share.
Yet seldom do we pause, seldom do we see,
That we don’t feel like them, nor they like we.
It seem loadsome and heavy this thing, to carry the we,
To make their troubles ours, their joy an act
Of mutual faith, though rarely do we see
An arm extended back, a mirrored art.
It tires the soul, this caring we share,
This weight we bear, our hearts threadbare.
why...
#kindness
#LifeChangingMoment
#love
65 reads
10 Comments
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