Poems About Kindness Seeking Honest Critique
#kindness
Poems about kindness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Do you believe in your faith
For sure in this life we all will go through somethings, that will be out of our own control, but it doesn't mean that, you give up on hope and stop ignoring the power of prayers. For sure it might be a crippling disease like cancer, or it maybe a broken heart filled with hurt and pain, or it could be a illness that affects you mentally and emotionally and physically. For it could be tears for a love one that have gone away. But regardless what ever you do don't stop believing in your faith and beliefs, for sure he will never leave you nor forsake you, as you are one of GOD ALMIGHTY CHILDREN....
#courage
#hope
#kindness
#love
#redemption
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In your hands I give to you
Here we are still not really truly understanding, that it's true that no one is sent, to you by chance or accident. For I give to you my love and support and affection. For I give to you my love and support and encouragement, just because we have a connection that we can build, together a special bond. For I give to you my commitment and show you my consistency and strength of my perseverance to you. For I give to you from my hands to yours my undying love with respect and honor and trust with happiness. For sure we have history of time well spent, just getting to know each other ๐...
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#love
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Personal Thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words โ๏ธ What I would like to know from thyself own personal experiences, do you remember when you had a disagreement with someone, that we would just pick up the phone and dial the number. ๐ค Yeah I know that times have changed over the years ๐ with this new wave of communications. BUT yet do you remember what it use to be like to just talk, about what went wrong with just talking to someone. ๐ก Now we just go on a web site and voice our thoughts and opinions, to the whole world ๐ about our situations in...
#honesty
#kindness
#relationships
#respect
#support
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One last thought
I fell in love with words written on paper
when i was really young I spent grade school at Freeman
this is the south end of flint mi
lived around a not yet de-segregated community
it was a lie about those people, or those people taking over the world
that always comes down to the same every time
so here i am deciding whether i publish anymore of these babies of mine
anyways i found Stevie Wonder in the isles of my schools' library
and Woody Guthrie he was up there also books about dogs
books about boys and dogs books about fucking everything...
when i was really young I spent grade school at Freeman
this is the south end of flint mi
lived around a not yet de-segregated community
it was a lie about those people, or those people taking over the world
that always comes down to the same every time
so here i am deciding whether i publish anymore of these babies of mine
anyways i found Stevie Wonder in the isles of my schools' library
and Woody Guthrie he was up there also books about dogs
books about boys and dogs books about fucking everything...
#kindness
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Balm
Hands brush, sparks ignite.
Eyes meet, a world set ablaze.
Love's bold flame takes flight.
Fingers intertouch.
Two hearts beating as but one.
Love's quiet tempest.
Under moonlit skies.
Whispers melt into the night.
Their souls so divine.
Breath meets tender breath.
A universe forged from touch.
Eternal embrace.
Storms rage in their eyes.
Yet in their arms, calm takes hold.
Loveโs boundless haven.
Eyes meet, a world set ablaze.
Love's bold flame takes flight.
Fingers intertouch.
Two hearts beating as but one.
Love's quiet tempest.
Under moonlit skies.
Whispers melt into the night.
Their souls so divine.
Breath meets tender breath.
A universe forged from touch.
Eternal embrace.
Storms rage in their eyes.
Yet in their arms, calm takes hold.
Loveโs boundless haven.
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#kindness
#love
#passion
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The Chain (D.U.P)
Sign off, full stop
The final stage
Those dreams and ink
Down on page
The final stage
Those dreams and ink
Down on page
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
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The Magic Box
I carry with me on any occasion
A box full of love and compassion
Like a cloud of fairy dust I blow
Loving kindness wherever I go
A friendly smile to a stranger
Help for an animal in danger
Comforting words for the grieving
Without compassion I'm not leaving
Today I left my box under a tree
Wishing that the finder will feel free
To take a big piece of the magic of love
In the box is for everybody enough
Kindness is contagious and I hope
The virus of love goes around the globe
And causes a massive...
A box full of love and compassion
Like a cloud of fairy dust I blow
Loving kindness wherever I go
A friendly smile to a stranger
Help for an animal in danger
Comforting words for the grieving
Without compassion I'm not leaving
Today I left my box under a tree
Wishing that the finder will feel free
To take a big piece of the magic of love
In the box is for everybody enough
Kindness is contagious and I hope
The virus of love goes around the globe
And causes a massive...
#kindness
#love
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Empathy
What the world needs more of lately is empathy
Empathy for those who are struggling or have less
For those that are facing troubles and adversity
For those who have been ostracized and suppressed
Empathy for people with mental health struggles
Ranging from depression, anxiety and PTSD
Empathy for those with neurodivergent challenges
Varying from dyslexia, autism to ADHD
Empathy for those who are displaced and homeless
Understanding mental illness and addiction
Considering the effects of public policy in society
People who are...
Empathy for those who are struggling or have less
For those that are facing troubles and adversity
For those who have been ostracized and suppressed
Empathy for people with mental health struggles
Ranging from depression, anxiety and PTSD
Empathy for those with neurodivergent challenges
Varying from dyslexia, autism to ADHD
Empathy for those who are displaced and homeless
Understanding mental illness and addiction
Considering the effects of public policy in society
People who are...
#humankind
#kindness
#SelfWorth
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Whispers of dreams
From the deepness of the heart it will always be the strongest desire for the heart, ๐ for sure even when we are far away the deepness of the mind and heart, will have a connection that runs deeper than deep. For the love can be felt like the beat of the drums, from a far away place that will be embracing your thoughts, and insight and feelings. Beyond your wildest dreams pass your imagination to dream, about the deepness of the love that you two shared as one. For it's like the silent whispers, that only lovers can hear as it relates to echos, from the deepness of your mind and heart...
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#kindness
#love
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A blanket of stars
Here I am again upon another sleepless night, trying desperately to close my eyes, ๐๏ธ๐๏ธ as I toss and turn from one side to another, again upon another sleepless night. For sure I would give my thoughts of love, as I would give anything to be able to fall asleep for just one night. ๐ฅฑ For sure that is when we have beautiful dreams, of having a real love to keep us warm up under the blanket of the stars, ๐ that covers us together as one. For they say that we all have a need and want, to be able to share our thoughts on love and happiness and...
#admiration
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
#respect
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Are We Lost? Goodbye everybody huge thank you to everyone
Are we lost?
There is no path to follow
There used to be a path
I swear there was a path once
Lost in the trees
There was a point to life
But we've lost it
Some one has hold of the point
And they are prodding us with it
Prodding those who have lost the point
There's a bad case of viral ignorance
Infectious
Burning across the land
Like a forest fire
Burning ignorance
Freezing ignorance
Chopping ignorance
Murderous ignorance
Burning burning...
There is no path to follow
There used to be a path
I swear there was a path once
Lost in the trees
There was a point to life
But we've lost it
Some one has hold of the point
And they are prodding us with it
Prodding those who have lost the point
There's a bad case of viral ignorance
Infectious
Burning across the land
Like a forest fire
Burning ignorance
Freezing ignorance
Chopping ignorance
Murderous ignorance
Burning burning...
#inequality
#kindness
#violence
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The Doors - The End - 1967
Knowing things always get to an end
I felt like putting a record to play loud:
Art - Supernatural Fairy Tales - 1967
Knowing things always get all loud
I felt like putting a record to an end:
Spooky Tooth - Sunshine Help Me - 1968
I felt like putting a record
I felt like putting
I felt...
I felt like putting a record to play loud:
Art - Supernatural Fairy Tales - 1967
Knowing things always get all loud
I felt like putting a record to an end:
Spooky Tooth - Sunshine Help Me - 1968
I felt like putting a record
I felt like putting
I felt...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#happiness
#kindness #music
#kindness #music
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DU Poetry : Poems About Kindness Seeking Honest Critique