Poems About Heroin Seeking Honest Critique
#heroin
Poems about heroin seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2020 4:09am
23rd Feb 2020 4:09am
Wm. S.Burroughs jr's Directorial Debut
pink little shiv stuck through brownish
rib bones, Twisted to grindmeat, sliced upward
to allow viscera to fall muddied & doped for it's interest,
Very old fella in stands off. fondling a cat, bemoaning
"jeezuschist. We done it wit more humanity and sympathy
the week between Nagasaki and Hiroshima! You asses have
no empathy, no sympatico, too much time on yr hands. Get
th fuck the outta here before i call the blowjoberrin cops'n'yr
toothless faggot grandparents. (looking fort the betterlife life).
Get out, now!"
no wonder...
rib bones, Twisted to grindmeat, sliced upward
to allow viscera to fall muddied & doped for it's interest,
Very old fella in stands off. fondling a cat, bemoaning
"jeezuschist. We done it wit more humanity and sympathy
the week between Nagasaki and Hiroshima! You asses have
no empathy, no sympatico, too much time on yr hands. Get
th fuck the outta here before i call the blowjoberrin cops'n'yr
toothless faggot grandparents. (looking fort the betterlife life).
Get out, now!"
no wonder...
#death
#drugs
#heroin #LifeAsAWriter
#heroin #LifeAsAWriter
531 reads
4 Comments
Bottomsln
Poem Published
27th Jan 2020 7:00am
27th Jan 2020 7:00am
My friend heroin
MY FRIEND HEROIN
we used to hang out everyday
I did whatever you would say
the days you weren't there, I was blue
you even killed my best friend too
that didn't really matter to me
thought you loved me unconditionally
with you I could run & hide
& put all of my feelings aside
the pain I thought you took away
left me with shame everyday
didn't talk to my friends anymore
don't really even know what for
I swore it was you I hated
left my life so complicated
there's no...
we used to hang out everyday
I did whatever you would say
the days you weren't there, I was blue
you even killed my best friend too
that didn't really matter to me
thought you loved me unconditionally
with you I could run & hide
& put all of my feelings aside
the pain I thought you took away
left me with shame everyday
didn't talk to my friends anymore
don't really even know what for
I swore it was you I hated
left my life so complicated
there's no...
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction #temptation
#addiction #temptation
934 reads
2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
16th Jan 2020 7:43am
16th Jan 2020 7:43am
Such Thinking Is So Damn Obvious (You Can Do Better Than That)
now.....broken houses
fall
down for the
rubble play
ground of the children
of
all ages
all stages,
so we rage at stars and suck in
such fashion(s) never in style, (though stylish
any-time).
(Please feel free to insert inane judgement at any time....
fall
down for the
rubble play
ground of the children
of
all ages
all stages,
so we rage at stars and suck in
such fashion(s) never in style, (though stylish
any-time).
(Please feel free to insert inane judgement at any time....
#death
#God
#money
#heroin
#monsters
593 reads
2 Comments
nickbar
Nick Bartek
Nick Bartek
Poem Published
25th Dec 2019 5:45am
25th Dec 2019 5:45am
Watching Dreams Dissolve
Bask in Filth
Behind eyelids
Name your price
Betray senses
Scarred for life
Charred remains
Awoke dead
Left in the blaze
Milk my soul
None to give
When you’re gone
Can’t seem to live
Years disappear
Beneath my skin
Blow out my brains
Won’t let you in
Behind eyelids
Name your price
Betray senses
Scarred for life
Charred remains
Awoke dead
Left in the blaze
Milk my soul
None to give
When you’re gone
Can’t seem to live
Years disappear
Beneath my skin
Blow out my brains
Won’t let you in
#drugs
#heroin
791 reads
4 Comments
thathustla
Poem Published
19th Dec 2019 2:13am
19th Dec 2019 2:13am
Relapse
Why am I so afraid of sleep?
So few know the secrets I keep
Nightmares wake me up with screams
Terror few will ever know it seems
I can’t be open with my thoughts
So I tie myself in so many knots
Crystal methamphetamine?
Better than the things I dream
I would rather stay awake for days
Eyes open... sitting alone in such a haze
The only drug that keeps me sane
Is heroin as it runs through my veins
The only peace I really know
Is when I’m lost in her warm glow
I’ll only buy a point I say
That doesn’t...
So few know the secrets I keep
Nightmares wake me up with screams
Terror few will ever know it seems
I can’t be open with my thoughts
So I tie myself in so many knots
Crystal methamphetamine?
Better than the things I dream
I would rather stay awake for days
Eyes open... sitting alone in such a haze
The only drug that keeps me sane
Is heroin as it runs through my veins
The only peace I really know
Is when I’m lost in her warm glow
I’ll only buy a point I say
That doesn’t...
#heartbroken
#drugs
#heroin
#shame
#addiction
1040 reads
3 Comments
alisvolat82
Poem Published
10th Dec 2019 2:33pm
10th Dec 2019 2:33pm
Parade of Darkening Days
#heroin
#addiction
552 reads
1 Comment
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
12th Nov 2019 5:01pm
12th Nov 2019 5:01pm
EveryOne Needs A Forwarding Address
Kamakazi rider, our honorable
suicide chump.
Blows the clouds away
just in time tea.
Junk planes on final mission.
It ain't the way it was planned,
dear Tokyo Rose.
When Fat Man and Little Boy
changed the destiny
the karma
the...
suicide chump.
Blows the clouds away
just in time tea.
Junk planes on final mission.
It ain't the way it was planned,
dear Tokyo Rose.
When Fat Man and Little Boy
changed the destiny
the karma
the...
#spiritual
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
#meditation
492 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
4th Nov 2019 8:03pm
4th Nov 2019 8:03pm
the next episode
an eighties child...a chic mod
listening to Prince and Bowie
watching ET. Pretty in Pink, The Breakfast Club, the Goonies
preppies sporting Izods and members-only jackets
dreaming of living in Malibu and going to Pepperdine college
Reaganomics and D.A.R.E or drug abuse resistance education
it didn't work on me
I had a wild streak
I dare to try heroin at seventeen
I dare to investigate the seedy side of life first hand
by age eighteen I was on methadone
fighting a hardcore addiction
that...
listening to Prince and Bowie
watching ET. Pretty in Pink, The Breakfast Club, the Goonies
preppies sporting Izods and members-only jackets
dreaming of living in Malibu and going to Pepperdine college
Reaganomics and D.A.R.E or drug abuse resistance education
it didn't work on me
I had a wild streak
I dare to try heroin at seventeen
I dare to investigate the seedy side of life first hand
by age eighteen I was on methadone
fighting a hardcore addiction
that...
#love
#death
#illness
#heroin
#addiction
755 reads
30 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
4th Nov 2019 6:18pm
4th Nov 2019 6:18pm
Third Eye Blind (instrumental by Mors)
#depression
#LifeStruggles
#heroin
#addiction
#MentalHealth
1042 reads
4 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
1st Nov 2019 6:16pm
1st Nov 2019 6:16pm
Day 2
18 months of recovery and I am back on day 2
A 3-day heroin binge, what else do you expect an addict to do?
Every day sober is a miracle and I had many,
but complacency snuck in and my old ways came back out
Let go, let it out, never seemed forever loud
of the voice in my head screaming to vacuum up the powder
I cannot give up this, for to quit is to die
what's inside the abyss, lonely nights of vice and sin
There is no starting over, that illusion has been smashed
I walk a path not on my own, but only some god may know...
A 3-day heroin binge, what else do you expect an addict to do?
Every day sober is a miracle and I had many,
but complacency snuck in and my old ways came back out
Let go, let it out, never seemed forever loud
of the voice in my head screaming to vacuum up the powder
I cannot give up this, for to quit is to die
what's inside the abyss, lonely nights of vice and sin
There is no starting over, that illusion has been smashed
I walk a path not on my own, but only some god may know...
#LifeStruggles
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
#SelfDiscovery
834 reads
4 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
30th Aug 2019 8:44pm
30th Aug 2019 8:44pm
Song of The Sumptian
Running the Mill
for a Spill of the Swill.
Make of it what you Will,
and i'll be your Buffalo Bill ,
(honey'doll)
And so this song occurred in me brain,
it recalls of an undies skidmark stain.
Human'life bogged down in folly's domain .
(As goes la provenzia, so goes the urbane).
I say, ol'chum, have you e'er did see,
A sight so sightly as a knuckle'head tree?
Or perhaps standing at the precipice be,
Waggin' me dickie-bird for one last pee.
ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ...
for a Spill of the Swill.
Make of it what you Will,
and i'll be your Buffalo Bill ,
(honey'doll)
And so this song occurred in me brain,
it recalls of an undies skidmark stain.
Human'life bogged down in folly's domain .
(As goes la provenzia, so goes the urbane).
I say, ol'chum, have you e'er did see,
A sight so sightly as a knuckle'head tree?
Or perhaps standing at the precipice be,
Waggin' me dickie-bird for one last pee.
ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ...
#happiness
#storm
#heroin
#food
#hurt
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4 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
25th Aug 2019 2:50pm
25th Aug 2019 2:50pm
Wit All Due Respect To Ram Dass (Dr. Richard Alpert)
Did you see
me
anywhere
today? I'm stuck in some damn Here and Now.
Can't see behind. Can't see ahead.
Here and Now. Such an inglorious position
for any such human, wouldn't you say?
I know you don't want to be here. We wouldnt want to
miss yoga class over something
so fckn silly.
Lost in the Here and Now ! Damn.
( What paradoxymoronic cunundrum !)
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ...
me
anywhere
today? I'm stuck in some damn Here and Now.
Can't see behind. Can't see ahead.
Here and Now. Such an inglorious position
for any such human, wouldn't you say?
I know you don't want to be here. We wouldnt want to
miss yoga class over something
so fckn silly.
Lost in the Here and Now ! Damn.
( What paradoxymoronic cunundrum !)
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ...
#alcohol
#drugs
#heroin
#redemption
#admiration
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5 Comments
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