Heroic by Top Critiquers Poems
#heroic
heroic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
10th Jan 2021 4:39am
10th Jan 2021 4:39am
legned proof
Past the field and smoke-filled highway he can see the late afternoon sky peeking its way through the smog and chaos caused by his arrival as he waits. Deep set eyes, standing tall, a mid length tan-duster on his back, rugged boots and a Yankees cap.
Holding a Fixation Bowie in his left hand, strapped with an AR-15 hanging off his right shoulder slightly touching his hip; he exhales a cold breath of determination and passion...
Intrigue races through his blood allowing him the power to feel; It lingers on, it shows in his face. ...
Holding a Fixation Bowie in his left hand, strapped with an AR-15 hanging off his right shoulder slightly touching his hip; he exhales a cold breath of determination and passion...
Intrigue races through his blood allowing him the power to feel; It lingers on, it shows in his face. ...
#friendship
#humankind
#heroic
568 reads
14 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
24th Oct 2017 3:40am
24th Oct 2017 3:40am
Fantasy behind pearly curtains
a visual poem
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#learning
#admiration
#heroic
1065 reads
12 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
21st Jul 2019 00:31am
21st Jul 2019 00:31am
You Double Cabbage
When did you last sleep
Mr spackered
These blue ones will knock you without
little bo peep
Get some glasses for the cider
Dude are you fucking serious
Was that a big fucking spider
what you calling me a liar
Please sir can I have some more sir
three bags full Dr black sheep
Nurse quick
two buckets of vodka
for ballance tight rope walker
Horse riders wear jodpers
What is this Richard the night stalker
Oh like no up comes the sick
There's your guts
There's you liver
There's fucking...
Mr spackered
These blue ones will knock you without
little bo peep
Get some glasses for the cider
Dude are you fucking serious
Was that a big fucking spider
what you calling me a liar
Please sir can I have some more sir
three bags full Dr black sheep
Nurse quick
two buckets of vodka
for ballance tight rope walker
Horse riders wear jodpers
What is this Richard the night stalker
Oh like no up comes the sick
There's your guts
There's you liver
There's fucking...
#drugs
#heroic
522 reads
0 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
7th Jun 2024 1:51pm
7th Jun 2024 1:51pm
True Justice (Desert Hunt)
Through the New Mexico desert night like rats they ran
Six backpack carrying illegal males accompanied by a long-haired woman,
“The weakness of the government’s border security made him 357 mad
So once again the desert hunt was on for the illegals trespassing ass,
“With his night vision on he followed the illegals as they fled
Three head shots from his LSR employed them in the land of the dead,
“The woman caught a round through the left and right knee
While another jumped down a cactus filled slope attempting to flee,
...
Six backpack carrying illegal males accompanied by a long-haired woman,
“The weakness of the government’s border security made him 357 mad
So once again the desert hunt was on for the illegals trespassing ass,
“With his night vision on he followed the illegals as they fled
Three head shots from his LSR employed them in the land of the dead,
“The woman caught a round through the left and right knee
While another jumped down a cactus filled slope attempting to flee,
...
#courage
#heroic
#strength
172 reads
4 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
6th May 2021 8:47am
6th May 2021 8:47am
Super hero
Super hero
If you could be a Super hero, which one would you be, there's so many hero's to choose from, come play this game with me
Would you be Superman, faster than the speed of light, always there to save the world, protecting what is right
What about the Dark Knight, Batman whose, secretly Bruce Wayne, no real Super powers but obviously rich and with a brain
Thor the God of Thunder, with his hammer only those worthy can lift, he flies and his so powerful, a useful hero gift
Iron man has the gadgets, he has all the high tech toys,...
If you could be a Super hero, which one would you be, there's so many hero's to choose from, come play this game with me
Would you be Superman, faster than the speed of light, always there to save the world, protecting what is right
What about the Dark Knight, Batman whose, secretly Bruce Wayne, no real Super powers but obviously rich and with a brain
Thor the God of Thunder, with his hammer only those worthy can lift, he flies and his so powerful, a useful hero gift
Iron man has the gadgets, he has all the high tech toys,...
#love
#dreams
#heroic
522 reads
4 Comments
Lamjhnsn1
Poem Published
18th Jul 2024 8:46pm
18th Jul 2024 8:46pm
Black Ale
I love your natal skin;
So rich, I drink you in.
You're poured liquid black, but a solidified creamy brown;
You feel so good going down
I just bask in your detail,
You're intoxicating,
Black Ale.
Some call you bitter, I've heard some say tart,
I though, understand your complexities, so to me, I'll say you're art.
You taste of citrus, pine, & of strong caramel.
I sip you slowly, to keep the effects minimal.
But, your powers are more, than your body can entail,
My intoxicating,
Black Ale.
...
So rich, I drink you in.
You're poured liquid black, but a solidified creamy brown;
You feel so good going down
I just bask in your detail,
You're intoxicating,
Black Ale.
Some call you bitter, I've heard some say tart,
I though, understand your complexities, so to me, I'll say you're art.
You taste of citrus, pine, & of strong caramel.
I sip you slowly, to keep the effects minimal.
But, your powers are more, than your body can entail,
My intoxicating,
Black Ale.
...
#dark
#heroic
#kindness
#strength
#wisdom
154 reads
6 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2022 3:47am
23rd Jul 2022 3:47am
Into the Missed
Into the Missed
There's those
whose thoughts
are blues
as dots
that never
nowhere....
no,
not again.
Those were
the ones
who,
in my memory,
were perfection,
in all directions,
forever
new.
My last look
may not be
as stellar as
the sky
that birthed me,
but
I'm the same
as ever was....
even moreso.
There's those
whose thoughts
are blues
as dots
that never
nowhere....
no,
not again.
Those were
the ones
who,
in my memory,
were perfection,
in all directions,
forever
new.
My last look
may not be
as stellar as
the sky
that birthed me,
but
I'm the same
as ever was....
even moreso.
#friendship
#humankind
#heroic
285 reads
2 Comments
michaelslove2
Poem Published
12th Jan 2024 8:06am
12th Jan 2024 8:06am
The Champion
The Champion
Through the cold, dark nights of many moons.
Through the days of the harsh, angry sun
he travels the lands where he is needed
to face the horrors from which others run.
He has faced demons,
slain monsters,
dragons and giants
bringing the innocent such pain, often death.
His mission, the champion to all in need of his aid
shall he provide until his very last breath.
Oh the princesses he has loved throughout all of his trials!
The damsels he has rescued as he has traveled these ways.
But...
Through the cold, dark nights of many moons.
Through the days of the harsh, angry sun
he travels the lands where he is needed
to face the horrors from which others run.
He has faced demons,
slain monsters,
dragons and giants
bringing the innocent such pain, often death.
His mission, the champion to all in need of his aid
shall he provide until his very last breath.
Oh the princesses he has loved throughout all of his trials!
The damsels he has rescued as he has traveled these ways.
But...
#sadness
#mythology
#heroic
198 reads
8 Comments
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