Heroic by Top Critiquers Poems
#heroic
heroic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 7:49pm
30th Nov 2024 7:49pm
Acidic Flash
Inside all war there lies conspiracy
There's nothing to believe but lies
Raging fires on the innocent
While the dead watch from the skies
They take the blind man to the killing field
To play in someone else's game
Let the lesser lands be torn apart
And bring them here to bear the shame
Acidic Flash
Burns my eyes
Acidic Flash
Buried Alive
Severed spirits hanging in the wind
Tear the truth apart from lies
A sordid effigy of past mistakes
Their heroism lost in time
They send...
There's nothing to believe but lies
Raging fires on the innocent
While the dead watch from the skies
They take the blind man to the killing field
To play in someone else's game
Let the lesser lands be torn apart
And bring them here to bear the shame
Acidic Flash
Burns my eyes
Acidic Flash
Buried Alive
Severed spirits hanging in the wind
Tear the truth apart from lies
A sordid effigy of past mistakes
Their heroism lost in time
They send...
#heroic
#lies
#satirical
#soldiers
#war
107 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd May 2021 2:07pm
2nd May 2021 2:07pm
hello freedom no more kids
#heroin
#culture
#heroic #tradition
#heroic #tradition
541 reads
3 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Mar 2021 3:45pm
10th Mar 2021 3:45pm
The Real G
Ruth was an icon, she was the real G
Bader was crusader for women’s rights
Ginsburg fought for justice and equality
Taking on battles, shining a bright light
She was a rockstar when she’d disagree
Flexing muscle - just check out her arm curls
And her dissents were very legendary
Schooling you till you clutched your pearls
Her influence enhanced our society
I think she was a badass in retrospect
Don’t believe me, read up on herstory
She truly deserves some mad respect
R.I.P. Dear Notorious R.B.G.
You are a hero...
Bader was crusader for women’s rights
Ginsburg fought for justice and equality
Taking on battles, shining a bright light
She was a rockstar when she’d disagree
Flexing muscle - just check out her arm curls
And her dissents were very legendary
Schooling you till you clutched your pearls
Her influence enhanced our society
I think she was a badass in retrospect
Don’t believe me, read up on herstory
She truly deserves some mad respect
R.I.P. Dear Notorious R.B.G.
You are a hero...
#women
#HumanRights
#feminism #heroic
#feminism #heroic
558 reads
8 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 3:29pm
23rd Mar 2025 3:29pm
~#7
https://youtu.be/zatVT5Pm9YI?feature=shared
Badass ft. Dhoni/ Anirudh Musical from Leo, 2023 Tamil film
What is He?
trying to deconstruct..
the. (ever) now’s
cricketing legend..
a cricketing alchemist
ruling our each an yellove ...
Badass ft. Dhoni/ Anirudh Musical from Leo, 2023 Tamil film
What is He?
trying to deconstruct..
the. (ever) now’s
cricketing legend..
a cricketing alchemist
ruling our each an yellove ...
#admiration
#heroic
#inspirational
#passion
#sports
117 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Jul 2022 1:54am
14th Jul 2022 1:54am
The Amorist
Men, think tonight...as you are getting laid,
"Are there any riches better than this?"
Better than anything else you are paid
Which will not support your next wooing kiss?
Well obviously the answer is no.
So why do some men value more their truck
Or polish hogs to be the best in show
Rather than making effort for a fuck
Which they'll remember to their dying day
As the finest of all possible luck?
Why not prioritize a different way
To see her more by Cupid's arrow struck
After launching from all your deepest wishes?
Cupid...
"Are there any riches better than this?"
Better than anything else you are paid
Which will not support your next wooing kiss?
Well obviously the answer is no.
So why do some men value more their truck
Or polish hogs to be the best in show
Rather than making effort for a fuck
Which they'll remember to their dying day
As the finest of all possible luck?
Why not prioritize a different way
To see her more by Cupid's arrow struck
After launching from all your deepest wishes?
Cupid...
#patience
#heroic
#wisdom #masculinity
#wisdom #masculinity
292 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 8:23pm
16th Feb 2025 8:23pm
Knights stall around the table
Mirror, mirror on the wall
Error, error and that's all
Horror, terror and a fall
Warriors attend a call
Summoning in a mall
Everyone's a pall
Holly grail ball
Stand tall
Stall
Stall
Stall
Stall
Mirror
On the wall
Warriors attend
A call before the fall
Error, error and that's all
Horror, terror and a fall
Warriors attend a call
Summoning in a mall
Everyone's a pall
Holly grail ball
Stand tall
Stall
Stall
Stall
Stall
Mirror
On the wall
Warriors attend
A call before the fall
#heroic
#mythology
#tradition #tragedy
#tradition #tragedy
102 reads
12 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
19th Sep 2018 1:28am
19th Sep 2018 1:28am
A Gentleman
is not made of riches
or material possessions
strong or perfect physique;
he's trustworthy and loyal
dedicated and dependable
honest and direct
doesn't mean he can't make mistakes
but, accepts responsibility for choices
confesses them openly, never blames
A Gentleman does not play victim
during dire circumstances
befalling his existence:
he maturely adapts--
accepts that which
he cannot change;...
or material possessions
strong or perfect physique;
he's trustworthy and loyal
dedicated and dependable
honest and direct
doesn't mean he can't make mistakes
but, accepts responsibility for choices
confesses them openly, never blames
A Gentleman does not play victim
during dire circumstances
befalling his existence:
he maturely adapts--
accepts that which
he cannot change;...
#admiration
#respect
#heroic #morality
#heroic #morality
1612 reads
31 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
29th Jul 2021 9:36am
29th Jul 2021 9:36am
Beards & Breakdowns
It always starts with a beard -
The breakdown.
After days bleed into weird -
The falling frown.
Realization behind silver
Filaments, crawling
Under the surface layer
Of the lit up mirror.
Precision of vision bright -
Madness is quite
The sight
Tonight.
Gnarly follicles screaming.
Wild hair dreaming.
All seeming -
Freeing.
Like
Detachment adjacent
to
Detachment
Unhinged
Lunatic fringe...
Madness begins...
The breakdown.
After days bleed into weird -
The falling frown.
Realization behind silver
Filaments, crawling
Under the surface layer
Of the lit up mirror.
Precision of vision bright -
Madness is quite
The sight
Tonight.
Gnarly follicles screaming.
Wild hair dreaming.
All seeming -
Freeing.
Like
Detachment adjacent
to
Detachment
Unhinged
Lunatic fringe...
Madness begins...
#courage
#shadows
#heroic
#tea
#fear
395 reads
10 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
7th Jun 2024 1:51pm
7th Jun 2024 1:51pm
True Justice (Desert Hunt)
Through the New Mexico desert night like rats they ran
Six backpack carrying illegal males accompanied by a long-haired woman,
“The weakness of the government’s border security made him 357 mad
So once again the desert hunt was on for the illegals trespassing ass,
“With his night vision on he followed the illegals as they fled
Three head shots from his LSR employed them in the land of the dead,
“The woman caught a round through the left and right knee
While another jumped down a cactus filled slope attempting to flee,
...
Six backpack carrying illegal males accompanied by a long-haired woman,
“The weakness of the government’s border security made him 357 mad
So once again the desert hunt was on for the illegals trespassing ass,
“With his night vision on he followed the illegals as they fled
Three head shots from his LSR employed them in the land of the dead,
“The woman caught a round through the left and right knee
While another jumped down a cactus filled slope attempting to flee,
...
#courage
#heroic
#strength
232 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
11th Jul 2021 10:12pm
11th Jul 2021 10:12pm
The Spy Who Loved Me
Mini-Production Brought To You
By
Another K Production
This is Part II of Butter And Guns
By
Another K Production
This is Part II of Butter And Guns
#soldiers
#politics
#war #heroic
#war #heroic
951 reads
20 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
26th Oct 2017 11:28pm
26th Oct 2017 11:28pm
oh, but to have travelled in tandem ..
dickens, of course, as attested to in his own writings
was a poor sleeper
and passed many a night traipsing around the city
quite alone
I'd have got him a bike ..
was a poor sleeper
and passed many a night traipsing around the city
quite alone
I'd have got him a bike ..
#heroic
519 reads
3 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
6th Feb 2021 11:42pm
6th Feb 2021 11:42pm
a hero like you
all those small things:
getting up in
the
morning,
going to
work,
greeting
others,
smiling,
being
honest,
loving
someone,
lending
a hand
to
a brother
or
sister in
tears,
through the
sacred
passing of
those
who came
before,
through the
pain,
through the
joy,
through the
memories
of a
million
days moving
forward
in a
great
breathe of ...
getting up in
the
morning,
going to
work,
greeting
others,
smiling,
being
honest,
loving
someone,
lending
a hand
to
a brother
or
sister in
tears,
through the
sacred
passing of
those
who came
before,
through the
pain,
through the
joy,
through the
memories
of a
million
days moving
forward
in a
great
breathe of ...
#humankind
#heroic
411 reads
8 Comments
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