Heroic by Top Critiquers Poems
#heroic
heroic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 7:49pm
30th Nov 2024 7:49pm
Acidic Flash
Inside all war there lies conspiracy
There's nothing to believe but lies
Raging fires on the innocent
While the dead watch from the skies
They take the blind man to the killing field
To play in someone else's game
Let the lesser lands be torn apart
And bring them here to bear the shame
Acidic Flash
Burns my eyes
Acidic Flash
Buried Alive
Severed spirits hanging in the wind
Tear the truth apart from lies
A sordid effigy of past mistakes
Their heroism lost in time
They send...
There's nothing to believe but lies
Raging fires on the innocent
While the dead watch from the skies
They take the blind man to the killing field
To play in someone else's game
Let the lesser lands be torn apart
And bring them here to bear the shame
Acidic Flash
Burns my eyes
Acidic Flash
Buried Alive
Severed spirits hanging in the wind
Tear the truth apart from lies
A sordid effigy of past mistakes
Their heroism lost in time
They send...
#heroic
#lies
#satirical
#soldiers
#war
76 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd May 2021 2:07pm
2nd May 2021 2:07pm
hello freedom no more kids
#heroin
#culture
#heroic #tradition
#heroic #tradition
514 reads
3 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
19th Sep 2018 1:28am
19th Sep 2018 1:28am
A Gentleman
is not made of riches
or material possessions
strong or perfect physique;
he's trustworthy and loyal
dedicated and dependable
honest and direct
doesn't mean he can't make mistakes
but, accepts responsibility for choices
confesses them openly, never blames
A Gentleman does not play victim
during dire circumstances
befalling his existence:
he maturely adapts--
accepts that which
he cannot change;...
or material possessions
strong or perfect physique;
he's trustworthy and loyal
dedicated and dependable
honest and direct
doesn't mean he can't make mistakes
but, accepts responsibility for choices
confesses them openly, never blames
A Gentleman does not play victim
during dire circumstances
befalling his existence:
he maturely adapts--
accepts that which
he cannot change;...
#admiration
#respect
#heroic #morality
#heroic #morality
1563 reads
31 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Jul 2022 1:54am
14th Jul 2022 1:54am
The Amorist
Men, think tonight...as you are getting laid,
"Are there any riches better than this?"
Better than anything else you are paid
Which will not support your next wooing kiss?
Well obviously the answer is no.
So why do some men value more their truck
Or polish hogs to be the best in show
Rather than making effort for a fuck
Which they'll remember to their dying day
As the finest of all possible luck?
Why not prioritize a different way
To see her more by Cupid's arrow struck
After launching from all your deepest wishes?
Cupid...
"Are there any riches better than this?"
Better than anything else you are paid
Which will not support your next wooing kiss?
Well obviously the answer is no.
So why do some men value more their truck
Or polish hogs to be the best in show
Rather than making effort for a fuck
Which they'll remember to their dying day
As the finest of all possible luck?
Why not prioritize a different way
To see her more by Cupid's arrow struck
After launching from all your deepest wishes?
Cupid...
#patience
#heroic
#wisdom #masculinity
#wisdom #masculinity
258 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
25th Jun 2022 00:07am
25th Jun 2022 00:07am
Beowulf Pt.2
I asked her what his name was, then dropped the silver on the floor screaming it
His mother burst into a hysterical laugh, hoping that she was dreaming it
I should had seen the resemblance, I should had been a better parent than my own
His mother is promising death to me and the guilt wont leave me alone
I buried Grendel among my gods, a boy without a father lead wayward
I should had been proud of his many conquest instead of listening to the naysayers
His mom constantly tries to bed me and asking if I want something to eat
In between her promise to...
His mother burst into a hysterical laugh, hoping that she was dreaming it
I should had seen the resemblance, I should had been a better parent than my own
His mother is promising death to me and the guilt wont leave me alone
I buried Grendel among my gods, a boy without a father lead wayward
I should had been proud of his many conquest instead of listening to the naysayers
His mom constantly tries to bed me and asking if I want something to eat
In between her promise to...
#death
#mythology
#heroic
276 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
Portuguese man-o-war
Who are we, lost in the vastness?
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
#astronomy
#heroic
#karma
#sea
#universe
88 reads
8 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 11:08am
11th Dec 2024 11:08am
~Cinkam
viz cinkam
#courage
#heroic
#inspirational
#lion
#love
112 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Mar 2021 3:45pm
10th Mar 2021 3:45pm
The Real G
Ruth was an icon, she was the real G
Bader was crusader for women’s rights
Ginsburg fought for justice and equality
Taking on battles, shining a bright light
She was a rockstar when she’d disagree
Flexing muscle - just check out her arm curls
And her dissents were very legendary
Schooling you till you clutched your pearls
Her influence enhanced our society
I think she was a badass in retrospect
Don’t believe me, read up on herstory
She truly deserves some mad respect
R.I.P. Dear Notorious R.B.G.
You are a hero...
Bader was crusader for women’s rights
Ginsburg fought for justice and equality
Taking on battles, shining a bright light
She was a rockstar when she’d disagree
Flexing muscle - just check out her arm curls
And her dissents were very legendary
Schooling you till you clutched your pearls
Her influence enhanced our society
I think she was a badass in retrospect
Don’t believe me, read up on herstory
She truly deserves some mad respect
R.I.P. Dear Notorious R.B.G.
You are a hero...
#women
#HumanRights
#feminism #heroic
#feminism #heroic
493 reads
8 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
6th Feb 2021 11:42pm
6th Feb 2021 11:42pm
a hero like you
all those small things:
getting up in
the
morning,
going to
work,
greeting
others,
smiling,
being
honest,
loving
someone,
lending
a hand
to
a brother
or
sister in
tears,
through the
sacred
passing of
those
who came
before,
through the
pain,
through the
joy,
through the
memories
of a
million
days moving
forward
in a
great
breathe of ...
getting up in
the
morning,
going to
work,
greeting
others,
smiling,
being
honest,
loving
someone,
lending
a hand
to
a brother
or
sister in
tears,
through the
sacred
passing of
those
who came
before,
through the
pain,
through the
joy,
through the
memories
of a
million
days moving
forward
in a
great
breathe of ...
#humankind
#heroic
376 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
11th Jul 2021 10:12pm
11th Jul 2021 10:12pm
The Spy Who Loved Me
Mini-Production Brought To You
By
Another K Production
This is Part II of Butter And Guns
By
Another K Production
This is Part II of Butter And Guns
#soldiers
#politics
#war #heroic
#war #heroic
918 reads
20 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
26th Oct 2017 11:28pm
26th Oct 2017 11:28pm
oh, but to have travelled in tandem ..
dickens, of course, as attested to in his own writings
was a poor sleeper
and passed many a night traipsing around the city
quite alone
I'd have got him a bike ..
was a poor sleeper
and passed many a night traipsing around the city
quite alone
I'd have got him a bike ..
#heroic
493 reads
3 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
7th Jun 2024 1:51pm
7th Jun 2024 1:51pm
True Justice (Desert Hunt)
Through the New Mexico desert night like rats they ran
Six backpack carrying illegal males accompanied by a long-haired woman,
“The weakness of the government’s border security made him 357 mad
So once again the desert hunt was on for the illegals trespassing ass,
“With his night vision on he followed the illegals as they fled
Three head shots from his LSR employed them in the land of the dead,
“The woman caught a round through the left and right knee
While another jumped down a cactus filled slope attempting to flee,
...
Six backpack carrying illegal males accompanied by a long-haired woman,
“The weakness of the government’s border security made him 357 mad
So once again the desert hunt was on for the illegals trespassing ass,
“With his night vision on he followed the illegals as they fled
Three head shots from his LSR employed them in the land of the dead,
“The woman caught a round through the left and right knee
While another jumped down a cactus filled slope attempting to flee,
...
#courage
#heroic
#strength
196 reads
4 Comments
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