Heroic by Top Critiquers Poems
#heroic
heroic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd May 2021 2:07pm
2nd May 2021 2:07pm
hello freedom no more kids
#heroin
#culture
#heroic #tradition
#heroic #tradition
452 reads
3 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
24th Oct 2017 3:40am
24th Oct 2017 3:40am
Fantasy behind pearly curtains
a visual poem
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#learning
#admiration
#heroic
998 reads
12 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
25th Jun 2022 00:07am
25th Jun 2022 00:07am
Beowulf Pt.2
I asked her what his name was, then dropped the silver on the floor screaming it
His mother burst into a hysterical laugh, hoping that she was dreaming it
I should had seen the resemblance, I should had been a better parent than my own
His mother is promising death to me and the guilt wont leave me alone
I buried Grendel among my gods, a boy without a father lead wayward
I should had been proud of his many conquest instead of listening to the naysayers
His mom constantly tries to bed me and asking if I want something to eat
In between her promise to...
His mother burst into a hysterical laugh, hoping that she was dreaming it
I should had seen the resemblance, I should had been a better parent than my own
His mother is promising death to me and the guilt wont leave me alone
I buried Grendel among my gods, a boy without a father lead wayward
I should had been proud of his many conquest instead of listening to the naysayers
His mom constantly tries to bed me and asking if I want something to eat
In between her promise to...
#death
#mythology
#heroic
199 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
19th Sep 2018 1:28am
19th Sep 2018 1:28am
A Gentleman
is not made of riches
or material possessions
strong or perfect physique;
he's trustworthy and loyal
dedicated and dependable
honest and direct
doesn't mean he can't make mistakes
but, accepts responsibility for choices
confesses them openly, never blames
A Gentleman does not play victim
during dire circumstances
befalling his existence:
he maturely adapts--
accepts that which
he cannot change;...
or material possessions
strong or perfect physique;
he's trustworthy and loyal
dedicated and dependable
honest and direct
doesn't mean he can't make mistakes
but, accepts responsibility for choices
confesses them openly, never blames
A Gentleman does not play victim
during dire circumstances
befalling his existence:
he maturely adapts--
accepts that which
he cannot change;...
#admiration
#respect
#heroic #morality
#heroic #morality
1426 reads
31 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Jul 2022 1:54am
14th Jul 2022 1:54am
The Amorist
Men, think tonight...as you are getting laid,
"Are there any riches better than this?"
Better than anything else you are paid
Which will not support your next wooing kiss?
Well obviously the answer is no.
So why do some men value more their truck
Or polish hogs to be the best in show
Rather than making effort for a fuck
Which they'll remember to their dying day
As the finest of all possible luck?
Why not prioritize a different way
To see her more by Cupid's arrow struck
After launching from all your deepest wishes?
Cupid...
"Are there any riches better than this?"
Better than anything else you are paid
Which will not support your next wooing kiss?
Well obviously the answer is no.
So why do some men value more their truck
Or polish hogs to be the best in show
Rather than making effort for a fuck
Which they'll remember to their dying day
As the finest of all possible luck?
Why not prioritize a different way
To see her more by Cupid's arrow struck
After launching from all your deepest wishes?
Cupid...
#patience
#heroic
#wisdom #masculinity
#wisdom #masculinity
186 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Mar 2021 3:45pm
10th Mar 2021 3:45pm
The Real G
Ruth was an icon, she was the real G
Bader was crusader for women’s rights
Ginsburg fought for justice and equality
Taking on battles, shining a bright light
She was a rockstar when she’d disagree
Flexing muscle - just check out her arm curls
And her dissents were very legendary
Schooling you till you clutched your pearls
Her influence enhanced our society
I think she was a badass in retrospect
Don’t believe me, read up on herstory
She truly deserves some mad respect
R.I.P. Dear Notorious R.B.G.
You are a hero...
Bader was crusader for women’s rights
Ginsburg fought for justice and equality
Taking on battles, shining a bright light
She was a rockstar when she’d disagree
Flexing muscle - just check out her arm curls
And her dissents were very legendary
Schooling you till you clutched your pearls
Her influence enhanced our society
I think she was a badass in retrospect
Don’t believe me, read up on herstory
She truly deserves some mad respect
R.I.P. Dear Notorious R.B.G.
You are a hero...
#women
#HumanRights
#feminism #heroic
#feminism #heroic
413 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
11th Jul 2021 10:12pm
11th Jul 2021 10:12pm
The Spy Who Loved Me
Mini-Production Brought To You
By
Another K Production
This is Part II of Butter And Guns
By
Another K Production
This is Part II of Butter And Guns
#soldiers
#politics
#war #heroic
#war #heroic
863 reads
20 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
6th Feb 2021 11:42pm
6th Feb 2021 11:42pm
a hero like you
all those small things:
getting up in
the
morning,
going to
work,
greeting
others,
smiling,
being
honest,
loving
someone,
lending
a hand
to
a brother
or
sister in
tears,
through the
sacred
passing of
those
who came
before,
through the
pain,
through the
joy,
through the
memories
of a
million
days moving
forward
in a
great
breathe of ...
getting up in
the
morning,
going to
work,
greeting
others,
smiling,
being
honest,
loving
someone,
lending
a hand
to
a brother
or
sister in
tears,
through the
sacred
passing of
those
who came
before,
through the
pain,
through the
joy,
through the
memories
of a
million
days moving
forward
in a
great
breathe of ...
#humankind
#heroic
305 reads
8 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
6th May 2021 8:47am
6th May 2021 8:47am
Super hero
Super hero
If you could be a Super hero, which one would you be, there's so many hero's to choose from, come play this game with me
Would you be Superman, faster than the speed of light, always there to save the world, protecting what is right
What about the Dark Knight, Batman whose, secretly Bruce Wayne, no real Super powers but obviously rich and with a brain
Thor the God of Thunder, with his hammer only those worthy can lift, he flies and his so powerful, a useful hero gift
Iron man has the gadgets, he has all the high tech toys,...
If you could be a Super hero, which one would you be, there's so many hero's to choose from, come play this game with me
Would you be Superman, faster than the speed of light, always there to save the world, protecting what is right
What about the Dark Knight, Batman whose, secretly Bruce Wayne, no real Super powers but obviously rich and with a brain
Thor the God of Thunder, with his hammer only those worthy can lift, he flies and his so powerful, a useful hero gift
Iron man has the gadgets, he has all the high tech toys,...
#love
#dreams
#heroic
482 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 2:50pm
25th Mar 2024 2:50pm
The Climb
In a distant kingdom, beyond the horizon,
There lived a hero named Monte.
He was in no hurry or fear,
for in his chest he kept a cry.
Monte knew the journey was long
but your heart, like a sponge,
absorbed hope and faith
in the certainty that he would win.
He walked, through valleys and mountains,
facing storms and exploits.
He calmly faced each challenge
for he knew that after the night came a day.
"There's no rush," he said,
"Victory comes to those who know magic
patience and persistence ...
There lived a hero named Monte.
He was in no hurry or fear,
for in his chest he kept a cry.
Monte knew the journey was long
but your heart, like a sponge,
absorbed hope and faith
in the certainty that he would win.
He walked, through valleys and mountains,
facing storms and exploits.
He calmly faced each challenge
for he knew that after the night came a day.
"There's no rush," he said,
"Victory comes to those who know magic
patience and persistence ...
#power
#LifeStruggles
#heroic
57 reads
5 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
29th Jul 2021 9:36am
29th Jul 2021 9:36am
Beards & Breakdowns
It always starts with a beard -
The breakdown.
After days bleed into weird -
The falling frown.
Realization behind silver
Filaments, crawling
Under the surface layer
Of the lit up mirror.
Precision of vision bright -
Madness is quite
The sight
Tonight.
Gnarly follicles screaming.
Wild hair dreaming.
All seeming -
Freeing.
Like
Detachment adjacent
to
Detachment
Unhinged
Lunatic fringe...
Madness begins...
The breakdown.
After days bleed into weird -
The falling frown.
Realization behind silver
Filaments, crawling
Under the surface layer
Of the lit up mirror.
Precision of vision bright -
Madness is quite
The sight
Tonight.
Gnarly follicles screaming.
Wild hair dreaming.
All seeming -
Freeing.
Like
Detachment adjacent
to
Detachment
Unhinged
Lunatic fringe...
Madness begins...
#courage
#shadows
#heroic
#tea
#fear
310 reads
10 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2022 3:47am
23rd Jul 2022 3:47am
Into the Missed
Into the Missed
There's those
whose thoughts
are blues
as dots
that never
nowhere....
no,
not again.
Those were
the ones
who,
in my memory,
were perfection,
in all directions,
forever
new.
My last look
may not be
as stellar as
the sky
that birthed me,
but
I'm the same
as ever was....
even moreso.
There's those
whose thoughts
are blues
as dots
that never
nowhere....
no,
not again.
Those were
the ones
who,
in my memory,
were perfection,
in all directions,
forever
new.
My last look
may not be
as stellar as
the sky
that birthed me,
but
I'm the same
as ever was....
even moreso.
#friendship
#humankind
#heroic
217 reads
2 Comments
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