Gay Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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gay seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sandals
Poem Published
26th Jul 2022 10:39am
26th Jul 2022 10:39am
I'm A Midget......I Luv Me
#kindness
#women
#lesbian
#gay
#romantic
276 reads
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Sandals
Poem Published
24th Jul 2022 1:31am
24th Jul 2022 1:31am
I Wish....Yeah......I Wish
#love
#dark
#lesbian
#gay
#evil
370 reads
4 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2022 2:11am
22nd Jul 2022 2:11am
I Promise U....I'm With It...It's This Good To Me
#dark
#gay
#gothic
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
246 reads
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
20th Jul 2022 11:10pm
20th Jul 2022 11:10pm
Coming Out
(on anticipating a father’s response)
perhaps the dark truth is
that you didn’t really care either way
and all my fear was meaningless because
there was no investment from you
that I was just a little kid
you had to clothe and feed
and then felt obligated to
well into adulthood
(provided I made sacrifice)
as per some instinct called love
but which you didn’t really name
because you were just Baal’s ghost
a mocking image of a man
perhaps the dark truth is
that you didn’t really care either way
and all my fear was meaningless because
there was no investment from you
that I was just a little kid
you had to clothe and feed
and then felt obligated to
well into adulthood
(provided I made sacrifice)
as per some instinct called love
but which you didn’t really name
because you were just Baal’s ghost
a mocking image of a man
#gay
#childhood
#abuse #fatherhood
#abuse #fatherhood
339 reads
2 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
20th Jul 2022 5:12am
20th Jul 2022 5:12am
Oppressive U Be.......Ah Mouth Me
#lesbian
#gay
#BDSM
#temptation
#healing
208 reads
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
19th Jul 2022 7:08pm
19th Jul 2022 7:08pm
A Backwards View
(on micro-aggressions)
It’s odd to reflect in hindsight on
the little hatreds that emerge
in little words and reassurances.
The Australian teacher who told me
that I should be grateful to be called
a pervert, since wouldn’t gays be happier
if they identified themselves as such?
The same woman who’d say
that certain stereotypes have weight.
(‘In corpses, dear, perhaps’
would be the ungracious reply.)
Who said that Jews
were sometimes greedy Jews,
claiming dental care as charity relief
and then...
It’s odd to reflect in hindsight on
the little hatreds that emerge
in little words and reassurances.
The Australian teacher who told me
that I should be grateful to be called
a pervert, since wouldn’t gays be happier
if they identified themselves as such?
The same woman who’d say
that certain stereotypes have weight.
(‘In corpses, dear, perhaps’
would be the ungracious reply.)
Who said that Jews
were sometimes greedy Jews,
claiming dental care as charity relief
and then...
#hate
#gay
#racism #feminism
#racism #feminism
259 reads
0 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
16th Jul 2022 11:58am
16th Jul 2022 11:58am
I'm Stuck Upon This Affection
#lesbian
#gay
#erotic
#BDSM
#dirty
327 reads
0 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
16th Jul 2022 11:37am
16th Jul 2022 11:37am
Hot Lust
#lust
#lesbian
#gay
#erotic
#bisexual
478 reads
0 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
15th Jul 2022 4:54pm
15th Jul 2022 4:54pm
Luv Me Then
#dark
#lesbian
#gay
#BDSM
#UnrequitedLove
293 reads
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
15th Jul 2022 3:25pm
15th Jul 2022 3:25pm
A Homosexual's Body
We slant and slouch,
prevaricate of limb,
relinquish wrists
to seeming limp,
allowing air to fold and press.
It's taken me so long to understand...
to feel both queer and beautiful.
To know that I don't need to prove
the simple fact of what I am.
prevaricate of limb,
relinquish wrists
to seeming limp,
allowing air to fold and press.
It's taken me so long to understand...
to feel both queer and beautiful.
To know that I don't need to prove
the simple fact of what I am.
#hope
#gay
#uplifting #SelfWorth
#uplifting #SelfWorth
319 reads
3 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
14th Jul 2022 6:36pm
14th Jul 2022 6:36pm
The Straights
I always feel their eyes on me.
Wanting to know what I am, how I work,
as if they'd like
to take me apart
and analyse the bloody cogs.
But more than this,
they'd like to fix,
to make me something they
can fuck or kill, or just sit by and watch
as I go up in flames. And light a cigarette,
and grin, and say
"I always knew, of course...
can always tell with poofs."
Wanting to know what I am, how I work,
as if they'd like
to take me apart
and analyse the bloody cogs.
But more than this,
they'd like to fix,
to make me something they
can fuck or kill, or just sit by and watch
as I go up in flames. And light a cigarette,
and grin, and say
"I always knew, of course...
can always tell with poofs."
#gay
#oppression
#LGBT #bullying
#LGBT #bullying
304 reads
9 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
14th Jul 2022 3:17pm
14th Jul 2022 3:17pm
Winged Eternity
an attempt at a ballad
A simple death was wrought for me
but I've as always been a-strange,
across the worlds of wandering
a-lonesome of the range.
A reckoning was writ in stones
the second I stood out,
alone among the granite bones
and bodies cast about.
The scripture reads that life so queer
can only be wrapped up with blood,
with fetish and of course despair
and not as we proved false the flood.
We stole the scripture and took flight
across the midnight streets,
then said that...
A simple death was wrought for me
but I've as always been a-strange,
across the worlds of wandering
a-lonesome of the range.
A reckoning was writ in stones
the second I stood out,
alone among the granite bones
and bodies cast about.
The scripture reads that life so queer
can only be wrapped up with blood,
with fetish and of course despair
and not as we proved false the flood.
We stole the scripture and took flight
across the midnight streets,
then said that...
#gay
#identity
#LifeStruggles #myself
#LifeStruggles #myself
260 reads
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