Gay Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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gay seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 6:34pm
27th Nov 2024 6:34pm
destroyed, renewed
Something like a category fault...
a crease in what should be
the logical cleaving
of masc to femme.
But as the cold of '55
becomes the spring of '56
I'm folding into you
and it feels utterly perfect,
in those moments between
the tentative movements
of hands on arms
and when I spin to push back into you -
the record player singing its old songs -
and when the last thrust leaves us both
destroyed, renewed, destroyed, renewed.
a crease in what should be
the logical cleaving
of masc to femme.
But as the cold of '55
becomes the spring of '56
I'm folding into you
and it feels utterly perfect,
in those moments between
the tentative movements
of hands on arms
and when I spin to push back into you -
the record player singing its old songs -
and when the last thrust leaves us both
destroyed, renewed, destroyed, renewed.
#gay
#LGBT
#love #sex
#love #sex
108 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 7:57pm
23rd Nov 2024 7:57pm
They pretended
They would both pretend at night during sex that they were having an orgasm
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
#gay
#lesbian
#marriage
#relationships
#sex
186 reads
6 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 4:52pm
30th Oct 2024 4:52pm
Observations about Gays and Heterosexuals
Homosexuals and lesbians argue that they love the person and not the gender.
That is clearly a dishonest and misleading statement, and we should reject it.
If this were true, the gender of a person, male or female, would not matter to gays.
According to their reasoning, they should also love a person of the opposite sex.
But the person whom a homosexual or a lesbian loves is always someone of the same sex.
So the action and sexual preference of gays destroy their own arguments.
Gays turn to science to justify their craving for unnatural sexual...
That is clearly a dishonest and misleading statement, and we should reject it.
If this were true, the gender of a person, male or female, would not matter to gays.
According to their reasoning, they should also love a person of the opposite sex.
But the person whom a homosexual or a lesbian loves is always someone of the same sex.
So the action and sexual preference of gays destroy their own arguments.
Gays turn to science to justify their craving for unnatural sexual...
#gay
#lesbian
#morality #science
#morality #science
143 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 00:42am
30th Oct 2024 00:42am
Is Sex a Need or a Desire?
Gays claim that sex is a need for them, but this argument has no foundation.
You must be able to differentiate clearly between a need and a desire.
Anything you cannot continue living without, such as sunlight, water, oxygen, is a need.
The things that people can survive without for many decades are desires.
Sex solely for pleasure or gratification is not a need; it is undoubtedly a want.
Bear in mind that people can in fact live until they get old without having sex.
You can only view sex as a need for procreation to prevent the...
You must be able to differentiate clearly between a need and a desire.
Anything you cannot continue living without, such as sunlight, water, oxygen, is a need.
The things that people can survive without for many decades are desires.
Sex solely for pleasure or gratification is not a need; it is undoubtedly a want.
Bear in mind that people can in fact live until they get old without having sex.
You can only view sex as a need for procreation to prevent the...
#gay
#relationships
#sex #humankind
#sex #humankind
119 reads
0 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
LOVE IN MY ARMS (I)(original 1st draft;1976; Poretto Jetty, Galveston, Texas; struggling with being Gay at 22 yr.s old)
love in my arms
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
#ForbiddenLove
#gay
#misunderstood
#sea
#UnrequitedLove
303 reads
0 Comments
IsabellaHunter
Poem Published
21st May 2024 9:09am
21st May 2024 9:09am
Dear my loving Victim
#bullying
#crush
#gay
#jealousy
#love
180 reads
8 Comments
Redamancer
Poem Published
15th May 2024 4:40am
15th May 2024 4:40am
Dignity and Grace
Pull your pants down and put me in my place
Don’t make me wait, just put it in my face
I’ll suck it slow because life’s not a race
I’ll go balls deep with dignity and grace
Finish in my mouth without any shame
Making old guys cum is my favorite game
I'll gulp it all down, spitting is so lame
Then I fly out the door, so glad you came
Don’t make me wait, just put it in my face
I’ll suck it slow because life’s not a race
I’ll go balls deep with dignity and grace
Finish in my mouth without any shame
Making old guys cum is my favorite game
I'll gulp it all down, spitting is so lame
Then I fly out the door, so glad you came
#faith
#gay
#obsession
#passion
#sex
592 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 10:35pm
17th Apr 2024 10:35pm
Fuss
It does not cause a fuss when you speak against the king or president of a country.
And if you speak against the police or the military, you will not be labelled as a hater.
So why does it cause a big uproar when someone speaks against LGBTQ people?
When did homosexuals, bisexuals, and transgender people become so important?
If they were doing the right thing, they would not care what others say about them.
Heterosexuals do not march with flags and demonstrate for straight people rights,
Neither do they go around and talk nonsense about being proud to...
And if you speak against the police or the military, you will not be labelled as a hater.
So why does it cause a big uproar when someone speaks against LGBTQ people?
When did homosexuals, bisexuals, and transgender people become so important?
If they were doing the right thing, they would not care what others say about them.
Heterosexuals do not march with flags and demonstrate for straight people rights,
Neither do they go around and talk nonsense about being proud to...
#gay
#bisexual
#lesbian
#military
#transgender
229 reads
0 Comments
Redamancer
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 7:58am
8th Apr 2024 7:58am
Acceptance
#gay
#erotic
#inspirational
#acceptance
#passion
234 reads
0 Comments
Redamancer
Poem Published
4th Mar 2024 6:46am
4th Mar 2024 6:46am
The Bigger Men
#gay
#beauty
#dirty
#sensual
#obsession
328 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
21st Feb 2024 2:41pm
21st Feb 2024 2:41pm
Mouth Attack
#lust
#gay
#sex
#mirror
#passion
293 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 11:38am
7th Feb 2024 11:38am
Swete freond
My purest love, I long for thee
with all my heart and soul.
Thou art the fairest of the fair.
The brightest of the whole...
No other man can match thy grace
thy handsomeness and thy wit.
Thou art the sun that lights my day
and so the moon that guides my night.
My dearest one, I swear to thee
by all the saints in heavens above
that I'll always cherish thee
and honor thee with love.
No other man can take thy place
for thy virtue and thy brave.
Thou art the star that guides my way
the shield that keeps...
with all my heart and soul.
Thou art the fairest of the fair.
The brightest of the whole...
No other man can match thy grace
thy handsomeness and thy wit.
Thou art the sun that lights my day
and so the moon that guides my night.
My dearest one, I swear to thee
by all the saints in heavens above
that I'll always cherish thee
and honor thee with love.
No other man can take thy place
for thy virtue and thy brave.
Thou art the star that guides my way
the shield that keeps...
#love
#husband
#gay
#romantic
#passion
319 reads
2 Comments
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