Gay Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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gay seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 10:25am
21st Mar 2025 10:25am
Strut Your Stuff
In the rainbow garden love blooms bright
with colors that sparkle day and night.
You're my main squeeze, my partner in crime,
together we shine like a disco ball's prime.
Our love is no closet secret, it's out and proud,
we strut our stuff, stand tall in the crowd.
You're the yin to my yang, the glitter to my glue,
in this fabulous life it's just me and you.
We dance through life, with a flair so grand.
Hand in hand in this borderland.
Our love's a parade with confetti and cheer.
In this vibrant world there's nothing...
with colors that sparkle day and night.
You're my main squeeze, my partner in crime,
together we shine like a disco ball's prime.
Our love is no closet secret, it's out and proud,
we strut our stuff, stand tall in the crowd.
You're the yin to my yang, the glitter to my glue,
in this fabulous life it's just me and you.
We dance through life, with a flair so grand.
Hand in hand in this borderland.
Our love's a parade with confetti and cheer.
In this vibrant world there's nothing...
#gay
#historical
#LGBT
#love
#utopia
104 reads
8 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 5:16pm
5th Mar 2025 5:16pm
Phobias
Many different kinds of phobias affect people all over the world.
So why do gays harp on homophobia and ignore other kinds of phobias?
We do not hear gays talking about any phobias except homophobia.
They do not bring up the question of vasiliaphobia when you speak against kings.
When you denounce wars, gays do not talk about polemophobia.
Gays do not mention capiophobia when you speak against the police.
Demons are controlling the minds of gays and leading them to destruction.
They cannot tell the difference between ‘preaching violence’ and...
So why do gays harp on homophobia and ignore other kinds of phobias?
We do not hear gays talking about any phobias except homophobia.
They do not bring up the question of vasiliaphobia when you speak against kings.
When you denounce wars, gays do not talk about polemophobia.
Gays do not mention capiophobia when you speak against the police.
Demons are controlling the minds of gays and leading them to destruction.
They cannot tell the difference between ‘preaching violence’ and...
#gay
#tolerance
#sex
49 reads
0 Comments
Angeleno144
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 2:26am
16th Feb 2025 2:26am
Snow Invitation
#bisexual
#gay
69 reads
0 Comments
Angeleno144
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 2:15am
16th Feb 2025 2:15am
Penpal Experiment
Just ate.
About to nap.
Your words, a quiet admission:
“I don’t like people…
haven’t chilled with anyone in years.”
I listened—
appreciated the honesty,
but I couldn’t let you believe
I’m here to be your penpal experiment.
You replied,
“You’re getting the wrong image about me.”
“I never once disrespected you.”
“I just wanted you to know how I like it.”
I answered, raw and sure,
“I won’t pretend I’m happy
feeling like your penpal experiment.
If you can’t meet me where I’m at,
that’s okay—then...
About to nap.
Your words, a quiet admission:
“I don’t like people…
haven’t chilled with anyone in years.”
I listened—
appreciated the honesty,
but I couldn’t let you believe
I’m here to be your penpal experiment.
You replied,
“You’re getting the wrong image about me.”
“I never once disrespected you.”
“I just wanted you to know how I like it.”
I answered, raw and sure,
“I won’t pretend I’m happy
feeling like your penpal experiment.
If you can’t meet me where I’m at,
that’s okay—then...
#gay
#LGBT
83 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 6:40pm
9th Feb 2025 6:40pm
The Absurdity of Gayness
Let us seriously consider the absurdity of gayness.
Gay men only have sexual relations with men,
Yet masculine-like and feminine-like gay men exist.
The masculine-like gay men desire the feminine-like gay men,
And the feminine-like gay men desire the masculine-like gay men.
Gays want the world to tolerate this kind of lunacy.
Gay men do not want to have sex with women.
So why do they have sex with men who behave like women?
What do sane people have to say about this?
Men who behave like women are definitely not women.
Would it...
Gay men only have sexual relations with men,
Yet masculine-like and feminine-like gay men exist.
The masculine-like gay men desire the feminine-like gay men,
And the feminine-like gay men desire the masculine-like gay men.
Gays want the world to tolerate this kind of lunacy.
Gay men do not want to have sex with women.
So why do they have sex with men who behave like women?
What do sane people have to say about this?
Men who behave like women are definitely not women.
Would it...
#gay
#men
#sex #women
#sex #women
141 reads
2 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 6:34pm
27th Nov 2024 6:34pm
destroyed, renewed
Something like a category fault...
a crease in what should be
the logical cleaving
of masc to femme.
But as the cold of '55
becomes the spring of '56
I'm folding into you
and it feels utterly perfect,
in those moments between
the tentative movements
of hands on arms
and when I spin to push back into you -
the record player singing its old songs -
and when the last thrust leaves us both
destroyed, renewed, destroyed, renewed.
a crease in what should be
the logical cleaving
of masc to femme.
But as the cold of '55
becomes the spring of '56
I'm folding into you
and it feels utterly perfect,
in those moments between
the tentative movements
of hands on arms
and when I spin to push back into you -
the record player singing its old songs -
and when the last thrust leaves us both
destroyed, renewed, destroyed, renewed.
#gay
#LGBT
#love #sex
#love #sex
179 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 7:57pm
23rd Nov 2024 7:57pm
They pretended
They would both pretend at night during sex that they were having an orgasm
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
#gay
#lesbian
#marriage
#relationships
#sex
325 reads
6 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 4:52pm
30th Oct 2024 4:52pm
Observations about Gays and Heterosexuals
Homosexuals and lesbians argue that they love the person and not the gender.
That is clearly a dishonest and misleading statement, and we should reject it.
If this were true, the gender of a person, male or female, would not matter to gays.
According to their reasoning, they should also love a person of the opposite sex.
But the person whom a homosexual or a lesbian loves is always someone of the same sex.
So the action and sexual preference of gays destroy their own arguments.
Gays turn to science to justify their craving for unnatural sexual...
That is clearly a dishonest and misleading statement, and we should reject it.
If this were true, the gender of a person, male or female, would not matter to gays.
According to their reasoning, they should also love a person of the opposite sex.
But the person whom a homosexual or a lesbian loves is always someone of the same sex.
So the action and sexual preference of gays destroy their own arguments.
Gays turn to science to justify their craving for unnatural sexual...
#gay
#lesbian
#morality #science
#morality #science
216 reads
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 00:42am
30th Oct 2024 00:42am
Is Sex a Need or a Desire?
Gays claim that sex is a need for them, but this argument has no foundation.
You must be able to differentiate clearly between a need and a desire.
Anything you cannot continue living without, such as sunlight, water, oxygen, is a need.
The things that people can survive without for many decades are desires.
Sex solely for pleasure or gratification is not a need; it is undoubtedly a want.
Bear in mind that people can in fact live until they get old without having sex.
You can only view sex as a need for procreation to prevent the...
You must be able to differentiate clearly between a need and a desire.
Anything you cannot continue living without, such as sunlight, water, oxygen, is a need.
The things that people can survive without for many decades are desires.
Sex solely for pleasure or gratification is not a need; it is undoubtedly a want.
Bear in mind that people can in fact live until they get old without having sex.
You can only view sex as a need for procreation to prevent the...
#gay
#relationships
#sex #humankind
#sex #humankind
168 reads
0 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
LOVE IN MY ARMS (I)(original 1st draft;1976; Poretto Jetty, Galveston, Texas; struggling with being Gay at 22 yr.s old)
love in my arms
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
#ForbiddenLove
#gay
#misunderstood
#sea
#UnrequitedLove
404 reads
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IsabellaHunter
Poem Published
21st May 2024 9:09am
21st May 2024 9:09am
Dear my loving Victim
#bullying
#crush
#gay
#jealousy
#love
255 reads
8 Comments
Redamancer
Poem Published
15th May 2024 4:40am
15th May 2024 4:40am
Dignity and Grace
Pull your pants down and put me in my place
Don’t make me wait, just put it in my face
I’ll suck it slow because life’s not a race
I’ll go balls deep with dignity and grace
Finish in my mouth without any shame
Making old guys cum is my favorite game
I'll gulp it all down, spitting is so lame
Then I fly out the door, so glad you came
Don’t make me wait, just put it in my face
I’ll suck it slow because life’s not a race
I’ll go balls deep with dignity and grace
Finish in my mouth without any shame
Making old guys cum is my favorite game
I'll gulp it all down, spitting is so lame
Then I fly out the door, so glad you came
#faith
#gay
#obsession
#passion
#sex
692 reads
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