Poems About Freedom Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about freedom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:17pm
2nd Apr 2025 7:17pm
Freedom from Abuse
He was my demon,
My savior,
My darkness,
My love,
My Evil.
He was my smile
My heart,
My tears,
My laughter,
My pain.
He was the one who,
Broke me,
Inspired me,
Beat me,
Destroyed me.
He gave me,
Life,
Lessons,
Love,
Duties.
He lied to me,
Cheated me,
Hit me,
Hugged me,
Despised me.
He was full of,
Broken promises,
Darkness,
Booz,
Suffering.
He was my,
Lover,
Friend, ...
My savior,
My darkness,
My love,
My Evil.
He was my smile
My heart,
My tears,
My laughter,
My pain.
He was the one who,
Broke me,
Inspired me,
Beat me,
Destroyed me.
He gave me,
Life,
Lessons,
Love,
Duties.
He lied to me,
Cheated me,
Hit me,
Hugged me,
Despised me.
He was full of,
Broken promises,
Darkness,
Booz,
Suffering.
He was my,
Lover,
Friend, ...
#abuse
#dark
#freedom
#hate
#love
48 reads
1 Comment
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 6:28pm
29th Mar 2025 6:28pm
I wonder..
Will anyone ask my daughter,
If she's happy?
Knowing all people do,
Is harrass me.
You cannot trust a government,
To protect children.
When they outwardly involve the type of people,
That would kill them.
It amazes me, someone would try to convince me,
That spying and releases porn of me,
Is something I should just let be.
That all the people involved,
Should get away for free.
My daughter would probably prefer money,
Rather than friendship with beasts.
She needs her...
If she's happy?
Knowing all people do,
Is harrass me.
You cannot trust a government,
To protect children.
When they outwardly involve the type of people,
That would kill them.
It amazes me, someone would try to convince me,
That spying and releases porn of me,
Is something I should just let be.
That all the people involved,
Should get away for free.
My daughter would probably prefer money,
Rather than friendship with beasts.
She needs her...
#freedom
#honesty
#morality #porn
#morality #porn
113 reads
9 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 9:12pm
26th Mar 2025 9:12pm
Hahahaha
The statue of liberty.
The lack of purity.
I traveled the seven seas,
To finally be free.
I opened Pandora's box.
Survived the 7 plagues of hell.
It's time to procreate.
It's time to wish you well.
Throw in your 2 cents.
And I'll question how you think.
The fan blows your thoughts around.
You have no logic or reasoning.
Now join our expedition!
I conquer just for show!
I know my little girl,
Doesn't want to be alone.
Ill show you how much I love her.
When I shut you fake fucks out. ...
The lack of purity.
I traveled the seven seas,
To finally be free.
I opened Pandora's box.
Survived the 7 plagues of hell.
It's time to procreate.
It's time to wish you well.
Throw in your 2 cents.
And I'll question how you think.
The fan blows your thoughts around.
You have no logic or reasoning.
Now join our expedition!
I conquer just for show!
I know my little girl,
Doesn't want to be alone.
Ill show you how much I love her.
When I shut you fake fucks out. ...
#freedom
92 reads
4 Comments
SonderNinja
BenjaminEC
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 00:25am
23rd Mar 2025 00:25am
Roadside Manner
This highway air
is thick & bleeding.
A yellow sleep
in curt despair.
Windows down
for morning dew
on hard thistle blue.
A red flag noon
fuming mindful ooze
into white-hot stew.
A smile so sweetly
sang the horizon-
miles over my head
on a mobile bed…
"oh no, child,
THIS is the dream,
you are still in very real danger"
our...
#freedom
#FreeVerse
#responsibility
#travel
#drugs
87 reads
1 Comment
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 12:49pm
22nd Mar 2025 12:49pm
I do
I do want freedom.
This site is the reason.
Thanks for being,
Rude and demeaning.
Ill shut it off.
Because I'm the boss.
Invite him over,
And take it all off.
Listen to me moan.
Who the hell is on my phone???
Infront of the pew,
Saying "i do"
Ill take that freedom.
The wedding cake will feed them.
While they wait to view,
A kiss, long overdue.
This site is the reason.
Thanks for being,
Rude and demeaning.
Ill shut it off.
Because I'm the boss.
Invite him over,
And take it all off.
Listen to me moan.
Who the hell is on my phone???
Infront of the pew,
Saying "i do"
Ill take that freedom.
The wedding cake will feed them.
While they wait to view,
A kiss, long overdue.
#freedom
92 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:34pm
19th Mar 2025 3:34pm
Be Free
A fusion of free verse, prose poetry, and lyrical refrain
By Malcolm Gladwin ( the video is what we did as kids to be free )
Be free—like a bird caught in the updraft,
like a fish slipping silver through the currents,
like a balloon let go from a child’s hand,
floating, floating, floating into the blue yonder.
Be free like a song sung with no fear of echoes,
like wild grass bending only to the wind.
Life is one life.
One breath, one moment, one golden chance
to walk barefoot where the waves kiss the shore,
where the...
By Malcolm Gladwin ( the video is what we did as kids to be free )
Be free—like a bird caught in the updraft,
like a fish slipping silver through the currents,
like a balloon let go from a child’s hand,
floating, floating, floating into the blue yonder.
Be free like a song sung with no fear of echoes,
like wild grass bending only to the wind.
Life is one life.
One breath, one moment, one golden chance
to walk barefoot where the waves kiss the shore,
where the...
#escape
#freedom
59 reads
3 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 7:55pm
11th Mar 2025 7:55pm
~amidst all conflicts chaos n diversities, we are ONE
history belongs to its geography”.. i quote
from an awakening piece of a lil well made
docu .. yes, your
robbing away of this place, you keep ever
going on your serial killer spree & a bloody
boring insipidities of your violent stupidities..
open your eyes at least now..
the dna’s of the anciently endowed
sacredness & peace in here.. lapping
in the centred sanctum sanctorum .. are
agelessly infused in the dancing...
from an awakening piece of a lil well made
docu .. yes, your
robbing away of this place, you keep ever
going on your serial killer spree & a bloody
boring insipidities of your violent stupidities..
open your eyes at least now..
the dna’s of the anciently endowed
sacredness & peace in here.. lapping
in the centred sanctum sanctorum .. are
agelessly infused in the dancing...
#culture
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#freedom
#historical
#inspirational
122 reads
3 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 2:21am
7th Mar 2025 2:21am
Resistance
Resistance
When the day runs blue
And you wish the night would pass onto
It seems the world has turned upside down
Lost friends that can not be found
You try to find the ground balance is not sound
No where to turn to your spirit just dimmer
All our hopes and dreams seem to flicker
But that’s when the will to live starts to kick in
We must stand our ground find our sounds
Resistance is not a privilege it’s here and now
When the day runs blue
And you wish the night would pass onto
It seems the world has turned upside down
Lost friends that can not be found
You try to find the ground balance is not sound
No where to turn to your spirit just dimmer
All our hopes and dreams seem to flicker
But that’s when the will to live starts to kick in
We must stand our ground find our sounds
Resistance is not a privilege it’s here and now
#evil
#freedom
#hypocrisy #rebellion
#hypocrisy #rebellion
76 reads
0 Comments
Seed
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 4:46pm
28th Feb 2025 4:46pm
Sunflower
You are a sunflower
The glory in any flield
I wanted you from a far
But your love was too much
I wanted to be yours
To lick your honeysuckle
To smell your nectar bloom
But your love was too much
You are a sunflower
Green eyes and golden skin
I'm the daffodil king
And I loved you too much
You're a sunflower growing wild
A beauty among the bees
You're not just another wildflower
Though I could never tame you
No, I could never tame you
Your love was too high a price to...
The glory in any flield
I wanted you from a far
But your love was too much
I wanted to be yours
To lick your honeysuckle
To smell your nectar bloom
But your love was too much
You are a sunflower
Green eyes and golden skin
I'm the daffodil king
And I loved you too much
You're a sunflower growing wild
A beauty among the bees
You're not just another wildflower
Though I could never tame you
No, I could never tame you
Your love was too high a price to...
#breakup
#flowers
#freedom
#love
#lover
104 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 4:46pm
25th Feb 2025 4:46pm
Me, Aristotle and the Potato
Peripatetic potato, so restless,
swirling in the fields.
Her journey is a dance.
In fertile land it sprouts.
Exploring the unknown
roots seek their way.
Traces of earth, signs of life.
Peripatetic potato
in search of new stops.
Under the sun and under the rain
it advances fearlessly.
Every step is a discovery.
Between stones and dry leaves
its path is traced.
Peripatetic without whereabouts.
Winds blow ancient stories.
in a curious listening.
Its heart always wandering.
Night falls,...
swirling in the fields.
Her journey is a dance.
In fertile land it sprouts.
Exploring the unknown
roots seek their way.
Traces of earth, signs of life.
Peripatetic potato
in search of new stops.
Under the sun and under the rain
it advances fearlessly.
Every step is a discovery.
Between stones and dry leaves
its path is traced.
Peripatetic without whereabouts.
Winds blow ancient stories.
in a curious listening.
Its heart always wandering.
Night falls,...
#freedom
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
94 reads
6 Comments
Northern1
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 8:56pm
17th Feb 2025 8:56pm
Black Feathers
Black feathers in the breeze
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
#admiration
#birds
#freedom
#magic
#wind
88 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 2:10pm
17th Feb 2025 2:10pm
Balls
Balls bounce high and low.
Joyful laughter fills the air
of games we love and know.
Rubber spheres in flight.
Echoes of a child's delight.
Sunshine warms the sight.
Park's a playground bright.
Kicking, tossing, in full light,
energy's pure might.
Day turns into dusk.
Bouncing slows yet spirits bask
in the joy of play.
Joyful laughter fills the air
of games we love and know.
Rubber spheres in flight.
Echoes of a child's delight.
Sunshine warms the sight.
Park's a playground bright.
Kicking, tossing, in full light,
energy's pure might.
Day turns into dusk.
Bouncing slows yet spirits bask
in the joy of play.
#freedom
#funny
#happiness
76 reads
10 Comments
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