Poems About Freedom Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about freedom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Kementic1
Poem Published
12th Feb 2020 00:15am
12th Feb 2020 00:15am
R.I.P. American Democracy
AG William Barr
is now the most corrupt one by far
Trump's entire administration is totally bizarre
he is running the country like an old Russian Czar
In this month of February
I sadly write this obituary
Because as US citizens we are victims of a Coup
and American Democracy as we know it is finally THROUGH
is now the most corrupt one by far
Trump's entire administration is totally bizarre
he is running the country like an old Russian Czar
In this month of February
I sadly write this obituary
Because as US citizens we are victims of a Coup
and American Democracy as we know it is finally THROUGH
#corruption
#oppression
#politics
#freedom
#inequality
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4 Comments
Li0nsWater
Poem Published
10th Feb 2020 8:17pm
10th Feb 2020 8:17pm
Now and Later
Life is for the living...
Until it all fades away.
Taking for granted all its splendor
in lieu of complaints.
Perfectly made in our creator's
divine way
So called imperfections, we chop, tuck and
cut for play.
Life is for the living...
Until it all fades away.
Loved isn't shared;
It's bartered
or
kept in a cage.
Drowning in negative emotions
that flow enraged.
Life is for the living...
Until it all fades away.
Rooms, then, fill with
cries and sighs,
when we all had yesterday. ...
Until it all fades away.
Taking for granted all its splendor
in lieu of complaints.
Perfectly made in our creator's
divine way
So called imperfections, we chop, tuck and
cut for play.
Life is for the living...
Until it all fades away.
Loved isn't shared;
It's bartered
or
kept in a cage.
Drowning in negative emotions
that flow enraged.
Life is for the living...
Until it all fades away.
Rooms, then, fill with
cries and sighs,
when we all had yesterday. ...
#courage
#angels
#TruthOfLife
#freedom
#morality
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Chuck
Poem Published
9th Feb 2020 4:56am
9th Feb 2020 4:56am
Still We Rise
Thousands of years
And many more tears
Our ancestors has shed
Standing face to face with authority
Many bloodstains and lives lost
Many footprints paved the way
Marching for change
Protesting for rights
All the way to D.C.
I Have a Dream became well known
Lighting a fire in us
We more than a racist joke
We are people
With a lot of fight
Well deserving of equal rights
From scrubbing floors to icons
From shackles to the White House
Everyday is still a fight
But still we rise
And Black...
And many more tears
Our ancestors has shed
Standing face to face with authority
Many bloodstains and lives lost
Many footprints paved the way
Marching for change
Protesting for rights
All the way to D.C.
I Have a Dream became well known
Lighting a fire in us
We more than a racist joke
We are people
With a lot of fight
Well deserving of equal rights
From scrubbing floors to icons
From shackles to the White House
Everyday is still a fight
But still we rise
And Black...
#motivational
#uplifting
#freedom
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da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
6th Feb 2020 12:44pm
6th Feb 2020 12:44pm
No Holds Barred
I have no hold cards when writing poetry
If I ever did, what kind of poet would I be
I decree poetry should be free of any bars
Being free eternally to live amongst the stars
Like space cars to Mars, words take flight
Expressing ones insight without any fright
We must fight for what's right each & everyday
Shining bright with the light within our wordplay
Able to convey what's imprisoned in our minds
Words have the stamina to handle tests of time
In rhymes or free verse, from a wallet or a purse
Pigeonholing is...
If I ever did, what kind of poet would I be
I decree poetry should be free of any bars
Being free eternally to live amongst the stars
Like space cars to Mars, words take flight
Expressing ones insight without any fright
We must fight for what's right each & everyday
Shining bright with the light within our wordplay
Able to convey what's imprisoned in our minds
Words have the stamina to handle tests of time
In rhymes or free verse, from a wallet or a purse
Pigeonholing is...
#rhyming
#FreeVerse
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#freedom
43 reads
8 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
6th Feb 2020 10:37am
6th Feb 2020 10:37am
snakes in your back
in recovery, three
simple ideas are
drummed into
your head right
from the start;
be on the lookout
for:
1. people
2. places
3. things
any of these three
can kill you on any
given day if you are
not careful
relapse goes hand
and hand with these
little bastards
...the places and
things are not so
hard
but people...
now THERE'S the
real problem
you always can't
see them
coming
simple ideas are
drummed into
your head right
from the start;
be on the lookout
for:
1. people
2. places
3. things
any of these three
can kill you on any
given day if you are
not careful
relapse goes hand
and hand with these
little bastards
...the places and
things are not so
hard
but people...
now THERE'S the
real problem
you always can't
see them
coming
#freedom
#responsibility
39 reads
10 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
5th Feb 2020 3:03am
5th Feb 2020 3:03am
When You're Free
The car speeds away
kicking up dirt, dust
and happiness.
kicking up dirt, dust
and happiness.
#freedom
#escape
41 reads
7 Comments
gardenlover
Poem Published
4th Feb 2020 9:48am
4th Feb 2020 9:48am
Summertime
The air was warm the sun was high
A lonely beach; no one to pry.
Cast my clothes went for a swim
Good exercise for every limb
From the water I came out
I suddenly heard a shout
A crowd of girls had come to play
I am naked ; what would they say.
I noticed that they all were bare
Fellow nudists; they would not stare.
They asked if I would join their fun
An invitation I did not shun
The body when free of clothes
Is relaxed from top to toes
Air bathes all ones skin
To cover it; is to me a sin
...
A lonely beach; no one to pry.
Cast my clothes went for a swim
Good exercise for every limb
From the water I came out
I suddenly heard a shout
A crowd of girls had come to play
I am naked ; what would they say.
I noticed that they all were bare
Fellow nudists; they would not stare.
They asked if I would join their fun
An invitation I did not shun
The body when free of clothes
Is relaxed from top to toes
Air bathes all ones skin
To cover it; is to me a sin
...
#inspirational
#freedom
#respect
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Vamps
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2020 6:24pm
2nd Feb 2020 6:24pm
Just the way
Just the way
You affect me
Just the way
We affect we
Just the way
Just the way
All those
Thousand and from the beginning
Told off told death told go
I don't know
You just can't
You just can't
You just can't tell me!
Fuckers!
Turned a wolf into a Chihuahua
What did they do to you!?
I ask
Things you don't know
What you're not aware of
Blind operator of limbs
And without
And without
And without question
Left alone what would you do?
Crack up or
Find yourself ...
You affect me
Just the way
We affect we
Just the way
Just the way
All those
Thousand and from the beginning
Told off told death told go
I don't know
You just can't
You just can't
You just can't tell me!
Fuckers!
Turned a wolf into a Chihuahua
What did they do to you!?
I ask
Things you don't know
What you're not aware of
Blind operator of limbs
And without
And without
And without question
Left alone what would you do?
Crack up or
Find yourself ...
#freedom
#art
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
#SelfWorth
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Chuck
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2020 2:19am
2nd Feb 2020 2:19am
Black People We Stand
Why sit
To continue to be trampled on
Our ancestors in the past
Stood when times were hard
Rosa Parks
Known for being strong
Refusing to give up her seat
Sparked a boycott against what was wrong
The march in Selma
Defined all in one cause
Fighting for voting rights they marched
Taking on police brutality
Never stopping when blood was drawn
Standing together
Our oppressors knew we were strong
By any means
Some fought with peace
And others
Violence was their thing
But still with the...
To continue to be trampled on
Our ancestors in the past
Stood when times were hard
Rosa Parks
Known for being strong
Refusing to give up her seat
Sparked a boycott against what was wrong
The march in Selma
Defined all in one cause
Fighting for voting rights they marched
Taking on police brutality
Never stopping when blood was drawn
Standing together
Our oppressors knew we were strong
By any means
Some fought with peace
And others
Violence was their thing
But still with the...
#motivational
#freedom
#determination
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KitDaddi
Kit Jones
Kit Jones
Poem Published
1st Feb 2020 2:39am
1st Feb 2020 2:39am
FREE ME
I woke up this morning with the TASTE of YOU on my lips.
Your ESSENCE is driving my desires INSANE.
How will I get through today without being in YOUR presence?
The STRUGGLE, the PAIN I feel within my body can ONLY be silenced by YOUR voice. I NEED your comfort. I NEED you to quench the fire that YOU have ignited. Only YOU can soothe my SOUL. come to me BABY GURL and free your DOM.
~KitDaddi~
8/17/2018
Your ESSENCE is driving my desires INSANE.
How will I get through today without being in YOUR presence?
The STRUGGLE, the PAIN I feel within my body can ONLY be silenced by YOUR voice. I NEED your comfort. I NEED you to quench the fire that YOU have ignited. Only YOU can soothe my SOUL. come to me BABY GURL and free your DOM.
~KitDaddi~
8/17/2018
#love
#BDSM
#freedom
#LongDistanceRelationship
#suffering
265 reads
4 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
31st Jan 2020 4:42pm
31st Jan 2020 4:42pm
This Was All A Dream
Unlike Bobby Ewing in the shower scene
since 2016 many evil events were unforeseen
I fear the lost of our humanity
in a nation suffering from borderline insanity
50 service members with head trauma
fake impeachment trial drama
GOP trying to say the same thing happened under Obama
that is all BULLSHIT and you can run tell that to yo mama
In space they say no one can hear you scream
and unfortunately I will not wake up to find-this was all a dream
since 2016 many evil events were unforeseen
I fear the lost of our humanity
in a nation suffering from borderline insanity
50 service members with head trauma
fake impeachment trial drama
GOP trying to say the same thing happened under Obama
that is all BULLSHIT and you can run tell that to yo mama
In space they say no one can hear you scream
and unfortunately I will not wake up to find-this was all a dream
#corruption
#oppression
#power
#politics
#freedom
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Peanut
Poem Published
28th Jan 2020 6:08pm
28th Jan 2020 6:08pm
Purpose
To light a candle
turn out the lights
sip on java
in the flickering night
Soak in a hot tub
spash lavender bubbles
on the floor
gaze at the stars through
the open door
Run through a rose garden
in silence
imaginary feelings
play it back in colourful
slow motion
Stop, stare at Daisies
listen for bees
buzzing towards
the pollen beds
birds nesting in trees
Free children
from the war
their parents left
at the foot
of the family...
turn out the lights
sip on java
in the flickering night
Soak in a hot tub
spash lavender bubbles
on the floor
gaze at the stars through
the open door
Run through a rose garden
in silence
imaginary feelings
play it back in colourful
slow motion
Stop, stare at Daisies
listen for bees
buzzing towards
the pollen beds
birds nesting in trees
Free children
from the war
their parents left
at the foot
of the family...
#identity
#freedom
#escape
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