Poems About Freedom Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about freedom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
Today 12:49pm
Today 12:49pm
I do
I do want freedom.
This site is the reason.
Thanks for being,
Rude and demeaning.
Ill shut it off.
Because I'm the boss.
Invite him over,
And take it all off.
Listen to me moan.
Who the hell is on my phone???
Infront of the pew,
Saying "i do"
Ill take that freedom.
The wedding cake will feed them.
While they wait to view,
A kiss, long overdue.
This site is the reason.
Thanks for being,
Rude and demeaning.
Ill shut it off.
Because I'm the boss.
Invite him over,
And take it all off.
Listen to me moan.
Who the hell is on my phone???
Infront of the pew,
Saying "i do"
Ill take that freedom.
The wedding cake will feed them.
While they wait to view,
A kiss, long overdue.
#freedom
25 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:34pm
19th Mar 2025 3:34pm
Be Free
A fusion of free verse, prose poetry, and lyrical refrain
By Malcolm Gladwin ( the video is what we did as kids to be free )
Be free—like a bird caught in the updraft,
like a fish slipping silver through the currents,
like a balloon let go from a child’s hand,
floating, floating, floating into the blue yonder.
Be free like a song sung with no fear of echoes,
like wild grass bending only to the wind.
Life is one life.
One breath, one moment, one golden chance
to walk barefoot where the waves kiss the shore,
where the...
By Malcolm Gladwin ( the video is what we did as kids to be free )
Be free—like a bird caught in the updraft,
like a fish slipping silver through the currents,
like a balloon let go from a child’s hand,
floating, floating, floating into the blue yonder.
Be free like a song sung with no fear of echoes,
like wild grass bending only to the wind.
Life is one life.
One breath, one moment, one golden chance
to walk barefoot where the waves kiss the shore,
where the...
#escape
#freedom
37 reads
3 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 7:55pm
11th Mar 2025 7:55pm
~amidst all conflicts chaos n diversities, we are ONE
history belongs to its geography”.. i quote
from an awakening piece of a lil well made
docu .. yes, your
robbing away of this place, you keep ever
going on your serial killer spree & a bloody
boring insipidities of your violent stupidities..
open your eyes at least now..
the dna’s of the anciently endowed
sacredness & peace in here.. lapping
in the centred sanctum sanctorum .. are
agelessly infused in the dancing...
from an awakening piece of a lil well made
docu .. yes, your
robbing away of this place, you keep ever
going on your serial killer spree & a bloody
boring insipidities of your violent stupidities..
open your eyes at least now..
the dna’s of the anciently endowed
sacredness & peace in here.. lapping
in the centred sanctum sanctorum .. are
agelessly infused in the dancing...
#culture
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#freedom
#historical
#inspirational
106 reads
3 Comments
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 7:06pm
7th Mar 2025 7:06pm
Therefore, I rap
Therefore, I rap
Until ABC through to Z are defeated
or I find inner peace,
this will not be complete
Others rap like they're hungry,
I rap like I just downed my last scantling of pride
and felt it dissolve tongue deep
I rap, I'm a genie free
with a staff and an apple seed
on a day that's free of eve
when Adam is still a heathen,
I rap like a Lamborghini with keys in,
I rap like the track is on ice
as thin as the skin on my shin
and water splashing up through it's cracks
is only...
Until ABC through to Z are defeated
or I find inner peace,
this will not be complete
Others rap like they're hungry,
I rap like I just downed my last scantling of pride
and felt it dissolve tongue deep
I rap, I'm a genie free
with a staff and an apple seed
on a day that's free of eve
when Adam is still a heathen,
I rap like a Lamborghini with keys in,
I rap like the track is on ice
as thin as the skin on my shin
and water splashing up through it's cracks
is only...
#astronomy
#freedom
#identity #rap
#identity #rap
70 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 2:21am
7th Mar 2025 2:21am
Resistance
Resistance
When the day runs blue
And you wish the night would pass onto
It seems the world has turned upside down
Lost friends that can not be found
You try to find the ground balance is not sound
No where to turn to your spirit just dimmer
All our hopes and dreams seem to flicker
But that’s when the will to live starts to kick in
We must stand our ground find our sounds
Resistance is not a privilege it’s here and now
When the day runs blue
And you wish the night would pass onto
It seems the world has turned upside down
Lost friends that can not be found
You try to find the ground balance is not sound
No where to turn to your spirit just dimmer
All our hopes and dreams seem to flicker
But that’s when the will to live starts to kick in
We must stand our ground find our sounds
Resistance is not a privilege it’s here and now
#evil
#freedom
#hypocrisy #rebellion
#hypocrisy #rebellion
48 reads
0 Comments
Seed
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 4:46pm
28th Feb 2025 4:46pm
Sunflower
You are a sunflower
The glory in any flield
I wanted you from a far
But your love was too much
I wanted to be yours
To lick your honeysuckle
To smell your nectar bloom
But your love was too much
You are a sunflower
Green eyes and golden skin
I'm the daffodil king
And I loved you too much
You're a sunflower growing wild
A beauty among the bees
You're not just another wildflower
And I could never tame you
No, I could never tame you
Your love was too high a price to pay
So, I'll...
The glory in any flield
I wanted you from a far
But your love was too much
I wanted to be yours
To lick your honeysuckle
To smell your nectar bloom
But your love was too much
You are a sunflower
Green eyes and golden skin
I'm the daffodil king
And I loved you too much
You're a sunflower growing wild
A beauty among the bees
You're not just another wildflower
And I could never tame you
No, I could never tame you
Your love was too high a price to pay
So, I'll...
#breakup
#flowers
#freedom
#love
#lover
77 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 4:46pm
25th Feb 2025 4:46pm
Me, Aristotle and the Potato
Peripatetic potato, so restless,
swirling in the fields.
Her journey is a dance.
In fertile land it sprouts.
Exploring the unknown
roots seek their way.
Traces of earth, signs of life.
Peripatetic potato
in search of new stops.
Under the sun and under the rain
it advances fearlessly.
Every step is a discovery.
Between stones and dry leaves
its path is traced.
Peripatetic without whereabouts.
Winds blow ancient stories.
in a curious listening.
Its heart always wandering.
Night falls,...
swirling in the fields.
Her journey is a dance.
In fertile land it sprouts.
Exploring the unknown
roots seek their way.
Traces of earth, signs of life.
Peripatetic potato
in search of new stops.
Under the sun and under the rain
it advances fearlessly.
Every step is a discovery.
Between stones and dry leaves
its path is traced.
Peripatetic without whereabouts.
Winds blow ancient stories.
in a curious listening.
Its heart always wandering.
Night falls,...
#freedom
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
85 reads
6 Comments
Northern1
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 8:56pm
17th Feb 2025 8:56pm
Black Feathers
Black feathers in the breeze
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
#admiration
#birds
#freedom
#magic
#wind
84 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 2:10pm
17th Feb 2025 2:10pm
Balls
Balls bounce high and low.
Joyful laughter fills the air
of games we love and know.
Rubber spheres in flight.
Echoes of a child's delight.
Sunshine warms the sight.
Park's a playground bright.
Kicking, tossing, in full light,
energy's pure might.
Day turns into dusk.
Bouncing slows yet spirits bask
in the joy of play.
Joyful laughter fills the air
of games we love and know.
Rubber spheres in flight.
Echoes of a child's delight.
Sunshine warms the sight.
Park's a playground bright.
Kicking, tossing, in full light,
energy's pure might.
Day turns into dusk.
Bouncing slows yet spirits bask
in the joy of play.
#freedom
#funny
#happiness
69 reads
10 Comments
stevenyprince
alysha
alysha
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 5:35pm
14th Feb 2025 5:35pm
Intelligence of nature
nature knows best
accept the easy path, yet do not rest
be a rock, carved in the stream
let life rip you apart
& rejoice, once again
Kamaloca, on and off
time quickens, as it must.
all the bars
to them prison cells
been left unlocked
a beacon for the moth
Step out side, ride the night,
wild and raw, unthinking,
deconstruct time
let loose, your mind.
accept the easy path, yet do not rest
be a rock, carved in the stream
let life rip you apart
& rejoice, once again
Kamaloca, on and off
time quickens, as it must.
all the bars
to them prison cells
been left unlocked
a beacon for the moth
Step out side, ride the night,
wild and raw, unthinking,
deconstruct time
let loose, your mind.
#escape
#freedom
#nature
#sex
#water
82 reads
0 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 3:04am
13th Feb 2025 3:04am
Elon Musk Can Suck My Dick
The crumbling empire
Won’t stand
Much longer
The fortress walls
Are breaking, oh
So much faster
to you propagators
breeding lies
among blind eyes
keep pushing bullshit
keep having your fits
to succumb
to your master
OH...
ELON
you weak little insignificant delusional bitch
think you're important yet
you're just a little BITCH
I wave good-BYE
We do not need you
we recognize your nothingness
We wave good-BYE
Everyone is aware
of your bullshit ...
Won’t stand
Much longer
The fortress walls
Are breaking, oh
So much faster
to you propagators
breeding lies
among blind eyes
keep pushing bullshit
keep having your fits
to succumb
to your master
OH...
ELON
you weak little insignificant delusional bitch
think you're important yet
you're just a little BITCH
I wave good-BYE
We do not need you
we recognize your nothingness
We wave good-BYE
Everyone is aware
of your bullshit ...
#CallToAction
#freedom
#identity
#manipulation
#responsibility
118 reads
4 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 3:33pm
6th Feb 2025 3:33pm
Earplugs
Times like these are dangerous
darkness dimming sun song
No birth of notes splashing
against our ears
before the poem digs up the well
of our heart
I don't wish for silence
but a roar from the shadow
howling for the symphony
the unity
of a thousand instruments
orchestrated as one
shattering the disease
spreading like olive oil
over the flowers
who's petaled eyes
are glazing over in disbelief
I will not shut my mouth
to...
darkness dimming sun song
No birth of notes splashing
against our ears
before the poem digs up the well
of our heart
I don't wish for silence
but a roar from the shadow
howling for the symphony
the unity
of a thousand instruments
orchestrated as one
shattering the disease
spreading like olive oil
over the flowers
who's petaled eyes
are glazing over in disbelief
I will not shut my mouth
to...
#CallToAction
#freedom
#LGBT
263 reads
11 Comments
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