Poems About Freedom Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about freedom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
After
Intense fire
fuels the spirit
begging of you
do not fear it
Rejuvenated
burning bright
in the darkness
affording light
Urging passion
feeding the soul
elixir of life
sensation whole
This wild heart
untamed and free
without caution
loving deeply
Not conditioned
to conform
meant to dance
amid the storm
fuels the spirit
begging of you
do not fear it
Rejuvenated
burning bright
in the darkness
affording light
Urging passion
feeding the soul
elixir of life
sensation whole
This wild heart
untamed and free
without caution
loving deeply
Not conditioned
to conform
meant to dance
amid the storm
#freedom
#PersonalGrowth
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Summit
Rising again
from ashes of the past
learning to soar
amidst shadows cast
Precipitous mountains
required to navigate
reaching the apex
summit my fate
Lessons realised
along this path
stronger for them
in the aftermath
History unaltered
future unknown
yet on this journey
I have grown
An upward route
paved solely for me
attitude determined
regardless of debris
Prepared to survive
heart open
despite all
that left it broken
from ashes of the past
learning to soar
amidst shadows cast
Precipitous mountains
required to navigate
reaching the apex
summit my fate
Lessons realised
along this path
stronger for them
in the aftermath
History unaltered
future unknown
yet on this journey
I have grown
An upward route
paved solely for me
attitude determined
regardless of debris
Prepared to survive
heart open
despite all
that left it broken
#hope
#freedom
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Wake Up!
Time marches on, relentless, unstirred,
Unaware of events,
Events that might alter
The very essence of our shared realm.
The cosmic web shifts, threads anew,
Neither the present
Nor the future
Can claim certainty's helm.
A mist obscures our collective sight,
Save for a few who stand in the light.
Fed with spoonfuls of crafted tales,
Our minds shaped to fit their scales.
We wander through life's foggy veil,
Like somnambulists on a well-trodden trail.
Conditioned beings in an endless cycle,
To...
Unaware of events,
Events that might alter
The very essence of our shared realm.
The cosmic web shifts, threads anew,
Neither the present
Nor the future
Can claim certainty's helm.
A mist obscures our collective sight,
Save for a few who stand in the light.
Fed with spoonfuls of crafted tales,
Our minds shaped to fit their scales.
We wander through life's foggy veil,
Like somnambulists on a well-trodden trail.
Conditioned beings in an endless cycle,
To...
#conflict
#secrets
#politics
#freedom
#responsibility
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All the Miles Logged
A long time ago my wife gifted me a pair of shoes
I remember they were my first with memory foam
Now I’m writing a poem to those old blue Sketchers
And honestly, they were the best pair I ever owned
It wasn’t just the comfort, color or style
But they were best pair to have on the road
All the miles I logged every time I jogged
Felt smooth and soft with each step in control
And the times when I didn’t have my music
With just the sound of my breathing and feet
Watching the sun rise over the mountains
It felt like I could...
I remember they were my first with memory foam
Now I’m writing a poem to those old blue Sketchers
And honestly, they were the best pair I ever owned
It wasn’t just the comfort, color or style
But they were best pair to have on the road
All the miles I logged every time I jogged
Felt smooth and soft with each step in control
And the times when I didn’t have my music
With just the sound of my breathing and feet
Watching the sun rise over the mountains
It felt like I could...
#freedom
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8 Comments
Sycamore leaves
Whispers call the night's allure.
Stars above pure and sure.
Dreams take flight, hearts endure,
silent woods of paths obscure.
Gentle waves kiss the shore,
lost in time, myths of yore.
Sailors seek the ocean's core,
Legends live forevermore.
Mountains high in eagles soar,
Winds of fate softly roar.
Nature's gifts, an open door.
Life's design at its core.
Sunset's glow in colors pour,
evening's peace, who could ignore.
Shadows dance, light's encore,
night descends, moon's adore.
Fields...
Stars above pure and sure.
Dreams take flight, hearts endure,
silent woods of paths obscure.
Gentle waves kiss the shore,
lost in time, myths of yore.
Sailors seek the ocean's core,
Legends live forevermore.
Mountains high in eagles soar,
Winds of fate softly roar.
Nature's gifts, an open door.
Life's design at its core.
Sunset's glow in colors pour,
evening's peace, who could ignore.
Shadows dance, light's encore,
night descends, moon's adore.
Fields...
#environment
#clouds
#nature
#freedom
#healing
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In the air
Light of the dusk casting hues of pink.
I stand bare on the beach.
Only thing I have on a smile and a buzz.
Nothing else in reach.
Sand crevices in my toes.
Cool breeze nestling air around me.
Watching the sun vanish from the sky.
Enjoying all I see.
Nothing with me Nothing on.
No one here no one to come.
Yeah I'm at peace with the world
Hit of my blunt flavored in rum.
Tranquility can't be bought.
You can't pay for peace.
Feel out of sorts.
Come smoke with me.
I stand bare on the beach.
Only thing I have on a smile and a buzz.
Nothing else in reach.
Sand crevices in my toes.
Cool breeze nestling air around me.
Watching the sun vanish from the sky.
Enjoying all I see.
Nothing with me Nothing on.
No one here no one to come.
Yeah I'm at peace with the world
Hit of my blunt flavored in rum.
Tranquility can't be bought.
You can't pay for peace.
Feel out of sorts.
Come smoke with me.
#happiness
#marijuana
#freedom
#meditation
#philosophical
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2 Comments
All too common sense
Why question ?
it’s boring
and it gets on our tits
Go protest
in silence
somewhere
where that shit might fit
Be told
why don’t you!
Just do as I say
Now you’re marching for freedom
mate, that sounds a bit gay
Listen,
it’s not hard
we all think the same
This conflict you’re causing
maybe it’s all in your brain
How can we be wrong
if each of us agree
The world is as it seems, dude
we don’t...
it’s boring
and it gets on our tits
Go protest
in silence
somewhere
where that shit might fit
Be told
why don’t you!
Just do as I say
Now you’re marching for freedom
mate, that sounds a bit gay
Listen,
it’s not hard
we all think the same
This conflict you’re causing
maybe it’s all in your brain
How can we be wrong
if each of us agree
The world is as it seems, dude
we don’t...
#freedom
#acceptance
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8 Comments
One of Them
Stop with the parties
for starters
quit the drugs
and the booze
And the football and horses
you know you’re no fun when you loose
Give up the smokes
no jokes
if you can muster the will
And the friend who reminds you,
“Even boredom can kill”
Go sober they told ya
it will all work out fine
But that doesn’t help with the demons
or passing the time
Be respected and successful
be everything they tell you to be
Do what you want, man
just don’t try and sell it to me
Keep your...
for starters
quit the drugs
and the booze
And the football and horses
you know you’re no fun when you loose
Give up the smokes
no jokes
if you can muster the will
And the friend who reminds you,
“Even boredom can kill”
Go sober they told ya
it will all work out fine
But that doesn’t help with the demons
or passing the time
Be respected and successful
be everything they tell you to be
Do what you want, man
just don’t try and sell it to me
Keep your...
#alcohol
#drugs
#addiction
#freedom
#escape
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4 Comments
Gypsy spirit
Lights are different here,
Seem the sun won't come near.
Born in dem swamps and hood.
Now I'm in a cold damp wood.
Still it calls to my soul.
I love nature I may have said dat before.
Tent set fire burning bright.
Big Alaskan sky full of star light.
World full of ugly and beauty to.
I stand naked in the brisk moonlight.
Slender frame never been a big man.
6 pack started, thick calloused hand.
Roll another smoke sip a warm brew.
Watch the stream flow through.
Listen to the animals...
Seem the sun won't come near.
Born in dem swamps and hood.
Now I'm in a cold damp wood.
Still it calls to my soul.
I love nature I may have said dat before.
Tent set fire burning bright.
Big Alaskan sky full of star light.
World full of ugly and beauty to.
I stand naked in the brisk moonlight.
Slender frame never been a big man.
6 pack started, thick calloused hand.
Roll another smoke sip a warm brew.
Watch the stream flow through.
Listen to the animals...
#travel
#freedom
#meditation
#CallToAction
#PopCulture
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Real Freedom of Expression
You say we have freedom of expression, but this is only when you like what we say.
When you disagree with our opinions, you label us as bigots and extremists.
Diabolical leaders of the world, your laws are full of human excrement and urine.
You make laws against what you call hate speech, yet you sanction wars and bloodshed?
Teaching people to fight and kill one another in the name of patriotism is hatred.
When someone speaks the truth and exposes your evil deeds, you say it is hate speech.
Hypocrites and liars, you support free speech only when it is...
When you disagree with our opinions, you label us as bigots and extremists.
Diabolical leaders of the world, your laws are full of human excrement and urine.
You make laws against what you call hate speech, yet you sanction wars and bloodshed?
Teaching people to fight and kill one another in the name of patriotism is hatred.
When someone speaks the truth and exposes your evil deeds, you say it is hate speech.
Hypocrites and liars, you support free speech only when it is...
#hate
#lies
#war
#deception
#freedom
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reality testing
the future that this became
is not so bright and shiny
as when it was seen from
the past
(where are the flying
cars?)
is not so bright and shiny
as when it was seen from
the past
(where are the flying
cars?)
#freedom
#responsibility
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8 Comments
Twisted goals
The epiphany is worth
a bicentenary
No one knew
But she's only
Nine
A telephone and a book
Is all she's given
If you don't belong
To this universe
Who will adopt you
I know something good
I KNOW something good
I know something good
I know SOMETHING good
I knew some fickled
I know this in my soul
Its good
Don't corrupt me
I know it's something good
I know it's something good
I'll rise
I'll rise
Plenty
Only this I say
You will rise again
Remember stem
We...
a bicentenary
No one knew
But she's only
Nine
A telephone and a book
Is all she's given
If you don't belong
To this universe
Who will adopt you
I know something good
I KNOW something good
I know something good
I know SOMETHING good
I knew some fickled
I know this in my soul
Its good
Don't corrupt me
I know it's something good
I know it's something good
I'll rise
I'll rise
Plenty
Only this I say
You will rise again
Remember stem
We...
#jealousy
#war
#freedom
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