Fiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#fiction
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 1:58pm
26th Jan 2025 1:58pm
Shocked At The Sight Of Her Mother
Holly became shocked
at the sight of her mother
naked and getting
probed from behind by her kid
brother Toby and his rod.
at the sight of her mother
naked and getting
probed from behind by her kid
brother Toby and his rod.
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
96 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 7:56pm
25th Jan 2025 7:56pm
Asked To Come To Work Tomorrow
Jonathan called the
office and asked to come to
work tomorrow for
he and Barbara are both
nude and humping each other.
office and asked to come to
work tomorrow for
he and Barbara are both
nude and humping each other.
#deception
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 11:37am
25th Jan 2025 11:37am
Honest. I Really Didn't Know Who He Was.
Jill's miracle to
find the one man
to lose her virginity
changed into sheer
embarrassment for
she chose her dad.
find the one man
to lose her virginity
changed into sheer
embarrassment for
she chose her dad.
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#ignorance
#sex
100 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:29pm
24th Jan 2025 2:29pm
Yes! That's It! Do It Now!
Quick!
You got
to shoot that
rod off and get
it out of me! Mom
and Dad would be home soon
and I know that they would not
be pleased to see me naked and
letting my stepbrother hump me hard
on their own bed! Yes! That's it! Do it now!
You got
to shoot that
rod off and get
it out of me! Mom
and Dad would be home soon
and I know that they would not
be pleased to see me naked and
letting my stepbrother hump me hard
on their own bed! Yes! That's it! Do it now!
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
109 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
Cheating On Her Husband The Audio Way
Roberta made sure
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
111 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 2:21pm
23rd Jan 2025 2:21pm
The Couple Allowed Her To Join Them
Elizabeth heard a noise outside.
She followed that noise to the river.
She spotted Charles humping Mary.
That made Elizabeth strip and touch herself.
The couple allowed her to join them.
She followed that noise to the river.
She spotted Charles humping Mary.
That made Elizabeth strip and touch herself.
The couple allowed her to join them.
#confusion
#fiction
#friendship
#river
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 3:44am
23rd Jan 2025 3:44am
To Just Ignore Him
Kevin moved closer to Krissy.
She's letting Karina lick her one hole.
She also licked on Anna's.
Then, Kevin smacked Krissy on the rump.
Anna reminded Krissy to just ignore him.
She's letting Karina lick her one hole.
She also licked on Anna's.
Then, Kevin smacked Krissy on the rump.
Anna reminded Krissy to just ignore him.
#fiction
#lesbian
#lover
#sex
#threesome
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 2:26pm
22nd Jan 2025 2:26pm
Ignore Him. It's Just An Empty Threat.
Open the
door, you cheating bitch! I
know that you are in there and letting
some jerk bang you with his rod! I am saying right
now that unless you open this door,
I am coming in with
a shotgun!
door, you cheating bitch! I
know that you are in there and letting
some jerk bang you with his rod! I am saying right
now that unless you open this door,
I am coming in with
a shotgun!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
72 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 1:48pm
22nd Jan 2025 1:48pm
Feel Like Having A Threesome?
Jennifer has forgotten
what real sex feels
like before she saw
Dylan humping Sally
and decided to strip
down and join them.
what real sex feels
like before she saw
Dylan humping Sally
and decided to strip
down and join them.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#sex
#threesome
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 10:21am
22nd Jan 2025 10:21am
His Pet Antelope
Valentines Day Massacre cumming all over your pie
In the form of a girl with pins through her eyes
She came from the south with a dimes worth of gas
Money on her mind and some dope shoved up her ass
Outside of Memphis her car was broken down
She shot a white cracker in the head, immediately left town
She was a Jehovah's witness before she gave him head
She was selling on the street, her funky hair was red
She shat in his mouth, and threw him on the bed
That's when she cut off his balls and glued them on his head
She stole his car, which...
In the form of a girl with pins through her eyes
She came from the south with a dimes worth of gas
Money on her mind and some dope shoved up her ass
Outside of Memphis her car was broken down
She shot a white cracker in the head, immediately left town
She was a Jehovah's witness before she gave him head
She was selling on the street, her funky hair was red
She shat in his mouth, and threw him on the bed
That's when she cut off his balls and glued them on his head
She stole his car, which...
#addiction
#fiction
#greed
#sex
#violence
63 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
You Couldn't Wait For Me. Could You?
Ashley went into
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#tanka
#threesome
106 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 11:21am
21st Jan 2025 11:21am
Good Thing Mom And Dad Are Not Here To See This
Went into a brothel in
London and became
shocked at the sight
of my own little sister
Jessica letting some
character hump her.
London and became
shocked at the sight
of my own little sister
Jessica letting some
character hump her.
#corruption
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
100 reads
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