Fiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#fiction
If at first you don't succeed, hide in the garden shed
A man from America convinced himself that he was dying of a transmissible disease and that he had already infected his wife & children. To spare himself and his family this terrible fate, he decided they should all die.
In the middle of his homemade crime spree, he called the police to notify them of the murder suicide in progress. He murdered each family member with a fatal gunshot to the head.
While waiting for the cops to arrive, he stabbed himself repeatedly, but found that he wasn't dying quickly enough. He then decided to hit himself over the head with a...
In the middle of his homemade crime spree, he called the police to notify them of the murder suicide in progress. He murdered each family member with a fatal gunshot to the head.
While waiting for the cops to arrive, he stabbed himself repeatedly, but found that he wasn't dying quickly enough. He then decided to hit himself over the head with a...
#family
#murder
#suicide
#fiction
#ignorance
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Like A Scene From Some Blue Movie
Carolyn was found sleeping
naked in her bed with Kirk
next to her like a scene from
some blue movie being shown
at the San Francisco Mitchell
Brothers' O'Farrell Theatre.
naked in her bed with Kirk
next to her like a scene from
some blue movie being shown
at the San Francisco Mitchell
Brothers' O'Farrell Theatre.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sensual
43 reads
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I Am Nobody's Sadistic Party Toy!
At nearly the end
of the party, Khloe has
been on a bed stripped
naked, tied down tightly and
sexually assaulted.
of the party, Khloe has
been on a bed stripped
naked, tied down tightly and
sexually assaulted.
#dark
#BDSM
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
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Barbie
She looked just
Like a Barbie doll
Platinum hair
Pulled back
In a long ponytail
All dolled up
In her beach going
Clothes
Proudly flaunting
Her big Barbie boobs
Sadly, she was
As plastic
As they come
Like a Barbie doll
Platinum hair
Pulled back
In a long ponytail
All dolled up
In her beach going
Clothes
Proudly flaunting
Her big Barbie boobs
Sadly, she was
As plastic
As they come
#women
#fiction
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12 Comments
If I'm Right, Hosting A Party Here Was Your Idea.
Bryce walked into the
living room and saw Donna
sleeping nude on the sofa.
And when he gave her
rump a hard slap, Donna woke
up and looking hungover.
living room and saw Donna
sleeping nude on the sofa.
And when he gave her
rump a hard slap, Donna woke
up and looking hungover.
#friendship
#home
#alcohol
#fiction
#sensual
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They're Not The Only Ones Still Waiting For The Other Shoe To Drop
Uncle
George had just
died and
left his house to Mark
and his family
on the condition
that they
stay there for
one year.
George had just
died and
left his house to Mark
and his family
on the condition
that they
stay there for
one year.
#family
#home
#fiction
#mystery
#tragedy
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If I've Done Something At That Beach Party Last Night, I'm Sorry.
Jeff woke up naked
and saw Barbara looking
at the scene outside
which made the hungover guy
want to apologize there.
and saw Barbara looking
at the scene outside
which made the hungover guy
want to apologize there.
#friendship
#alcohol
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
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Twitch of the Death Nerve
#loneliness
#women
#violence
#fiction
#MentalHealth
23 reads
10 Comments
To Get It On With Her Old College Flame
Abigail stepped out of the bathroom
with only her robe on and watched
her college roommate Helen
sit on the staircase and
acting like wanting
to get it on
with her old
college
flame.
with only her robe on and watched
her college roommate Helen
sit on the staircase and
acting like wanting
to get it on
with her old
college
flame.
#lesbian
#home
#fiction
#nostalgia
#sensual
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You Jerk! You Said There Was No Camera!
Tori
got something
in the
mail which happens to
be a video
of her naked and
getting
humped by her
friend Mark.
got something
in the
mail which happens to
be a video
of her naked and
getting
humped by her
friend Mark.
#friendship
#corruption
#technology
#fiction
#sensual
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Sorry, Babe. I Already Hooked Up With Someone Else.
Nikki figured maybe she
would let Crystal come
back but that was before
Nikki saw Crystal letting
Jonathan hump her.
would let Crystal come
back but that was before
Nikki saw Crystal letting
Jonathan hump her.
#lesbian
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#lover
#sensual
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A Girl With the Skin of the Moon
I met a young girl with a face of a leper,
as I browsed some travel books at the local store down on the lower east side
I heard her mother was raped on a bed of sand, while watching two people fuck on a bed of sand
she was known as a pillow biter
her bruises were covered with makeup
she wanted revenge
someone took a photograph of the rape
one of the men was in the lower left of the photograph
she described the rape as a porno holocaust
it was a gang bang
one of the men were discovered in a steam bath
this wasn't his first time
he...
as I browsed some travel books at the local store down on the lower east side
I heard her mother was raped on a bed of sand, while watching two people fuck on a bed of sand
she was known as a pillow biter
her bruises were covered with makeup
she wanted revenge
someone took a photograph of the rape
one of the men was in the lower left of the photograph
she described the rape as a porno holocaust
it was a gang bang
one of the men were discovered in a steam bath
this wasn't his first time
he...
#violence
#abuse
#fiction
#ShortStory
#illness
56 reads
2 Comments
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