Fiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#fiction
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Today 3:53am
Today 3:53am
I Already Paid The Rent And Am Not Moving Out
I stepped into this apartment.
It looked like I hit the jackpot.
That's before someone came in.
She's a blonde bikini chick named Sabrina.
She told the landlord she's staying put.
It looked like I hit the jackpot.
That's before someone came in.
She's a blonde bikini chick named Sabrina.
She told the landlord she's staying put.
#confusion
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#women
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:59pm
Yesterday 2:59pm
She Was Teasing My Friend
She was teasing my friend.
He walked over and grabbed her rump.
She kicked his nuts hard.
He walked over and grabbed her rump.
She kicked his nuts hard.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#ignorance
#temptation
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:17pm
Yesterday 2:17pm
A Couple In Front Of A Campfire
While walking on the
beach, Annabeth saw
a naked couple hump
in front of a campfire.
But when she moved
closer towards them,
the couple disappeared
like they were mist.
beach, Annabeth saw
a naked couple hump
in front of a campfire.
But when she moved
closer towards them,
the couple disappeared
like they were mist.
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#ghosts
#sex
62 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:45am
Yesterday 2:45am
Joining A Glam Metal Band Is Not Good
Racquel joined Nemesis on tour.
Everything was going okay before the drugs.
She's found dead in Miami.
Everything was going okay before the drugs.
She's found dead in Miami.
#art
#dark
#death
#drugs
#fiction
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 8:26pm
30th Jan 2025 8:26pm
Feels Like Something From Out Of A Sex Film... Does It?
Brandon was taking a shower.
That's before Susan... Tommy's mother... joined him.
She lets him hump her.
But then, Tommy's father Charles walked in.
his shocked eyes fixed on the lovers.
That's before Susan... Tommy's mother... joined him.
She lets him hump her.
But then, Tommy's father Charles walked in.
his shocked eyes fixed on the lovers.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 11:20am
30th Jan 2025 11:20am
Didn't Know That It's Really A Sex Film
Connie walked in and
said that she can't
find her costume
before she spotted
Kent, Robyn and
Jamie humping in
front of the film crew.
said that she can't
find her costume
before she spotted
Kent, Robyn and
Jamie humping in
front of the film crew.
#confusion
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:47am
30th Jan 2025 3:47am
In Front Of A Fireplace... And Something Else
Both Rick and Teri
got naked in front of both
a fire and Jeff's sex film crew.
got naked in front of both
a fire and Jeff's sex film crew.
#art
#fiction
#fire
#friendship
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 8:07pm
29th Jan 2025 8:07pm
Leave Him Alone Or Else
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#husband
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 11:27am
29th Jan 2025 11:27am
She's Not A Baby Girl Anymore
As far back as even
I could remember,
Molly was just a baby
girl and Dad would
do nothing bad to her.
But that was before
she got older and Dad
took one look at her
naked which made him
want to hump her hard.
I could remember,
Molly was just a baby
girl and Dad would
do nothing bad to her.
But that was before
she got older and Dad
took one look at her
naked which made him
want to hump her hard.
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 2:52pm
28th Jan 2025 2:52pm
That Made Her Feel Guilty About It
The film's director said "action".
Marilyn approached and slid off her robe.
John started to hump her.
But she saw Harry outside the window.
That made her feel guilty about it.
Marilyn approached and slid off her robe.
John started to hump her.
But she saw Harry outside the window.
That made her feel guilty about it.
#art
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 2:37am
28th Jan 2025 2:37am
Made Denise Sit And Cry
Denise peeked into the bathroom.
She caught Kvin showering with rival Julia.
Made Denise sit and cry.
She caught Kvin showering with rival Julia.
Made Denise sit and cry.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#hurt
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 8:50pm
27th Jan 2025 8:50pm
Gabriel Came Home From California
Gabriel came home from California.
He heard a noise in the bedroom.
Saw his wife Ellen naked.
She was also with Tony and Debbie.
They were humping while Gabriel watched them.
He heard a noise in the bedroom.
Saw his wife Ellen naked.
She was also with Tony and Debbie.
They were humping while Gabriel watched them.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
82 reads
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