Fiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#fiction
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Today 2:13am
Today 2:13am
Please! Get Out Of Here Quick Before They Come Back!
Todd and Cody stepped inside.
They found Lisa naked and tied tightly.
She begged them to run.
Cody left only to hear a noise.
Her parents done the same to Todd.
They found Lisa naked and tied tightly.
She begged them to run.
Cody left only to hear a noise.
Her parents done the same to Todd.
#BDSM
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#suffering
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:56pm
Yesterday 1:56pm
Hope You Don't Mind Me Joining You
Diana was enjoying such a
relaxing soak in the outdoor
jacuzzi before she heard
a noise, opened her eyes
and saw her neighbor
Scott disrobe and
get in the
tub with
her.
relaxing soak in the outdoor
jacuzzi before she heard
a noise, opened her eyes
and saw her neighbor
Scott disrobe and
get in the
tub with
her.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sex
62 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:35am
Yesterday 11:35am
Got A Letter From Kelly In The Mail
We just got a letter
from Kelly in the mail.
It says that Daddy's
Little Girl is living in
San Francisco where
she's enjoying laying
naked on a beach and
so far away from him.
from Kelly in the mail.
It says that Daddy's
Little Girl is living in
San Francisco where
she's enjoying laying
naked on a beach and
so far away from him.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:38am
Yesterday 10:38am
Time Has Come Today
Synchronize your tiny minds, so you'll catch what I say
spread some crumbs on your path, so you won't lose your way
sunset sinks beneath the hill, the end of another day
the time has come for sleep again, i turn my head away
The darkness falls around me
once again, it has found me
i need to focus within me
the time has come to dream
I must hang tightly to the rope or I'll fall 10,000 feet
They give me a warning one more time, before I awake from sleep
I feel the shadow coming near, I feel the searing heat
I know if I don't...
spread some crumbs on your path, so you won't lose your way
sunset sinks beneath the hill, the end of another day
the time has come for sleep again, i turn my head away
The darkness falls around me
once again, it has found me
i need to focus within me
the time has come to dream
I must hang tightly to the rope or I'll fall 10,000 feet
They give me a warning one more time, before I awake from sleep
I feel the shadow coming near, I feel the searing heat
I know if I don't...
#dreams
#fiction
#lyrics
#nightmares
#rhyming
38 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:34am
Yesterday 10:34am
Little Red Corvette
He shot that dude like it was nothing
I never seen anything like it in my life
He pulled up to the red light
Got out of his car
He walked over to the Corvette and fired three shots into the drivers face
He then calmly returned to his car
He had the music up really loud
Some horrible pop music from today
Pure shit!
He just wasted that fucker!
Anyway,
The light turned green and he took off
So did everybody else
Except for the dead guy in the Little Red Corvette
Damn I miss Prince
I never seen anything like it in my life
He pulled up to the red light
Got out of his car
He walked over to the Corvette and fired three shots into the drivers face
He then calmly returned to his car
He had the music up really loud
Some horrible pop music from today
Pure shit!
He just wasted that fucker!
Anyway,
The light turned green and he took off
So did everybody else
Except for the dead guy in the Little Red Corvette
Damn I miss Prince
#cars
#fiction
#murder
#satirical
#ShortStory
29 reads
5 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:26am
Yesterday 2:26am
Diana Woke With A Hangover
Diana woke with a hangover.
She saw herself naked in a mirror.
Then, she remembered Derek's party.
They were celebrating finally graduating from college.
She and Luke gulped one too many.
She saw herself naked in a mirror.
Then, she remembered Derek's party.
They were celebrating finally graduating from college.
She and Luke gulped one too many.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#school
#sex
27 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 2:31pm
8th Apr 2025 2:31pm
I Had Been Saving Myself For Marriage
Did you hump me hard?
Sure, Linda. Just like in Spartacus: Vengeance.
As in how hard, John?
Whoa! It hurts down there?
I need to go to the bathroom.
Just to find out... right?
Right. It'll be a minute.
Hi, Matt. I think I'm in trouble.
JOHN, YOU DAMN STINKING JERK!!
Now I know that. Later.
You made blood gush out of me!
Ah, Jeeze! Sorry about that.
I had been saving myself for marriage!
Great! That Gina and her bachelorette party!
Sure, Linda. Just like in Spartacus: Vengeance.
As in how hard, John?
Whoa! It hurts down there?
I need to go to the bathroom.
Just to find out... right?
Right. It'll be a minute.
Hi, Matt. I think I'm in trouble.
JOHN, YOU DAMN STINKING JERK!!
Now I know that. Later.
You made blood gush out of me!
Ah, Jeeze! Sorry about that.
I had been saving myself for marriage!
Great! That Gina and her bachelorette party!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
31 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 4:28am
8th Apr 2025 4:28am
Something Tells Me You're Really Not Thrilled
You're such a magnificent hump.
You too, Susan. But you're getting married.
I know. To Oliver. Tomorrow.
Something tells me you're really not thrilled.
Trust me, Mike. You got that right.
You too, Susan. But you're getting married.
I know. To Oliver. Tomorrow.
Something tells me you're really not thrilled.
Trust me, Mike. You got that right.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
77 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 9:51pm
7th Apr 2025 9:51pm
BEDROOM SCENE (INSPIRED BY NIZANA)
#erotic
#fiction
#prose #sex
#prose #sex
139 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
Why Didn't You Tell Me I'm Topless?!
Carol was
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#technology
89 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 2:25am
7th Apr 2025 2:25am
What A Bad Dream She Had Last Night
Candace finished taking her shower.
She went into her and Mark's bedroom.
Candace caught Mark humping Paula.
The couple looked and laughed at Candace.
She woke screaming before she saw Mark.
She went into her and Mark's bedroom.
Candace caught Mark humping Paula.
The couple looked and laughed at Candace.
She woke screaming before she saw Mark.
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#nightmares
#sex
89 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 3:19pm
6th Apr 2025 3:19pm
A Sexist Pig Getting What He Deserves
Chris walked into the bathroom.
Saw a woman's reflection in the mirror.
That yawn became a scream.
Saw a woman's reflection in the mirror.
That yawn became a scream.
#fear
#fiction
#home
#mirror
#transgender
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