Poems About Fairies Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fairies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fearlessstars
Poem Published
9th Jan 2020 7:38am
9th Jan 2020 7:38am
7 Raven
In a terrible time of famine, war, pest and inquisition,
a master Wicca giving homeless boys a apprentice permission.
They had to maintain a household in an isolated place,
working very hard to earn some recognition to face.
Collecting woods, herbs and edibles to survive
building a garden, harvesting some fields to strive.
When the moon was new the master summonsed the boys,
teaching them the art of magic, using dark power like toys.
The very same power was keeping those young men imprisoned,
some tried to run away, but got lost and ended up same...
a master Wicca giving homeless boys a apprentice permission.
They had to maintain a household in an isolated place,
working very hard to earn some recognition to face.
Collecting woods, herbs and edibles to survive
building a garden, harvesting some fields to strive.
When the moon was new the master summonsed the boys,
teaching them the art of magic, using dark power like toys.
The very same power was keeping those young men imprisoned,
some tried to run away, but got lost and ended up same...
#birds
#fairies
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Joshuaberry
Ancestor
Ancestor
Poem Published
8th Jan 2020 9:20am
8th Jan 2020 9:20am
Callous Chaos's Combustion
tactic twain trudging
eerie earth moaning
gaunt goddesses grooving
per punctured feelings
on hoisted hankerings
seeped'n salient scrunchies
then mystic metamorphosis
by bully bewitched
callous crest castrating
foil fates fostering:
fighting fortune furiously
nocturnal nature spilled
callous chaos's combustion
war met leisure.
20:01:08:10:08
~Note~ Inspired by Rosalind, Celia and Touchstone's arguments about Fortune and Nature as goddesses. I thereby present a fight between them. They'll...
eerie earth moaning
gaunt goddesses grooving
per punctured feelings
on hoisted hankerings
seeped'n salient scrunchies
then mystic metamorphosis
by bully bewitched
callous crest castrating
foil fates fostering:
fighting fortune furiously
nocturnal nature spilled
callous chaos's combustion
war met leisure.
20:01:08:10:08
~Note~ Inspired by Rosalind, Celia and Touchstone's arguments about Fortune and Nature as goddesses. I thereby present a fight between them. They'll...
#monsters
#fairies
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dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
7th Jan 2020 7:47pm
7th Jan 2020 7:47pm
Fiddlin' About // No Encore
Little did i know that i knew
so very little, & soon as i knew
how little i could know, the stink
in the swamp was rising in a
methane glow, (Little and slow
we'd have to go, going past
gone, then somewhat more.
Little little was the pussycat;s fiddle (when for really there was no
(such of a fiddle at all a'loud).
once again, i looked so little that I may as well have naught looked the
least fiddlingly of any (of 'em).
So what the hell can you...
so very little, & soon as i knew
how little i could know, the stink
in the swamp was rising in a
methane glow, (Little and slow
we'd have to go, going past
gone, then somewhat more.
Little little was the pussycat;s fiddle (when for really there was no
(such of a fiddle at all a'loud).
once again, i looked so little that I may as well have naught looked the
least fiddlingly of any (of 'em).
So what the hell can you...
#cats
#music
#fairies
#aging
#luck
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Joshuaberry
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Ancestor
Poem Published
7th Jan 2020 8:00am
7th Jan 2020 8:00am
Jolting Jumpy Verses
la-de-da limbs lurching
into mystic malady
birthed by odds
seeped in song
nocturnal nymph chew
pulpy syllables puked
airy atmosphere amputating
jolting jumpy verses
willow wack willed
alchemist alto hankering
lusty lips severing
confetti crunching smithereens
felon life fostering
damped desires drooling.
20:01:07:08:36
~Note~ Only Yahuah knows what the poet had discussed.
into mystic malady
birthed by odds
seeped in song
nocturnal nymph chew
pulpy syllables puked
airy atmosphere amputating
jolting jumpy verses
willow wack willed
alchemist alto hankering
lusty lips severing
confetti crunching smithereens
felon life fostering
damped desires drooling.
20:01:07:08:36
~Note~ Only Yahuah knows what the poet had discussed.
#ghosts
#fairies
#aliens
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Joshuaberry
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Ancestor
Poem Published
31st Dec 2019 3:56am
31st Dec 2019 3:56am
Salient Satyr Scrunching
eyes etched eerily
in mystic mists
of taunted tracks
drooling death damped
felon feet fostering
hoisted spree heaving
salient satyr scrunching
locked laced lips
in hankering hymns
saucy smirk blushed
zeal cold-blood cupped
punctured pleck dumped
lusty limbs lurching
topsy-turvy twain tumbling.
19:12:31:04:41
Note: A disorder.
in mystic mists
of taunted tracks
drooling death damped
felon feet fostering
hoisted spree heaving
salient satyr scrunching
locked laced lips
in hankering hymns
saucy smirk blushed
zeal cold-blood cupped
punctured pleck dumped
lusty limbs lurching
topsy-turvy twain tumbling.
19:12:31:04:41
Note: A disorder.
#fairies
#aliens
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Joshuaberry
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Ancestor
Poem Published
27th Dec 2019 6:00pm
27th Dec 2019 6:00pm
Lugubrious Lake Lurching
lugubrious lake lurching
salient waves scrunching
forth feigns fought
inky blue bought
crimson crest cupped
neighboring boulevard lusts
bounty birds pulsing
pelvics pruning perches
on flimsy fishes
drunk daedal dances
of nocturnal nymphs
fostered in flips
west wind whooshes
camped callous crisis.
19:12:27:14:05
salient waves scrunching
forth feigns fought
inky blue bought
crimson crest cupped
neighboring boulevard lusts
bounty birds pulsing
pelvics pruning perches
on flimsy fishes
drunk daedal dances
of nocturnal nymphs
fostered in flips
west wind whooshes
camped callous crisis.
19:12:27:14:05
#water
#fairies
#aliens
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Joshuaberry
Ancestor
Ancestor
Poem Published
18th Dec 2019 5:39pm
18th Dec 2019 5:39pm
Lurched Lousy Limbs
thick soles seducing
eerie earth scrunching
tracing tactic trudges
cowering cornered crushes
pale paths tucked
gaunt gaze; gulp!
mystic monster smirked
nocturnal nature athirst
felon fondling first
then a twist
lurched lousy limbs
dactyls callous covering
goblin moved monster
dragging dainty disaster.
19:12:18:16:54
eerie earth scrunching
tracing tactic trudges
cowering cornered crushes
pale paths tucked
gaunt gaze; gulp!
mystic monster smirked
nocturnal nature athirst
felon fondling first
then a twist
lurched lousy limbs
dactyls callous covering
goblin moved monster
dragging dainty disaster.
19:12:18:16:54
#fairies
#aliens
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Joshuaberry
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Ancestor
Poem Published
8th Dec 2019 12:06pm
8th Dec 2019 12:06pm
Drastic Dances Drooling
spartian spirit spurring
sumptuous soles straying
salient strength scrunching
saucy strife stalking
spooky south squashing
sane stats straining
desirous dare dancing
damped desires dangling
drastic dances drooling
smothered sight smoothening
stunning spurs straightening
salty soaring sparring
oodles oomph oozing
dare awed spirit.
19:12:08:09:22
~Note~ A dare saw a spirit floating in the air, ascending... It goes there at intervals... Wishing its parents could do it.
sumptuous soles straying
salient strength scrunching
saucy strife stalking
spooky south squashing
sane stats straining
desirous dare dancing
damped desires dangling
drastic dances drooling
smothered sight smoothening
stunning spurs straightening
salty soaring sparring
oodles oomph oozing
dare awed spirit.
19:12:08:09:22
~Note~ A dare saw a spirit floating in the air, ascending... It goes there at intervals... Wishing its parents could do it.
#fairies
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Joshuaberry
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Ancestor
Poem Published
6th Dec 2019 4:51pm
6th Dec 2019 4:51pm
Gaunt gods Grasped
spooky sleep staggering
with wills wielding
hoisted hands hankering
lurching, fiddling lids
sumptuous state stuttering
eerie end enveloping
Zeus zipping zeals
pricking pulsing peels
moaning mists munching
summoned sundry saps
gaunt gods grasped
pruning punctured pats
"Leave for Earth,
damp desirous death."
19:12:06:07:49
with wills wielding
hoisted hands hankering
lurching, fiddling lids
sumptuous state stuttering
eerie end enveloping
Zeus zipping zeals
pricking pulsing peels
moaning mists munching
summoned sundry saps
gaunt gods grasped
pruning punctured pats
"Leave for Earth,
damp desirous death."
19:12:06:07:49
#monsters
#fairies
#aliens
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2 Comments
midevil
Poem Published
4th Dec 2019 6:45am
4th Dec 2019 6:45am
For Goodness Sake
Where north can go no further at the world’s tipsiest top.
A land of ice and snow conceals the home of Santa’s shop.
With Santa and his wife are his reindeer and the elves.
Stocking toys they made all year in boxes and on shelves.
Known to all is Santa’s list that names every girl and boy.
And tells of there heart’s desire found in every special toy.
How the list is made has been a secret until now.
A child’s note is always used but this is really how.
As children lie snug in there beds so peacefully asleep.
Tiny fairies fly close to them daring...
A land of ice and snow conceals the home of Santa’s shop.
With Santa and his wife are his reindeer and the elves.
Stocking toys they made all year in boxes and on shelves.
Known to all is Santa’s list that names every girl and boy.
And tells of there heart’s desire found in every special toy.
How the list is made has been a secret until now.
A child’s note is always used but this is really how.
As children lie snug in there beds so peacefully asleep.
Tiny fairies fly close to them daring...
#Christmas
#fairies
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Joshuaberry
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Ancestor
Poem Published
29th Nov 2019 12:42pm
29th Nov 2019 12:42pm
Pronto Pram's Metamorphose
felony figs feigning
pulpy punctured probity
mystic mist moaning
purpled eyes receding
damped desire drooping
salient severity scrunching
two temerarious Varmints -
callous ensconced embroidery
skins sans salmagundi
lusty leery lurching -
atuned atmosphere aiding
cranky coup clustering
chaetophorous Chipmunk saw,
pronto pram's metamorphose.
19:11:29:05:53
pulpy punctured probity
mystic mist moaning
purpled eyes receding
damped desire drooping
salient severity scrunching
two temerarious Varmints -
callous ensconced embroidery
skins sans salmagundi
lusty leery lurching -
atuned atmosphere aiding
cranky coup clustering
chaetophorous Chipmunk saw,
pronto pram's metamorphose.
19:11:29:05:53
#fairies
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midevil
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 5:36pm
13th Nov 2019 5:36pm
The Hunt
Tell a tale I have to speak of a time for long since has past.
The yesterday’s of yesterday before the after far from the first last.
Of a lost tale ware you and I shall together relive the forgotten history.
Let it forever fade from all memory become it will be your destiny.
Though rare are they those occasions occur for the stories to be told.
Heard were the words in the years of my youth now recited in the days of old.
My gaze never fell upon the sight of a world not ruled over by man.
Such an unspoiled place is difficult to imagine but easy to...
The yesterday’s of yesterday before the after far from the first last.
Of a lost tale ware you and I shall together relive the forgotten history.
Let it forever fade from all memory become it will be your destiny.
Though rare are they those occasions occur for the stories to be told.
Heard were the words in the years of my youth now recited in the days of old.
My gaze never fell upon the sight of a world not ruled over by man.
Such an unspoiled place is difficult to imagine but easy to...
#sadness
#anger
#fairies #frustration
#fairies #frustration
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