Poems About Fairies Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fairies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 11:03am
25th Nov 2024 11:03am
Even Sweet Girls can be Bitter Princesses
The crown is mine, said the princess
in a voice as sweet as snow.
None can play in this kingdom now.
Not a step, not a sound, not a show...
Until she says so, until she lets it go.
With a smile she took her throne
beneath the sky’s golden glow.
Her decree echoed through the land
and all the games ceased to flow.
Until she says so, until she lets it go.
The court stood silent, eyes wide,
as the princess ruled the floor.
Her presence strong, undeniable.
Her will, they would not ignore.
Until she says...
in a voice as sweet as snow.
None can play in this kingdom now.
Not a step, not a sound, not a show...
Until she says so, until she lets it go.
With a smile she took her throne
beneath the sky’s golden glow.
Her decree echoed through the land
and all the games ceased to flow.
Until she says so, until she lets it go.
The court stood silent, eyes wide,
as the princess ruled the floor.
Her presence strong, undeniable.
Her will, they would not ignore.
Until she says...
#dark
#depression
#evil
#fairies
#oppression
66 reads
7 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 5:22am
24th Nov 2024 5:22am
Speckle and Heckle
In the dead of night when the world is still,
Two elves awaken with a mischievous thrill.
Speckle and Heckle, those pint-sized pests,
Plot pranks galore at their craft, they’re the best.
With giggles and whispers, they hatch their schemes,
Turning sweet slumber into chaotic dreams.
Speckle sneaks in with a pot of strong glue,
Sticking children’s faces to pillows askew.
Heckle, not one to be outdone,
Switches the lights so they spark when they’re spun.
They paint the dog’s tail in peppermint stripes,
Then they steal the...
Two elves awaken with a mischievous thrill.
Speckle and Heckle, those pint-sized pests,
Plot pranks galore at their craft, they’re the best.
With giggles and whispers, they hatch their schemes,
Turning sweet slumber into chaotic dreams.
Speckle sneaks in with a pot of strong glue,
Sticking children’s faces to pillows askew.
Heckle, not one to be outdone,
Switches the lights so they spark when they’re spun.
They paint the dog’s tail in peppermint stripes,
Then they steal the...
#Christmas
#fairies
#funny #rhyming
#funny #rhyming
73 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 2:45am
18th Nov 2024 2:45am
never is forever
you said
forever is forever
but forever
turned into never
forever is gone
melted
like the last
snowfall
on the
first day of spring
foever was only here
for a day
then
it went away
never
is forever
forever is forever
but forever
turned into never
forever is gone
melted
like the last
snowfall
on the
first day of spring
foever was only here
for a day
then
it went away
never
is forever
#fairies
70 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 3:38pm
16th Nov 2024 3:38pm
Ghost in the deep forest
Early morning walk
A misty path
The river sleeping
The time i pass
The forest a legend
A book of past
An eerie aura
A spell was cast
The earth was mild
To stir the dust
I heard a whisper
A tune in the hush
Pan was hidden
A foggy ghost
The tune echoed
The sparkling moss
As the shine was peeping
flickering between the trunks
A first poetic chapter
in Nature's charm
A misty path
The river sleeping
The time i pass
The forest a legend
A book of past
An eerie aura
A spell was cast
The earth was mild
To stir the dust
I heard a whisper
A tune in the hush
Pan was hidden
A foggy ghost
The tune echoed
The sparkling moss
As the shine was peeping
flickering between the trunks
A first poetic chapter
in Nature's charm
#admiration
#emotions
#fairies
#ghosts
#motivational
72 reads
2 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 7:55pm
15th Nov 2024 7:55pm
On slicing a Kiwi Fruit
Like cracking a pebble and finding a fossil —
that no eyes have ever seen
there you were, unexpected —
a little green face gazing,
from the kitchen worktop.
My heart sighed,
seeing your pip eyes, beady, staring
knowing nothing of shape or colour;
Breakfast waited, while I stood
blinking at this sudden kiwi-creature,
tiny flat Martian,
helpless as a planet
without a mothering star;
I cradled you in my palm.
Silent
without whimper or wail,
did you exist before the cut? Would you exist ...
that no eyes have ever seen
there you were, unexpected —
a little green face gazing,
from the kitchen worktop.
My heart sighed,
seeing your pip eyes, beady, staring
knowing nothing of shape or colour;
Breakfast waited, while I stood
blinking at this sudden kiwi-creature,
tiny flat Martian,
helpless as a planet
without a mothering star;
I cradled you in my palm.
Silent
without whimper or wail,
did you exist before the cut? Would you exist ...
#childhood
#fairies
#food #magic
#food #magic
76 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 1:30pm
14th Nov 2024 1:30pm
The Truth Fairy
Under the pillow, a tooth was placed.
A child waiting, all snug in haste.
But a different fairy, with wings so bright,
slipped into the room in the middle of the night.
Not the Tooth Fairy with glitter and cheer
but the Truth Fairy, solemn and near.
With a sigh, she whispered, “It’s time to reveal
the secrets and truths that life may conceal.”
In dreams the child was gently led
to scenes of truth, both hoped and dread.
A mirror showed friends who might betray
and promises broken along the way.
Eyes...
A child waiting, all snug in haste.
But a different fairy, with wings so bright,
slipped into the room in the middle of the night.
Not the Tooth Fairy with glitter and cheer
but the Truth Fairy, solemn and near.
With a sigh, she whispered, “It’s time to reveal
the secrets and truths that life may conceal.”
In dreams the child was gently led
to scenes of truth, both hoped and dread.
A mirror showed friends who might betray
and promises broken along the way.
Eyes...
#childhood
#fairies
#magic
#memories
#philosophical
91 reads
8 Comments
LightningBug
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 2:45pm
28th Sep 2024 2:45pm
Her Magic Dragon
It had a special golden glow by the way the shadows made no effect on this egg. The elf queen had never seen such a large nest before. Dragons were rare and rarely had nests out in the grassy open plains like this.
Tia had no idea what creature was inside this giant scaly egg. It was sparkly and had a slight pale blue mist around it. She could feel the magnetic field pulsing and drawing her to it as she touched the surface.
She waited, since upon seeing it noticed that it had a large crack as if about to split open anytime.
What seemed an eternity suddenly...
Tia had no idea what creature was inside this giant scaly egg. It was sparkly and had a slight pale blue mist around it. She could feel the magnetic field pulsing and drawing her to it as she touched the surface.
She waited, since upon seeing it noticed that it had a large crack as if about to split open anytime.
What seemed an eternity suddenly...
#dragons
#earth
#fairies
#friendship
#responsibility
114 reads
3 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 3:10am
8th Sep 2024 3:10am
SECRETS OF THE MOON
Have you ever wondered as you look up at the vision of the moon, and become drawn to it in so many ways, upon layers of the very deepness that quietly circles it's aura of space and time 🌌 For sure there is a very interesting story, about the deepness of the moon 🌙 that has been known, to transform the deepness of your own depth of imagination and your very thoughts. For sure it's said that the moon, can casts shadow images of different, shapes in your mind. Having you to believe that what you see 👁️ 👁️ is only a illusion? 🤔 Just like the...
#fairies
#ghosts
#monsters
#werewolves
#witches
150 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 9:34pm
2nd Sep 2024 9:34pm
hopeful
the outlandish keeps calling upon me
the corrupt thoughts of a natural witch
not sure of my calling
restless spirits are drawn to me
with the knowledge I can hear them
sweet is the treasure of wisdom
turning the pages while I fine-tune
memories are stirred
Sage advice is given
my hopes are rising
skyward I spy some clouds
their formations are dreamy
they could be anything
my flowers are cheerful
and my trees are steadfast
they stay out of the gossip
unless the little black birds come by
and...
the corrupt thoughts of a natural witch
not sure of my calling
restless spirits are drawn to me
with the knowledge I can hear them
sweet is the treasure of wisdom
turning the pages while I fine-tune
memories are stirred
Sage advice is given
my hopes are rising
skyward I spy some clouds
their formations are dreamy
they could be anything
my flowers are cheerful
and my trees are steadfast
they stay out of the gossip
unless the little black birds come by
and...
#fairies
#fate
102 reads
6 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
30th Aug 2024 3:23am
30th Aug 2024 3:23am
perfume
trending with the universes
riding a wavelength
intimate feelings spilled
and as always cream rises
I send out my essence
so my words float like incense
a sweet fragrance for you to ride the waves
delicate muse vulnerable in my presentation
revealing my nature isn't easy
the fear of rejection is always there
to dissuade my true nature
blushing if you look to hard at me
sweet release of affections
perfume with light notes on the wind
arousing your verbiage like a song
enticing you to make...
riding a wavelength
intimate feelings spilled
and as always cream rises
I send out my essence
so my words float like incense
a sweet fragrance for you to ride the waves
delicate muse vulnerable in my presentation
revealing my nature isn't easy
the fear of rejection is always there
to dissuade my true nature
blushing if you look to hard at me
sweet release of affections
perfume with light notes on the wind
arousing your verbiage like a song
enticing you to make...
#fairies
#steampunk
106 reads
5 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
6th Aug 2024 6:37am
6th Aug 2024 6:37am
Gone with the Wind
I have always believed in fairies
And now there really was one
Sitting on a water lily at the pond
Windblown and disheveled her hair
Crumpled her delicate iridescent wings
Last night's storm must have thrown
The poor little fairy off course
Big Emerald eyes look at me sadly
Intending to bring her some fruits
I get on my unicorn and take flight
And now there really was one
Sitting on a water lily at the pond
Windblown and disheveled her hair
Crumpled her delicate iridescent wings
Last night's storm must have thrown
The poor little fairy off course
Big Emerald eyes look at me sadly
Intending to bring her some fruits
I get on my unicorn and take flight
#fairies
115 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
1st Aug 2024 3:22am
1st Aug 2024 3:22am
sparkle
the other smiled to herself coddling her hopes to her chest
dreaming in jasmine and heather
flying on a gossmer wing and not really bothered where she land
floating on a Northern wind her mind abuzz with thought
she thought to seduce a human
her merry meet was very special she had never joined souls
so considering this man was a surprise
tumbling along she land in some pete moss
her suitor just over the glade
his shiny demeanor made her beam
such a beauty to behold
kind and intelligent
highly regarded in the forrest...
dreaming in jasmine and heather
flying on a gossmer wing and not really bothered where she land
floating on a Northern wind her mind abuzz with thought
she thought to seduce a human
her merry meet was very special she had never joined souls
so considering this man was a surprise
tumbling along she land in some pete moss
her suitor just over the glade
his shiny demeanor made her beam
such a beauty to behold
kind and intelligent
highly regarded in the forrest...
#fairies
#magic
86 reads
0 Comments
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