Poems About Fairies Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fairies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
16th Mar 2024 12:29pm
16th Mar 2024 12:29pm
Fairy Parade
It was a sunny day.
Night was far away.
The sky was light.
And all birds took flight.
Moon was above in great height.
Ready prepared to start the night.
Suddenly,you heard laughter and chatter far away.
Music dancing in the light of day.
You walk closer to inspect.
And you find something you don't expect.
Fairies,with cupid wings.
Dancing gracefully like marionettes on strings.
Fully controlled by the peace.
And it makes you feel at ease.
You joined their parade.
And a smile on your face...
Night was far away.
The sky was light.
And all birds took flight.
Moon was above in great height.
Ready prepared to start the night.
Suddenly,you heard laughter and chatter far away.
Music dancing in the light of day.
You walk closer to inspect.
And you find something you don't expect.
Fairies,with cupid wings.
Dancing gracefully like marionettes on strings.
Fully controlled by the peace.
And it makes you feel at ease.
You joined their parade.
And a smile on your face...
#nature
#fairies
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Nov 2023 2:54pm
21st Nov 2023 2:54pm
Ballad Of The Fairy
The clouds were in the air.
The sun was shining through.
It was a lovely sunday morning afternoon.
There was a light breeze.
And you feel like you might sneeze.
But you don't.
And you spot something in the air.
It's sparkly,leaving trace in your hair.
It's like magic dust.
From a creature so unknown.
You look behind and your mind is blown.
You saw a fairy.
A pixie in small size.
She uses sparkly wings to fly in the skies.
Her hair,so beautiful you mesmerize.
And shiny,blue angel eyes. ...
The sun was shining through.
It was a lovely sunday morning afternoon.
There was a light breeze.
And you feel like you might sneeze.
But you don't.
And you spot something in the air.
It's sparkly,leaving trace in your hair.
It's like magic dust.
From a creature so unknown.
You look behind and your mind is blown.
You saw a fairy.
A pixie in small size.
She uses sparkly wings to fly in the skies.
Her hair,so beautiful you mesmerize.
And shiny,blue angel eyes. ...
#nature
#fairies
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Nov 2023 3:34am
9th Nov 2023 3:34am
Some Chick In The Lake
After finding some
clothes on the ground,
Scott spotted the
emergence of some
chick in the lake.
But while he stared
at her fairy wings, she
turned and saw him.
clothes on the ground,
Scott spotted the
emergence of some
chick in the lake.
But while he stared
at her fairy wings, she
turned and saw him.
#water
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#fairies
#sensual
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
10th Aug 2023 5:00pm
10th Aug 2023 5:00pm
Pat-a-Cake
flash fiction
The old man was a part of the landscape. He had a black birthmark on his left cheek and sat outside a disused estate agent’s. Local shopkeepers brought him food and blankets on occasion, and while he had no cap out for money, he would sometimes be handed some coins.
Lucy, an academic, was writing a social history of the town and became curious about the man because no-one seemed to remember when he’d first pitched up. ‘He only says three words’ said the landlady of a pub down the street. ‘Drink, smoke, and pat-a-cake.’
An old boy at the bar shook...
The old man was a part of the landscape. He had a black birthmark on his left cheek and sat outside a disused estate agent’s. Local shopkeepers brought him food and blankets on occasion, and while he had no cap out for money, he would sometimes be handed some coins.
Lucy, an academic, was writing a social history of the town and became curious about the man because no-one seemed to remember when he’d first pitched up. ‘He only says three words’ said the landlady of a pub down the street. ‘Drink, smoke, and pat-a-cake.’
An old boy at the bar shook...
#fairies
#ShortStory
#historical #horror
#historical #horror
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
1st Aug 2023 9:01pm
1st Aug 2023 9:01pm
Myths and Falsehoods
Let me expose some myths and false teachings.
Cupid is a mythical being.
The teaching about Santa Claus is falsehood.
Elf is a fictitious character.
Reindeer pulling a sled in the sky is imagination.
Christmas is a false teaching.
The Big Bang Theory is falsehood.
Dinosaur is a mythical creature.
Bigfoot aka Sasquatch or Yeti is a mythical creature.
Leprechaun is a fictitious character.
The Abominable Snowman is a mythical creature.
Ogre is a fictitious character.
The theory of the evolution of man is a false teaching.
Dragon is...
Cupid is a mythical being.
The teaching about Santa Claus is falsehood.
Elf is a fictitious character.
Reindeer pulling a sled in the sky is imagination.
Christmas is a false teaching.
The Big Bang Theory is falsehood.
Dinosaur is a mythical creature.
Bigfoot aka Sasquatch or Yeti is a mythical creature.
Leprechaun is a fictitious character.
The Abominable Snowman is a mythical creature.
Ogre is a fictitious character.
The theory of the evolution of man is a false teaching.
Dragon is...
#lies
#Christmas
#religion
#fairies
#mythology
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PAR
Poem Published
29th Jul 2023 3:18pm
29th Jul 2023 3:18pm
Pillow Tales
Look, look...
once upon a time
your head resting
in the lap of the loved one
almost white
almost beautiful
your sleeping head
over the lap of snow
of your loved one!
Look, look!
your uncovered face
in the mirror
between wefts
there would be no greater beauty
without the shoes
running away from prom?
Look, look?
what no one else saw
what has never been seen
got lost in my woods
got lost in myself
wolf bitten apple (hunters where?)
person...
once upon a time
your head resting
in the lap of the loved one
almost white
almost beautiful
your sleeping head
over the lap of snow
of your loved one!
Look, look!
your uncovered face
in the mirror
between wefts
there would be no greater beauty
without the shoes
running away from prom?
Look, look?
what no one else saw
what has never been seen
got lost in my woods
got lost in myself
wolf bitten apple (hunters where?)
person...
#kindness
#romantic
#fairies
#magic
#dance
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
17th Jul 2023 11:57pm
17th Jul 2023 11:57pm
Kinky fairy dust
#lust
#fairies
#sexy
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ThePoet632
CrossWords
CrossWords
Poem Published
20th May 2023 12:23pm
20th May 2023 12:23pm
Love in the age of stones
I love coffee like i love to sip her eyes; with every gulp;i sigh, i give a whiff of relief, though i hold a flower of angst, a romantic grudge when i know she takes her nose up into the clouds !
I am a down-to-earth man with mundane feelings, a human being in its all natural integrity, but,i bear such a vengeful liking for her,that to grab her by the hair and drag her on dirt, and take her inside my cave;like a Homo Erectus would do in the age of stones, there i show her how a woman can be treated, that love is a raw ritual.No photoshop technics inside a cavern To mask a...
I am a down-to-earth man with mundane feelings, a human being in its all natural integrity, but,i bear such a vengeful liking for her,that to grab her by the hair and drag her on dirt, and take her inside my cave;like a Homo Erectus would do in the age of stones, there i show her how a woman can be treated, that love is a raw ritual.No photoshop technics inside a cavern To mask a...
#courage
#fairies
#admiration
#respect
#emotions
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arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
14th May 2023 4:38pm
14th May 2023 4:38pm
Tinker Belle on Wheels
It's a shrinky-dink matter of ins-
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
#rainbow
#monsters
#fairies
#unicorns
#zombies
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
7th Apr 2023 1:18am
7th Apr 2023 1:18am
behested
draining epiphany purify your own pools
my sacred halls are perfectly scribed
you knew all along
I won't take anymore burden you cast
Patricia have at it
be wary of the ripple
what you did here has a long lasting effect
this dimension is effected
so is the next
and so on
forth with there will be some semblance of order
seducing the capsule will get you more drama
I told you and you are warned again
no I won't just wipe everything out
because you all are not getting your way
betting on peoples pain...
my sacred halls are perfectly scribed
you knew all along
I won't take anymore burden you cast
Patricia have at it
be wary of the ripple
what you did here has a long lasting effect
this dimension is effected
so is the next
and so on
forth with there will be some semblance of order
seducing the capsule will get you more drama
I told you and you are warned again
no I won't just wipe everything out
because you all are not getting your way
betting on peoples pain...
#fairies
#magic
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A_Failed_Artist
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2023 7:26am
3rd Apr 2023 7:26am
May Day Fae Day
It's May Day
Or Beltane, as you would say
That time of year
When the veil disappears
Between the supernatural
And the somewhat natural
Based on where you're living,
The spirits that you visit
Won't be the same
Well it's my vacation
As much I love the living dead
I think I'll pick the fae instead
I'm setting the kettle
For all my fairy fellows
Green tea for the pixies
And black tea for the brownies
I hope the gnomes don't mind
That it took me a long time
To take that stupid...
Or Beltane, as you would say
That time of year
When the veil disappears
Between the supernatural
And the somewhat natural
Based on where you're living,
The spirits that you visit
Won't be the same
Well it's my vacation
As much I love the living dead
I think I'll pick the fae instead
I'm setting the kettle
For all my fairy fellows
Green tea for the pixies
And black tea for the brownies
I hope the gnomes don't mind
That it took me a long time
To take that stupid...
#happiness
#friendship
#rain
#fairies
#mythology
191 reads
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PAR
Poem Published
7th Mar 2023 12:11pm
7th Mar 2023 12:11pm
Quite Unfair Interlaced Tales
I
- Oh! Couldn't swallow?
- But frogs are so tasty, appetizing, nutritious... oh!
- Also, it doesn't matter at all, I'm a princess...
- And princesses can do anything.
II
- To express myself, I squeeze some heads to the juice.
- Draining their stupidity through their ears.
- Making the globes jump out of their sockets.
III
She sleeps, oblivious to herself.
She doesn't hear the sound of the plants growing.
She doesn't get a chance to wet her lips, brush her teeth.
She...
- Oh! Couldn't swallow?
- But frogs are so tasty, appetizing, nutritious... oh!
- Also, it doesn't matter at all, I'm a princess...
- And princesses can do anything.
II
- To express myself, I squeeze some heads to the juice.
- Draining their stupidity through their ears.
- Making the globes jump out of their sockets.
III
She sleeps, oblivious to herself.
She doesn't hear the sound of the plants growing.
She doesn't get a chance to wet her lips, brush her teeth.
She...
#dreams
#fairies
#dialogue #morality
#dialogue #morality
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