Poems About Fairies Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fairies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Tooth Fairy Advice
getting just desserts
not the most balanced diet
constrain that sweet tooth
not the most balanced diet
constrain that sweet tooth
#food
#fairies
#senryu
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Daydreams of Daydreams
She sat there in her golden chair,
Her long, wavy, golden hair,
Draped over a cream and gold, crepe and silk gown,
The loveliest woman in town,
...The loneliest woman in town.
Her square neckline accentuated her necklace of gold,
Her virago sleeves, with patterns of old,
And her wide skirt, draped over delicate, resting legs,
A languishing heart, in life's dregs,
Longing for a better life,
One without strife,
One where she's the wife,
Of an older, faery king,
Where she can be free to dance and sing.
And so she...
Her long, wavy, golden hair,
Draped over a cream and gold, crepe and silk gown,
The loveliest woman in town,
...The loneliest woman in town.
Her square neckline accentuated her necklace of gold,
Her virago sleeves, with patterns of old,
And her wide skirt, draped over delicate, resting legs,
A languishing heart, in life's dregs,
Longing for a better life,
One without strife,
One where she's the wife,
Of an older, faery king,
Where she can be free to dance and sing.
And so she...
#love
#heartbroken
#death
#fairies
#MentalHealth
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Wicked Fairy Queen
#lust
#erotic
#fairies #curse
#fairies #curse
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He Lives In REM
She dreams about a guy
whose been buried
with dirt, fog and time
with every dream
he gets further away
so she drinks coffee
to stay awake,
hoping to keep him
in the heart part of
her brain, a lot longer
then he's supposed
to stay.
whose been buried
with dirt, fog and time
with every dream
he gets further away
so she drinks coffee
to stay awake,
hoping to keep him
in the heart part of
her brain, a lot longer
then he's supposed
to stay.
#dreams
#fairies
#unicorns
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5 Comments
Swept Away
She had shattered into
a million pieces
and scattered across
his marble floor,
he swept her up
and threw all
she was outside of
his front door.
He told her, she was a mess
and he wouldn't clean it up,
not anymore.
She gathered all her bits
and headed straight
to the liquor store.
a million pieces
and scattered across
his marble floor,
he swept her up
and threw all
she was outside of
his front door.
He told her, she was a mess
and he wouldn't clean it up,
not anymore.
She gathered all her bits
and headed straight
to the liquor store.
#alcohol
#fairies
#unicorns
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4 Comments
Fleeting
Happiness is a
like a good guest
never staying for
very long.
like a good guest
never staying for
very long.
#happiness
#fairies
#unicorns
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5 Comments
The flight of Lily's.
On a sunny lake
She rose to sun
Beaming flow of orange
Tendrils
Amongst the teacher's pen
She wrote letters
About love and miscellaneous
Work that have been waiting on station
To flow by sunny orange lake side
A sun to smile
Often her way to wave her school board games she picked up a green leaf.
She rose to sun
Beaming flow of orange
Tendrils
Amongst the teacher's pen
She wrote letters
About love and miscellaneous
Work that have been waiting on station
To flow by sunny orange lake side
A sun to smile
Often her way to wave her school board games she picked up a green leaf.
#vampires
#ghosts
#fairies
#unicorns
#witches
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Woodsprite——————————~*
villanelle/fantasy]
Whilst wand'ring through the woods one sunny day,
I came upon a sprite so wondrous faire …
she danced ~ then, whirled and stole my heart away.
Oh, how the air became so light and gay ...
each sunbeam glinting through her golden hair,
whilst wand'ring through the woods one sunny day.
'Twas once her hand brushed mine in gleeful play,
with tenderness and loving, gentle care ...
she danced ~ then, whirled and stole my heart away. ...
Whilst wand'ring through the woods one sunny day,
I came upon a sprite so wondrous faire …
she danced ~ then, whirled and stole my heart away.
Oh, how the air became so light and gay ...
each sunbeam glinting through her golden hair,
whilst wand'ring through the woods one sunny day.
'Twas once her hand brushed mine in gleeful play,
with tenderness and loving, gentle care ...
she danced ~ then, whirled and stole my heart away. ...
#romantic
#fairies
748 reads
12 Comments
Razors and Tongues
Doors were slammed
and she screamed
I will slit my wrists,
he turned and yelled
go ahead, you'll only
scratch the surface,
your black clothes are
as deep as you go.
and she screamed
I will slit my wrists,
he turned and yelled
go ahead, you'll only
scratch the surface,
your black clothes are
as deep as you go.
#death
#fairies
#unicorns
428 reads
6 Comments
Head Vice
I drink the wine
smoke the weed
take mushrooms
hoping to see,
a better version of tomorrow
yet all I find are different shades of sorrow .
Apparently that's where harmony hides.
smoke the weed
take mushrooms
hoping to see,
a better version of tomorrow
yet all I find are different shades of sorrow .
Apparently that's where harmony hides.
#LifeStruggles
#fairies
#unicorns
438 reads
8 Comments
The night passage.
She waited at platform
Playing with dull ghosts
In the night's tea cup
The ceremony at her home
Made her hurry
Her children at night brewing
Yawning she was taking
Her glasses to mirror
Carefully at the doll house
Near the train station.
Playing with dull ghosts
In the night's tea cup
The ceremony at her home
Made her hurry
Her children at night brewing
Yawning she was taking
Her glasses to mirror
Carefully at the doll house
Near the train station.
#ghosts
#fairies
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Use The Flintstone Brakes
Tripping on mushies
there's no rushie
for a speedy tomorrow.
Connecting with a higher vibration
this is how I take a vacation
on my own couch.
there's no rushie
for a speedy tomorrow.
Connecting with a higher vibration
this is how I take a vacation
on my own couch.
#fairies
#unicorns
328 reads
3 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Fairies Seeking Honest Critique