Poems About Drugs by Top Critiquers
#drugs
Poems about drugs by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 7:34pm
28th Jun 2024 7:34pm
Drugged out f**ker
Your mouth says one thing
But the drugs say another
Why don't you sober up
Or suck the dick of your brother
The milky way is vast
Search for wisdom or hang yourself to dry
You should have pity on your soul
Pull the pins out from your eyes
The candle blows out
May the sky burn up in smoke
You give everyone an ulcer
Such an asshole, such a joke
Say cheese scumbag
You were once loved but now we all hate
I'd love to cut the disease out of you
Have you thought about your fate?
But the drugs say another
Why don't you sober up
Or suck the dick of your brother
The milky way is vast
Search for wisdom or hang yourself to dry
You should have pity on your soul
Pull the pins out from your eyes
The candle blows out
May the sky burn up in smoke
You give everyone an ulcer
Such an asshole, such a joke
Say cheese scumbag
You were once loved but now we all hate
I'd love to cut the disease out of you
Have you thought about your fate?
#addiction
#disappointment
#drugs
#hate
#rhyming
56 reads
6 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 5:48am
22nd Jun 2024 5:48am
Pill
Bloodshot eyes stare wildly
Just looking for a reason
Chemicals come on mildly
Within the mystic season
Watching stars drift slowly
I cast my gaze inward
Walking amongst the lowly
My skin feels awkward
Panic races through fear
Walking across the wire
Muted sound going clear
As my pulse spikes higher
Crash off the fucking cliff
Connection has went offline
All my limbs growing stiff
On prescriptions I dine
For whatever makes us ill
They’ll invent another pill
Just looking for a reason
Chemicals come on mildly
Within the mystic season
Watching stars drift slowly
I cast my gaze inward
Walking amongst the lowly
My skin feels awkward
Panic races through fear
Walking across the wire
Muted sound going clear
As my pulse spikes higher
Crash off the fucking cliff
Connection has went offline
All my limbs growing stiff
On prescriptions I dine
For whatever makes us ill
They’ll invent another pill
#drugs
88 reads
14 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
1st Oct 2022 11:04am
1st Oct 2022 11:04am
If Frost Met Bukowski, Would they Sniff Glue Together ?
Pretty enticing title huh ?
Hard to resist opening
I'd go for it too
Alas though you've been conned
I know this place
It's all about reads
Sex sells
Misery a little less enthralling
Tried posting elsewhere
Came home though to my brethren
Freedom Is so cherished
You know it not till you wander
Out there though in the wild
You get the broken people
Not so eager to suck your dick
Just because you posted
Thick skins needed
Real world crazies
Occasional...
Hard to resist opening
I'd go for it too
Alas though you've been conned
I know this place
It's all about reads
Sex sells
Misery a little less enthralling
Tried posting elsewhere
Came home though to my brethren
Freedom Is so cherished
You know it not till you wander
Out there though in the wild
You get the broken people
Not so eager to suck your dick
Just because you posted
Thick skins needed
Real world crazies
Occasional...
#drugs
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
#CharlesBukowski
#philosophical
390 reads
24 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 8:42pm
17th Jun 2024 8:42pm
All’s Fair In Love And War
THE GRAND MILLENNIUM CONDOMINIUMS
Manhattan, New York
Upper West Side
Dmeshii slipped into his suit jacket as he escaped down the fire exit stairwell. He opened the door to the first floor and peeped his head around the doorpost; he looked in both directions and then stepped onto the mauve colored carpet. Dmeshii hurried down the quiet corridor. He looked both ways and then opened the door to a janitorial closet. He stepped inside and yanked the chain light switch down.
Dmeshii lifted a stack of folded green trash bags. He grabbed his MP412 REX 357...
Manhattan, New York
Upper West Side
Dmeshii slipped into his suit jacket as he escaped down the fire exit stairwell. He opened the door to the first floor and peeped his head around the doorpost; he looked in both directions and then stepped onto the mauve colored carpet. Dmeshii hurried down the quiet corridor. He looked both ways and then opened the door to a janitorial closet. He stepped inside and yanked the chain light switch down.
Dmeshii lifted a stack of folded green trash bags. He grabbed his MP412 REX 357...
#city
#drugs
193 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
18th Nov 2022 6:34am
18th Nov 2022 6:34am
ODE TO VIAGRA
#men
#sex
#drugs #rhyming
#drugs #rhyming
272 reads
1 Comment
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Jun 2024 12:26pm
8th Jun 2024 12:26pm
Do Not Take Relief Upon Innocent People's Grief
Do not take relief upon innocent people's grief
Addiction is not only being slave to drugs, under cocaine control, or beneath a boss's hand kowtowing like a meek sheep, enslaved to their swaying stick, to their whims and extravagant desires, to look like a tamed animal,, you may also fall into slavery being a dependently addicted user, when those drugs, those psychedelics like LSD or mescaline, assail your whole attention, play on your real optical visions, give you a negative feedback on the world around you, affect your life for the worst, make of you an object of...
Addiction is not only being slave to drugs, under cocaine control, or beneath a boss's hand kowtowing like a meek sheep, enslaved to their swaying stick, to their whims and extravagant desires, to look like a tamed animal,, you may also fall into slavery being a dependently addicted user, when those drugs, those psychedelics like LSD or mescaline, assail your whole attention, play on your real optical visions, give you a negative feedback on the world around you, affect your life for the worst, make of you an object of...
#addiction
#confessional
#drugs
#emotional
#uplifting
87 reads
0 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
27th Mar 2024 11:28am
27th Mar 2024 11:28am
Memories Of Love
You were my one true love
But you never knew it
Your boyish grin
Was more than cherished
Your long looks at me
Got me all stirred up
It was your voice
That made my heart go wild
It's funny how
I never have stopped
Thinking of you
How I was the only
Women you asked to dance
And did we ever dance
Strange how I've
Never stopped wanting you
Even though you are
Now unattainable
Too bad the drugs stole
Your handsome good looks
And God knows what else
I'll never stop loving...
But you never knew it
Your boyish grin
Was more than cherished
Your long looks at me
Got me all stirred up
It was your voice
That made my heart go wild
It's funny how
I never have stopped
Thinking of you
How I was the only
Women you asked to dance
And did we ever dance
Strange how I've
Never stopped wanting you
Even though you are
Now unattainable
Too bad the drugs stole
Your handsome good looks
And God knows what else
I'll never stop loving...
#heartbroken
#drugs
153 reads
12 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 4:29am
17th Jun 2024 4:29am
poisoned constellations (for Courtney, cause she asked nicely)
#addiction
#dark
#drugs #sadness
#drugs #sadness
61 reads
6 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
6th Jan 2023 2:12pm
6th Jan 2023 2:12pm
1957 DeSoto
Premonition in the ignition,
neath the moon's quinine
reflecting off the taxi hack
hearing the rods knocking
listening to the raven's squawk
no chrome between its teeth
in the corn fields near Tupelo
near the zombie stalks
a rusted-out DeSoto
once a beauty now no lining
where I sat and listen to the radio,
to Wolfman Jack,
coming to me from WDUP
neath the moon's quinine
reflecting off the taxi hack
hearing the rods knocking
listening to the raven's squawk
no chrome between its teeth
in the corn fields near Tupelo
near the zombie stalks
a rusted-out DeSoto
once a beauty now no lining
where I sat and listen to the radio,
to Wolfman Jack,
coming to me from WDUP
#dark
#alcohol
#drugs
#denial
#temptation
245 reads
Adelphina
Poem Published
18th Nov 2021 3:37am
18th Nov 2021 3:37am
Crocodile
Even when he lies
He says
I'll be back in an hour
I shrug it off and
Take a shower
Many hours later
He strolls into the house
I sit waiting like a mouse
Look into his eyes
Already know he's fried
Even when he lies
He says
I smoked a little weed
His anthem his creed
Saluting the visible bloody vein
Even when I lie
I say
I'll love you forever
Float over like a
Magnetic feather
When he reaches for my hand
I should have ran
He touches my skin
I know he wants...
He says
I'll be back in an hour
I shrug it off and
Take a shower
Many hours later
He strolls into the house
I sit waiting like a mouse
Look into his eyes
Already know he's fried
Even when he lies
He says
I smoked a little weed
His anthem his creed
Saluting the visible bloody vein
Even when I lie
I say
I'll love you forever
Float over like a
Magnetic feather
When he reaches for my hand
I should have ran
He touches my skin
I know he wants...
#relationships
#drugs
833 reads
31 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
16th Nov 2022 4:54pm
16th Nov 2022 4:54pm
Stoned At Starbucks!
I found myself stoned -
Stoned in Starbucks, actually.
The queue was long, it helped!
Was there any place finer to be,
Any state better to be in,
As I gently sipped my freshly ground -
NOT FOUND ON THE GROUND, coffee?!!
Remember...
Don't leave the house 'til you're totally stoned,
As today could potentially be your last -
And if you get through, it'll still be a blast!
Just roll with it cos you'll gather no moss,
No, NOT Kate Moss -
Always preferred Taylor Swift anyway!
Come join me in long conversation, ...
Stoned in Starbucks, actually.
The queue was long, it helped!
Was there any place finer to be,
Any state better to be in,
As I gently sipped my freshly ground -
NOT FOUND ON THE GROUND, coffee?!!
Remember...
Don't leave the house 'til you're totally stoned,
As today could potentially be your last -
And if you get through, it'll still be a blast!
Just roll with it cos you'll gather no moss,
No, NOT Kate Moss -
Always preferred Taylor Swift anyway!
Come join me in long conversation, ...
#love
#courage
#marijuana
#SelfDiscovery
#drugs
1284 reads
23 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
17th Jun 2020 5:31am
17th Jun 2020 5:31am
Serpent's Work
We get poisoned by
the black mamba
snake to succumb
to his way of evil
by doing his dirty
work like killing
drug dealers who
sell their shit
to innocent kids
because kids our the future
the black mamba
snake to succumb
to his way of evil
by doing his dirty
work like killing
drug dealers who
sell their shit
to innocent kids
because kids our the future
#dark
#children
#evil
#drugs
#dirty
453 reads
3 Comments
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