Poems About Drugs Seeking Honest Critique
#drugs
Poems about drugs seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
atkfrostyatk
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2020 12:37pm
2nd Jul 2020 12:37pm
Smoke
Beautiful smoke bleeds through my lungs,
Clouding up my mind making me feel numb
Blazing up before the sun,
Ignoring my problems helping me run
Smoke so much the high is gone,
The only solution to everything thats wrong
Thoughts once racing now stay in place,
Finally able to focus before they start to chase
Put to ease my troubled mind,
Put everything into focus on thing at a time
Beautiful smoke clouding up the air,
Fading away like it was never even there
Clouding up my mind making me feel numb
Blazing up before the sun,
Ignoring my problems helping me run
Smoke so much the high is gone,
The only solution to everything thats wrong
Thoughts once racing now stay in place,
Finally able to focus before they start to chase
Put to ease my troubled mind,
Put everything into focus on thing at a time
Beautiful smoke clouding up the air,
Fading away like it was never even there
#drugs
#marijuana
#SelfReflection
45 reads
1 Comment
Diaryofabasketcase
Poem Published
1st Jul 2020 6:48pm
1st Jul 2020 6:48pm
Withdrawals
#depression
#alcohol
#drugs
#addiction
#MentalHealth
40 reads
3 Comments
Lazy_Dead
.Julia.
.Julia.
Poem Published
30th Jun 2020 6:32pm
30th Jun 2020 6:32pm
Greedy Beast
Visual Poem
I don’t know how you live in your madness
walking this faint line between
sense and nonsense
predominately living amongst the nonsensical
with very rare visits to the land of sane and rational thought
I just wish you wouldn’t have dragged me down
into your murky rabbit hole
scarring and tainting my soul
How were we ever supposed to find our way out,
when you were devouring my light?
You left me no choice ...
I don’t know how you live in your madness
walking this faint line between
sense and nonsense
predominately living amongst the nonsensical
with very rare visits to the land of sane and rational thought
I just wish you wouldn’t have dragged me down
into your murky rabbit hole
scarring and tainting my soul
How were we ever supposed to find our way out,
when you were devouring my light?
You left me no choice ...
#corruption
#drugs
#addiction
#greed
#temptation
71 reads
13 Comments
Inkerpoet
Poem Published
21st Jun 2020 10:25pm
21st Jun 2020 10:25pm
Cannibals in the dark
a jungle is growing in my
backyard.
and now the hounds leap
through the brush
as I pack a bowl of fresh
herb
and let it blaze, then
exhale.
I peer out toward the
twilight.
what is out there?
backyard.
and now the hounds leap
through the brush
as I pack a bowl of fresh
herb
and let it blaze, then
exhale.
I peer out toward the
twilight.
what is out there?
#drugs
#LifeCycle
56 reads
0 Comments
OG-Poetry
Poem Published
18th Jun 2020 3:33pm
18th Jun 2020 3:33pm
one sip and pour some out
right around this time of year
I really miss my friends,
hanging out in a parking lot
passing a fifth of gin,
some boasting which cutie is hot
others with just a shit eating grin,
gangstas take stage with personal scripts
that would easily curl your skin,
another barks how his blade causes rips..
as the fire chronic starts to kick in,
miss my homey’s without a doubt..
take one sip now pour some out
some rode out on a needle
some poison by lead, ...
I really miss my friends,
hanging out in a parking lot
passing a fifth of gin,
some boasting which cutie is hot
others with just a shit eating grin,
gangstas take stage with personal scripts
that would easily curl your skin,
another barks how his blade causes rips..
as the fire chronic starts to kick in,
miss my homey’s without a doubt..
take one sip now pour some out
some rode out on a needle
some poison by lead, ...
#friendship
#murder
#death
#drugs
#addiction
60 reads
6 Comments
Brady1952
Poem Published
13th Jun 2020 4:53pm
13th Jun 2020 4:53pm
Moving on
It's time to move on Now there's nothing to fear
In the past I screwed up So I've broken my mirror
But I can still see between all the cracks
my bed I have made but I'm now turning back
Days in between us, years to come
Im carriving unchained, I'm no longer numb
All the time that has passed, I'll never get back
The good times all faded and gave way to black
Forgiveness I Seek so that I can move on for once I was weak but now i am strong
Love became hate nd Truth became lies from hell I...
In the past I screwed up So I've broken my mirror
But I can still see between all the cracks
my bed I have made but I'm now turning back
Days in between us, years to come
Im carriving unchained, I'm no longer numb
All the time that has passed, I'll never get back
The good times all faded and gave way to black
Forgiveness I Seek so that I can move on for once I was weak but now i am strong
Love became hate nd Truth became lies from hell I...
#drugs
118 reads
4 Comments
TwistedSister
Poem Published
9th Jun 2020 7:32pm
9th Jun 2020 7:32pm
Angel of Death
I remember that day so crystal clear
Doctors telling me what I did not want to hear
Despite their best efforts and how hard they tried
How sorry they were my sweet daughter had died
A piece of my heart was suddenly gone
Tell me how am i supposed to move on
Sitting there crying I stared at your face
Remembering your birth and our first embrace
My hopes and dreams died that day
the angel of death took you away
and in that moment my heart was torn
Leaving me to forever mourn
The day that your addiction won
And took you...
Doctors telling me what I did not want to hear
Despite their best efforts and how hard they tried
How sorry they were my sweet daughter had died
A piece of my heart was suddenly gone
Tell me how am i supposed to move on
Sitting there crying I stared at your face
Remembering your birth and our first embrace
My hopes and dreams died that day
the angel of death took you away
and in that moment my heart was torn
Leaving me to forever mourn
The day that your addiction won
And took you...
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
93 reads
8 Comments
Alfie_Shoyger
Poem Published
7th Jun 2020 9:57pm
7th Jun 2020 9:57pm
Ketamine Trip with Chas and Dave on the Stereo
What sort of person snorts a porky line of ravers’ smack,
then plays the greatest hits of Chas and Dave?
You’re looking at him lying flat out on his back,
his third eye peeking through perception’s bars.
I’m bouncing round a Cockney universe
where pearly angel-kings are beckoning beyond the grave.
They wink at me beside the Pearly Gates and then disperse
in a trillion stars.
Gertcha! Off they vanish
into another dimension,
like a young-retired plumber to a Spanish
villa. Gertcha!
Jason tips his seventh gin and cherryade ...
then plays the greatest hits of Chas and Dave?
You’re looking at him lying flat out on his back,
his third eye peeking through perception’s bars.
I’m bouncing round a Cockney universe
where pearly angel-kings are beckoning beyond the grave.
They wink at me beside the Pearly Gates and then disperse
in a trillion stars.
Gertcha! Off they vanish
into another dimension,
like a young-retired plumber to a Spanish
villa. Gertcha!
Jason tips his seventh gin and cherryade ...
#music
#drugs
#rhyming #Britain
#rhyming #Britain
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0 Comments
PurplePandas
Poem Published
6th Jun 2020 8:21am
6th Jun 2020 8:21am
Changing Addictions
An addiction is an addiction.
You don't need a prescription.
Yours is the needle.
Mine is the bottle.
It numbs all of my pain and clears my mind.
So I understand why you do it all of the time.
You can forget all of your problems for a very long while.
You forget all of the trauma you experienced as a child.
Your world is brightened for a limited amount of time.
It's no wonder stopping is something you haven't tried.
You forget yourself and where you've been.
You forget the positons you've been put in.
...
You don't need a prescription.
Yours is the needle.
Mine is the bottle.
It numbs all of my pain and clears my mind.
So I understand why you do it all of the time.
You can forget all of your problems for a very long while.
You forget all of the trauma you experienced as a child.
Your world is brightened for a limited amount of time.
It's no wonder stopping is something you haven't tried.
You forget yourself and where you've been.
You forget the positons you've been put in.
...
#alcohol
#drugs
#addiction #temptation
#addiction #temptation
108 reads
0 Comments
Pimp2ThaFuture04
Poem Published
5th Jun 2020 6:47am
5th Jun 2020 6:47am
TEXAS TEA
Just poured up a cup of
Some purple jelly
It's just me and my imaginary
Friend Shelley
We gonna grip and sip
Until we both faded
I'm so immune to feeling sedated
I been sipping heavy daily
My Momma shakes her head
And calls me lazy
My medicinal elixir is a magical mixture
The potion I need to put my mind
At ease
I sip anywhere I damn well please
I sip at school while doing
My studies
Can't focus one bit my
Eyes twitching and blurry
I even sip in the studio ...
Some purple jelly
It's just me and my imaginary
Friend Shelley
We gonna grip and sip
Until we both faded
I'm so immune to feeling sedated
I been sipping heavy daily
My Momma shakes her head
And calls me lazy
My medicinal elixir is a magical mixture
The potion I need to put my mind
At ease
I sip anywhere I damn well please
I sip at school while doing
My studies
Can't focus one bit my
Eyes twitching and blurry
I even sip in the studio ...
#drugs
#parody
147 reads
4 Comments
Taurek
Poem Published
5th Jun 2020 3:23am
5th Jun 2020 3:23am
The Cast of Plight
Understand that I
won’t stop, I’ll
carry on with
a freedom that
can’t be
fathomed
split atoms, spilt
Molotov cocktails, and
a nutritious breakfast in
hell
feeling bad all day just
to feel nothing at
night
these stanzas are for
all us slaves
whether it’s the job, the
addiction, the wife and
kids, or the fucking
mortgage
we aren’t free, we
aren’t happy, we
aren’t anything at
all
no lives matter
in the crush of
whatever we were ...
won’t stop, I’ll
carry on with
a freedom that
can’t be
fathomed
split atoms, spilt
Molotov cocktails, and
a nutritious breakfast in
hell
feeling bad all day just
to feel nothing at
night
these stanzas are for
all us slaves
whether it’s the job, the
addiction, the wife and
kids, or the fucking
mortgage
we aren’t free, we
aren’t happy, we
aren’t anything at
all
no lives matter
in the crush of
whatever we were ...
#happiness
#drugs
#addiction
#freedom
#inequality
68 reads
2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
4th Jun 2020 2:53am
4th Jun 2020 2:53am
from: Great Communication of dkzk, Volume XXXXYZ
FOTO: Leah, Eric and Dada, year 2000.......
"I seem to have nothing left to "go on" to.
I just spent 3 months in hospital because of serious heart failure.
They say i've made an astounding 'recovery, but still I'm liable to die at any given moment. (yes, of course we all are, but nobody should put any bets on me 'having a future' of any palpable kind.)......
I've been 'surviving' severe Cardiac Adventures since year 2000.
My 'survival; seems like God playing a cosmic joke on me.
Good thing I have an arcane sense of humor.
The ferocity of...
"I seem to have nothing left to "go on" to.
I just spent 3 months in hospital because of serious heart failure.
They say i've made an astounding 'recovery, but still I'm liable to die at any given moment. (yes, of course we all are, but nobody should put any bets on me 'having a future' of any palpable kind.)......
I've been 'surviving' severe Cardiac Adventures since year 2000.
My 'survival; seems like God playing a cosmic joke on me.
Good thing I have an arcane sense of humor.
The ferocity of...
#heartbroken
#death
#drugs #illness
#drugs #illness
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4 Comments
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