Poems About Drugs Seeking Honest Critique
#drugs
Poems about drugs seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Keushwalker
Poem Published
4th Mar 2021 4:52pm
4th Mar 2021 4:52pm
Conversations with my Demon
Percolating, desirous.
Leave this shell of your former self,
Come fly triumphant once again.
What is the price you have to pay?
Years have passed to no avail,
A slave to the world
You now must speak behind the register.
Regrettably, but consciously
Your shot went click.
Mine goes boom.
Now what do you do
When there's nothing else to lean on?
Leave this shell of your former self,
Come fly triumphant once again.
What is the price you have to pay?
Years have passed to no avail,
A slave to the world
You now must speak behind the register.
Regrettably, but consciously
Your shot went click.
Mine goes boom.
Now what do you do
When there's nothing else to lean on?
#drugs
#addiction
18 reads
2 Comments
BLAZE256
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2021 5:04am
3rd Mar 2021 5:04am
DRUGS
#love
#depression
#heartbroken #drugs
#heartbroken #drugs
46 reads
0 Comments
Lo_bedda
Lo Lo
Lo Lo
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 10:24pm
2nd Mar 2021 10:24pm
Written Truth
My pain, a beautiful tragedy, it’s my noose.
I can’t break loose, instead I use it as my muse. It’s my devastating truth, the path I choose. Pain from my youth, drugs and booze, years of abuse, all that I lose, every cut and bruise, written words for strangers to leave a review, are you amused?
I can’t break loose, instead I use it as my muse. It’s my devastating truth, the path I choose. Pain from my youth, drugs and booze, years of abuse, all that I lose, every cut and bruise, written words for strangers to leave a review, are you amused?
#depression
#drugs
#rhyming
19 reads
2 Comments
ANATNOM_GNIREFFUS
Poem Published
27th Feb 2021 8:42pm
27th Feb 2021 8:42pm
Monsters Enter Town Homes
#abuse
#home
#drugs
#addiction
#poverty
38 reads
2 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
27th Feb 2021 7:30am
27th Feb 2021 7:30am
Coke n Pills
Ad lib second take in one no writing before hands stayed up for seven days and wrote this.
#drugs
29 reads
3 Comments
Taurek
Poem Published
25th Feb 2021 5:08am
25th Feb 2021 5:08am
Genius Hours
The spirit wanes
the spirit complains
the spirit has feinted
boxes upon boxes of
bubble wrap and
packing tape
I don’t care what you say,
me and those soldiers on
D-Day are the same
salute me on Veterans Day
in my grave, I will be
buried with
regrets
tentacles of fear and
loathing
boozed out and blazed somewhere
in Southern California staring at
a cold hard page
the rewards for hard work were
a strained lower back and a ...
the spirit complains
the spirit has feinted
boxes upon boxes of
bubble wrap and
packing tape
I don’t care what you say,
me and those soldiers on
D-Day are the same
salute me on Veterans Day
in my grave, I will be
buried with
regrets
tentacles of fear and
loathing
boozed out and blazed somewhere
in Southern California staring at
a cold hard page
the rewards for hard work were
a strained lower back and a ...
#regret
#war
#God
#drugs
#fear
29 reads
0 Comments
Reborn-Asylum
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2021 8:58pm
23rd Feb 2021 8:58pm
Medication
You took my jealousy
Swallowed it up and let me be
Something I couldn’t see
Without the wind in the trees
when I’m with you I’m free
Swallowed jealousy
I’m not too proud
saying out loud
In front of a crowd
pulling off the shroud
you took my jealousy; and let me be me
Don’t make me get cheesy
Girl, this comes easy
when I’m with you, get queasy
and take breaths all wheezy
You took me at me, said let’s be we
You’ve made an impression
so for you I commission
My heart, my soul, my passion ...
Swallowed it up and let me be
Something I couldn’t see
Without the wind in the trees
when I’m with you I’m free
Swallowed jealousy
I’m not too proud
saying out loud
In front of a crowd
pulling off the shroud
you took my jealousy; and let me be me
Don’t make me get cheesy
Girl, this comes easy
when I’m with you, get queasy
and take breaths all wheezy
You took me at me, said let’s be we
You’ve made an impression
so for you I commission
My heart, my soul, my passion ...
#love
#drugs
#addiction #passion
#addiction #passion
35 reads
0 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2021 7:28am
23rd Feb 2021 7:28am
Shiver-Shake Shit-Bag Opus.4
ARch>>>>>>Devil
Anc
estor s da nce
in me little late-life roomy'room
<<>>> at they's UkraniPolski
white'n slimey
s k i n suckin'eachOther Off
(don'bite! don'bite)
now thatcha'mention it
they skin real looks like fckn Cum!
gawdamn........never seen a...
Anc
estor s da nce
in me little late-life roomy'room
<<>>> at they's UkraniPolski
white'n slimey
s k i n suckin'eachOther Off
(don'bite! don'bite)
now thatcha'mention it
they skin real looks like fckn Cum!
gawdamn........never seen a...
#lust
#sex
#alcohol
#drugs
#dirty
50 reads
0 Comments
Taurek
Poem Published
19th Feb 2021 3:30am
19th Feb 2021 3:30am
Aquarius Seasoning
Yeah, relax and have a
good time, we’re not
here for that
long
you were so busy being
clean and pure you
never even got
cancelled
once
don’t you see? it was
nice being free of
them
to get away from it
all for a little while
was a small
victory
I’m still in small dark
rooms writing what
I believe is the
truth
drunk and stoned as
ever
cut the hair down to
the skin because it
was one of the few
things you could ...
good time, we’re not
here for that
long
you were so busy being
clean and pure you
never even got
cancelled
once
don’t you see? it was
nice being free of
them
to get away from it
all for a little while
was a small
victory
I’m still in small dark
rooms writing what
I believe is the
truth
drunk and stoned as
ever
cut the hair down to
the skin because it
was one of the few
things you could ...
#faith
#alcohol
#drugs
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
54 reads
2 Comments
Taurek
Poem Published
17th Feb 2021 4:31am
17th Feb 2021 4:31am
Missionary
One mask, two mask… how
much longer until we have
them all muzzled?
another belly full of
raw chicken
this wasn’t the only
desired outcome
slaves to cooperation
seduced to less
than
zero
the honeypot was full of toxic
sludge and we went for
it anyways
we couldn’t even gain a
grain of salt
we are roses in a dark
desolate patch of
weeds
frolic with me through
the southern seas
nothing I’m doing here is
smart and...
much longer until we have
them all muzzled?
another belly full of
raw chicken
this wasn’t the only
desired outcome
slaves to cooperation
seduced to less
than
zero
the honeypot was full of toxic
sludge and we went for
it anyways
we couldn’t even gain a
grain of salt
we are roses in a dark
desolate patch of
weeds
frolic with me through
the southern seas
nothing I’m doing here is
smart and...
#hope
#drugs
#food
#rebellion
#pandemic
39 reads
3 Comments
cloventongue89
Poem Published
16th Feb 2021 9:53pm
16th Feb 2021 9:53pm
Self-Destructive Chemistry
Caught inside the maze of isolation
Seeking for escape in the right direction
Deterrents of distraction endorse delay
And you never wanted it to be this way
I've been there and I am you
Despite our differences in point of view
As loneliness greets us, even in a full room
Underlying whispers of accusation
When demons narrate our personal gloom
Lip deep conviction is the soul's placation
Nevertheless surely there's something to be said for
The hope we embrace of poorly executed desire
In our weakness, as we stumble towards...
Seeking for escape in the right direction
Deterrents of distraction endorse delay
And you never wanted it to be this way
I've been there and I am you
Despite our differences in point of view
As loneliness greets us, even in a full room
Underlying whispers of accusation
When demons narrate our personal gloom
Lip deep conviction is the soul's placation
Nevertheless surely there's something to be said for
The hope we embrace of poorly executed desire
In our weakness, as we stumble towards...
#lust
#alcohol
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
91 reads
2 Comments
Poetlove
Dailynn
Dailynn
Poem Published
16th Feb 2021 1:26am
16th Feb 2021 1:26am
Traumatized
#lust
#abuse
#drugs
#shame
#fear
116 reads
3 Comments
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