Poems About Dogs Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about dogs seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 3:05pm
17th Apr 2025 3:05pm
balance
With outstretched arms, nature calls to me
With the sunrise and birdsong
The wildflowers in the garden
dazzle my vision
the trees hold up the sky
I knew it was going to be a beautiful day
sacred harmony, everything working in order after their kind
My day started as all days, feeding the cats
Chickens and roosters mine eat together
It's a funny alliance
My dog, still asleep in bed will need to be walked soon
But for now, it is a quiet morning of observation
The earth is humming, and whether you realize it...
With the sunrise and birdsong
The wildflowers in the garden
dazzle my vision
the trees hold up the sky
I knew it was going to be a beautiful day
sacred harmony, everything working in order after their kind
My day started as all days, feeding the cats
Chickens and roosters mine eat together
It's a funny alliance
My dog, still asleep in bed will need to be walked soon
But for now, it is a quiet morning of observation
The earth is humming, and whether you realize it...
#animals
#birds
#cats
#dogs
#nature
88 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 11:50am
30th Mar 2025 11:50am
Nine lives for a dog?
Andy Felthersnatch's dog burst into flames when it peed on a live wire. Felthersnatch later told the press, "There was an almighty explosion and the whole street lit up. I turned around and my dog was on fire." Power was off for five hours that day in a small town 10 miles north of Glens Falls, New York. Against all odds, the dog survived.
#dogs
#fiction
#satirical
#ShortStory
#storm
78 reads
6 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 10:00pm
20th Mar 2025 10:00pm
~nowadays: dandelions and the dog of time
1.
the delicately hardened
strawy hued dry achenes
had set their route..
unknown
unpredictable..
wind steers
their destiny..
freely parachuting
long to shores unknown..
as they land.. just only their heady
basal seed remains .. losing their
angelic wings .. that had swam
through the wild uproarious airs
2.
she- the apartment dwelling
beautiful...
the delicately hardened
strawy hued dry achenes
had set their route..
unknown
unpredictable..
wind steers
their destiny..
freely parachuting
long to shores unknown..
as they land.. just only their heady
basal seed remains .. losing their
angelic wings .. that had swam
through the wild uproarious airs
2.
she- the apartment dwelling
beautiful...
#astronomy
#dogs
#earth
#spring
#sun
84 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 12:21pm
22nd Feb 2025 12:21pm
Saturday Morning
I looked out my front door
On the other side of the street
I saw a man open up his trunk
He yelled for his kid in the house
The kid came outside, and to his joy there was a puppy dog wagging it's tail
The child who was no more then 5, lost his balance when the puppy jumped on him
The kid fell to the ground and on his ass
The dog was licking and nibbling the boy until he got a taste of the kids mouth and bit the kid's lip right off
Must have tasted the chocolate chip cookies the kid was eating while outside
There was screaming and blood everywhere...
On the other side of the street
I saw a man open up his trunk
He yelled for his kid in the house
The kid came outside, and to his joy there was a puppy dog wagging it's tail
The child who was no more then 5, lost his balance when the puppy jumped on him
The kid fell to the ground and on his ass
The dog was licking and nibbling the boy until he got a taste of the kids mouth and bit the kid's lip right off
Must have tasted the chocolate chip cookies the kid was eating while outside
There was screaming and blood everywhere...
#children
#dogs
#family #satirical
#family #satirical
98 reads
13 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 2:51pm
28th Jan 2025 2:51pm
THE ADVENTURE OF STUMPY AND THE DUMPSTER BOY
A three legged dog with brown curly fur waited in the alleyway.
The dog’s name was Stumpy.
The rain and ice had cracked the concrete. Years of waste had washed through. It was slimy and grey.
A boy of seventeen, ragged, hungry, and pale, was rummaging around a dumpster.
Stumpy barked.
A man dressed in beige grabbed hold of the Dumpster Boy and pulled him out. It was the manager of the Magnificent Burger House. He was sweaty and salty and his moustache covered his mouth.
“What are you doing in my Dumpster?”
The boy had hold of a bag of mouldy...
The dog’s name was Stumpy.
The rain and ice had cracked the concrete. Years of waste had washed through. It was slimy and grey.
A boy of seventeen, ragged, hungry, and pale, was rummaging around a dumpster.
Stumpy barked.
A man dressed in beige grabbed hold of the Dumpster Boy and pulled him out. It was the manager of the Magnificent Burger House. He was sweaty and salty and his moustache covered his mouth.
“What are you doing in my Dumpster?”
The boy had hold of a bag of mouldy...
#dogs
#dreams
#nightmares
104 reads
6 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 00:36am
4th Jan 2025 00:36am
Doggy girl!
#dirty
#dogs
#sex
241 reads
6 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 8:47pm
3rd Jan 2025 8:47pm
Last days of Dog Killer Dog...
#dogs
#horror
#sex
81 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 9:36am
8th Dec 2024 9:36am
What is it about the moon
What is it about the moon that always appear in the night skies, through the process of the months that has us so hypnotize, by the glow of the aura shape and shine like a bright light, up in the sky. For sure what does it mean 🤔when you lose your own chains of thoughts, and insight into the deepness of the moon, glow of the truth that slowly, begins to draw our energy as well as our attention. For it even goes deeper than deep, into a different perspective on life. Yet for the wolf it's a change of the world 🌎 that comes, with an aura that has a stronger hold on the mind and...
#birds
#cats
#dogs
#fish
#nature
127 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 5:38am
21st Nov 2024 5:38am
SATIVA
I found her in a gutter—or was it by the road?
A place no puppy should ever call home.
Small and shivering, she stumbled through dust,
a beige bundle of fur, cloaked in ticks and mistrust.
Jesse begged, pleaded, vowed she'd care,
Her voice carried promises, heavy with air.
No leash, no collar, no history to bind—
Just a stray, and a thought: She’s ours to find.
June 17th, she came to stay,
A tiny life, beige as dawn’s first ray.
No bigger than the palm of a grown man’s hand,
Yet she filled a void we didn’t understand.
...
A place no puppy should ever call home.
Small and shivering, she stumbled through dust,
a beige bundle of fur, cloaked in ticks and mistrust.
Jesse begged, pleaded, vowed she'd care,
Her voice carried promises, heavy with air.
No leash, no collar, no history to bind—
Just a stray, and a thought: She’s ours to find.
June 17th, she came to stay,
A tiny life, beige as dawn’s first ray.
No bigger than the palm of a grown man’s hand,
Yet she filled a void we didn’t understand.
...
#dogs
#love
100 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 1:58am
18th Nov 2024 1:58am
Barking - to the The Lady Up the Street
The lady up the street, so prim and uptight,
Counts the barks of my dogs in the dead of night.
Each woof, each howl, to her seems a sin,
While I find her complaints the true racket within.
Dogs must bark; it’s their nature, their way,
To speak of the moon or to greet the new day.
But people, oh people, could choose to refrain
From whining and moaning and spreading disdain.
Her voice cuts sharp, a drill to the brain,
Each word dripping venom, a ceaseless refrain.
So here is my plan, my silent retort,
A gift on her step, of the...
Counts the barks of my dogs in the dead of night.
Each woof, each howl, to her seems a sin,
While I find her complaints the true racket within.
Dogs must bark; it’s their nature, their way,
To speak of the moon or to greet the new day.
But people, oh people, could choose to refrain
From whining and moaning and spreading disdain.
Her voice cuts sharp, a drill to the brain,
Each word dripping venom, a ceaseless refrain.
So here is my plan, my silent retort,
A gift on her step, of the...
#dogs
49 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 00:44am
11th Nov 2024 00:44am
Puppy Kiss
Letting a puppy kiss your lips
Shows me that real not AI in a nightmare
Puppies kiss your lips but you’re not solved
Can’t figure myself what I’m all about
Dissolve in my soul of lies trying to realize
What is Real
Im a figure of your imagination looking for me
I can see but I don’t see noise in my eyes
entrapped me and it won’t end easily
All I want is a puppies lips to kiss
Because they feel my soul in a bowl
Always full of love between us
Why Can’t two legs live...
Shows me that real not AI in a nightmare
Puppies kiss your lips but you’re not solved
Can’t figure myself what I’m all about
Dissolve in my soul of lies trying to realize
What is Real
Im a figure of your imagination looking for me
I can see but I don’t see noise in my eyes
entrapped me and it won’t end easily
All I want is a puppies lips to kiss
Because they feel my soul in a bowl
Always full of love between us
Why Can’t two legs live...
#acceptance
#dogs
#happiness #love
#happiness #love
83 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 1:01pm
16th Oct 2024 1:01pm
Autumn's Embrace
Because we are poets
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
#dogs
#fall
#lover
#morning
#WritingPoetry
206 reads
26 Comments
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