Poems About the Devil Seeking Honest Critique
#devil
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 10:20am
8th Apr 2025 10:20am
The Devil Inside
Just so you know
Satan is hiding where I usually go
Last night when I was going down on you
You're pussy was wiggling & jiggling, did you have any clue?
I was scared stiff
I decided to peek in
His eyes were glowing with sin
That rattled me up
Satan was the little man in the canoe
You enjoy his company
Do you want me or him, when it's time to screw?
He turns you on
His pointy, curvy tail sticks you from behind
His horny head grins, as though he committed a crime
You giggle and tell me
Please...
Satan is hiding where I usually go
Last night when I was going down on you
You're pussy was wiggling & jiggling, did you have any clue?
I was scared stiff
I decided to peek in
His eyes were glowing with sin
That rattled me up
Satan was the little man in the canoe
You enjoy his company
Do you want me or him, when it's time to screw?
He turns you on
His pointy, curvy tail sticks you from behind
His horny head grins, as though he committed a crime
You giggle and tell me
Please...
#devil
#girlfriend
#rhyming
#satirical
#sex
222 reads
7 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 11:02pm
4th Apr 2025 11:02pm
If you bully Betty I'll pull out your public hair with pliers
You've been warned
Don't mess with my friend Betty
You're lucky
She's 6'4 and breathes fire
Favorite expression:
Twatwaffle Mother Fucker
BIG LIKE
Don't mess with my friend Betty
You're lucky
She's 6'4 and breathes fire
Favorite expression:
Twatwaffle Mother Fucker
BIG LIKE
#anger
#curse
#devil #pagan
#devil #pagan
184 reads
18 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 9:22pm
2nd Apr 2025 9:22pm
I'm the liar
So I'm the one
Who parted the sea
And no one believed me
And I'm the one
Who walked on water
Yet no one ever seen me
So Pontius Pilate killed me
Made an example out of me
Skewered me through the limbs
In a tormenting crucifixion
Fear not my fools
For in just three days
I'll be back with you again
Like three fucking sixes
i will never go away
So I created the universe in seven days
Like three sevens
My name is god and I am a liar
Is it really that impossible to believe
That nothing can...
Who parted the sea
And no one believed me
And I'm the one
Who walked on water
Yet no one ever seen me
So Pontius Pilate killed me
Made an example out of me
Skewered me through the limbs
In a tormenting crucifixion
Fear not my fools
For in just three days
I'll be back with you again
Like three fucking sixes
i will never go away
So I created the universe in seven days
Like three sevens
My name is god and I am a liar
Is it really that impossible to believe
That nothing can...
#atheism
#devil
#God
#ignorance
#lies
104 reads
6 Comments
BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:33am
2nd Apr 2025 7:33am
Heart Of The Devil
I drank with his darkness,
I consumed his evil desires,
Now I dance with his demons,
Who smile at my demise,
I can't escape his eternal hell,
I'm trapped by the heart of the Devil.
I consumed his evil desires,
Now I dance with his demons,
Who smile at my demise,
I can't escape his eternal hell,
I'm trapped by the heart of the Devil.
#abuse
#dark
#devil
#FeelingTrapped
#hell
88 reads
1 Comment
doriann_barrere
Dorian
Dorian
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 3:25pm
12th Mar 2025 3:25pm
The Man Selling Black Balloons
No one remembers the first time he came.
Or perhaps, they only remember after.
A shape at the edge of the street,
standing where the streetlights flicker.
A man, if man is the word—
his face a wet smear in the fog,
his suit darker than the night itself,
tailored from something too still to be fabric.
In his hands, the strings—
thin, trembling veins
that stretch upward,
vanishing into ink-dark orbs,
swollen, pulsing, breathing.
He does not speak.
He does not call out.
And yet, the children go to him. ...
Or perhaps, they only remember after.
A shape at the edge of the street,
standing where the streetlights flicker.
A man, if man is the word—
his face a wet smear in the fog,
his suit darker than the night itself,
tailored from something too still to be fabric.
In his hands, the strings—
thin, trembling veins
that stretch upward,
vanishing into ink-dark orbs,
swollen, pulsing, breathing.
He does not speak.
He does not call out.
And yet, the children go to him. ...
#devil
#ghosts
#magic
#monsters
#mythology
99 reads
1 Comment
oldmanG
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 1:27am
26th Feb 2025 1:27am
Scars
Scars
The scars of Satan
Can only be seen when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m jaded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your latest sin now
Who’d you sacrifice to be your disciple
Wings of Icarus here comes your son now
Now I step into my clothes again
They hide the sins I want to hide from you
The scars of Satan
Can only be used when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m faded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your...
The scars of Satan
Can only be seen when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m jaded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your latest sin now
Who’d you sacrifice to be your disciple
Wings of Icarus here comes your son now
Now I step into my clothes again
They hide the sins I want to hide from you
The scars of Satan
Can only be used when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m faded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your...
#betrayal
#deception
#devil #God
#devil #God
134 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 4:58pm
13th Feb 2025 4:58pm
Stone Angels. Crystalline Demons
Crack of lightning
Clap of thunder
Tears of the clouds
Dead silence
Spires reaching heavenwards
Salvation found
Choirs guide the new saint
Temptation awaits
Trepidations of the fallen
A seven-course sin
On fine silver
In palaces of blood
I see you
Ichor of the Beast
Crown of bone
Form beautifully translucent
A reflection of corruption
Sigils writ in shifting light
Grant the relief of faith clad
Heavy as stone
In the arms and song of the highest
Veiled in...
Clap of thunder
Tears of the clouds
Dead silence
Spires reaching heavenwards
Salvation found
Choirs guide the new saint
Temptation awaits
Trepidations of the fallen
A seven-course sin
On fine silver
In palaces of blood
I see you
Ichor of the Beast
Crown of bone
Form beautifully translucent
A reflection of corruption
Sigils writ in shifting light
Grant the relief of faith clad
Heavy as stone
In the arms and song of the highest
Veiled in...
#angels
#Christian
#devil #morality
#devil #morality
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 4:09pm
13th Feb 2025 4:09pm
SPIRITUAL SUBCONSCIOUSNESS
Have you ever wondered if it was ever possible to be able to see pass, the deepness of your own thoughts into your deepest imagination. As your insight becomes more clearly yet invisible, as the fire of your heart becomes what will you truly may see in the future of your future dreams. For let's take a moment to analyze the deepness of the questions, that has been haunting you, in the depths of your silence as sleep has become a thing of the past, behind unseen eyes. 👁️ For have you ever wondered, if you had a chance to rewrite your life all over again, what would you want to...
#angels
#devil
#God
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 9:28pm
10th Feb 2025 9:28pm
What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
A woman pours gasoline all over herself and her infant child
She lights a match, and the two of them go up in flames in the middle of their playground in town
The reason...Someone asked the woman, "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Sucks for her and her infant.
She lights a match, and the two of them go up in flames in the middle of their playground in town
The reason...Someone asked the woman, "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Sucks for her and her infant.
#devil
#fire
#food
#satirical
#suicide
110 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 10:12pm
6th Feb 2025 10:12pm
A filthy time
#BDSM
#devil
#dirty
#orgasm
#sex
457 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 9:57pm
6th Feb 2025 9:57pm
Pastor Harry
Pastor Harry has had a little too much to drink
A couple of forties and now it's kind of hard to think
He jumps up behind the wheel and hits the gas
Little do the kiddies know: he's drunk off his ass
He sways and swerves and goes into the other lane
The other drivers are shouting "What the fuck? are you insane?"
He flicks them off and vomits on the windshield
Everybody on this motherfucking bus might get killed
Pastor Harry drives the motherfucking school bus
He doesn't let all the kids yell or cuss
This asshole is drinking...
A couple of forties and now it's kind of hard to think
He jumps up behind the wheel and hits the gas
Little do the kiddies know: he's drunk off his ass
He sways and swerves and goes into the other lane
The other drivers are shouting "What the fuck? are you insane?"
He flicks them off and vomits on the windshield
Everybody on this motherfucking bus might get killed
Pastor Harry drives the motherfucking school bus
He doesn't let all the kids yell or cuss
This asshole is drinking...
#alcohol
#children
#religion
#rhyming
#devil
103 reads
13 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 6:46am
2nd Feb 2025 6:46am
Elohim Stairs
Climb beyond flesh and bone
An ascent towards divinity's throne
72 names writ now unfold
Glory for the young and old
Thrones of wisdoms unfurled
Eyes like glowing white pearl
Befoulment towards death
An eternity before final breath
Come as ye serpents are
Lay with the trampled Morningstar
An ascent towards divinity's throne
72 names writ now unfold
Glory for the young and old
Thrones of wisdoms unfurled
Eyes like glowing white pearl
Befoulment towards death
An eternity before final breath
Come as ye serpents are
Lay with the trampled Morningstar
#Christian
#dark
#devil
#God
#religion
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